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View Full Version : Witty 1-0 Vs Destroyer 1-0 - DESTROYER WINS


Allen Knight
09-06-2016, 12:24 PM
NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Friday 12 pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.
& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.

Witty
Destroyer

Witty
09-06-2016, 02:39 PM
Hi there.

Witty
09-09-2016, 05:02 PM
I stay copping gats for popping cats, or stash 'em til they go to war or get sold
If Des buy heaters it's cuz winters coming, and his old ass bones get sore when it's cold.

Destroyer
09-09-2016, 10:28 PM
vest up. don't mean shit cuz des is gunning w/the shotty hard
& when u hear wit knees hit, trust it won't be from the bodyguard

Certain
09-09-2016, 10:46 PM
Witty had a decent play on the "Destroyer is old" concept, but it such a toasted concept in general. Also, "winter is coming" felt very odd and unnecessary. The line reads better without that. Destroyer had a very nice nameplay that worked both ways.

Vote: Destroyer

Hearder Hearder
09-09-2016, 11:04 PM
Des got it by far

Pinot Grij
09-09-2016, 11:10 PM
Witty's is well concocted and the writing is top notch, but the punch is a little played and predictable.

Des put more effort into this than anyone this week, I believe. An interesting punch that hits well and works both ways. Feels a little over-cooked if I need to offer criticism.

Vote -- Des

Inno
09-09-2016, 11:14 PM
Des got this

I felt like witty had a good setup and picked up in the second line but that winter is coming and from then on just felt forced.

Good battle tho

Saint
09-09-2016, 11:27 PM
Des

fresher hit. wittys line was aight but need a better angle if it's an age diss. Des was a little stretched,
but cool.

sral
09-10-2016, 02:33 AM
Des bruh

PancakeBrah
09-10-2016, 02:44 AM
this is tough because i enjoy both battlers' presence in discussion a lot. BUT, witty seems to be down a lot. which isn't fair.

i got witty in this one fellas.

Barcotic
09-10-2016, 01:18 PM
v/dest

way more creative

a heater flip just didn't do it for me

Ghost1
09-10-2016, 01:38 PM
V des

Cred
09-10-2016, 04:18 PM
Destro got this jawn.

Chemist
09-10-2016, 08:09 PM
vote for des here, witty was very wordy for me. decent concept but didn't quite awe me

Kin
09-11-2016, 05:27 PM
Witty. Punch was nice... well worded too... good personal flip on the age...

Des.. nameplay was fresh... thought this was close...

Feel destro was a lil more creative..

Vote Des for the more complex flip