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Cred
11-21-2016, 10:00 PM
NBL Season 10
Week 2

Due SUNDAY 11/27/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
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CBA Jayson Fresh

Jayson Fresh
11-22-2016, 01:45 PM
alright , any line count is fine with me

CBA
11-22-2016, 07:07 PM
Let's do 12 then

Jayson Fresh
11-23-2016, 11:46 AM
knock, knock..

I'll knockkk u da faaak out wanna spar b ?
knock'll end with an exposed chest like surprise at da door of a bachelor party.
naa u ain't touchin me.. aiiyo i'll beat this kid with eaaaase
cuz you & winnin' go together like germaphobes at da ballpit of chuck-e-cheese
AND soo fresh on some javelin stabbin' watch my spear access ya abdomen
CPR'll be useless when I throw your heart into a mannequin challenge
aaand when ya moms was pregnant with u she would cry & pray..
for a coat hanger to leave her uterus emptier than wal mart's shelves after black Friday
fressh in da club with ya sis.. homie we flowin' Bacardi
cant handle da flow., naa dumbfak type to bring a lifejacket to a foam party
& real talk my drive to win is suttin' i never let slack..
CBA? kinda username is that? faaag thought of letters instead.. to win his boyfriend back

CBA
11-25-2016, 10:38 PM
Battle rap's Vietnam Vet vs a jobber that's making no noise,
I'll take the biscuit and starting poppin' fresh for the dough, boy
Oh boy, you're in the gay club singing "it's raining men" in a tube top
I'm singing "it's raining men" throwing this fag off a roof top

Almost half way through the fucking verse and I'm bringing lava
Your chick said my cock fill her (filler) non-stop - that's the Frieza Saga
While you were at Wal-mart, me and your chick were getting it on, son
He was out buying baby products while I was giving her Johnson and Johnson

And I said "this will shoot your eye out" as I humped your sis
For the turkey, I'll have my dawgs in your house like the Bumpeses
You're a born loser kid, no chance of success, that ship sailed
Ever since his mom pushed Fresh out the oven he's been stale

Cred
11-26-2016, 07:11 AM
Ready for votes!

Suthaveli
11-26-2016, 10:21 AM
AND soo fresh on some javelin stabbin' watch my spear access ya abdomen
CPR'll be useless when I throw your heart into a mannequin challenge

Vs

Battle rap's Vietnam Vet vs a jobber that's making no noise,
I'll take the biscuit and starting poppin' fresh for the dough, boy
Oh boy, you're in the gay club singing "it's raining men" in a tube top
I'm singing "it's raining men" throwing this fag off a roof top

I'm sure fresh nameplate against him is dead, but i like the direction it went. The other bar becuz it made me chuckle. You write as if you were once a long barer.
Orc is like a chameleon w. sneezes & Fresh steez looks like one of the many orc highlandered into his own style & did it better. You like to see it because it gives you entertainment visually but in your case, fresh.. it lacks in the power of the punches. Maybe you're rusty. Idk.

Mvgt- cba

Came off a bit stronger imo.

Legion Of Cocks in my mouth
11-26-2016, 11:51 AM
JF - mannequin challenge

CBA - Johnson and Johnson

I'm gonna give it to CBA for stronger non-quotables

Schadenfreude
11-26-2016, 10:34 PM
AND soo fresh on some javelin stabbin' watch my spear access ya abdomen
CPR'll be useless when I throw your heart into a mannequin challenge


versus


Oh boy, you're in the gay club singing "it's raining men" in a tube top
I'm singing "it's raining men" throwing this fag off a roof top


Wasn't feeling that many bars in this battle tbh, JF could've went harder w/ the 'mannequin challenge' concept, but I liked it. As for CBA's quotable, it wasn't crazy, but it was funny enough to edge my vote, CBA takes it.

Greed
11-27-2016, 07:16 AM
I'll knockkk u da faaak out wanna spar b ?
knock'll end with an exposed chest like surprise at da door of a bachelor party.

Ehh

naa u ain't touchin me.. aiiyo i'll beat this kid with eaaaase
cuz you & winnin' go together like germaphobes at da ballpit of chuck-e-cheese

Cheesy

AND soo fresh on some javelin stabbin' watch my spear access ya abdomen
CPR'll be useless when I throw your heart into a mannequin challenge

Tf?

aaand when ya moms was pregnant with u she would cry & pray..
for a coat hanger to leave her uterus emptier than wal mart's shelves after black Friday

Too wordy

fressh in da club with ya sis.. homie we flowin' Bacardi
cant handle da flow., naa dumbfak type to bring a lifejacket to a foam party

Dumb

& real talk my drive to win is suttin' i never let slack..
CBA? kinda username is that? faaag thought of letters instead.. to win his boyfriend back

Auto loss lol tf you talking about.



Battle rap's Vietnam Vet vs a jobber that's making no noise,
I'll take the biscuit and starting poppin' fresh for the dough, boy

Played concept

Oh boy, you're in the gay club singing "it's raining men" in a tube top
I'm singing "it's raining men" throwing this fag off a roof top

Heh

Almost half way through the fucking verse and I'm bringing lava
Your chick said my cock fill her (filler) non-stop - that's the Frieza Saga

Dont hate on dbz foo

While you were at Wal-mart, me and your chick were getting it on, son
He was out buying baby products while I was giving her Johnson and Johnson

Could of been better

And I said "this will shoot your eye out" as I humped your sis
For the turkey, I'll have my dawgs in your house like the Bumpeses

Obscure reference

You're a born loser kid, no chance of success, that ship sailed
Ever since his mom pushed Fresh out the oven he's been stale

Not worded great




V cba

It look like fresh got drunk before he wrote this and didnt proof read it. He was real hype for not saying anything.

ill nik-A
11-27-2016, 10:12 AM
Fresh, kinda lackluster, I get where u were going with the mannequin challenge but felt short

Cba, plz don't put wordplay in parentheses, we get it, no need it looks amateurish, rooftop was cool, so was j&j

Cba wins

Awww Shit
11-27-2016, 08:19 PM
AND soo fresh on some javelin stabbin' watch my spear access ya abdomen
CPR'll be useless when I throw your heart into a mannequin challenge

This was your best line and I almost feel like it was an accident how good it turned out for you


vs.


While you were at Wal-mart, me and your chick were getting it on, son
He was out buying baby products while I was giving her Johnson and Johnson

Yep... I liked it. well, the second line.... 1st line was trash



Vote - CBA
Overall more consistent verse and delivery, punches were decent overall... Jayson's verse felt a little forced and lackluster for my taste

Chemist
11-27-2016, 09:36 PM
nada
mannaquin been already done twice or at least i seen it twice and this was probably the wors tone

Vs

Battle rap's Vietnam Vet vs a jobber that's making no noise,
I'll take the biscuit and starting poppin' fresh for the dough, boy


light battle
here folks
honestly going for the harsher hit here, cba