King Karaoke vs Schadenfruede - Karaoke wins.

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Summer Classic VII


Due Friday September 9th
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schadenfruede King Karaoke

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[Schadenfreude]

The full 16.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

In...

Bye...

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

I'd give u a shell quick but you're already living in hell prick
The soundtrack to your life was probably produced by Infinity tha Rellik
You got bitches burning, running around sharing your flame
Can't get anywhere with a dame cuz the STI you've got could put Baron's to shame
All your verses are trash, you've never had a dope bar, fag
Your record's got so many L's across it, shit's starting to resemble a Goyard bag
My aim's crazy, hit your dome without using a scope for the sight
You'll be taking more shots to the head than Cam did on opening night
All I know is guns and drugs, my homies get the blanco pure
Act tough and the 380'll lift a rapper in the air faster than the Saint Pablo tour
This battle's a cakewalk, I'm not afraid of Freude
Philly Cheesesteak or Chicago Italian Beef? Shit, either way we think you're food
Women are repulsed by you, you couldn't even make water moist
So fuck adopting, cuz if u wind up forever alone, obviously it was not ur choice
They won't find your body no matter how hard they search
The heat'll take your wig off like a grandmother after church

Bye...

[Schadenfreude]

Look dude..

I'm TeamGrudge, even over mean mugs, it's known Idgaf
get trapped no exit hater, u're on a escalator, stares alone can send it up.
Fool u fucked, blame ya gay ass ‘hi & bye’ posting habit,
especially since a high & bi bitch's a rape that's “supposed” to happen.
Must’ve inherited being pussy, never seen swinging hands
avoid The Clash, even ya dad was more punk in the 80s than English bands.
Suppressor on my pistol Black, barely hear a whistle crack
rounds’ll exit u, hit ya cat. Shit even Karpet cleared - ghat’s a Bissell vac.
Deep belief in Heaven’ll get your family there a lil sooner,
cherish yo future, riding masked up in a 6, one .9 will Rey Mysterio, Junior.
Ya girl does booty calls, exits the house w/ a veiled purpose
came over & undressed so fast she left T-Mobile, but not cuz of cell service.
Know u love the bitch, I’ll peel her just to fuck w/ ya life..
fuck for a night, then send her to a cat’ll peel her w/ a butterfly knife.
Dude ya style's an easy formula, yo success mostly fraud,
simply recite a known statement & these idiots follow along - Karaoke Bar.

..BODY.

[Hearder Hearder]

Hi...

I'd give u a shell quick but you're already living in hell prick
The soundtrack to your life was probably produced by Infinity tha Rellik
ok
You got bitches burning, running around sharing your flame
Can't get anywhere with a dame cuz the STI you've got could put Baron's to shame
lol nice
All your verses are trash, you've never had a dope bar, fag
Your record's got so many L's across it, shit's starting to resemble a Goyard bag
mmm decent
My aim's crazy, hit your dome without using a scope for the sight
You'll be taking more shots to the head than Cam did on opening night
this was good
All I know is guns and drugs, my homies get the blanco pure
Act tough and the 380'll lift a rapper in the air faster than the Saint Pablo tour
ha ok
This battle's a cakewalk, I'm not afraid of Freude
Philly Cheesesteak or Chicago Italian Beef? Shit, either way we think you're food
nah this was lame
Women are repulsed by you, you couldn't even make water moist
So fuck adopting, cuz if u wind up forever alone, obviously it was not ur choice
didnt like this either
They won't find your body no matter how hard they search
The heat'll take your wig off like a grandmother after church
lmao bra...



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Look dude..

I'm TeamGrudge, even over mean mugs, it's known Idgaf
get trapped no exit hater, u're on a escalator, stares alone can send it up.
great wording and flow but didn't like the punch
Fool u fucked, blame ya gay ass ‘hi & bye’ posting habit,
especially since a high & bi bitch's a rape that's “supposed” to happen.
cringed here tbh man
Must’ve inherited being pussy, never seen swinging hands
avoid The Clash, even ya dad was more punk in the 80s than English bands.
hmm ok
Suppressor on my pistol Black, barely hear a whistle crack
rounds’ll exit u, hit ya cat. Shit even Karpet cleared - ghat’s a Bissell vac.
alright complex af I have no idea what this is but I'll take your word for it being good
Deep belief in Heaven’ll get your family there a lil sooner,
cherish yo future, riding masked up in a 6, one .9 will Rey Mysterio, Junior.
wording was weird here
Ya girl does booty calls, exits the house w/ a veiled purpose
came over & undressed so fast she left T-Mobile, but not cuz of cell service.
after about 5 reads of this I still can't seem to like it
Know u love the bitch, I’ll peel her just to fuck w/ ya life..
fuck for a night, then send her to a cat’ll peel her w/ a butterfly knife.
ehh forced but I guess
Dude ya style's an easy formula, yo success mostly fraud,
simply recite a known statement & these idiots follow along - Karaoke Bar.
this was dopeeeeee


Damn, after reading kar's verse last week I definitely came in here expecting a lackluster repeat cause he def robbed Cred. But this week he dropped nice. Scad I thought was gonna win easily because of his verse last week but this week I feel he dropped bad, all I really liked was his closer tbh....


Vote: Kar

[TeckNeek]

I'd give u a shell quick but you're already living in hell prick
The soundtrack to your life was probably produced by Infinity tha Rellik

nice

You got bitches burning, running around sharing your flame
Can't get anywhere with a dame cuz the STI you've got could put Baron's to shame

nice

All your verses are trash, you've never had a dope bar, fag
Your record's got so many L's across it, shit's starting to resemble a Goyard bag

alright

My aim's crazy, hit your dome without using a scope for the sight
You'll be taking more shots to the head than Cam did on opening night

this was good

All I know is guns and drugs, my homies get the blanco pure
Act tough and the 380'll lift a rapper in the air faster than the Saint Pablo tour

alright

This battle's a cakewalk, I'm not afraid of Freude
Philly Cheesesteak or Chicago Italian Beef? Shit, either way we think you're food

not feeling it.

Women are repulsed by you, you couldn't even make water moist
So fuck adopting, cuz if u wind up forever alone, obviously it was not ur choice

alright

They won't find your body no matter how hard they search
The heat'll take your wig off like a grandmother after church

nice

vs

I'm TeamGrudge, even over mean mugs, it's known Idgaf
get trapped no exit hater, u're on a escalator, stares alone can send it up.

alright

Fool u fucked, blame ya gay ass ‘hi & bye’ posting habit,
especially since a high & bi bitch's a rape that's “supposed” to happen.

nah

Must’ve inherited being pussy, never seen swinging hands
avoid The Clash, even ya dad was more punk in the 80s than English bands.

ehhh

Suppressor on my pistol Black, barely hear a whistle crack
rounds’ll exit u, hit ya cat. Shit even Karpet cleared - ghat’s a Bissell vac.

ehhh

Deep belief in Heaven’ll get your family there a lil sooner,
cherish yo future, riding masked up in a 6, one .9 will Rey Mysterio, Junior.

kinda

Ya girl does booty calls, exits the house w/ a veiled purpose
came over & undressed so fast she left T-Mobile, but not cuz of cell service.

what?

Know u love the bitch, I’ll peel her just to fuck w/ ya life..
fuck for a night, then send her to a cat’ll peel her w/ a butterfly knife.

no

Dude ya style's an easy formula, yo success mostly fraud,
simply recite a known statement & these idiots follow along - Karaoke Bar.

good closer



overall i must say i think Karaoke came with better punches that were filled with more kicks as to where i only really liked freudes closer. i felt freude could have came more stronger here if he pushed his limit. Karaoke had a strong creative use of his fillers and enders. gotta give it to him.

v/ Karaoke

[Ghost1]

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[Certain]

Karaoke: This verse felt overtly by-the-book. You started with two timely Netcees.co references, transitioned into three pop-culture punches, threw in two outright bad lines and closed with a gun bar. The segmentation of these phases made the verse feel fractured. Your opener and closer were the funniest lines. The STI one felt a little too easy (that’s the reason he chose the name), as did the Cam Newton one. The Saint Pablo tour line might have been the strongest line from the middle. You keep a consistent voice through your verses, which I like, but this time, it felt a little matter-of-fact and almost bored. This was OK, but it was nowhere near your top caliber.

Schadenfreude: There were elements of this verse that were good. Your flow was mostly fine, though there were times where you forced an extra rhyme in that clunked things up instead of smoothing it out. The opener was a good tone-setter. Still, I don’t even know what to make of including both a mediocre karaoke bar and a mediocre “hi and bye” line in a tournament semifinals verse against Karaoke. He’s been battling under that name and using that gimmick for more than a decade. The Karpet line almost worked, but the wording really made it awkward. There’s a good example of an instance where you jammed an internal rhyme in for no reason and it fucked up the whole line. The butterfly knife line was incredibly lazy. Nothing really landed.

Vote: Karaoke

[Saint]

I've got Kar here, I've seen shaden come better, but karaoke's can be hard to write for as a lot has been done vs him. I thought your opener and The Clash lines were your best. Karaoke was more solid w/ the STI, goyard, st Pablo tour.. that food line was ehh tho lol.

Vote Kar

[Cred]

I'd give u a shell quick but you're already living in hell prick
The soundtrack to your life was probably produced by Infinity tha Rellik
Lol aight bet
You got bitches burning, running around sharing your flame
Can't get anywhere with a dame cuz the STI you've got could put Baron's to shame
This was nice
All your verses are trash, you've never had a dope bar, fag
Your record's got so many L's across it, shit's starting to resemble a Goyard bag
Fire

vs


I'm TeamGrudge, even over mean mugs, it's known Idgaf
get trapped no exit hater, u're on a escalator, stares alone can send it up.
im fuckin wit it
Must’ve inherited being pussy, never seen swinging hands
avoid The Clash, even ya dad was more punk in the 80s than English bands.
Dope
Deep belief in Heaven’ll get your family there a lil sooner,
cherish yo future, riding masked up in a 6, one .9 will Rey Mysterio, Junior.
This one almost aint make the quote but i fucked wit da concept heavy

This was a nice battle here tbh. Im fuckin wit both verses n actually had it pretty even in quotes, but judging by my preference of bars im going kar here. Both did yall thing

Vote / Karaoke

[Strikta]

Karaoke got this.

I'll edit my vote w/ the specifics in depth when I get to my CPU.

[Pinot Grij]

Kar

Opener is a little light and the rhyming on "hell prick" "rellik" is clearly off.
Someone else had a STI line in the 1-2 that overshadowed this one.
Purse bags are a hard sell.
Cam bar is CRAZY - nice execution.. timely af too. Nice shit.
Kanye bar is fuckin insane too. Nice simple angle with solid execution.
Off rhyming again in the food bar.
Looks like you're scraping from Discussion for concepts.
Grandmother bar was crazy.

Kar - 3 lines here were fucking flames, the other parts were pretty light.


Schad.

Opener feels overworked.
Not feelin the high and bi concept. Feels stretched.
Clash line is ok. but still feels like a miss.
Karpet is a stretch.
Mysterio line, set up and rhyming is crazy, but not feeling the end result.
I'm not getting the T-Mobile.
caterpillar/butterfly is ehh.
Closer is nice.

Schad, I think you overthought yourself on this one. I've seen you execute great concepts time after time - but this felt like every line was reaching for the stars and never quite landing. I kept wishing you could bring it back down to earth, but most of the concepts were too overcooked to land hard in my mind.

Vote -- Karaoke for two exceptional bars and one really good one.