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04-26-2016, 09:11 PM
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May God have mercy on your souls Blam Newton Cred

Cred
04-26-2016, 10:21 PM
Cash

Blam Newton
04-28-2016, 10:05 AM
This faggot's got tough skin but doesn't know we see his mom when we be clubbin'.
If I made it rain, that old bitch would be all over the money like Harriet Tubman.
When it's time for war, you get as quiet as a fucking mouse.
I'll run up in ur crib and have that Lil Uzi blastin' everywhere like it's Hush's house.
If I spend a couple of minutes with your wifey, her toes might curl.
I'll let off a few shots and have this pussy covered in maggots like the blow fly girl.
How the fuck did u get out of jail so fast? You've been locked up a hundred times.
You're like Kevin Love in "Meet the Hoopers", just dropping a bunch of dimes.
I've been the gun bar king, leave Cred in a box like some new kicks.
U'd think I was trying to earn a merit badge when u see the fire come from 2 sticks.

Cred
04-29-2016, 10:40 AM
U've been deemed a liar. Glocks wit drums; aim squeeze n fire
U on the corner? get Sprayed on dem Bricks. I'm a graffiti writer
Wait for 'em in his car, machete to his throat n drag bck
I'll Off the Head in the Whip just like a Bags mag
n ur bitch dnt like fuckin cus I always Kill it wen I give her mine
Dog I put that Birds V in the sky like it's about to be winter time
U'll get beat wit da Grip while takin Shots. Wat'chu actin hard for?
That Metal & Wood touch u at the same time jus like a Dartboard
This is premeditated murder. U better duck wen I flame dat gun
My thoughts are Off the Wall.. Urs'll have to be scrapped off one

Habitat
04-29-2016, 10:52 AM
blam
This faggot's got tough skin but doesn't know we see his mom when we be clubbin'.
If I made it rain, that old bitch would be all over the money like Harriet Tubman.
-lite.. Coulda done more with this
When it's time for war, you get as quiet as a fucking mouse.
I'll run up in ur crib and have that Lil Uzi blastin' everywhere like it's Hush's house.
-personal aspect that im missin here but the quiet/hushs house correlation was decent.
If I spend a couple of minutes with your wifey, her toes might curl.
I'll let off a few shots and have this pussy covered in maggots like the blow fly girl.
-every single one of ur bars is "like this like that" comparisons u need to have some different executions so it ain't bland. Wasn't a fan of this either
How the fuck did u get out of jail so fast? You've been locked up a hundred times.
You're like Kevin Love in "Meet the Hoopers", just dropping a bunch of dimes.
-yeah this is cool
I've been the gun bar king, leave Cred in a box like some new kicks.
U'd think I was trying to earn a merit badge when u see the fire come from 2 sticks.
-lite

cred
U've been deemed a liar. Glocks wit drums; aim squeeze n fire
U on the corner? get Sprayed on dem Bricks. I'm a graffiti writer
-dope
Wait for 'em in his car, machete to his throat n drag bck
I'll Off the Head in the Whip just like a Bags mag
-cool
n ur bitch dnt like fuckin cus I always Kill it wen I give her mine
Dog I put that Birds V in the sky like it's about to be winter time
-not a fan
U'll get beat wit da Grip while takin Shots. Wat'chu actin hard for?
That Metal & Wood touch u at the same time jus like a Dartboard
-not a fan of this either
This is premeditated murder. U better duck wen I flame dat gun
My thoughts are Off the Wall.. Urs'll have to be scrapped off one
-cool

I got Cred here. Sort of close but Creds quotables were better and he had 1 more as well.

v - cred

Schadenfreude
04-29-2016, 05:20 PM
Lil Uzi, blow fly & closer.
Decnt verse, some nice bars & a couple of duds, yo wording could've done crisper overall, but 'Lil Uzi' & ya closer were the highlights.

versus

Opener, Bags mag, flying V & dartboard.
Good shit, nothing crazy, your closer was the weak link, but the overall verse was solid & consistent from start to finish.

CRED took it, Blam just need to work on the execution, get the point of the punch quicker & heavier.

Joe Boston
04-29-2016, 05:28 PM
Blam

Seen current Harriet Tubman wasnt feeling how you displayed the punch as a metaphorical comparison couldve been more creative with it. Hush reference was pretty cool. Blow fly girl was dope but shit the setup no way correlated with the finisher. Kevin Love was cool. Closer was nice.

Cred

Sorry but the sprayed on dem.bricks graffiti writer reference is played. Bags mag reference dope current punch. Birds V is played also. That metal n wood reference idk i liked it man it was different had a little creativity to it. Closer played too.

Damn idk why man but most of Creds references ive seen done before and they got quoted by Hab no hate. Bags mag and dart board was cool tho. Liked the kevin love and closer from blam.

V/Blam i felt for what he had slightly more creative overall better attempts. Like i said my dude Cred had some old flips.

SHECK WES
04-29-2016, 05:32 PM
Creds off the head bar sealed the deal

Vote cred

Og smokinstein
04-29-2016, 08:00 PM
I thought this was a pretty solid battle, I gotta give it to cred tho..
Each verse was on the same level, I jus liked cred's a lil more.

Toil
04-30-2016, 12:12 PM
Blam: Harriet Tubman, blow fly girl
Cred: opened, bags mag, dartboard

Blam came pretty nice here, best Tubman punch I've seen yet. Cred came slightly more consistent so takes it.

Vote = Cred

Ghost1
04-30-2016, 09:37 PM
This faggot's got tough skin but doesn't know we see his mom when we be clubbin'.
If I made it rain, that old bitch would be all over the money like Harriet Tubman.

Nah seen too many of these last week an they were better then thjs

When it's time for war, you get as quiet as a fucking mouse.
I'll run up in ur crib and have that Lil Uzi blastin' everywhere like it's Hush's house.

Lmfao cool

If I spend a couple of minutes with your wifey, her toes might curl.
I'll let off a few shots and have this pussy covered in maggots like the blow fly girl.

Nice

How the fuck did u get out of jail so fast? You've been locked up a hundred times.
You're like Kevin Love in "Meet the Hoopers", just dropping a bunch of dimes.

Didn't see it. Pretty sure I get the jist of this regardless. It's ok

I've been the gun bar king, leave Cred in a box like some new kicks.
U'd think I was trying to earn a merit badge when u see the fire come from 2 sticks.

Ok




U've been deemed a liar. Glocks wit drums; aim squeeze n fire
U on the corner? get Sprayed on dem Bricks. I'm a graffiti writer

Wording off...punch is ok

Wait for 'em in his car, machete to his throat n drag bck
I'll Off the Head in the Whip just like a Bags mag

Haha nomsayin. This was wild tho.

n ur bitch dnt like fuckin cus I always Kill it wen I give her mine
Dog I put that Birds V in the sky like it's about to be winter time

LMAO fire

U'll get beat wit da Grip while takin Shots. Wat'chu actin hard for?
That Metal & Wood touch u at the same time jus like a Dartboard

Eh ok

This is premeditated murder. U better duck wen I flame dat gun
My thoughts are Off the Wall.. Urs'll have to be scrapped off one

Played



Best battle I seen so far as far as competitiveness. Real tuff call for me honestly cuz both had an equal amount of punches landed an missed. I think I'm just gonna edge it to cred purely based on style preference. No loser in this battle tho.

V cred

SHECK WES
05-01-2016, 10:15 AM
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idk wtf all this is, I'm guessing some sort of intro..?
This faggot's got tough skin but doesn't know we see his mom when we be clubbin'.
If I made it rain, that old bitch would be all over the money like Harriet Tubman.
this was overly used last week, decent flip at best
When it's time for war, you get as quiet as a fucking mouse.
I'll run up in ur crib and have that Lil Uzi blastin' everywhere like it's Hush's house.
lol dope
If I spend a couple of minutes with your wifey, her toes might curl.
I'll let off a few shots and have this pussy covered in maggots like the blow fly girl.
damn alright good shit
How the fuck did u get out of jail so fast? You've been locked up a hundred times.
You're like Kevin Love in "Meet the Hoopers", just dropping a bunch of dimes.
lol ok
I've been the gun bar king, leave Cred in a box like some new kicks.
U'd think I was trying to earn a merit badge when u see the fire come from 2 sticks.
hmm not bad but falls into the decent category for me, no tie ins


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U've been deemed a liar. Glocks wit drums; aim squeeze n fire
U on the corner? get Sprayed on dem Bricks. I'm a graffiti writer
decent, could of been better with dif wording
Wait for 'em in his car, machete to his throat n drag bck
I'll Off the Head in the Whip just like a Bags mag
ha dope
n ur bitch dnt like fuckin cus I always Kill it wen I give her mine
Dog I put that Birds V in the sky like it's about to be winter time
bra this was fire!
U'll get beat wit da Grip while takin Shots. Wat'chu actin hard for?
That Metal & Wood touch u at the same time jus like a Dartboard
didnt like how u finished it with dartboard
This is premeditated murder. U better duck wen I flame dat gun
My thoughts are Off the Wall.. Urs'll have to be scrapped off one
seen these too many times, decent flip at best


damn this was a really good battle, both had bangers.

But I think creds good ones were just that much better than blams.

Vote Cred

jilti
05-01-2016, 11:24 AM
This faggot's got tough skin but doesn't know we see his mom when we be clubbin'.
If I made it rain, that old bitch would be all over the money like Harriet Tubman.
^cool
When it's time for war, you get as quiet as a fucking mouse.
I'll run up in ur crib and have that Lil Uzi blastin' everywhere like it's Hush's house.
^yup
If I spend a couple of minutes with your wifey, her toes might curl.
I'll let off a few shots and have this pussy covered in maggots like the blow fly girl.
^ehh
How the fuck did u get out of jail so fast? You've been locked up a hundred times.
You're like Kevin Love in "Meet the Hoopers", just dropping a bunch of dimes.
^stretch but ok i guess
I've been the gun bar king, leave Cred in a box like some new kicks.
U'd think I was trying to earn a merit badge when u see the fire come from 2 sticks.
^dope

Vs.

U've been deemed a liar. Glocks wit drums; aim squeeze n fire
U on the corner? get Sprayed on dem Bricks. I'm a graffiti writer
^eh
Wait for 'em in his car, machete to his throat n drag bck
I'll Off the Head in the Whip just like a Bags mag
^nastyy
n ur bitch dnt like fuckin cus I always Kill it wen I give her mine
Dog I put that Birds V in the sky like it's about to be winter time
^sickk
U'll get beat wit da Grip while takin Shots. Wat'chu actin hard for?
That Metal & Wood touch u at the same time jus like a Dartboard
^kinda reminded me of ur clipboard punch last week, tho not as good. But still okish
This is premeditated murder. U better duck wen I flame dat gun
My thoughts are Off the Wall.. Urs'll have to be scrapped off one
^blah ok


V/ cred