Schadenfreude 1-2 Vs Diablo 1-2 - SCHAD WINS

[Allen Knight]

NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Thursday 12 pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.
& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.


Schadenfreude

Diablo

[Diablo]

ready when you are chump

[Schadenfreude]

Fool treats his bitch like a Barbie, spoil & shower the thot..
she's got an action figure, yet won’t let him open the box, the value’ll drop.

[Diablo]

i put the G into goon.. cold aim that'll throw schade like im sneak dissin' you
see you a stand up guy, i keep suttin' to silence the heckler like comedians do

[Awww Shit]

Diablo's opening line was better than his second, imo

Schade's was nice start to finish though, no doubt.

Nice battle though

Vote - Schade

[Chemist]

might be the battle of the week here.

Schad was nice, I like the concept.
Diabo was harsher in my eyes here though. I felt the two lines hit

[Pinot Grij]

Schad is in a zone right now. Line connects throughout but remains simple and effective. Lars.. I like the concept but it's relies too much on insinuation to connect too harshly.

Vote -- Schad

[Joe Boston]

Felt schad was more creative here and overall had good humor factor. Felt diablo finisher didnt have impact couldve displayed the reference better

V/Schad

[Saint]

both were good
shaden had a cool concept, and I've seen the heckler/comedian lines done in a sense. but lars written it well. but shade had one of the better lines this week.

Vote shade

[Slechtn]

Lars had a nice concept going...I felt something was missing though.. Both lines were very nice...Both well written...Schad came with fire here imo. Concept that were well executed. My vote goes to:

Schaden