Lotto Smirk 6-9 vs Joe Boston 1-4 - JOE WINS

[Sharp]

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Lotto Smirk Joe Boston

[Joe Boston]

Check how many Lotto Smirk?

[Lotto Smirk]

10 or 12 let you know if I can do more

[Joe Boston]

Boom 12 Lotto Smirk

U never in ur life groped boobies ur girl got me on speedial wanting to do me
Leave that pussy in a Apocalypse creampie with the effects of a new xmen movie
Uzi on me at all times u never held a gun so y the fuck u brag n boast
Cuz Once the heat burn ya it'll leave u darker then a Barc n Toil pic roast
I dont think you wanna approach me in person hardguy routine aint working
Once i shoot If i give em eighty pop up from his grave signing "Im like a Virgin"
Trigger finger aint working plus he got the aim of a scrub
When i the grip rubber duck, he gonna scream when the barrel sing like Ernie in the tub
Soft like a lioncub why he even mean mug n grab his crotch
Keep playing Little Big Shot ill kill this kid with talent n make Steve Harvey Watch
U cant hit ur chicks spot that inchworm aint got a dying chance
I'll fuck her my favorite style hand on the ground pelvic thrusting like the salt n pepa dance

[Lotto Smirk]

Will try get it up tonight but may need ext

[Joe Boston]

Will try get it up tonight but may need ext
Wateva u do cool ext fine my dude

[Lotto Smirk]

I'm chilling pulling thrilling chicks u getting none, FACT
only time u ever been associated w/ a bitch is moaning like one in the chat
Teach ya a lesson that'll have ya body on a stretcher
one shot'll have ya brain in parts allover the board that's a neurosurgeon lecture
got a Long range or short aim the scope'll leave him toast
While if joe switching sights it's between RB n NC cus he getting bullied off both
Sharps mag got me hyped up man it was mean
Made me wanna go 16... just to see this fag banned from the league
Beating joes nothing to brag we know this faggot can't write
so this'll be Amir knockout when I drop u w/ one punch like the Kahn fight

Will edit in 2 more if I get time

[Sharp]

Lotto Smirk I gotta open this cause this is late assuming it's cool with Joe Boston

[Joe Boston]

Lotto Smirk I gotta open this cause this is late assuming it's cool with Joe Boston
Yeah thats cool man he owes me a bar we can wait till next season for those lmao no worries

[Ghost1]

U never in ur life groped boobies ur girl got me on speedial wanting to do me
Leave that pussy in a Apocalypse creampie with the effects of a new xmen movie

Lol idk...is apocalypse a wordplay? Or just like a literal cream pie apocalypse. ...lol gross...this is a miss for me...maybe I'm missing something here

Uzi on me at all times u never held a gun so y the fuck u brag n boast
Cuz Once the heat burn ya it'll leave u darker then a Barc n Toil pic roast

This is ok

I dont think you wanna approach me in person hardguy routine aint working
Once i shoot If i give em eighty pop up from his grave signing "Im like a Virgin"

80s pop is a dope concept....wording hurting u here tho...also a bit too animated....idve gon w something a bit darker....have them 80s pop on ya without the vh1 special

Trigger finger aint working plus he got the aim of a scrub
When i the grip rubber duck, he gonna scream when the barrel sing like Ernie in the tub

Lol this is good

Soft like a lioncub why he even mean mug n grab his crotch
Keep playing Little Big Shot ill kill this kid with talent n make Steve Harvey Watch

Again this is like ur 80s pop line....they're too goofy....the concept is there...but I feel like ur tie ins make the punch come off as unrealistic/cartoony.....for me u want these type of lines to come off as gritty as possible since it's not a comedy bar

U cant hit ur chicks spot that inchworm aint got a dying chance
I'll fuck her my favorite style hand on the ground pelvic thrusting like the salt n pepa dance

Disgusting mental image here smh




I'm chilling pulling thrilling chicks u getting none, FACT
only time u ever been associated w/ a bitch is moaning like one in the chat

Light

Teach ya a lesson that'll have ya body on a stretcher
one shot'll have ya brain in parts allover the board that's a neurosurgeon lecture

Concept ok if not played...execution lacking

got a Long range or short aim the scope'll leave him toast
While if joe switching sights it's between RB n NC cus he getting bullied off both

WOOO ok picking up steam

Sharps mag got me hyped up man it was mean
Made me wanna go 16... just to see this fag banned from the league

Lol ok ok

Beating joes nothing to brag we know this faggot can't write
so this'll be Amir knockout when I drop u w/ one punch like the Kahn fight

This is cool

Will edit in 2 more if I get time

Mann this may have fucked j


Lemme look back over this god damnit lotto


So switching sites vs elmo

Liked elmo better an with a bar missing from lotto I'd have to say Joe landed more....tho w that last bar with an average connection lotto would've won this. Stop bein lazy bruh.

V jb

[Reza]

ok ima go with jb simply because he put a little more into his verse. Seems his verse was a bit phoned in. I liked the khan bar and the league personal made me chuckle. But I felt like jb wanted it more.

V/ joe boston

[Schadenfreude]

JOE BOSTON w/ the slight edge, I wanted to go w/ Lotto tbh, but his verse read as lazy. Perhaps he took Joe very light or just doesn't care if he win or loses..Idk. Joe had some good concepts, maybe even some haymakers potential to them, but that wording needs a lot of work & polish. Still tho, the creativity's there & that's what won out over what Lotto presented.

[Sharp]

U never in ur life groped boobies ur girl got me on speedial wanting to do me
Leave that pussy in a Apocalypse creampie with the effects of a new xmen movie
Lol. Lil wierd the but I see I shoulda been focused on effects. Wording was weird here, took away from impact

Uzi on me at all times u never held a gun so y the fuck u brag n boast
Cuz Once the heat burn ya it'll leave u darker then a Barc n Toil pic roast
alright
I dont think you wanna approach me in person hardguy routine aint working
Once i shoot If i give em eighty pop up from his grave signing "Im like a Virgin"
ok
Trigger finger aint working plus he got the aim of a scrub
When i the grip rubber duck, he gonna scream when the barrel sing like Ernie in the tub
Lol ok
Soft like a lioncub why he even mean mug n grab his crotch
Keep playing Little Big Shot ill kill this kid with talent n make Steve Harvey Watch
the way you tied on Steve Harvey here kinda makes it go from a Diss to a Steve Harvey reference lol. Cool flip with lil big shot tho
U cant hit ur chicks spot that inchworm aint got a dying chance
I'll fuck her my favorite style hand on the ground pelvic thrusting like the salt n pepa dance
I'm just so tired of 'blank like blank' lines. Funny though



I'm chilling pulling thrilling chicks u getting none, FACT
only time u ever been associated w/ a bitch is moaning like one in the chat
ok
Teach ya a lesson that'll have ya body on a stretcher
one shot'll have ya brain in parts allover the board that's a neurosurgeon lecture
solid
got a Long range or short aim the scope'll leave him toast
While if joe switching sights it's between RB n NC cus he getting bullied off both
nice personal lol
Sharps mag got me hyped up man it was mean
Made me wanna go 16... just to see this fag banned from the league
funny, kinda light tho
Beating joes nothing to brag we know this faggot can't write
so this'll be Amir knockout when I drop u w/ one punch like the Kahn fight
cool



I genuinely think Lotto could've won with another bar that hit but as it stands I think Joe has the edge. Nothing major from either that swung the battle on someone's direction but Joe just has one extra concept on his side

V/joe

[Joe Boston]

Sharp was this a vote or did ur android get autistic for a sec lol

[Orc]

lotto came too soft this weak to get the win. he has the switching sights line but that's a beyond played flip so it's hard to give it any love. JB it looks like has tried to switch his wording up which is good. the concepts are there but he needs to deliver them harsher. in this battle i liked the rubber duck concept and the 80s pop. i think JB edged it here with more creativity.

[Ghost1]

U never in ur life groped boobies ur girl got me on speedial wanting to do me
Leave that pussy in a Apocalypse creampie with the effects of a new xmen movie
Joe Boston can you explain this to me? Idk if apocalypse has some kinda flip

Uzi on me at all times u never held a gun so y the fuck u brag n boast
Cuz Once the heat burn ya it'll leave u darker then a Barc n Toil pic roast
alright
I dont think you wanna approach me in person hardguy routine aint working
Once i shoot If i give em eighty pop up from his grave signing "Im like a Virgin"

Trigger finger aint working plus he got the aim of a scrub
When i the grip rubber duck, he gonna scream when the barrel sing like Ernie in the tub
Soft like a lioncub why he even mean mug n grab his crotch
Keep playing Little Big Shot ill kill this kid with talent n make Steve Harvey Watch
U cant hit ur chicks spot that inchworm aint got a dying chance
I'll fuck her my favorite style hand on the ground pelvic thrusting like the salt n pepa dance[/QUOTE]

Well the effects of the new xmen movie looked fucking amazing so i felt if i could make lottos chicks creampie look like that they should pay me the money the effects specialists are making




Lmao not sure if that helps u sharp but that's the explanation I was given for the bar in question LMFAO

[Joe Boston]

Lmao not sure if that helps u sharp but that's the explanation I was given for the bar in question LMFAO[/QUOTE]


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