Chyeahhh!!! 1-1 vs Letterman 1-2 - LETTERMAN WINS

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Chyeahhh!!! Letterman

[Chyeahhh!!!]

you RMBVA niggas suck, none of ya'll are as dope as I
ey week I''ll leave 1 of you out to mope and wine, thats word to Smokenstien
I'm sharp with that smoking 9, but I'm so precise with backhands
you signed up to meet your doom, I'm Orc disguised as a black man!
I seen you spitten mean on the tube, bars all about them toolies
it aint the slang your friends use when I have you screamin "far out" in the boonies
I'm done lettin it fly, I'm lettin em fly
who ever let you put that on Cam, should get jumped by dipset for lettin you lie
and say one word about bout my Cred vid and we shootin the fade
cuz I never rehearse, but you will after I oozie up your funeral cade
had real beef brought to my doorstep, I had to fight it out
but picture me scared of this Letterman, I get my mail sent to my momma house
baggy T's, fitteds, and jeans with the pockets that sag?
I swear your fresh outta "02", so it's only right I get you hooked to an oxygen mask
I'm Rocky with swag, aint hard to tell that you shook and fakin
the shotty will blast and will have the medics looking for your parts like a booking agent

[Letterman]

Prolly gonna be past the deadline but I'm posting

[Letterman]

Rearrange ya style or the way you'll meet defeat.. tragic
Cuz all your bars are wack Chi, & that explains why you aura weak faggot
Made a living smoking cats. It's nothing to whore this dude
Cuz im known to Scuff marks, & that's the reason I'm wiping the floor with you
I'd press him & make dude snitch. Then I'm STILL goin to hurt u
He'll be droppin dimes while the clip rollin Iike a State Farm commercial
It's too late to beg. You dead.. I just want him to be quiet
But I swear if this bitch try to plead, the fifth'll leave Chyee silent
You got ghostwriters who flip shit from 08 like its great
The whole Genghis Khan men, those ancient concepts could restore the Mongolian race
Pistol whip u.. dump ya body.. then da lead is next, bitch
So he'll wake up next to the Tre like a bed and breakfast
Hate crime.. If this homo don't confess ill send him higher
Cuz you're a faggot, lie n get shot by the Gats like Jamal from Empire
He struggles with a boring verse. I do mine with ease
So if the votes tick u off.. it's cuz you give everyone at the Lime da z's

[Amen]

baggy T's, fitteds, and jeans with the pockets that sag?
I swear your fresh outta "02", so it's only right I get you hooked to an oxygen mask

Had potential. Could have been tweaked for more of a harsher execution

vs

Pistol whip u.. dump ya body.. then da lead is next, bitch
So he'll wake up next to the Tre like a bed and breakfast

Ehhh, This could have been better with more of a fresh twist.

close call - I think Letterman bars were more aggressive per se, but struggled to tie in some fresh concepts other then the corny empire one. Chyea had some nice flow but a lot of his bars were self hype and/or lacked proper/harsh executions. That rehearse bar could have been really good but was a slight reach IMO.

Letterman got the edge

[Schadenfreude]

Doom, rehearse & mail
Verse is decent enough, some play concepts & unpolished wording, but I'm sure u'd be dope if u took yo bars serious.

versus

Scuff marks, bed & breakfast & empire.
Decent showing, had some creative concepts I just was feeling the execution for the most part.

Overall this is closer than I expected, kind of tough to call tbh, but LETTERMAN gets the slight edge.

[Joe Boston]

Chyeahhh

you RMBVA niggas suck, none of ya'll are as dope as I
ey week I''ll leave 1 of you out to mope and wine, thats word to Smokenstien
Guess aimed for a personal didnt feel it bit too basic

I'm sharp with that smoking 9, but I'm so precise with backhands
you signed up to meet your doom, I'm Orc disguised as a black man!
Not really a punch more statement

I seen you spitten mean on the tube, bars all about them toolies
it aint the slang your friends use when I have you screamin "far out" in the boonies
Didnt like the wording of this

I'm done lettin it fly, I'm lettin em fly
who ever let you put that on Cam, should get jumped by dipset for lettin you lie
Funny but tighten up the wording

and say one word about bout my Cred vid and we shootin the fade
cuz I never rehearse, but you will after I oozie up your funeral cade
Reach on wp

had real beef brought to my doorstep, I had to fight it out
but picture me scared of this Letterman, I get my mail sent to my momma house
Nah

baggy T's, fitteds, and jeans with the pockets that sag?
I swear your fresh outta "02", so it's only right I get you hooked to an oxygen mask
Nice reference wording could be more polished

I'm Rocky with swag, aint hard to tell that you shook and fakin
the shotty will blast and will have the medics looking for your parts like a booking agent
Stretched on finisher not a bad hit tho

Letterman

Rearrange ya style or the way you'll meet defeat.. tragic
Cuz all your bars are wack Chi, & that explains why you aura weak faggot
Little reach on wp here


Made a living smoking cats. It's nothing to whore this dude
Cuz im known to Scuff marks, & that's the reason I'm wiping the floor with you
Ok wp attempt aint it mock tho

I'd press him & make dude snitch. Then I'm STILL goin to hurt u
He'll be droppin dimes while the clip rollin Iike a State Farm commercial
Ok

It's too late to beg. You dead.. I just want him to be quiet
But I swear if this bitch try to plead, the fifth'll leave Chyee silent
Ok

You got ghostwriters who flip shit from 08 like its great
The whole Genghis Khan men, those ancient concepts could restore the Mongolian race
Nice wp

Pistol whip u.. dump ya body.. then da lead is next, bitch
So he'll wake up next to the Tre like a bed and breakfast
Dope

Hate crime.. If this homo don't confess ill send him higher
Cuz you're a faggot, lie n get shot by the Gats like Jamal from Empire
Nice reference

He struggles with a boring verse. I do mine with ease
So if the votes tick u off.. it's cuz you give everyone at the Lime da z's
Forced

V/Letter overall dude had better attempts good creative some cool wps

[MFtastick]

Yeah letterman with the edge here. Good read but felt like like chyeahs bars fell flat a few time. Good shit tho

W Letterman

[slecht]

you RMBVA niggas suck, none of ya'll are as dope as I
ey week I''ll leave 1 of you out to mope and wine, thats word to Smokenstien
-decent personal--
I'm sharp with that smoking 9, but I'm so precise with backhands
you signed up to meet your doom, I'm Orc disguised as a black man!
----i actually pictured that. lml----
I seen you spitten mean on the tube, bars all about them toolies
it aint the slang your friends use when I have you screamin "far out" in the boonies
-nah bro---
I'm done lettin it fly, I'm lettin em fly
who ever let you put that on Cam, should get jumped by dipset for lettin you lie
---HAHA ok ok---
and say one word about bout my Cred vid and we shootin the fade
cuz I never rehearse, but you will after I oozie up your funeral cade
---i see it, not feeling it tho-.---
had real beef brought to my doorstep, I had to fight it out
but picture me scared of this Letterman, I get my mail sent to my momma house
-dont lke this here--
baggy T's, fitteds, and jeans with the pockets that sag?
I swear your fresh outta "02", so it's only right I get you hooked to an oxygen mask
---decent---
I'm Rocky with swag, aint hard to tell that you shook and fakin
the shotty will blast and will have the medics looking for your parts like a booking agent
----ok ok, decent---


Rearrange ya style or the way you'll meet defeat.. tragic
Cuz all your bars are wack Chi, & that explains why you aura weak faggot
--oh come let, you could have done better with this one, but i see you, ok---
Made a living smoking cats. It's nothing to whore this dude
Cuz im known to Scuff marks, & that's the reason I'm wiping the floor with you
-LOL ight ight---
I'd press him & make dude snitch. Then I'm STILL goin to hurt u
He'll be droppin dimes while the clip rollin Iike a State Farm commercial
---ok decent---
It's too late to beg. You dead.. I just want him to be quiet
But I swear if this bitch try to plead, the fifth'll leave Chyee silent
---no---
You got ghostwriters who flip shit from 08 like its great
The whole Genghis Khan men, those ancient concepts could restore the Mongolian race
--lol not bad--
Pistol whip u.. dump ya body.. then da lead is next, bitch
So he'll wake up next to the Tre like a bed and breakfast
---EH u could have setted it up better but decent here--
Hate crime.. If this homo don't confess ill send him higher
Cuz you're a faggot, lie n get shot by the Gats like Jamal from Empire
---nah nah---
He struggles with a boring verse. I do mine with ease
So if the votes tick u off.. it's cuz you give everyone at the Lime da z's
----ok dope!----


vote goes let here. overall fresher approach and more hungry to win it all with the punches. chyea had some quotables. burd line was cool and so was the dipset line


it came down to

dipset/orc vs aura, mongolia, and lime da z.

close but giving this letterman