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Cred
01-03-2017, 07:22 PM
NBL Season 10
Week 7

Due SUNDAY 1/8/17

Minimum - 14 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


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Barcotic
01-03-2017, 07:23 PM
barcotic wins
via KO (punches) at 0:44 of Rd 2.

gl tho

Schadenfreude
01-03-2017, 07:29 PM
LMAO, going 16.

Barcotic
01-03-2017, 08:02 PM
ur going 20 cuz thas what I just sent Cred

Schadenfreude
01-03-2017, 09:51 PM
Lmao, look..

Take my spot? Foh..the only thing u’ll take from Me is death,
I’ll appear in yo bedroom to leave u bleeding on the cover - u're DMX.
Suicided out our last match, quit when a real fighter wouldn’t
if u thought that round was hard to chew, this time u’ll swallow a bullet.
Thinks We hate on him, ‘cept the bars he construct are trash
if I use a Cro bar against this fag; it’s to pry his head from up his ass.
See Ion’t talk shit cuz the hyping doesn’t give Me excitement
so tf’s the point of all yo Woflin, when ain’t shit u writing to their Lycan.
Yo girl loves to play the field, I put cock in that thot mouth..
that hoe stray, so Jose ain’t the only Toronto BJ getting knocked out.
Yank out ya hair every vote against u as if those Ls mattered
while I’m wiggin’ in every verse, u’re just succumbing to male-pattern.
Go across ya roof, it’s fit for shingles or u & fifth can mingle,
gun shoved in ya mouth, w/ ya mustache on the can, the clip is Pringles.
Damn shame, ain’t shit u could say that they respect lame..
when u were facing Aer, he left ya face in air, now u’re JJ the jet plane.
Should’ve bought a coffin, ya down 2 loses taking fails often,
1st win I slid in & now I’m back up in the spot, this is parallel parking.
My worst his best, even his Flintstone line barely text flowed
I’m undefeated & barely stressed so, Cro’s Wilma’s bff - Betty next tho.

..BODY.

Barcotic
01-03-2017, 09:54 PM
fitting scrap? ur kidding. cat's shook of me
one open hand and he's spinning, that's Booker T
u dunno SHIT about the clan mike prepared w/
finna point sticks around ur camp like the Blair Witch
the twin glock bandit, im landin some heavy stuff
ur a T-Rex; 2 arms won't help ur chances of getting up
this chump is set to fold, cro's remmie will fire
using that pump to get the gold, no dredging required
fucked ur sped wife, spilt beverages on ur bed twice
^^those arent thoughts flooding ur head
... they're hemorrhages from a lead pipe
when somethins wrong i fuck ur mom n she heals, still
call me insulation; I stuff her walls when she feels chill
even ur gf can get pegged, player. this ur failing in
steal her Fassbender over & impregnate her w/ an Alien
it's settled, go mental as I clap both macs together
got that drive to put metal in ur back, no scrap collector
im driven. Ur on a bicycle, very gassed in 2nd speed
u havent grown at all since u were burried as 11th seed
shoutouts Cashius ^
"schadenfreude"? plz. im lookin at the word in doubt
cuz i landed so clean u shouldnt have a germ in mouth

annnnnnnnnd the NEW

Otty
01-03-2017, 10:19 PM
Schad - swallow a bullet, male-pattern, parallel parking

Cro - opener, pump to get the gold, fassbender, closer

V cro

Allen Knight
01-03-2017, 10:23 PM
Take my spot? Foh..the only thing u’ll take from Me is death,
I’ll appear in yo bedroom to leave u bleeding on the cover - u're DMX.
Suicided out our last match, quit when a real fighter wouldn’t
if u thought that round was hard to chew, this time u’ll swallow a bullet.
See Ion’t talk shit cuz the hyping doesn’t give Me excitement
so tf’s the point of all yo Woflin, when ain’t shit u writing to their Lycan.
Yo girl loves to play the field, I put cock in that thot mouth..
that hoe stray, so Jose ain’t the only Toronto BJ getting knocked out.
Go across ya roof, it’s fit for shingles or u & fifth can mingle,
gun shoved in ya mouth, w/ ya mustache on the can, the clip is Pringles.
Should’ve bought a coffin, ya down 2 loses taking fails often,
1st win I slid in & now I’m back up in the spot, this is parallel parking.

Vs

fitting scrap? ur kidding. cat's shook of me
one open hand and he's spinning, that's Booker T
u dunno SHIT about the clan mike prepared w/
finna point sticks around ur camp like the Blair Witch
fucked ur sped wife, spilt beverages on ur bed twice
^^those arent thoughts flooding ur head
... they're hemorrhages from a lead pipe
even ur gf can get pegged, player. this ur failing in
steal her Fassbender over & impregnate her w/ an Alien


V/schad, this was a cool battle both had some nice shit, both had concepts i used Lol
lycan i did but schad was flipped cool...fassbender i did but bars was coo not better then mine tho, i feel like schad had 2 more harder hittin lines here & LOTB i liked the way he did the pringles bar, props to both.

Suthaveli
01-05-2017, 04:00 PM
Take my spot? Foh..the only thing u’ll take from Me is death,
I’ll appear in yo bedroom to leave u bleeding on the cover - u're DMX.
Suicided out our last match, quit when a real fighter wouldn’t
if u thought that round was hard to chew, this time u’ll swallow a bullet.
Thinks We hate on him, ‘cept the bars he construct are trash
if I use a Cro bar against this fag; it’s to pry his head from up his ass.
Go across ya roof, it’s fit for shingles or u & fifth can mingle,
gun shoved in ya mouth, w/ ya mustache on the can, the clip is Pringles.

Vs

fitting scrap? ur kidding. cat's shook of me
one open hand and he's spinning, that's Booker T
u dunno SHIT about the clan mike prepared w/
finna point sticks around ur camp like the Blair Witch
the twin glock bandit, im landin some heavy stuff
ur a T-Rex; 2 arms won't help ur chances of getting up
it's settled, go mental as I clap both macs together
got that drive to put metal in ur back, no scrap collector

This was a gd read. You guys were even on quotes but Schaden's might've had a bit more depth & strength to them for my taste, atleast. He's also showing much better strength in his concepts set up & not completely replying on inner multi's. Great growth. But i felt the pringle line is what broke it all the way through.
Barc verse has a straight to the chase, simple, & fun read.the way in which he choose to word them is his only downfall as it can come off real samey. This was a better verse than many he's had in a min, so i def enjoyed it. I really enjoyed your scrap collector line.

Good job fellas, likely botw.

Vote- Schadenfreude

Joe Boston
01-05-2017, 08:23 PM
Schad


Take my spot? Foh..the only thing u’ll take from Me is death,
I’ll appear in yo bedroom to leave u bleeding on the cover - u're DMX.
Creative took me a minute to get reference but overall this was a good direct punch and a witty idea

Suicided out our last match, quit when a real fighter wouldn’t
if u thought that round was hard to chew, this time u’ll swallow a bullet.
Ok flip

Thinks We hate on him, ‘cept the bars he construct are trash
if I use a Cro bar against this fag; it’s to pry his head from up his ass.
Cro bar flips played sorry

See Ion’t talk shit cuz the hyping doesn’t give Me excitement
so tf’s the point of all yo Woflin, when ain’t shit u writing to their Lycan.
Creative wordplay

Yo girl loves to play the field, I put cock in that thot mouth..
that hoe stray, so Jose ain’t the only Toronto BJ getting knocked out.
Didnt like the direction of wording u took on this punch

Yank out ya hair every vote against u as if those Ls mattered
while I’m wiggin’ in every verse, u’re just succumbing to male-pattern.
Ok flip

Go across ya roof, it’s fit for shingles or u & fifth can mingle,
gun shoved in ya mouth, w/ ya mustache on the can, the clip is Pringles.
Nice reference creative punch

Damn shame, ain’t shit u could say that they respect lame..
when u were facing Aer, he left ya face in air, now u’re JJ the jet plane.
Good attempt disliked the route you went with the wording on finisher

Should’ve bought a coffin, ya down 2 loses taking fails often,
1st win I slid in & now I’m back up in the spot, this is parallel parking.
Statement

My worst his best, even his Flintstone line barely text flowed
I’m undefeated & barely stressed so, Cro’s Wilma’s bff - Betty next tho.
Ok wordplay mild personal hit

Bar


fitting scrap? ur kidding. cat's shook of me
one open hand and he's spinning, that's Booker T
Nice metaphore direct punch

u dunno SHIT about the clan mike prepared w/
finna point sticks around ur camp like the Blair Witch
Played reference

the twin glock bandit, im landin some heavy stuff
ur a T-Rex; 2 arms won't help ur chances of getting up
Ok reference

this chump is set to fold, cro's remmie will fire
using that pump to get the gold, no dredging required
Nice flip direct hit

fucked ur sped wife, spilt beverages on ur bed twice
^^those arent thoughts flooding ur head
... they're hemorrhages from a lead pipe
Dope this was harsh direct hit

when somethins wrong i fuck ur mom n she heals, still
call me insulation; I stuff her walls when she feels chill
Didnt like the wording

even ur gf can get pegged, player. this ur failing in
steal her Fassbender over & impregnate her w/ an Alien
Nice wordolay

it's settled, go mental as I clap both macs together
got that drive to put metal in ur back, no scrap collector
Not bad mild metaphore

im driven. Ur on a bicycle, very gassed in 2nd speed
u havent grown at all since u were burried as 11th seed
Soft personal flip

shoutouts Cashius ^
"schadenfreude"? plz. im lookin at the word in doubt
cuz i landed so clean u shouldnt have a germ in mouth
Nah

Damn thought both were pretty even as far as punches go but one was more creative with the wordplay attempts and overall flips. I felt Schad had the better edge felt he had the better ideas and wittiness.

V/Schad

Hush
01-08-2017, 08:13 AM
Cred I can vote if u want fever

Zaddy
01-08-2017, 08:26 PM
will edit this with a vote soon

E S A D
01-08-2017, 09:39 PM
Schadenfreude:

Thinks We hate on him, ‘cept the bars he construct are trash
if I use a Cro bar against this fag; it’s to pry his head from up his ass.

Yo girl loves to play the field, I put cock in that thot mouth..
that hoe stray, so Jose ain’t the only Toronto BJ getting knocked out.

Yank out ya hair every vote against u as if those Ls mattered
while I’m wiggin’ in every verse, u’re just succumbing to male-pattern.

Should’ve bought a coffin, ya down 2 loses taking fails often,
1st win I slid in & now I’m back up in the spot, this is parallel parking.

Bar:

when somethins wrong i fuck ur mom n she heals, still
call me insulation; I stuff her walls when she feels chill

even ur gf can get pegged, player. this ur failing in
steal her Fassbender over & impregnate her w/ an Alien

it's settled, go mental as I clap both macs together
got that drive to put metal in ur back, no scrap collector

vote - schadenfreude

Zaddy
01-08-2017, 10:21 PM
I usually don't like voting in barcotic Battles for obvious reasons but I believe in feed


Take my spot? Foh..the only thing u’ll take from Me is death,
I’ll appear in yo bedroom to leave u bleeding on the cover - u're DMX.
since they say no bite, decent here
Suicided out our last match, quit when a real fighter wouldn’t
if u thought that round was hard to chew, this time u’ll swallow a bullet.
this is nice
Thinks We hate on him, ‘cept the bars he construct are trash
if I use a Cro bar against this fag; it’s to pry his head from up his ass.
played
See Ion’t talk shit cuz the hyping doesn’t give Me excitement
so tf’s the point of all yo Woflin, when ain’t shit u writing to their Lycan.
lycan wp is soooooo old bro lol if you log back in as beyond maybe you'd remember
Yo girl loves to play the field, I put cock in that thot mouth..
that hoe stray, so Jose ain’t the only Toronto BJ getting knocked out.
wording iffy but decent concept
Yank out ya hair every vote against u as if those Ls mattered
while I’m wiggin’ in every verse, u’re just succumbing to male-pattern.
didnt like this
Go across ya roof, it’s fit for shingles or u & fifth can mingle,
gun shoved in ya mouth, w/ ya mustache on the can, the clip is Pringles.
this is cool
Damn shame, ain’t shit u could say that they respect lame..
when u were facing Aer, he left ya face in air, now u’re JJ the jet plane.
dont like how u did this tbh
Should’ve bought a coffin, ya down 2 loses taking fails often,
1st win I slid in & now I’m back up in the spot, this is parallel parking.
lol dcent
My worst his best, even his Flintstone line barely text flowed
I’m undefeated & barely stressed so, Cro’s Wilma’s bff - Betty next tho.
betty wp even I've done, concept meh


Vs



fitting scrap? ur kidding. cat's shook of me
one open hand and he's spinning, that's Booker T
this is nice
u dunno SHIT about the clan mike prepared w/
finna point sticks around ur camp like the Blair Witch
yo I liked this too
the twin glock bandit, im landin some heavy stuff
ur a T-Rex; 2 arms won't help ur chances of getting up
alright
this chump is set to fold, cro's remmie will fire
using that pump to get the gold, no dredging required
nah
fucked ur sped wife, spilt beverages on ur bed twice
^^those arent thoughts flooding ur head
... they're hemorrhages from a lead pipe
i mean it's not bad but it has the horrorcore type vibe and I hate that shit
when somethins wrong i fuck ur mom n she heals, still
call me insulation; I stuff her walls when she feels chill
lol Christ...it works but it's corny lol
even ur gf can get pegged, player. this ur failing in
steal her Fassbender over & impregnate her w/ an Alien
oh na
it's settled, go mental as I clap both macs together
got that drive to put metal in ur back, no scrap collector
decent
im driven. Ur on a bicycle, very gassed in 2nd speed
u havent grown at all since u were burried as 11th seed
ehhhhh decent personal but nothing harsh
shoutouts Cashius ^
"schadenfreude"? plz. im lookin at the word in doubt
cuz i landed so clean u shouldnt have a germ in mouth
i think ppl slept on this line, this was cool


Idk, I expected to come in here and see a blowout judging by what ppl been saying in the chat. But I've seen scad drop better, didn't drop wack here but some lines fell shorter than they should have. Barcotic definitely has come better too but I felt he had more hits than scab did. Going against the grain here


Vote Bar

Blanco Bishop
01-09-2017, 09:31 AM
I thought shads verse was consistent as fuck n while cros verse was very good I think he had a couple bars that just didn't hit as hard as the rest of the verse. Exceptional battle but shad was just too consistent IMO. Parallel parking , JJ, n crowbar were the standouts vs Fassbinder n trex.

V shad

Hush
01-09-2017, 12:22 PM
Lmao, look..

Take my spot? Foh..the only thing u’ll take from Me is death,
I’ll appear in yo bedroom to leave u bleeding on the cover - u're DMX.
--this the line? Is he saying he gonna rape dude wtf lol
Suicided out our last match, quit when a real fighter wouldn’t
if u thought that round was hard to chew, this time u’ll swallow a bullet.
--ehh that's too straight forward ain't it ?
Thinks We hate on him, ‘cept the bars he construct are trash
if I use a Cro bar against this fag; it’s to pry his head from up his ass.
--ur so obv beyond lol. This was too bland and cliche for me yo
See Ion’t talk shit cuz the hyping doesn’t give Me excitement
so tf’s the point of all yo Woflin, when ain’t shit u writing to their lycan
--ok
Yo girl loves to play the field, I put cock in that thot mouth..
that hoe stray, so Jose ain’t the only Toronto BJ getting knocked out.
--eh baSeball line right ?
Yank out ya hair every vote against u as if those Ls mattered
while I’m wiggin’ in every verse, u’re just succumbing to male-pattern.
-- ok that's dope
Go across ya roof, it’s fit for shingles or u & fifth can mingle,
gun shoved in ya mouth, w/ ya mustache on the can, the clip is Pringles.
---fire
Damn shame, ain’t shit u could say that they respect lame..
when u were facing Aer, he left ya face in air, now u’re JJ the jet plane.
---lol no
Should’ve bought a coffin, ya down 2 loses taking fails often,
1st win I slid in & now I’m back up in the spot, this is parallel parking.
--eh almost tho. Kinda cool
My worst his best, even his Flintstone line barely text flowed
I’m undefeated & barely stressed so, Cro’s Wilma’s bff - Betty next tho.
--nope. That's the flint stone line he bit from me I think lol

..BODY.

fitting scrap? ur kidding. cat's shook of me
one open hand and he's spinning, that's Booker T
--cool
u dunno SHIT about the clan mike prepared w/
finna point sticks around ur camp like the Blair Witch
--cool
the twin glock bandit, im landin some heavy stuff
ur a T-Rex; 2 arms won't help ur chances of getting up
--nah. It don't make sense
this chump is set to fold, cro's remmie will fire
using that pump to get the gold, no dredging required
--huh?
fucked ur sped wife, spilt beverages on ur bed twice
^^those arent thoughts flooding ur head
... they're hemorrhages from a lead pipe
--that's cool. Do more of these
when somethins wrong i fuck ur mom n she heals, still
call me insulation; I stuff her walls when she feels chill
--aight
even ur gf can get pegged, player. this ur failing in
steal her Fassbender over & impregnate her w/ an Alien
--don't make sense
it's settled, go mental as I clap both macs together
got that drive to put metal in ur back, no scrap collector
--scrap collectors take metal they don't put it back .
im driven. Ur on a bicycle, very gassed in 2nd speed
u havent grown at all since u were burried as 11th seed
--eh seed/grow lines is meh to me
shoutouts Cashius ^
"schadenfreude"? plz. im lookin at the word in doubt
cuz i landed so clean u shouldnt have a germ in mouth
--good concept execution is off

annnnnnnnnd the NEW


Close battle
Both had dope shit
Both had some stuff that I didn't like


Shad had the best lines tho

V shad