Schadenfreude (1-0) vs Legion (1-1) - Schadenfreude WINS

[Cred]

NBL Season 10
Week 3

Due SUNDAY 12/04/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

14

Pics or reg

[Schadenfreude]

Regular.

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

Ready when you are Schadenfreude

[Schadenfreude]

Get this work..

All it’d take’s a bit of script for Me to Michael Phelps ya bitch
picture her lifting my dick w/ a huge smile on her face, it’s a selfie stick.
Plus ya flow weak, yo hope in this league, trust it’s so bleak
u’re bringing such a lightbar display, my instincts is “fuck the police!”.
Most yo bars’re average by standards, never a challenge..
while I could kill u average bystanders, my shit’s collateral damage.
Yo concepts old as Nik, wording’s shitty & mostly u force bars
while heads explode from every point I make, I’m Fist of the North Star.
u don’t punch, ya don’t stab, u ain’t letting the wesson go,
so if I’m caught by leg irons, s’cuz the feds got Me ‘fo I made it to Mexico.
Way I fix issues is to catch u in traffic, then let the flare fan
last u’ll see is Me lifting that ladder onto ya caravan, I’m the repairman.
To Infinity where I take beef, ask ya bestie even he hate me
won’t be alone to catch slugs, cuz I’d smoke ya best bud - no T.H.C.

..BODY.

[Legion Of Cocks in my mouth]

Props, the boy Cred try'na single-handedly bring text back..lol.

Macs and semis. Listen up cause facts are deadly.
You're the only dude banking on Cred without having any.
I'm steady with glocks. Legion coming for your neck whether you're ready or not.
Nobody worried about you catching fire. Since when does Schade produce anything hot.
Sue me jack. Legion'll make sure you die slow when the room is black.
You brave? I'll rip out every valve in that heart and Spray enough Blood to bring Tookie back.
Check this shit. Say something I don't like and ya neck get split.
One word out of you and I'm throwing Schade everywhere like a Netcees diss.
Get wet up with paint Clown. Murders in my city usually take 8 rounds.
But I'll catch him in his crib. Single shot then close the blinds. Schades down.
Your sections in my harm. Ya scronny ass will get dealt wit in the yard,
And ya guns mean nothing. You need some definition in those arms.
You love text. Holding it tight, But it ain't dope when you write.
So I'll stuff his body into Bags and have his soul ghosting the site

Sleep

[Chemist]

All it’d take’s a bit of script for Me to Michael Phelps ya bitch
picture her lifting my dick w/ a huge smile on her face, it’s a selfie stick.
Most yo bars’re average by standards, never a challenge..
while I could kill u average bystanders, my shit’s collateral damage.
Way I fix issues is to catch u in traffic, then let the flare fan
last u’ll see is Me lifting that ladder onto ya caravan, I’m the repairman.


vs
acs and semis. Listen up cause facts are deadly.
You're the only dude banking on Cred without having any.
I'm steady with glocks. Legion coming for your neck whether you're ready or not.
Nobody worried about you catching fire. Since when does Schade produce anything hot.

legion wordiness is killing here
thought he had some quotable
shade and cred
but the selfie stick and repairman was fire tbh
mvgt schad

[Cred]

1-0 Schad.

Lets get votes

[Awww Shit]

Yo concepts old as Nik, wording’s shitty & mostly u force bars
while heads explode from every point I make, I’m Fist of the North Star.
u don’t punch, ya don’t stab, u ain’t letting the wesson go,
so if I’m caught by leg irons, s’cuz the feds got Me ‘fo I made it to Mexico.

v

I'm steady with glocks. Legion coming for your neck whether you're ready or not.
Nobody worried about you catching fire. Since when does Schade produce anything hot.
Get wet up with paint Clown. Murders in my city usually take 8 rounds.
But I'll catch him in his crib. Single shot then close the blinds. Schades down.


Pretty even match, feel like both had some ok concepts. Schades down line was my overall favorite but I think I like the concept better than the actual punch. Speaking on overall consistency though I have to go with Schade. solid punches from start to finish

v- schade

[Barcotic]

schad
selfie stick was lol
lightbar display was dope
average bystanders was ok

the rest missed

vs

legion
opener was deadly
closer hit as well

mid verse fell flat
schad isn't pronounced shade so shade plays were lazy
tookie williams line had swag but was way too simp
same w/ definition

close but
v/schad by a bar

[Suthaveli]

Vote schadenfreude.

I like Leigon schade dwn line, although not certain it's the correct pronunciation. Better than last week vs, minus leg day bar.

[Slechtn]

Schady: Selfie stick was nice. Lghtbr concept could have been done bettrr but it was ok. Didnt like the mexico or fist line. Repairman and THC was decent

Legion first two bars were dope. Tookie was meh. Disliked the nc line. Blinds was niiice. The rest I didnt like.


Bro this was closer than yall think. Voting based on set uo and exection here. Legion; u got concept. Work on those set ups chico.

Vote Shady

[Saint]

Have shade here for consistency, some concepts I've seen before with a different take ( opener, ladder)
Legion had highs and some bad lows lol..
That closer turned my head though.

Vote schade