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Cred
12-26-2016, 09:39 PM
NBL Season 10
Week 6

Due FRIDAY 12/30/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

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- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


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Allen Knight
12-26-2016, 10:49 PM
Word, 16.

Saint
12-28-2016, 06:27 AM
in.

Saint
12-30-2016, 11:55 PM
might need ext, still going 16?

Allen Knight
12-31-2016, 12:32 PM
fuckin ur girl behind ur back, i just hit her an smile
i'll Marker vag & u'll Cursive u found out i been hittin her w/ my signature style
u stay doin gay stuff, usin dildos to tap ya lips
Input devices in his ass & the human mind'll process that data as faggot shit
& deep down u kno ur a wack as fuck, u a fool nigga
i can see the proof across ur fuckin face like u missed ya school pictures
AK gettin that fast money, i get cash w/ my hustlin
everything about Inbred is slower than the kid he had w/ his cousin
i'll get drunk & spray them heaters, shell's spread dog
once i pound down a drink thats Stiff Arm's will come out an rip ur head off
i be givin sexy dimes the dick, while this suckers gay
if India bitch her vag smells like curry sittin in a hot room on a summer day
we can do this UFC style or w/ weapons, catch a knife slice
point the blade Northcutt south till ur ribs poke out ur chest like white spikes
ya chick be cheatin all day & u kno this, shit is ya flaw
all u do is Copenhagen w/ ur friends to get over her havin dicks in her jaw

Saint
01-01-2017, 07:47 AM
soon as cred set the thread up

i knew it was lightwork; you're a horrorcore fgt w/ bouts of anger
kane vs taker: cuz inferno match here when this square stays surrounded by flamers
went hard in a cpl cyphers; now ur drive been less of a thrill
cialis gone soft in long sessions and couldnt last if he tried OD'in on them pills
take u out in the woods to kill; disrespect ya corpse is what ima do
let kids grab a stick & prada body before u get buried in 1 of their finer suits
fraud. if i whipped out a tiny knife he'd look like he seen a scary ghost
face turn soooo white knight u'd stay pussy whipped by bitches u captain save a hoe'd
i'll bang a fo; but if it jam grab a blade & go for a stab
u'll walk at a cripple pace when hearts in a different place like a reformed sociopath
like cred always loadin a mag; rob allen for his ice, kicks n green
a bald head have em lyin face down & put that shine on the floor.. that's Mr. Clean
moms wished u were a coat hanger abortion; spics a damn goner
u have NO good parts. its ^only time baby shouldve been thrown out w/ the bathwater
being shoe'd in the HOF proved the panel were some little cheaters
because real talent speaks for itself... & ya latest verses give ya entry the middle finger

Schadenfreude
01-01-2017, 09:29 PM
fuckin ur girl behind ur back, i just hit her an smile
i'll Marker vag & u'll Cursive u found out i been hittin her w/ my signature style
& deep down u kno ur a wack as fuck, u a fool nigga
i can see the proof across ur fuckin face like u missed ya school pictures
AK gettin that fast money, i get cash w/ my hustlin
everything about Inbred is slower than the kid he had w/ his cousin


versus


i knew it was lightwork; you're a horrorcore fgt w/ bouts of anger
kane vs taker: cuz inferno match here when this square stays surrounded by flamers
went hard in a cpl cyphers; now ur drive been less of a thrill
cialis gone soft in long sessions and couldnt last if he tried OD'in on them pills
i'll bang a fo; but if it jam grab a blade & go for a stab
u'll walk at a cripple pace when hearts in a different place like a reformed sociopath
like cred always loadin a mag; rob allen for his ice, kicks n green
a bald head have em lyin face down & put that shine on the floor.. that's Mr. Clean
being shoe'd in the HOF proved the panel were some little cheaters
because real talent speaks for itself... & ya latest verses give ya entry the middle finger

INFILTRATION..Idk AK's verse read as extremely lazy. As for Inf, his wording was off at some points, but mostly he was very personal & very creative, so I gave it to him.

Suthaveli
01-02-2017, 09:06 AM
& deep down u kno ur a wack as fuck, u a fool nigga
i can see the proof across ur fuckin face like u missed ya school pictures
AK gettin that fast money, i get cash w/ my hustlin
everything about Inbred is slower than the kid he had w/ his cousin
i be givin sexy dimes the dick, while this suckers gay
if India bitch her vag smells like curry sittin in a hot room on a summer day

Vs

knew it was lightwork; you're a horrorcore fgt w/ bouts of anger
kane vs taker: cuz inferno match here when this square stays surrounded by flamers
went hard in a cpl cyphers; now ur drive been less of a thrill
cialis gone soft in long sessions and couldnt last if he tried OD'in on them pills

Allen did a lot of nameplay w."In", typically not a fan i felt it wrk in some casea cause he had mre going on w.the line. Infil had the LOTB w. The kane & taker bar. Is this a current event soon happening so or something cuz you're the 2nd person to make mention of it? Idk, other lines didn't fully wrk for me. I almost quoted sociopath but it executed sloppy imo.
Allen Knight gmv, but I've read better from both. Close battle,

Hush
01-02-2017, 05:36 PM
fuckin ur girl behind ur back, i just hit her an smile
i'll Marker vag & u'll Cursive u found out i been hittin her w/ my signature style
--ok
u stay doin gay stuff, usin dildos to tap ya lips
Input devices in his ass & the human mind'll process that data as faggot shit
--nah
& deep down u kno ur a wack as fuck, u a fool nigga
i can see the proof across ur fuckin face like u missed ya school pictures
--huh
AK gettin that fast money, i get cash w/ my hustlin
everything about Inbred is slower than the kid he had w/ his cousin
--ok
i'll get drunk & spray them heaters, shell's spread dog
once i pound down a drink thats Stiff Arm's will come out an rip ur head off
--eh
i be givin sexy dimes the dick, while this suckers gay
if India bitch her vag smells like curry sittin in a hot room on a summer day
--nah
we can do this UFC style or w/ weapons, catch a knife slice
point the blade Northcutt south till ur ribs poke out ur chest like white spikes
--ehh
ya chick be cheatin all day & u kno this, shit is ya flaw
all u do is Copenhagen w/ ur friends to get over her havin dicks in her jaw
--eh


soon as cred set the thread up

i knew it was lightwork; you're a horrorcore fgt w/ bouts of anger
kane vs taker: cuz inferno match here when this square stays surrounded by flamers
--so who flipped the line u or @barcotic . Same week? Helluva coincidence
went hard in a cpl cyphers; now ur drive been less of a thrill
cialis gone soft in long sessions and couldnt last if he tried OD'in on them pills
--nice but overworded imo
take u out in the woods to kill; disrespect ya corpse is what ima do
let kids grab a stick & prada body before u get buried in 1 of their finer suits
--same as above . Dope idea lazy follow thru
fraud. if i whipped out a tiny knife he'd look like he seen a scary ghost
face turn soooo white knight u'd stay pussy whipped by bitches u captain save a hoe'd
---ehh almost
i'll bang a fo; but if it jam grab a blade & go for a stab
u'll walk at a cripple pace when hearts in a different place like a reformed sociopath
--nah
like cred always loadin a mag; rob allen for his ice, kicks n green
a bald head have em lyin face down & put that shine on the floor.. that's Mr. Clean
--hmm. I dunno kinda dope kinda not
moms wished u were a coat hanger abortion; spics a damn goner
u have NO good parts. its ^only time baby shouldve been thrown out w/ the bathwater
---nah
being shoe'd in the HOF proved the panel were some little cheaters
because real talent speaks for itself... & ya latest verses give ya entry the middle finger
--eh





Dope concepts on both sides

Inf had drawn out execution where as Allen had some forced wps

Close battle


Allen has the simpler style but inf went for more with his lines
I changed my mind twice


I'm going inf for attempting to bring more creativity

Jayson Fresh
01-03-2017, 09:05 AM
fuckin ur girl behind ur back, i just hit her an smile
i'll Marker vag & u'll Cursive u found out i been hittin her w/ my signature style

& deep down u kno ur a wack as fuck, u a fool nigga
i can see the proof across ur fuckin face like u missed ya school pictures
AK gettin that fast money, i get cash w/ my hustlin
everything about Inbred is slower than the kid he had w/ his cousin

vs

i knew it was lightwork; you're a horrorcore fgt w/ bouts of anger
kane vs taker: cuz inferno match here when this square stays surrounded by flamers
went hard in a cpl cyphers; now ur drive been less of a thrill
cialis gone soft in long sessions and couldnt last if he tried OD'in on them pills
take u out in the woods to kill; disrespect ya corpse is what ima do
let kids grab a stick & prada body before u get buried in 1 of their finer suits


cool battle here - i thought it came down to consistency.
Allen although some forced wordplays he had overall a very solid verse. the ones bolded were quite good. Infiltration started off winning but then completely fizzed by the second half of his verse.

vote = Allen Knight

Cred
01-03-2017, 10:13 AM
2-2.

Razah
01-03-2017, 12:48 PM
curse if, cool wordplay. LMAO @ input devices, it was such a terrible idea but still funny to me. Hahah. Proof line was cool, didn't like the nameplay, nah, next nameplay was kinda cool, didnt like, is dude from Copenhagen? Cool wordplay, just not sure if it's directed at him but eh, a set up leading to that would've made it hit harder.

Solid verse, nothing in there that wasn't decent or better.

okay lines so far, the Mr. Clean line was the first that made me laugh. lmao. decent closer.

I'm noticing some lines are just out there, and sometimes the concept connects & makes for a funny ass line, at least in my eyes. Anyways, second verse wasn't as good as the first verse to me, first was pretty solid through out, and second had a couple lines I liked towards the end.

vAllenKnight

Aero
01-03-2017, 01:29 PM
AK - cursive was ok I like the idea; I was afraid of this bring on the overdose of word & nameplays; proof across your face dope concept ; inbred was awful ; stiff arm I don't fully get reference but I understand enough & I don't like it ; India bitch is overkill at this point but I like this bar; northcutt south is jumbled; lol Copenhagen was a nice try.


Inf - inferno match was choppy I mean I get it but blah; cialis was ok nameplay but entire bar predictable; Prada body was cool, odeeing on wp at this point though ; captain save a how white knight was awful ; heart in dif place reformed sociopath didn't hit ; me clean could've been tighter but it's coo ; ok concept bad wording ; entry middle finger was meh

V/ AK

Barcotic
01-03-2017, 01:46 PM
my inferno match line was better.. n first

tbh tho ak had 3 "in" nameflips, that's extremely lazy
least call him inf

quote breakdown

prada
mr clean
vs
school pics

stiff arms was decent
northcutt fire concept but wasted usage

v/inf
I could see it going either way tho

Otty
01-03-2017, 03:36 PM
Allen - opener, inbred

Infiltration - different place

V Allen