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View Full Version : Suthaveli (3-1) vs Lotto Smirk (3-1) - Suthaveli WINS


Cred
12-13-2016, 08:01 PM
NBL Season 10
Week 5

Due SUNDAY 12/18/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


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May God have mercy on your souls!

Suthaveli
12-14-2016, 02:39 PM
12 ready

Suthaveli
12-19-2016, 12:18 AM
Come & see these hands.Its nothin for u ta catch wreckage, ya fag
I gotta couple swing sets that'll compliment that playground of a record u have
I'm better, bitch.Bow down to ya superior & fear the presence
My blows are sucha threat to ur temple ur blood'll rushed twrds the nearest exit
& ur name makes 0 sense.U'll never claim them G's possession
Yeaaaa, I see a Lotto in ur future... when ya vehicle is in repossession
Text is jokes ta me.Win or lose, verses take about a hr makin..
1 of the things I do on the side- For more, see ya hoe about our arrangements
Trust.I'm buckin them toys.Yeeeew don't wanna fuck w. the boy
If pissed, I give the silent treatment- & both doses'll muffle that noise

Lotto Smirk
12-19-2016, 02:46 AM
Trust! If the chrome come out,no-one gone help ya
When I Put the metal to ya face n let shit spark like a welder
Made such a big deal w/ schade,how u gonna deal w/ me
U come up against a little German looked like a faggot w/ ocd
got thugs that'll shoot for me, one call n they'll end ya
one move and ill have the whole block fall upon you like jenga
Shots to the kneecaps w/ 2 rounds, leave you to bleed there
catch me wheeling iron by both sides, that'll put you in a wheelchair
Girl loves the d, the boys'll run a train on that slut hoe
She's always Down to fix up a line up but ain't intrested in helping uh oh

Meh key'd....

Mr. J
12-21-2016, 02:40 AM
Suth killed it with that opener tbh
Repossession & muffle that noise were dope.

Lotto seemed to have a rough start here.
But after Jenga things picked up for him
I thought the wheelchair line was cool too.
Pretty slick closer too.

Thought both came correct but I enjoyed Suth's verse more.
Lotto seemed rushed and almost pulled an upset but that opener felt off to me.
Dope showing for a quick verse though but I got go with Suth

Aero
12-21-2016, 05:39 AM
Suth - came out hard, really liked temple and repossession lines. Lots of swag here

Lotto - jenga line was lotb, rest was cool but underdeveloped

Nice small battle v/ Suth

Destroyer
12-21-2016, 10:00 AM
Yeah suth got this with a better crafted verse
Lottos key made for some simple connections that didn't really wow me
Suths repossession and opener were fire

V/suth

Cred
12-21-2016, 06:54 PM
Suth had his opener and closer which wrre both clean hits.


Vs

That block like jenga shit was good


Decent little match here. Lotto mighta had this one if he didnt key. Suth brang just enough to take this W here imo.

Vote - Suthaveli

Schadenfreude
12-21-2016, 11:07 PM
Come & see these hands.Its nothin for u ta catch wreckage, ya fag
I gotta couple swing sets that'll compliment that playground of a record u have
Clever opener
I'm better, bitch.Bow down to ya superior & fear the presence
My blows are sucha threat to ur temple ur blood'll rushed twrds the nearest exit
Naw, weak
& ur name makes 0 sense.U'll never claim them G's possession
Yeaaaa, I see a Lotto in ur future... when ya vehicle is in repossession
Lol..I like this
Text is jokes ta me.Win or lose, verses take about a hr makin..
1 of the things I do on the side- For more, see ya hoe about our arrangements
Not feeling this
Trust.I'm buckin them toys.Yeeeew don't wanna fuck w. the boy
If pissed, I give the silent treatment- & both doses'll muffle that noise
Decent closer

VERSUS


Trust! If the chrome come out,no-one gone help ya
When I Put the metal to ya face n let shit spark like a welder
Naw, needed more to it
Made such a big deal w/ schade,how u gonna deal w/ me
U come up against a little German looked like a faggot w/ ocd
Thanx for the s/o, but this had no sting
got thugs that'll shoot for me, one call n they'll end ya
one move and ill have the whole block fall upon you like jenga
Now this was dope
Shots to the kneecaps w/ 2 rounds, leave you to bleed there
catch me wheeling iron by both sides, that'll put you in a wheelchair
Naaah, soft
Girl loves the d, the boys'll run a train on that slut hoe
She's always Down to fix up a line up but ain't intrested in helping uh oh
Decent closer

SUTHERLAND..Lotto u dropped super lazy, stop copping out to the keystyle excuse, I key most of my verses.