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Ghost1
07-27-2016, 04:13 PM
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MFtastick jilti

MFtastick
07-28-2016, 03:06 AM
Dope. im going 12 fam. good or you tryna write more? jilti

jilti
07-31-2016, 04:44 PM
12 cool

MFtastick
08-03-2016, 02:20 AM
Been hella busy with work. and wont be in internet range till satursay so i gotta drop now.

Jilti want the work. Let's see who swing harder, right cross like a plane charter, face squasher
Left snap the frame on em. Hel flip when I put them things on em. Left right left. I Mix it up with the hands Like James harden
Let me catch boy slippin. The Shotty will blow his thoughts. It ain't the olmypics games if I hold the torch
It's gat swinging. Pump in his mouth like boy you aint Spose to talk. The shotty nose filed down. Bitch Look like voldemort
One shot. These Shells will fucking rip through his teeth
40 ice ya fuckin grill. He'll start sipping on lean
aint nothing but headshots when im liftin this heat.
Put this sig behind ya ear like Kenickie from Grease
Toxic punches. Wind back and let Em have it.
Jill will be seeing STARS when I hit him with these biohazards
Run up and swing like happy Gilmore, then the 40 going straight to his vest
Lift the beam and hit him with that crocodile hunter. That's a ray through the chest

jilti
08-03-2016, 04:53 PM
ur fam worried til i mail them a thumb or index tip
so they'll hope for the best, but get the short end of the Stick
he'll never get a title shot cuz this damn fucken kid slow
only spittin' retard we'll see on the doorstep is Bags cousin Jimbo
yeah i called u a retard. but we're used to this nigga Stick
only mistaken for a Witty kid cuz we've come to expect a little bitch
36 blasting straight up the middle. call it jerome bettis
that chrome wesson put ya head in ur lap like yoga stretches
sexed his girl 12 hours straight. had my dick hard as dense gravel
sticky poll up so long it started looking like the Chyeaaah vs Cred battle
dead that hoe. gotta headstone with your name
& i'll put Stick in a plot like creators of the clue boardgame

KnowP
08-03-2016, 08:20 PM
Jilti want the work. Let's see who swing harder, right cross like a plane charter, face squasher
Left snap the frame on em. Hel flip when I put them things on em. Left right left. I Mix it up with the hands Like James harden
---not feelin this stretched punch line. not a good hit
Let me catch boy slippin. The Shotty will blow his thoughts. It ain't the olmypics games if I hold the torch
It's gat swinging. Pump in his mouth like boy you aint Spose to talk. The shotty nose filed down. Bitch Look like Voldemort
---ehhh pretty lame hit
One shot. These Shells will fucking rip through his teeth
40 ice ya fuckin grill. He'll start sipping on lean
---no real punch here
aint nothing but headshots when im liftin this heat.
Put this sig behind ya ear like Kenickie from Grease
---old concept. aight hit
Toxic punches. Wind back and let Em have it.
Jill will be seeing STARS when I hit him with these biohazards
---naw weak jab
Run up and swing like happy Gilmore, then the 40 going straight to his vest
Lift the beam and hit him with that crocodile hunter. That's a ray through the chest
---nawww basic n weak



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ur fam worried til i mail them a thumb or index tip
so they'll hope for the best, but get the short end of the Stick
---lol
he'll never get a title shot cuz this damn fucken kid slow
only spittin' retard we'll see on the doorstep is Bags cousin Jimbo
---ehhh coulda been flipped better
yeah i called u a retard. but we're used to this nigga Stick
only mistaken for a Witty kid cuz we've come to expect a little bitch
---ouch shots fired
36 blasting straight up the middle. call it jerome bettis
that chrome wesson put ya head in ur lap like yoga stretches
---lite but ok
sexed his girl 12 hours straight. had my dick hard as dense gravel
sticky poll up so long it started looking like the Chyeaaah vs Cred battle
---okish
dead that hoe. gotta headstone with your name
& i'll put Stick in a plot like creators of the clue boardgame
---aight np



easy battle to judge. MF just didn't throw much from his end of the ring that was worthy. jilti hit em with some pretty coo flips. nothing real hard, but effective.

v. jilti

Ghost1
08-04-2016, 03:15 PM
BUMP

Schadenfreude
08-05-2016, 01:54 AM
JILTI - J kept it simple, harsh & to the point, didn't put any real effort in the verse, but I wouldn't have either, after reading MF's verse. Stick was all over place, Voldemort would've been dope had it been cleaner, but it wasn't so oh well.

john hensley
08-05-2016, 12:29 PM
Vote jilti.

Was a pretty easy win. Closer was solid, but honestly just didn't feel MFs verse at all.

Cred
08-05-2016, 01:40 PM
James Harden jawn was nice, could've used less though seemed like a lot going on in that punch. But the closer, sheesh. dope.

vs

Short end of the stick was decent, yoga stretches was a good flip (I see you) , sticky poll was nice.

Nice lil match up here. Not the expected mftastik verse imo but the joints I quoted were good. Jilti came more consistent here wit an all around better verse.

Vote goes jil

Og smokinstein
08-05-2016, 03:53 PM
Respect to Mf for rushing to get an verse in.. Its had to give 100% to an hobby, when you got shit, and life in general.

But with that being said, jilti verse was lil more put together, than Mf.
Mf had a couple dope punches, if he had more time, then he could've developed them into haymakers.

Jiliti didn't have too much more than Mf, I just thought he had more well written verse.

vot3 Jiliti

Blanco Bishop
08-05-2016, 08:53 PM
Stick was slightly sloppy. Cool verse but too many gun bars back to back so that lost effect for me. Jilti had that yoga bar which I liked and the opener was pretty clever IMO.
Jilts verse was a little more polished so he gets the w.

V jilti

Plot
08-06-2016, 12:29 AM
Yeah Jilti got this, Stick shoulda took 15 minutes to polish his verse a bit. Had potential concepts but the structure was to choppy. Jil had a few nameplays and the Witty punch that was popular this week.
V-Jil

Kenny the OG
08-08-2016, 01:48 AM
Mf had the voldermort line which was ok but i wasnt feeling much else tbh. Rushed verse and it showed. Jilti had the yoga stretch which was ok and sticky poll which was lotb imo. Jilti didn't try at all either. Under different circumstances this coulda been a good battle but jilti wins anyway here

Chemist
08-08-2016, 01:52 AM
Jilti want the work. Let's see who swing harder, right cross like a plane charter, face squasher
Left snap the frame on em. Hel flip when I put them things on em. Left right left. I Mix it up with the

Run up and swing like happy Gilmore, then the 40 going straight to his vest
Lift the beam and hit him with that crocodile hunter. That's a ray through the chest

vs


ur fam worried til i mail them a thumb or index tip
so they'll hope for the best, but get the short end of the Stick
36 blasting straight up the middle. call it jerome bettis
that chrome wesson put ya head in ur lap like yoga stretches
sexed his girl 12 hours straight. had my dick hard as dense gravel
sticky poll up so long it started looking like the Chyeaaah vs Cred battle
dead that hoe. gotta headstone with your name
& i'll put Stick in a plot like creators of the clue boardgame

I like J's personal approach to this. Nameplay and jus tover stronger hits here.
MFtastik, truly was just wordy gunplay which wasnt enough for the W


vote jilti