Hush 1-0 Vs Slechtn 1-0 - HUSH WINS

[Allen Knight]

NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Thursday 12 pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.
& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.

Hush

@selchtn

[Slechtn]

I tried some shit that was 1.5 milly on the scoville chart
Don't do it lol

First & Last time you'll try me, Hush. That's cuz you know better.
Fire out the milli n' leave ya chest burnin'... It won't be the Ghost Pepper.

[Hush]

I might be in the phantom by next summer . Never been no liar
Ucan get ya whip covered in fire if u pull up. Now U a ghost rider

[Inno]

Dope battle.

At first read I had slec. But on a second look I think hush's wording and delivery
Was a bit smoother so I'll give him the edge. Dope battle fellas

Hush

[Kin]

Ghost pepper vs ghost rider...

Slech... most peoples first is last time tryin ghost peppers... only part of ur set up in there goin wit punch.. but u not sayin u are the ghost pepper... u say the opposite. It wont be the ghost pepper.. so didnt work wit set up.. actual punch was ok

Hush..one word relating to punch in set up... similar to slech....urs also doesnt work for double meaning of wordplay...u being in phantom... then calling him ghost rider....but still wording on its own was cool...ghost rider bars been done...but u had a clever flip on the whip in fire

Vote Hush PuppieZ

Hush

[Chemist]

both came fairly nice.
Slecht had a nice set up, smooth and came with a direct personal, Tied in Hush's own hot sauce thread with the ghostpepper shit loool
Hush was smooth too. , I wasn't feeling the set up here tho. The self praise first line killed it for me, honestly.

I almost felt like It was close to a feed but I re-read it a couple times

personal over smooth punch here
vote / slecht , had a more relevant set up and the tie in was direct with the personal

[Pinot Grij]

both punches are well written and eerily similar. Hard to draw the line. Felt Slecht had some more complexity tho.

Vote -- Slechtn

[sral]

i got Slecht here too yo

both had nice lines but Slecht's personal/current event gave him that edge

[Awww Shit]

Both were good bars and I do feel that Hush's was put together scheme wise a bit better, but this is a punchline battle..

The ghost rider bar just didn't do it for me vs. a decent personal punch

Vote - Slechtn

[Maximus]

both were good lines, but i just preferred Hush's cos i think it hit a lil bit harder for me

[Dope girl]

This is tough decision cause both dope

I enjoyed hush punchline more

vote-Hush

[Allen Knight]

UPPPIN FOR VOTES THIS TIED UP 4-4.
Destroyer Bags Infiltration Bash Killing Spree Orc Cyrax

Vote u faggots.

[Cyrax]

good battle, hush got this one

[Saint]

I wish slecht woulda tied in more bcuz his concept was fresher
i have Hush w/ the edge for better wording.

[Certain]

Hush had much better wording. Slechtn had a better concept, but it seemed so muddled by the first half of the second line. Hush's concept was good enough to take it.

Vote: Hush