Allen Knight
09-21-2016, 02:19 PM
Week 4 1-2 Punchline Magazine
Intro
It's Time for the week 4 Maggy for u pussy niggas & shit already started retarded, Asian Aero bit Zelph already this week LOL he bit a zelph bar tho, let that sink in to how much of a weirdo faggot he is, aero proves to me he's a broke asian that lives over the top of a panda house in a studio apartment w/ cardboard boxes as furniture & he works for that same panda house doin delieverys on a 10speed mongoose, he's booted out the league forever, now he has more time to practice throwin hadunkens & watchin kung Fu hustle on basic cable. But this past week was good only 2 N/S dopes shit yah'll some really good bars too & some close battles, thats watsup yah'll barring out, but lets get into this mag.
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Battle Reviews
Bash 2-0 Vs Infiltration 2-0
This was a onesided battle tbh, Bash dropped the ball here imo, the trey/lunch bars are beyond played & if wasn't flipped like some fresh fire, voters felt the same, pick it up this week bruh. Infiltration had a good bar here, that spot-on concept was pretty dope imo. He took the battle, props to him.[/b]
Cyrax 2-0 Vs Chyeahhh!!! 2-0
This was another onesided one, Chyeah concept was pretty old but i thought he woulda flipped it better tbh it was to wordy to me & that held it back from hitting good, work on that this week dawg. Cyrax had a nice bar tbh, i never seen that concept before, worded smooth. I like his shit so far & he hasn't been slackin, he won this & props to him.
Destroyer 2-0 Vs Schadenfreude 1-1
This was a cool battle, I liked schades bar but the concept was fire i think he worded it a lil off cuz i thought it coulda been a haymaker. Des had a nice n/p pretty fresh on him that hit good, this was a good battle so props to both but des got the dub.
Bags 1-1 Vs Diablo 1-1
This was a decent one both lines coulda been doper imo, i thought diablo had the better concept but his wording was kinda off shoulda been harsher. Bags line was cool, he put it together pretty solid, this was closer imo then the votes showed. Bags won this props u faggot.
Aero 1-1 Vs Witty 1-1
Witty had a dope line that beat the asian bitter, i wanna say something about aeros line cuz it was nice but idk if he stole that shit to so i won't but i'll say this ....ur a faggot aero. Witty had a nice creative bar that i thought was nice, he won props.
Cred 1-1 Vs Pinot Grij 1-1
This was a BOTW, both dropped nice bars.
Cred had the hide & go seek jawn which i seen the concept but he flipped it nice so i liked that shit. Pinot bar was fire tho, i didnt even think or seen a harambe concept & he worded it smooth as fuck shit hit nice. Creds bar prolly woulda beat alot of ppl, this shit Went back & forth in votes but pinot took home the W, props to both.
Innovator 1-1 Vs Kin 1-1p
This one was Ight, both shoulda dropped fire tho, Inno i thought he won tho becuz its Vader bomb not Vator bomb so kins bar was a stretch to me but the voters felt kin won & he got the Victory but step it up next week guys.
2tripple0 0-2 Vs Bishop Blanco 0-2
Bishop won this pretty easy, he had decent bar but wordin was still rough on it, need to make ur shit smoother & harsh hittin, remember less is more sometimes. Trip is gettin the idea because this week was a better attempt but word ur shit harsher.
Certain 0-1 Vs YDK 0-1
This was a clean sweep, ydk kinda did the same shit bar did on cert but it wasn't hittin tbh bland to me. Certain had a cool bar nothing crazy but wire bars are always good in my book & i like the personal he had mixed w/ it he took the win.
Chemist 1-0 Vs Slechtn 0-0
This was a ok battle both bars were decent imo, i thought slechtn won off the bat tho but this went back in forth in votes, really down to the wire but slechtn took the win. Step it up this week yah'll, drop some fire.
Hush 0-0 Vs R!cantheroyz 0-0
I saw ricans hospital sign concept on nc1 done on hush so tbh it wasn't fresh to me but his wasn't bad it was ight just not worded great. I thought hushs bar was funny & worded good. He won this in votes.
ALTE 0-0 Vs TeckNeek 0-0
This battle went back & forth in votes, honestly it felt like a battle from 2003, I didnt like alte bar it was broader line pause worthy & teck wasn't much better but good enough to win this battle.
Intro
It's Time for the week 4 Maggy for u pussy niggas & shit already started retarded, Asian Aero bit Zelph already this week LOL he bit a zelph bar tho, let that sink in to how much of a weirdo faggot he is, aero proves to me he's a broke asian that lives over the top of a panda house in a studio apartment w/ cardboard boxes as furniture & he works for that same panda house doin delieverys on a 10speed mongoose, he's booted out the league forever, now he has more time to practice throwin hadunkens & watchin kung Fu hustle on basic cable. But this past week was good only 2 N/S dopes shit yah'll some really good bars too & some close battles, thats watsup yah'll barring out, but lets get into this mag.
https://media.giphy.com/media/D7E51m8eKYSNa/giphy.gif
Battle Reviews
Bash 2-0 Vs Infiltration 2-0
This was a onesided battle tbh, Bash dropped the ball here imo, the trey/lunch bars are beyond played & if wasn't flipped like some fresh fire, voters felt the same, pick it up this week bruh. Infiltration had a good bar here, that spot-on concept was pretty dope imo. He took the battle, props to him.[/b]
Cyrax 2-0 Vs Chyeahhh!!! 2-0
This was another onesided one, Chyeah concept was pretty old but i thought he woulda flipped it better tbh it was to wordy to me & that held it back from hitting good, work on that this week dawg. Cyrax had a nice bar tbh, i never seen that concept before, worded smooth. I like his shit so far & he hasn't been slackin, he won this & props to him.
Destroyer 2-0 Vs Schadenfreude 1-1
This was a cool battle, I liked schades bar but the concept was fire i think he worded it a lil off cuz i thought it coulda been a haymaker. Des had a nice n/p pretty fresh on him that hit good, this was a good battle so props to both but des got the dub.
Bags 1-1 Vs Diablo 1-1
This was a decent one both lines coulda been doper imo, i thought diablo had the better concept but his wording was kinda off shoulda been harsher. Bags line was cool, he put it together pretty solid, this was closer imo then the votes showed. Bags won this props u faggot.
Aero 1-1 Vs Witty 1-1
Witty had a dope line that beat the asian bitter, i wanna say something about aeros line cuz it was nice but idk if he stole that shit to so i won't but i'll say this ....ur a faggot aero. Witty had a nice creative bar that i thought was nice, he won props.
Cred 1-1 Vs Pinot Grij 1-1
This was a BOTW, both dropped nice bars.
Cred had the hide & go seek jawn which i seen the concept but he flipped it nice so i liked that shit. Pinot bar was fire tho, i didnt even think or seen a harambe concept & he worded it smooth as fuck shit hit nice. Creds bar prolly woulda beat alot of ppl, this shit Went back & forth in votes but pinot took home the W, props to both.
Innovator 1-1 Vs Kin 1-1p
This one was Ight, both shoulda dropped fire tho, Inno i thought he won tho becuz its Vader bomb not Vator bomb so kins bar was a stretch to me but the voters felt kin won & he got the Victory but step it up next week guys.
2tripple0 0-2 Vs Bishop Blanco 0-2
Bishop won this pretty easy, he had decent bar but wordin was still rough on it, need to make ur shit smoother & harsh hittin, remember less is more sometimes. Trip is gettin the idea because this week was a better attempt but word ur shit harsher.
Certain 0-1 Vs YDK 0-1
This was a clean sweep, ydk kinda did the same shit bar did on cert but it wasn't hittin tbh bland to me. Certain had a cool bar nothing crazy but wire bars are always good in my book & i like the personal he had mixed w/ it he took the win.
Chemist 1-0 Vs Slechtn 0-0
This was a ok battle both bars were decent imo, i thought slechtn won off the bat tho but this went back in forth in votes, really down to the wire but slechtn took the win. Step it up this week yah'll, drop some fire.
Hush 0-0 Vs R!cantheroyz 0-0
I saw ricans hospital sign concept on nc1 done on hush so tbh it wasn't fresh to me but his wasn't bad it was ight just not worded great. I thought hushs bar was funny & worded good. He won this in votes.
ALTE 0-0 Vs TeckNeek 0-0
This battle went back & forth in votes, honestly it felt like a battle from 2003, I didnt like alte bar it was broader line pause worthy & teck wasn't much better but good enough to win this battle.