Blanco Bishop vs Legion - Legion WINS

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NBL Season 10
Week 1

Due FRIDAY 11/18/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

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Blanco Bishop Legion

[Blanco Bishop]

Let's go 10

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

10 it is

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

I need an ext for the next couple hours. I can post tomorrow for sure

[Blanco Bishop]

Ext

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

Youve ducked enough competition to fill every slot on a calendar
Now I'll run your ass over in that Durango since all you do is Dodge Challengers
Fuck text, I'm throwing hands cause this shit gets boring
Or I can take him out back and shoot B.B. in his eye like a Christmas story
And your broads on my dick. She said nobody's lamer than you
Next time I'll make that Hotel her friends about me and make you pay for the room
You not built for war. G code? Blanco be in the streets tellin'
And for that my Tribe'll send more Arrows to your Head than a Chiefs helmet
Fuck this last bar. Bro if you need material just use the search engine
Or my Disciples'll splatter Bishop across the wall and turn his crib to a church session

[Blanco Bishop]

this weirdo stealin stockings from hoars that wont give 'im rectum
so he stays making love to them nets like his name Odell Beckham
I'm the best alive; Legion simply an obstacle on my road to winnin
I'll put this Pest Aside by letting that seep in a room with him in it
I'm a mastermind; u couldn't fathom leavin some1 that hates u dead
but u can be the brain of the operation'f u survive this bullet thru ur head
got youngins on the payroll; ninja stealth when they hit a crib with the nines
srprise party at ur home that wont celebrate shit but the end to ur miserable life
ur moniker's weak. plus ur clik dont bust toys or even own gats to brandish
Legion your crew ain't no backstreet boys, more like a band of faggots

[ill nik-A]

Legion, every single concept u used has been done exactly how u did them. I mean u used a Dodge Challenger line. BB line? Cmon it's obviously played. But the worst part of it all is u used a hotel wordplay. Yikes!

Blanco, opener was ok I guess. Pest aside I mean ugh ok, if u say so. Surprise party too obvious. Ender was weak

I got blanco

[Cred]

Legion/ Thought that kansas city line was cool, couldve incorporated something more into the set up. Closer could have been dope too with a different set up.

Blanco/ The cleaner wording here with more creative concepts. The pest aside was good, had others that were decent too.

Vote - Blanco Bishop

[Alphabet]

Fuck text, I'm throwing hands cause this shit gets boring
Or I can take him out back and shoot B.B. in his eye like a Christmas story
And your broads on my dick. She said nobody's lamer than you
Next time I'll make that Hotel her friends about me and make you pay for the room

vs

this weirdo stealin stockings from hoars that wont give 'im rectum
so he stays making love to them nets like his name Odell Beckham

i got legion, just smoother overall and a lil more consistent.. both were played af.

[Maximus]

no hating but both sides came with some pretty played stuff as well as light jabs that didnt do much damage but as far as consistency goes, i'll have to give this to Legion

[Aero]

Legion

1 - dodge challengers was cool
2 - good name play I dig it
3 - hotel nahh
4 - tribe'll tribal word play? No sir
5 - nahhh too simple

Started well then fell off


Blanco

1 - I get it but it's dumb
2 - nah...
3 - okay
4 - blah
5 - predictable and no Umph

Never really got off the ground here.


MVGT Legion

[Mr. J]

I thought Legion had it with that BB line
didnt really enjoy that Dodge Challenger bit though
the hotel punch was very random for me.
I just had morning bowl & felt like I was transported back to the early 2000s

Blanco had the pest aside, odell beckham & backstreet boys shit
thought the rest was filler...overall nice verse though...

v/gotta give it to Blanco here, I thought Legion had a few cool ideas...
but that Hotel line just really lowered the enjoyment factor for me here.
nice battle though...evenly fought

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3-3

[Slechtn]

youve ducked enough competition to fill every slot on a calendar
Now I'll run your ass over in that Durango since all you do is Dodge Challengers
i like this, a little wordy though...
Fuck text, I'm throwing hands cause this shit gets boring
Or I can take him out back and shoot B.B. in his eye like a Christmas story
decent at best, light jab
And your broads on my dick. She said nobody's lamer than you
Next time I'll make that Hotel her friends about me and make you pay for the room
hotel lol nah bro, u doing a throwback bboys wp
You not built for war. G code? Blanco be in the streets tellin'
And for that my Tribe'll send more Arrows to your Head than a Chiefs helmet
eh nah, decent wp, horrible flip
Fuck this last bar. Bro if you need material just use the search engine
Or my Disciples'll splatter Bishop across the wall and turn his crib to a church session
i mean, kinda cool but awful execution


this weirdo stealin stockings from hoars that wont give 'im rectum
so he stays making love to them nets like his name Odell Beckham
nah, soft
I'm the best alive; Legion simply an obstacle on my road to winnin
I'll put this Pest Aside by letting that seep in a room with him in it
lol horrible flip bro
I'm a mastermind; u couldn't fathom leavin some1 that hates u dead
but u can be the brain of the operation'f u survive this bullet thru ur head
eh didnt like this honestly, thought it was an ok concept
got youngins on the payroll; ninja stealth when they hit a crib with the nines
srprise party at ur home that wont celebrate shit but the end to ur miserable life
ok, light
ur moniker's weak. plus ur clik dont bust toys or even own gats to brandish
Legion your crew ain't no backstreet boys, more like a band of faggots
nah wasnt digging this


honestly, i felt blanco felt a little rushed and just lacked original executions, thought legion had some played lines but fresher flips which landed harded...voting legion here

[Destroyer]

Got Blanco here
Like bb from legion but majority was played
Blanco had some original concepts if sub par wording

V/bb

[Cred]

Count 4-4


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Need some votes before week 2 can go up.

[Chemist]

Fuck text, I'm throwing hands cause this shit gets boring
Or I can take him out back and shoot B.B. in his eye like a Christmas story
Fuck this last bar. Bro if you need material just use the search engine
Or my Disciples'll splatter Bishop across the wall and turn his crib to a church session

vs

this weirdo stealin stockings from hoars that wont give 'im rectum
so he stays making love to them nets like his name Odell Beckham

thought legion
had a one more bar here that made
the different, honestly
both came soft but legion edges this

[Suthaveli]

1) played. Although I've seen it, you worded it well.
2) To me, abbreviations on names just kinda seem like a lazy way out. The bar was hella played. But worded coo.
3)sorry. Can't let the hotel playedousity slide on this one. Worded well again, but yeeaaaaaaa.
4) see 1,2, & 3.
5) I didn't like the execution.

Vs

1) nah. I think you tried to give the bar too much.
2)pesticide was coo.
3) that's a no for me
4)pass.
5)meeeh.

Legion had hella played bars. Blanco had a cool bar. I'm going to go w.leigon more consistent played bar. But feel if Blanco had an extra bar or 2 to my liking, he would've took this, overshadowing legion.
Nothing is wrong with the wording on legion stuff though. Just played, but he gmv

Leigon