Lotto Smirk (2-1) vs Mr. J (2-1) - Lotto Smirk WINS

[Cred]

NBL Season 10
Week 4

Due SUNDAY 12/11/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MATCH 1st VERSE


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

[Mr. J]

EDIT:....I'll think of something tomorrow...ya fruit

[Lotto Smirk]

You want to go more then or keep it at 12 I thought I messaged last night to say how many n that I was posting but musnt of sent it my bad mr. J take as long as u need.

[Lotto Smirk]

slacking lately but I'm prepped now that I've stopped fuckin ya hoe
got 20 for any head I get,n ironically that's how ur slut earns her dough
Catch me in mazaratti's ur a smack head who can't afford a lift
im driving like I'm on top gear while only thing ur racin for is ur next fix
act gangster n hard, all we see is wack bars when ya mouth start
cus we don't understand when u talkin hood like ur kenny from South Park
gun w/ extended barrel'll for all that made up talk u hoe
For all that lying you can catch the long nose like Pinocchio
Slaughted u 2 weeks ago,now again what a shitty hand Cred dealt u
Beating! U'll get that second coming even the return of Jesus wouldn't help u
shotty at waist height give him stage freight , blast at this fag
dump shit from the hip but he'll be the one left needing a colostomy bag

12...

[Mr. J]

Lotto needs to give up his rap career and get him a job
even 2tripple0 was upset in BA chat cause you wouldnt give him a loss
& this frauds the MOD? bruh...even your tourney flopped.
that's literally a trip how you continuosly just journey off..
s'all good though, one punch & ya obituary will be placed in journals
one swing of this bat...shiiiet I'll send ya flying like Ace Ventura.
with the way the years turning out you better feel bad, chump.
cause I'll body ya outcome, double entendre that Skillz wrap up
I don't have time to add four more lines so fuck your win
Ya body ain't big enough for the box they put chicken nuggets in
you a fag fa'real
plus you always smell like happy meals

[Cred]

Lotto had kenny/hood and his closer.


Vs


Mr J had some cool opening personals, ace ventura cuda been dope if worded better.


Match was a bit of a let down tbh. I thought J coulda prolly made this a bit better if wuda dropped a full verse. But lotto got this one


Vote - Lotto Smirk

[Aero]

Lotto - long nose was cool, dump shit from the hip was nice


Mr J - 2trip made me smirk, chuckled at happy meals but it wasn't good.

Nice little battle here. Think Lotto was slightly more consistent.Mr J went light at the end.


Vote Lotto

[Jayson Fresh]

slacking lately but I'm prepped now that I've stopped fuckin ya hoe
got 20 for any head I get,n ironically that's how ur slut earns her dough

Slaughted u 2 weeks ago,now again what a shitty hand Cred dealt u
Beating! U'll get that second coming even the return of Jesus wouldn't help u


I thought those two lines did for it Lotto who I believe won by a comfortable margin here. I am however diggin' J's swag tho it makes for an entertaining read. strong work fellas.

[Maximus]

lotto had some cool jabs here and there and i thought the dump shit line was dope, seen better from u buy decent verse non the less. mj had me lol'ing with the tripple and happy meal lines but i felt u didn't put in effort here man, couple of lines coulda been worded better
i got Lotto for the W here..

[Schadenfreude]

slacking lately but I'm prepped now that I've stopped fuckin ya hoe
got 20 for any head I get,n ironically that's how ur slut earns her dough
Pretty basic
Catch me in mazaratti's ur a smack head who can't afford a lift
im driving like I'm on top gear while only thing ur racin for is ur next fix
OK
act gangster n hard, all we see is wack bars when ya mouth start
cus we don't understand when u talkin hood like ur kenny from South Park
Decent
gun w/ extended barrel'll for all that made up talk u hoe
For all that lying you can catch the long nose like Pinocchio
Super played
Slaughted u 2 weeks ago,now again what a shitty hand Cred dealt u
Beating! U'll get that second coming even the return of Jesus wouldn't help u
Played again
shotty at waist height give him stage freight , blast at this fag
dump shit from the hip but he'll be the one left needing a colostomy bag
Played

VERSUS


Lotto needs to give up his rap career and get him a job
even 2tripple0 was upset in BA chat cause you wouldnt give him a loss
Personal, but just a statement
& this frauds the MOD? bruh...even your tourney flopped.
that's literally a trip how you continuosly just journey off..
Personal, but basic
s'all good though, one punch & ya obituary will be placed in journals
one swing of this bat...shiiiet I'll send ya flying like Ace Ventura.
Lol, decent
with the way the years turning out you better feel bad, chump.
cause I'll body ya outcome, double entendre that Skillz wrap up
Soft jab
I don't have time to add four more lines so fuck your win
Ya body ain't big enough for the box they put chicken nuggets in
Terrible
you a fag fa'real
plus you always smell like happy meals
Even worse

So it's the choice between decent, yet play concepts, as opposed to personal yet stale jabs.., I'm giving it to LOTTO SMIRK, cuz Mr. J pretty much gave up w/ those last two bars & the personals were damaging enough to hold up the verse.

[R!canTheoryz]

act gangster n hard, all we see is wack bars when ya mouth start
cus we don't understand when u talkin hood like ur kenny from South Park
Pinochio bar
Vs

Nothing


Very basic lines from j and the ones he attempted we're just weak indirect IMO. He drops way better in 1-2

Vote - smirk