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Sharp
04-26-2016, 09:19 PM
NBL Season 9


Due FRIDAY
Extension will be given if asked due to late start. You MUST ask though.


Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
NO recycling
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2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls MFtastick Shanks

MFtastick
04-27-2016, 07:53 AM
I'm good with 12

Shanks
04-28-2016, 06:09 PM
Damn! Can I have an extension I had no clue these were set up.

MFtastick
04-29-2016, 10:00 AM
Last joint was weak. This week I bring the bars in/
The winners circle gonna be a no shank zone, and I'm the warden/
You want beef? what block he on ima let the 4 clap/
Prison scheme leavem washed up on a beach. That's how I shawshank

I'm a Led clapper. Square up. Right hook leavem dead after./
Neck snapper. Then get the buisiness with the left hand like Ned Flanders/
You in the ring with a beast. And I can see what you lack is heart/
you come off as dull tryna get your point across it ain't hard to see this shank ain't sharp/

I caught your last verse. All I can say.. That was Fucking lame.
You got served by a cashier.. Thank you come again/
Anytime you talk gully, I'm filled with nothing but doubt./
How can I take you serious when you spell like you still have a MySpace account.

Sharp
04-29-2016, 11:18 AM
Shanks

Shanks
04-30-2016, 07:58 PM
U don't play with pistols, so cut the noise this fuckin boy ain't gutter,
Shiiit, Only time u bang irons, is in the kitchen tryna annoy ya mother,
So cut the silly chatter, behind a screen talkin bout who's philly fatter,
While wifey given dudes knowledge, ur pea brain can't register what really matters,
I'm 1 of a kind, a rare species, fuck a beast I'm greater,
Ur weird ass gotta fuck animals in the wild just to be called a freak of nature,
A heavyweight, ur to soft to withstand a spar, doggy,
Cuz one solid punch'll murder u, that's WTF u call a hard body
But u popin gats n ballin, c'mon just admit ur a poor honest failure,
N only cock hammers back when he repairing the porch on his trailer,
Gun bars r hot tho, So u follow suit n start pretending, WOW!
That just means if a couple headz wrote gay lines, fag'll switch to what's trending now

Ghost1
04-30-2016, 08:46 PM
Last joint was weak. This week I bring the bars in/
The winners circle gonna be a no shank zone, and I'm the warden/

Light

You want beef? what block he on ima let the 4 clap/
Prison scheme leavem washed up on a beach. That's how I shawshank

Ehhh

I'm a Led clapper. Square up. Right hook leavem dead after./
Neck snapper. Then get the buisiness with the left hand like Ned Flanders/

Yo. Lol. This shit is so fucking fire. I'm inclined to vote for u NOW honestly ha.

You in the ring with a beast. And I can see what you lack is heart/
you come off as dull tryna get your point across it ain't hard to see this shank ain't sharp/

light


I caught your last verse. All I can say.. That was Fucking lame.
You got served by a cashier.. Thank you come again/

Lol stupid

Anytime you talk gully, I'm filled with nothing but doubt./
How can I take you serious when you spell like you still have a MySpace account.

Light




U don't play with pistols, so cut the noise this fuckin boy ain't gutter,
Shiiit, Only time u bang irons, is in the kitchen tryna annoy ya mother,

Played, poorly executed

So cut the silly chatter, behind a screen talkin bout who's philly fatter,
While wifey given dudes knowledge, ur pea brain can't register what really matters,

Huh

I'm 1 of a kind, a rare species, fuck a beast I'm greater,
Ur weird ass gotta fuck animals in the wild just to be called a freak of nature,

Lmao this is amusing

A heavyweight, ur to soft to withstand a spar, doggy,
Cuz one solid punch'll murder u, that's WTF u call a hard body

Light

But u popin gats n ballin, c'mon just admit ur a poor honest failure,
N only cock hammers back when he repairing the porch on his trailer,

Played

Gun bars r hot tho, So u follow suit n start pretending, WOW!
That just means if a couple headz wrote gay lines, fag'll switch to what's trending now

Nothin here



So I feel like I'm seeing a trend w rmbva guys .....I always see Atkeast one insane banger....but then the rest of the shit just be lazy or won't have impact or....idk...idkts like u guys maybe searching to see wat gets play over here? Also sometimes u guys lead in w wat should be ur punch as a setup an then punch w something light...ie....Ned Flanders should not have introd that dull Shank flip. That Ned Flanders line will stick w me for a while. Shank rushed his verse to show an I appreciate that ....Props for respecting ur opponent....but that verse didn't have the bangers u needed.

V mf

Destroyer
04-30-2016, 09:41 PM
yo
that Ned Flanders bar was fucking ridiculous
I laughed at the thank you come again but it was simple
but fucking ned Flanders wooooooooooo!
shank didn't have anything that was close to that
all he needed was one banger like that but

v/mf

CBA
05-01-2016, 04:13 PM
MF: No Shankzone, Ned Flanders, Thank you come again

vs.

Shanks: Freak of nature

Thought MF took this one pretty convincingly.

Kenny the OG
05-01-2016, 10:50 PM
Last joint was weak. This week I bring the bars in/
The winners circle gonna be a no shank zone, and I'm the warden/
Decent concept but the wording is elementary
You want beef? what block he on ima let the 4 clap/
Prison scheme leavem washed up on a beach. That's how I shawshank
Not sure what language u speak in but four clap and shawshank don't rhyme in the least bit

I'm a Led clapper. Square up. Right hook leavem dead after./
Neck snapper. Then get the buisiness with the left hand like Ned Flanders/
Haha nice
You in the ring with a beast. And I can see what you lack is heart/
you come off as dull tryna get your point across it ain't hard to see this shank ain't sharp/
booo
I caught your last verse. All I can say.. That was Fucking lame.
You got served by a cashier.. Thank you come again
Lol smh. Funny in a corny way
Anytime you talk gully, I'm filled with nothing but doubt./
How can I take you serious when you spell like you still have a MySpace account.
ehh



U don't play with pistols, so cut the noise this fuckin boy ain't gutter,
Shiiit, Only time u bang irons, is in the kitchen tryna annoy ya mother,
Not feeling this
So cut the silly chatter, behind a screen talkin bout who's philly fatter,
While wifey given dudes knowledge, ur pea brain can't register what really matters,
I liked the rhyme scheme more than anything else
I'm 1 of a kind, a rare species, fuck a beast I'm greater,
Ur weird ass gotta fuck animals in the wild just to be called a freak of nature,
Nah b
A heavyweight, ur to soft to withstand a spar, doggy,
Cuz one solid punch'll murder u, that's WTF u call a hard body
Not feeling this either
But u popin gats n ballin, c'mon just admit ur a poor honest failure,
N only cock hammers back when he repairing the porch on his trailer,
Ok I guess I'll.give u this one
Gun bars r hot tho, So u follow suit n start pretending, WOW!
That just means if a couple headz wrote gay lines, fag'll switch to what's trending now
Poorly executed concept


This was a good fair matchup as far as current level of skill goes. No hate to either they're still progressing it looks like and trying to tighten up some things like wording and concept development. It was close but I give it to mf for the Ned Flanders bar. That was creative lol

Og smokinstein
05-01-2016, 11:34 PM
Got mf... That ned flanders bar sealed it for me

Toil
05-02-2016, 03:40 AM
MF: Ned flanders
Shank: bang irons

I thought shank was a bit more consistent tbh. But MF's Flanders punch was a cut above everything else in this battle, possible punch of the week. Like Bags says, genuinely don't get how you can have such a dope punch amongst a bunch of played ones, guess you might turn out lethal when you find your Grove.

Vote = MF