lol

[CopyPat]

My rhymin steez is lime disease, I kinda keeps it rugged. Your style is weak you smiling quiffe, vaginas need this fuckin. I ride the beat percussions on time with each combustion. And I could chew up Every rapper, but I don’t eat Mcmuffins. You guys are easy targets, so why compete? Retarded? I’m fire with speech, you’re dying of heat, my dialect leaves ya gutted. I’m higher than being a hundred, I’m higher than queens in London, I’m higher than even fuckin Ireland seems from Russia.…Which is basically a lateral so I’m kinda confused…My brain just seems illogical when rhyming these tunes. Cause I am the dude with the poisonous pen, writing improved, turnin boys into men. And that last part was weak and a little bit wack, so let me trash talk you geeks wearin feminine pads. I’m a grass sparkin genius when I get in the hash. So let me hashtag my penis like #GETINDATASS. I’m a rap star, I’m Venus to you lesser of planets, like I’m from Asgard the leader of the rest of these fags. I’m like a Nascar competer way I'm reppin these tracks. You need a flash smart computer just to settle my laps. I never act hard, the ruler says I’m 10 when I'm flaccid, so if your math’s smart you truly know this gentleman’s stacked. BUT NO Certain THIS ISN’T ABOUT ME WIENER. The flows perfect. Forget about it: Senior. I wrote verses to getcha out ya seaters, like a cold surface when ya sittin by some heaters. I live a lie, it’s secret. I’m civilized, I'm decent. I'm kidding guys, I mean it. I’m sitting by, I’m FIENDISH!! I’m spitting rhymes from deep in my little mind and weaving a million styles; you even consider trying to equal my shitty kinds you’d freeze up. Let alone the nice ones… The vet of open mic’s come to settle this. Goodnight, done.

[Witty]

Beast mode.

Too good.

Stop it.

[Quarter O]

Proper as fuck

[sral]

Its fire I breath in lines like these, my minds a dreary dungeon. Try to beef? you'll find it seasoned by the heat I'm cooking. I'll ignite the greasy oven that your wifey keeps your bun in. Texts Ron Jeremy, always someone that you like to see, butt fuck it. You try to be regarded like a trapeze artist. Your lines are weak, find your feet or die competing for nothing. This kind of egos destructive but you guys been sleeping on son since I write for me and just jump in every cypher, league or discussion! No rhyme or reasons the culprit, it's just fire I breathe like a Vulpix and I've no time to read up your bullshit, your fave writer seen I'm above him, then retired clean once I won shit.

I might come back haha my appointment at works here


dope sauce bruh

[UnbornBuddha]

Entertaining, albeit it seems like a keystyle. Well a lot of your pieces read like keystyles. Good fun keystyles though, filled with melodic rhythm and hip hop extravaganza. I enjoy the manipulation of the schemes and how you mesh them with a braggadocio flair. It is entertaining. Its something that captivates, but it is a captivation that is superficial. It doesn't penetrate into the core of a person's heart. It doesn't give hope, or bring insight to how you think or how that can relate to their experiences. Rather it fills the reader's mind with a flurry of comedic streams of thoughts. And doing this well is commendable. It is its own style. For me, it amuses me but doesn't really do much else. It's has semblance to some of MC Juice's renditions, stylistically speaking.
Thanks.

[Split Eight]

You guys are easy targets, so why compete? Retarded? I’m fire with speech, you’re dying of heat, my dialect leaves ya gutted. I’m higher than being a hundred, I’m higher than queens in London, I’m higher than even fuckin Ireland seems from Russia.…Which is basically a lateral so I’m kinda confused…My brain just seems illogical when rhyming these tunes. Cause I am the dude with the poisonous pen, writing improved, turnin boys into men. And that last part was weak and a little bit wack, so let me trash talk you geeks wearin feminine pads. I’m a grass sparkin genius when I get in the hash. So let me hashtag my penis like #GETINDATASS.

LMAO

my dad is alive btw

This was dope though, I can't even critique haha it's all so necessary to being a CopyPat verse. Schemes were dope especially in this part, not so much the end. KEEP WRITING

[Mr. J]

this was some nice work right here...nice seeing that mole head pop out haha
nice work with the rhyming as usual that fluid flow makes this work oh so well
really enjoyable ride nonetheless...keep it up