Kenny the OG 3-3 vs MFTastick 3-0 - KENNY WINS

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Kenny the OG MFtastick

[Kenny the OG]

What up what up. I'm gonna try an have 12 up tmrw.

[MFtastick]

Good shit bro sounds good. see you then. gl

[Kenny the OG]

Bitch u getting this K, If u have any courage u'll need that
Ur life hangs in the balance of my chopper like an emergency evac
Fuck your cunt of a mother, u love her? ..she gettin her shit split
im twisted, gun butter til her face is smeared all over the biscuit
This ain't no mutherfuckin battle, I'll free & breeze
Ur not tough as a MF'er <<thats where ur goin wit the EMTs
I'm the don of slugs, how u want it- long or snubbed I get down
An oblongata leave that section of your brain scattered around
I'll bust a bottle over ya head like Im tryin christen a ship
& its automatic that no one'd care cuz they aint fuckin wit stick
Ill spray & strafe, wanna kno where u hit? Follow the burns
5 sent from the can leave holes in u the size of bottle returns

[MFtastick]

I come through with 2 burners. Clips loaded ready to steal shit./
When I push these two 5s on his chest hel get light headed real quick./
Ill shit, chill wit shooters. Them killers is who I know. /
I send two shooters and They shootin/shoot in for/4 k like the new iPhone/

I chop his body into 8 bits. This that Atari flow./
Then il put this bitch in a box, that's a barbie doll./
The nine pitch black. Call it my safari hoe./
And it leave yo ass flat out bodied like paper Mario./

Got a loaded eagle. And it go off for nothing like a pregnant bitch/
And I brought shells if he got beef like we eating with Mexicans/
Dog you a bitch. Kenney ain't ready he can't hack what I'm dishin./
Mag fully packed. And he can get the full clip like a brazzers subscription/

[Ghost1]

]Bitch u getting this K, If u have any courage u'll need that
Ur life hangs in the balance of my chopper like an emergency evac

Haha had something like this I was toying w but never got off the floor. Nice.

Fuck your cunt of a mother, u love her? ..she gettin her shit split
im twisted, gun butter til her face is smeared all over the biscuit

Yikes. This was tuff.

This ain't no mutherfuckin battle, I'll free & breeze
Ur not tough as a MF'er <<thats where ur goin wit the EMTs

This is more of a visual play....which I'm not a big fan of

I'm the don of slugs, how u want it- long or snubbed I get down
An oblongata leave that section of your brain scattered around

I don't think that's how that word is pronounced but I like this lol

I'll bust a bottle over ya head like Im tryin christen a ship
& its automatic that no one'd care cuz they aint fuckin wit stick

Half name flip...don't love these either....was ok

Ill spray & strafe, wanna kno where u hit? Follow the burns
5 sent from the can leave holes in u the size of bottle returns

Like this




I come through with 2 burners. Clips loaded ready to steal shit./
When I push these two 5s on his chest hel get light headed real quick./

Missing this if it's got a double meaning

Ill shit, chill wit shooters. Them killers is who I know. /
I send two shooters and They shootin/shoot in for/4 k like the new iPhone/

This is ok......pro tip.....we r all pretty deep in the game here so generally u don't need to break ur wordplays down.....take for instance Kenny oblong gat uh....bar above. It looks so much cleaner an more confident to just drop the wordplay an say fuck it....the real voters will get this. An conversely alot of people will hate on explanations in verses like that just cuz it feels noobish an also undermines the intelligence of the audience.


I chop his body into 8 bits. This that Atari flow./
Then il put this bitch in a box, that's a barbie doll./

8 bits is nuuuuuts.....barbie is played....should've switched order of lines

The nine pitch black. Call it my safari hoe./
And it leave yo ass flat out bodied like paper Mario./

Lol fuckin w this


Got a loaded eagle. And it go off for nothing like a pregnant bitch/
And I brought shells if he got beef like we eating with Mexicans/

Again....ur set up was fresher an more fire then ur punch line here for me....shells was played

Dog you a bitch. Kenney ain't ready he can't hack what I'm dishin./
Mag fully packed. And he can get the full clip like a brazzers subscription/

Played



Aight so mf suffered from the same things he has in past weeks here....mainly determining wat is and isn't played in a heavily saturated gun line realm....also line placement. Although that goes along w the prior. I thought 8 bit an paper Mario were bonkers. ....I also think on rmbva u guys take a looser more live approach which has u doing more longer winded set ups an a Lotve throw away bars but I think something that nc has done in really condensing our punches and making every bar hit as hard as we can really caters to this shorter bar length type of battle. If u guys were doing like 3 minute rounds here a couple barbie in a box lines wouldn't matter....but wen u only got 12 lines to make a point every single one should be ether. Kenny chopper line was cool.....the biscuit bar had me w the yuck face ha...was lotb for me....oblongata lol this gets the arachnaphobia award of the week again.....liked it tho. Good battle...was it sum tweaking mf could be a title contender.

V kenny

[MFtastick]

Bags aight man, noted. Good looks on the tips bro.

[jilti]

emergency evac, gun butter, oblongata,

Vs.

paper mario, mexicans




V/ kenny

[Amen]

Fuck your cunt of a mother, u love her? ..she gettin her shit split
im twisted, gun butter til her face is smeared all over the biscuit
Ill spray & strafe, wanna kno where u hit? Follow the burns
5 sent from the can leave holes in u the size of bottle returns

tough

vs

The nine pitch black. Call it my safari hoe./
And it leave yo ass flat out bodied like paper Mario./

Mario plays have been done a trillion times but this was a decent flip.

v/Kenny - More consistent IMO & had more sting behind his punches wwhen compared punch for punch. MFTas had some shit but mainly light work. A few bars he had where the set up actually would have made the better punch but w/e. Overall cool battle.

[Schadenfreude]

KEENY THE OG took this, that 'gun butter' line was crazy & the rest was consistently solid. MF only had that 'paper mario' joint, which was decent, but everything else was pretty play imo.

[Barcotic]

first of all the whole 8 bits/16 bits shit is played af

heard it in url or kotd, plus someone did it in the nbl like 3 weeks ago so shame on u Bags

anyway

kenny's opener
gun butter
closer

Vs

paper mario

v/kenny

yo MF, u got so much potential but stay away from the played shit. n stop wasting concepts in setups

[Ghost1]

Ur such a fuckin loser

[Joe Boston]

Kenny The OG



Bitch u getting this K, If u have any courage u'll need that
Ur life hangs in the balance of my chopper like an emergency evac
Ok metaphorical reference ok punch

Fuck your cunt of a mother, u love her? ..she gettin her shit split
im twisted, gun butter til her face is smeared all over the biscuit
Liked this creative flip n wp

This ain't no mutherfuckin battle, I'll free & breeze
Ur not tough as a MF'er <<thats where ur goin wit the EMTs
Didnt like this little of a forced punch to me

I'm the don of slugs, how u want it- long or snubbed I get down
An oblongata leave that section of your brain scattered around
Nice wp

I'll bust a bottle over ya head like Im tryin christen a ship
& its automatic that no one'd care cuz they aint fuckin wit stick
No impact here

Ill spray & strafe, wanna kno where u hit? Follow the burns
5 sent from the can leave holes in u the size of bottle returns
Dope

Mftastic



I come through with 2 burners. Clips loaded ready to steal shit./
When I push these two 5s on his chest hel get light headed real quick./
Not sure what u was going for here

Ill shit, chill wit shooters. Them killers is who I know. /
I send two shooters and They shootin/shoot in for/4 k like the new iPhone/
Wording all over the place


I chop his body into 8 bits. This that Atari flow./
Then il put this bitch in a box, that's a barbie doll./
Ok setup but finish played af u shoulda kept this relevant with each other

The nine pitch black. Call it my safari hoe./
And it leave yo ass flat out bodied like paper Mario./
Ok

Got a loaded eagle. And it go off for nothing like a pregnant bitch/
And I brought shells if he got beef like we eating with Mexicans/
No played

Dog you a bitch. Kenney ain't ready he can't hack what I'm dishin./
Mag fully packed. And he can get the full clip like a brazzers subscription/
Ok

Well tastic had some played content and wording issues. Paper mario n closer were ok. Kenny opener was cool. gun butter was a dope flip. Oblongata was nice wp. Closer was dope.

Mvgt: Kenny more consistency and creativity good wps and some metaphorical content.

[Barcotic]

Ur such a fuckin loser
ya u so right

[slecht]

Bitch u getting this K, If u have any courage u'll need that
Ur life hangs in the balance of my chopper like an emergency evac
----- I have seen similar concepts but this one was fresh and worded nicely.
Fuck your cunt of a mother, u love her? ..she gettin her shit split
im twisted, gun butter til her face is smeared all over the biscuit
---- this one is raw. fresh shit ---
This ain't no mutherfuckin battle, I'll free & breeze
Ur not tough as a MF'er <<thats where ur goin wit the EMTs
--- I see where you're going. Just not a heavy hit here ''''
I'm the don of slugs, how u want it- long or snubbed I get down
An oblongata leave that section of your brain scattered around
---okay, not bad here---
I'll bust a bottle over ya head like Im tryin christen a ship
& its automatic that no one'd care cuz they aint fuckin wit stick
--yes, nice here---
Ill spray & strafe, wanna kno where u hit? Follow the burns
5 sent from the can leave holes in u the size of bottle returns
---little played here---


I come through with 2 burners. Clips loaded ready to steal shit./
When I push these two 5s on his chest hel get light headed real quick./
---eh, not really getting this here---
Ill shit, chill wit shooters. Them killers is who I know. /
I send two shooters and They shootin/shoot in for/4 k like the new iPhone/
---iphone line are okay, no heavy hit here---

I chop his body into 8 bits. This that Atari flow./
Then il put this bitch in a box, that's a barbie doll./
---barbe line played af but 8 bits was cool---

The nine pitch black. Call it my safari hoe./
And it leave yo ass flat out bodied like paper Mario./
---saw a paper mario line not long ago but this is ight---

Got a loaded eagle. And it go off for nothing like a pregnant bitch/
And I brought shells if he got beef like we eating with Mexicans/
--played, shells tacos, etc---
Dog you a bitch. Kenney ain't ready he can't hack what I'm dishin./
Mag fully packed. And he can get the full clip like a brazzers subscription/
----still played here---


the winner here is the OG. for coming with some OG concept. MFT was cool but had several played line or over all used concepts with no fresh approach..
Kenny the OG with the W here.

[Habitat]

Emergency evac, butter/biscuit,

Vs

4K

Both had a cpl other okay bars but these stood out. Kenny had the lotb and overall better verse. Props to both

V/kenny