"Lay You Down" shouts to Netcees for the inspiration.

[Finnydot]

Y'all gave me what I needed to make a classic. LOL

Made the beat in 20 minutes, wrote it in less than an hour, recorded and mixed in less than an hour. What you get? HOT ASS MOTHER FUCKIN SHIT!

"Lay You Down"
https://soundcloud.com/isaac-meyer-3/lay-you-down

[Inno]

This was cool. But tbh all i focused on was your picture
And mouth in that cock ready position. I was digging the vibe
And i was bumping my head and you had a cool cadence going


But your face ruined it.



Cool rap tho

[Finnydot]

lol

That picture is supposed to be a joke. I just took it for my Google+ profile.

It cracks me up tho so I ain't changing it.

Props for checkin me out.

[Finnydot]

22 people checking the thread and only one person says something. Lol

Yall can't say shit unless it's negative.

[uh-oh]

thats netcees bro lol. i fuck with this beat tho

THEY SAY MY RHYMES ARE TOO SIMPLE
I DON'T EVEN GOTTA RHYME ITS THAT SIMPLE

BARS

lol for real though i dug this. one of your better beats, its simple but effective. drums and bass kept me interested.

i just don't like the "tough guy" rap for lack of a better word coming from you honestly. thats what i was trying to convey in my last critiques. that track you made on my beats years ago i thought was where you should be going from a writing standpoint. more reflective, personal, don't get me wrong you were speaking about yourself on this but with a hook like lay you down its like aight. but the beat calls for it i get it, its just not YOU at least how i perceive you. but word man keep banging out

[Finnydot]

That's why i wrote the whole second verse. Lol

My shits completely different than i used to be.

[Diode]

LOOOOOOOOOOOL

[Finnydot]

LOOOOOOOOOOOL

That's all you got? Really?

I'm good with that.

[oats]

I listened to the song.

[Ghost1]

Stfu uh oh u fagot

If this dirtbag was black u'd give him a pass to spout off about gun play in a heart beat whether he was Malcom x or Bryant gumbel

U disgrace ur skin

[Diode]

That's all you got? Really?

I'm good with that.

I don't really care. I know that's what hurts you most of all.

Did you ever get promoted to manager at Wendy's or are you still a fry cook? Serious question.

[Hush]

Saw ur face and the laughter it gave me will last the day

Thank u sir

[uh-oh]

Stfu uh oh u fagot

If this dirtbag was black u'd give him a pass to spout off about gun play in a heart beat whether he was Malcom x or Bryant gumbel

U disgrace ur skin

Thats like saying if he was a muslim id give him a pass to spout off on terrorism. It is simply accurate and i dont see your point.

But nah theres no point critiquing my critiques because im actually genuine and trying to help. If we had any black forum members spitting gun bars id tell them the same shit if it applied

The point is to be yourself. Write about your actual life

[Diode]

Thats like saying if he was a muslim id give him a pass to spout off on terrorism. It is simply accurate and i dont see your point.

But nah theres no point critiquing my critiques because im actually genuine and trying to help. If we had any black forum members spitting gun bars id tell them the same shit if it applied

The point is to be yourself. Write about your actual life

what are you trying to help him with

it;s over

he's 30, making minimum wage, supporting a kid he once tried to kidnap while his baby's mom fucks around with her first baby's daddy on his child support dime

this dude ASPIRES to be pjk

THINK ABOUT THAT

[Amen]

don't continue to pursue your "rap" career.

[Ghost1]

what are you trying to help him with

it;s over

he's 30, making minimum wage, supporting a kid he once tried to kidnap while his baby's mom fucks around with her first baby's daddy on his child support dime

this dude ASPIRES to be pjk

THINK ABOUT THAT

Jesus christ. Lol.

[Finnydot]

Can't kidnap your own kid when you're on the birth certificate and the mother doesn't have a custody agreement from the court. If he's on my property the cops couldn't even tell me to hand him back, legally. And remember, she was the one who wanted to scratch me up and shit. If i ever do have enough money to take her to court then I'll win almost exclusively because of this. She just better pray i DON'T ever get my shit together.

Also, i never said one thing about a gun. Lay you down in the streets isnt mutually exclusive to guns. In fact, i was specifically talking about scrapping.

I haven't been in a fight since 7th grade. But i don't think i could stomach losing one at this age. I might just snap and kill someone. Don't fuck with someone who's been fucked with their whole life..

You might not like what i turn into.

[Diode]

it's been 5 years since that happened

nobody is worried about you getting your shit together

rofls at the rest of your post.

classic finny.

why do skinny white dudes always go to that trope? I DON'T FIGHT BUT SRS I'M A MONSTER.

shut up, nerd. pick up my dry cleaning, nerd.

[~RustyGunZ~]

Vintage dirt

You'd love most of upstate NY finny

[The Dead Poet]

thought this sucked.

but cool to see you're still doing music.

[Diode]

thought this sucked.

but cool to see you're still doing music.

vintage dp.

[Ghost1]

Can't kidnap your own kid when you're on the birth certificate and the mother doesn't have a custody agreement from the court. If he's on my property the cops couldn't even tell me to hand him back, legally. And remember, she was the one who wanted to scratch me up and shit. If i ever do have enough money to take her to court then I'll win almost exclusively because of this. She just better pray i DON'T ever get my shit together.

Also, i never said one thing about a gun. Lay you down in the streets isnt mutually exclusive to guns. In fact, i was specifically talking about scrapping.

I haven't been in a fight since 7th grade. But i don't think i could stomach losing one at this age. I might just snap and kill someone. Don't fuck with someone who's been fucked with their whole life..

You might not like what i turn into.



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[Inno]

How dope would it be to see finny on a 2trip beat.


Gawddd

[Diode]

this dude literally stole his baby from his baby's momma

not even joking. that actually happened.

i'm sorry Strikta, but the crown of dirt has a new home.

[Finnydot]

this dude literally stole his baby from his baby's momma

not even joking. that actually happened.

i'm sorry Strikta, but the crown of dirt has a new home.

Can't kidnap your own kid if you're on the birth certificate and there isn't a court ordered custody agreement. I've already spoken to the police about it after the bitch went crazy even after i called the cops on her. Bitch lost her mind and i was trying to calm her down. Her brother was backing me up. That girl didn't have a mark on her, yet I'm scratched all to shit while the baby crying upstairs. I was the responsible adult covering my ass by attempting to file a report, not get her arrested. Notice the moral of the story diode didn't get. White suburban kid was smart enough NOT to catch a domestic violence charge by reacting to stereotypical behavior from a newly second time mother with serious abandonment issues.

And to complete the story, let's hash out the whole details again, i go to a hotel for the night with my son driven by the brother. Girlfriend gets out of jail and i let her pick him up because i felt she learned her lesson. She told me to come home and guess who paid off her lawyer because I'm just a nice guy like that.

Bitch is crazy, I'll give you that. I'm no saint either. But I'll be damned if i didn't give being full time dad and roomate and boyfriend all my effort.

Fuck what you think about me as a man. I'm paying my child support and i see him when i can. A lot of dudes have been fucked over way worse than me.

[oats]

yeah but a lot of dudes don't have ridiculous rap-forum usernames tatted on their arm. you do know that your tattoo artist almost certainly mentions you when people ask "what was the dumbest tattoo you've ever done," right? Infinity Tha rellik

[Ghost1]

Can't kidnap your own kid if you're on the birth certificate and there isn't a court ordered custody agreement. I've already spoken to the police about it after the bitch went crazy even after i called the cops on her. Bitch lost her mind and i was trying to calm her down. Her brother was backing me up. That girl didn't have a mark on her, yet I'm scratched all to shit while the baby crying upstairs. I was the responsible adult covering my ass by attempting to file a report, not get her arrested. Notice the moral of the story diode didn't get. White suburban kid was smart enough NOT to catch a domestic violence charge by reacting to stereotypical behavior from a newly second time mother with serious abandonment issues.

And to complete the story, let's hash out the whole details again, i go to a hotel for the night with my son driven by the brother. Girlfriend gets out of jail and i let her pick him up because i felt she learned her lesson. She told me to come home and guess who paid off her lawyer because I'm just a nice guy like that.

Bitch is crazy, I'll give you that. I'm no saint either. But I'll be damned if i didn't give being full time dad and roomate and boyfriend all my effort.

Fuck what you think about me as a man. I'm paying my child support and i see him when i can. A lot of dudes have been fucked over way worse than me.



Lol fulltime father's aren't obligated to pay child support.

[Amen]

Full time father - I'm assuming you mean, the child resides with you and you are the custodial parent?

Why are you paying child support? LOL

You aren't very bright.

[oats]

What's funny is my first forum name was "Pimpavelli Tha Don," which is oddly similar to Finny's tat now. Only I HAVE changed since I was 12, and thus I don't have that tattooed anywhere. Even an "oatmeal" tat would be cooler.

[Witty]

I might get an @oatmeal tat tbh.

[Diode]

I might get an @oatmeal tat tbh.

I'll put mine right next to my v/RICAN and Lama the Lime tats.

[Joe Metts]

you are less garbage then you used to be. congrats.

[Diode]

you are less garbage then you used to be. congrats.

wb joey hustle

[oats]

sorry, in order to be legit I should get "laemtao" instead. it's oatmeal spelled backwards, see, so it's automatically cooler. plus, taoism is kinda laem.

[Batty]

You might not like what i turn into.

http://puppsfreestuff.com/files/Hulk1-Transform101fLG.gif

[Diode]

http://puppsfreestuff.com/files/Hulk1-Transform101fLG.gif

nah more like

https://media.giphy.com/media/NVxx5tl2FYkmI/giphy.gif

tho

[The Dead Poet]

Lol fulltime father's aren't obligated to pay child support.

yes they are. maybe not in all cases but they are. There's some fucked up judges out there.

My homie has full custody with his kids. They live with him. The visit the mom on whatever days. He has had his check garnished and went to court plenty of times for it. Still paying.

[Batty]

decimated @gobbleygooker

repped

[Joe Metts]

wb joey hustle

Thanks man.

[Dope girl]

Don't mind hate comments, they just express how they feel about song. I be honest with I'm not feeling it. you can redo audio to make it better, don't forget to do this
Creativity
complexity
spice it up
write something go that's amazing, you'll get respect <3

[Finnydot]

Not really like it even matters, but I'm not currently living with my baby's mother and I don't have custody.

[Finnydot]

yeah but a lot of dudes don't have ridiculous rap-forum usernames tatted on their arm. you do know that your tattoo artist almost certainly mentions you when people ask "what was the dumbest tattoo you've ever done," right? Infinity Tha rellik

IDDDDGGGGAAAFFFFFFFFFFF

It's tatted on my arm. BEEN tatted on my arm for 12 years. It's not going anywhere. I still like it. It's even faded in spots because I picked the scab and never went back and got it touched up, even tho I could have this whole time for free.

I figure I'll get sleeves eventually.

[Strikta]

Yall stupid af.