Week 1: PancakeBrah (0-0) vs. Artifice (0-0) - Artifice wins via No-Show

[Frank]

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Season 7

Verses are due Thursday 12/15 at 11:59 PST. EXT 12/16 11:59 PST

Voting ends Sunday 12/18 at 11:59 PST

Verses may not exceed 64 lines

Voting on 3 battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will not receive a victory. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension.

Topic: Not everything that can be counted counts, and not everything that counts can be counted.

Good luck to both participants PancakeBrah Artifice

[PancakeBrah]

In

[Artifice]

check

[Artifice]

gonna need the ext.

at work until 8am EST, can put something up in the morning when i get home.

[Artifice]

rip the plastic from the package of twenty-five darts
lit & ashed quick-fast as I thrust each one in my heart
sparked a flame near my lips, teeth tarred & stained
started a chain reaction which happens to be hard to change
scarred & maimed lung tissue... largely inflamed
charred remains of carbon taking a large part of the blame
smoked two packs a day at least fifteen years or so
knew the risk of cancer to be there, but didn't fear it though
so as these tobacco leaves burn aromatic
i gasp & wheeze, my battle to breathe turns air so tragic
convinced i felt fine, truth is, i'm dyin' & quick
my minds adrift, can't seem to count all the time that i'll miss
half a million peace pipes in my life were gettin' lit
but i piped too much of the peace, so now i'm gonna rest in it
to put the cherry on top, puffin' that smoke
life's a drag & carries on as i become the butt of its joke