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Cred
11-30-2016, 04:18 PM
NBL Season 10
Week 3

Due SUNDAY 12/04/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

Awww Shit
11-30-2016, 06:16 PM
check

Awww Shit
12-04-2016, 10:46 PM
Not trying to waste a verse on a no show, got it?
I push weight, this kid is weak so consider urself spotted
Spark the heater and burn ya dreams; Dash ya hopes, kid
Burnt to a crisp n leave ya stacked with bodies in Oakland
Defi's known for the filet mignon special on some streets
Cuz the kid is dishing out weak jobs faster than Trump Tweets
Stick up ya hands kid, we're all giving you the applause
Cuz you respected for doing nothing worse than Santa Claus
Ship this kid some knee pads, all that dick - u gon' hurl, pal
Ya stay on ya knees more than priests in an Amazon commercial
When it comes to the battle lets' just say I know to fight
And I'll leave ya face down in the road faster than Joe Mcknight

Defiant
12-05-2016, 01:34 AM
Ext

Awww Shit
12-05-2016, 07:10 AM
I'll drop today then if u are. 12

Defiant
12-05-2016, 05:06 PM
Ya girls been around, she's been shown as a cheat
She ain't just the talk of the town, her number is in every phone on the street
You putting pen to paper is like ya madre, we wishing u Spat less
Ya verses dont just stain the sheet, it looks worse than that mothers mattress
At hhe you were wack, at rap world's u never had a bareable win
Only thing after a www. In rap forums is the name of another site u were fucking terrible in
i like vintage equipment, but his lack of funds is more than a dumb issue
last time he had a pocket watch, it was a couple of coins, a button and some tissue
If you're the new breed, if that's the talk in threads
N if you're the leader of the saviours, I'm hoping rick gets his revenge on walking dead
In any kind of fight, u standing a chance il disprove g
First I snap ya neck then you'll bleed for this like that vinnie paz movie

Aero
12-05-2016, 05:56 PM
Aww - that Santa Claus line baffles me. Amazon commercial made me smirk.

Defiant - walking dead line wasn't good but I enjoyed. Pocket watch line I'm befuddled.


Tough call here fellas. Weird battle the execution and concepts contained no sting lol.

I have to go with Defiant. Santa Claus and Consider yourself spotted lost this.

Good showings.

Slechtn
12-05-2016, 08:16 PM
Opener was decent. Didt like Oakland line. Trumo was all right.. amazon was decent.didnt likr closer... defiant... pocket ewatch n twd but honestly im edging this to awww due to execution n wording

Destroyer
12-06-2016, 11:47 AM
Man I didn't like anything in aww's verse
Maybe it's just me
But I think def's opener alone was enough to beat that verse
Walking dead was ok too

V/defiant

Suthaveli
12-06-2016, 03:02 PM
Aww, i felt your punches didn't hv much impact. Defiant verse was way better this week .

Mvgt- defiant

Barcotic
12-06-2016, 03:46 PM
aw
blah
I mean the commercial joint was proly humorous to someone who's familiar w/ it
really didn't see much of anything else tho

vs

talk of the town was lol
same shit I said about aw's only mention applies to walking dead line

v/defiant