View Full Version : Witty 1-0 Vs Destroyer 1-0 - DESTROYER WINS
Allen Knight
09-06-2016, 12:24 PM
NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4
Due Friday 12 pacific
Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.
& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.
NO EXT, AT ALL.
Witty
Destroyer
Witty
09-06-2016, 02:39 PM
Hi there.
Witty
09-09-2016, 05:02 PM
I stay copping gats for popping cats, or stash 'em til they go to war or get sold
If Des buy heaters it's cuz winters coming, and his old ass bones get sore when it's cold.
Destroyer
09-09-2016, 10:28 PM
vest up. don't mean shit cuz des is gunning w/the shotty hard
& when u hear wit knees hit, trust it won't be from the bodyguard
Certain
09-09-2016, 10:46 PM
Witty had a decent play on the "Destroyer is old" concept, but it such a toasted concept in general. Also, "winter is coming" felt very odd and unnecessary. The line reads better without that. Destroyer had a very nice nameplay that worked both ways.
Vote: Destroyer
Hearder Hearder
09-09-2016, 11:04 PM
Des got it by far
Pinot Grij
09-09-2016, 11:10 PM
Witty's is well concocted and the writing is top notch, but the punch is a little played and predictable.
Des put more effort into this than anyone this week, I believe. An interesting punch that hits well and works both ways. Feels a little over-cooked if I need to offer criticism.
Vote -- Des
Des got this
I felt like witty had a good setup and picked up in the second line but that winter is coming and from then on just felt forced.
Good battle tho
Saint
09-09-2016, 11:27 PM
Des
fresher hit. wittys line was aight but need a better angle if it's an age diss. Des was a little stretched,
but cool.
PancakeBrah
09-10-2016, 02:44 AM
this is tough because i enjoy both battlers' presence in discussion a lot. BUT, witty seems to be down a lot. which isn't fair.
i got witty in this one fellas.
Barcotic
09-10-2016, 01:18 PM
v/dest
way more creative
a heater flip just didn't do it for me
Ghost1
09-10-2016, 01:38 PM
V des
Chemist
09-10-2016, 08:09 PM
vote for des here, witty was very wordy for me. decent concept but didn't quite awe me
Witty. Punch was nice... well worded too... good personal flip on the age...
Des.. nameplay was fresh... thought this was close...
Feel destro was a lil more creative..
Vote Des for the more complex flip
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