Contenders: Suthaveli (5-1) vs Lotto Smirk (4-2) - Lotto Smirk WINS

[Cred]

NBL Season 10
Week 7

Due SUNDAY 1/8/17

Minimum - 12 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

[Suthaveli]

Match whomever.

Edit- 16 ready Lotto Smirk

[Lotto Smirk]

Ext

[Suthaveli]

Lotto Smirk, check..


Admit it whore, I'm funny & that u're not better than the vet
My verses have u like, "a-kee-kee-kee" altho we knw u spent time on editin & prep
Last match I took it, extortion.This time it'll b done by flexin the heat..
Just ta hold up squares like u on the block. <--Bitch, welcome ta Sesame St.
I gets surgical w.this text shit & start speakin a psycho lang
As for ya verses:If ya throw up a set, I'ma murder it as if I were the rival gang
U don't wanna start this, truly.Sayin shit like,"Yo, I spark the toolie"
Keep playin online solider & I'll show ya just how flawless i am in Call of Duty
U're an insect ta me.I'll prove w. an example, just try & focus:
^ U bug me flyin blind w. a short lifespan- Muthafucka, u're a flyin locust!
Back down, ur scared of the tension or backslaps'll clear up ur senses
A wave from these hands'll manipulate ur structure.. Dr. Strange in the Mirror Diminsion
Trust, my swing is wild.I draw 1st blood when time ta start a show
^ & i'll come from outta nowhere w.that signature move... that's a RKO
Fade his head like a fresh cut w. A haymaker ta ding his wig
It'll crack his side piece so good, it'll knock bitch up & we let him raise the kid

[Lotto Smirk]

so what ur 5-1 you'll die son, getting hit with hook after hook
ur safe hands won't defend you at all when my combinations open em up
If ya dont listen to the lesson, the big scope'll hurt when it get ya
n have ur brain spread in sections all over the wall like a neurosurgical lecture
he aint packing heat, catch him spaz out n jolt when i hit him
he can finally catch a gun charge when the taser leave him like an epilepsy victim
bet u never smoked bud cus ur a puff who'll get blast w/ the shotty
so u can get hot boxed after this match, when ya fam decide to cremate ya body
Have this lonely folk in the scope, bet he gets bullied in the safe ends
put him in his first inner circle,n pull the trigger fore he ever has the chance to make friends
aint worthy of a champ shot, ur dumb n ya plain style is lame bro
how your punches gonna break the mould,my 3yr old has more creativity w/ playdoh
Eagle at my side, aimed high, intent to make ya head hurt
you'll be wishing it was a mirage when i make ya lose ya mind to the desert
got a long bow for this hoe, dont need guns to blast geek
u can die by the aero since he should of fucking slaughtered you last week

[E S A D]

Suth:

I gets surgical w.this text shit & start speakin a psycho lang
As for ya verses:If ya throw up a set, I'ma murder it as if I were the rival gang

U don't wanna start this, truly.Sayin shit like,"Yo, I spark the toolie"
Keep playin online solider & I'll show ya just how flawless i am in Call of Duty

Lotto:

he aint packing heat, catch him spaz out n jolt when i hit him
he can finally catch a gun charge when the taser leave him like an epilepsy victim

got a long bow for this hoe, dont need guns to blast geek
u can die by the aero since he should of fucking slaughtered you last week

vote- suth

[Otty]

Suth - online soldier, dr. Strange, closer

Lotto - gun charge, hot boxed, break the mould

I gotta go with lotto. He was more polished and wording was way cleaner. Also had a couple bars I ALMOST quoted but were too much of a reach. Suth had lotb with that cod shit

[Schadenfreude]

Admit it whore, I'm funny & that u're not better than the vet
My verses have u like, "a-kee-kee-kee" altho we knw u spent time on editin & prep
Decent opener
Last match I took it, extortion.This time it'll b done by flexin the heat..
Just ta hold up squares like u on the block. <--Bitch, welcome ta Sesame St.
Another ok bar
I gets surgical w.this text shit & start speakin a psycho lang
As for ya verses:If ya throw up a set, I'ma murder it as if I were the rival gang
Nice
U don't wanna start this, truly.Sayin shit like,"Yo, I spark the toolie"
Keep playin online solider & I'll show ya just how flawless i am in Call of Duty
Naaah, just a jab
U're an insect ta me.I'll prove w. an example, just try & focus:
^ U bug me flyin blind w. a short lifespan- Muthafucka, u're a flyin locust!
This is aight
Back down, ur scared of the tension or backslaps'll clear up ur senses
A wave from these hands'll manipulate ur structure.. Dr. Strange in the Mirror Diminsion
Lol..good
Trust, my swing is wild.I draw 1st blood when time ta start a show
^ & i'll come from outta nowhere w.that signature move... that's a RKO
Decent
Fade his head like a fresh cut w. A haymaker ta ding his wig
It'll crack his side piece so good, it'll knock bitch up & we let him raise the kid
OKish, should've worded it a better

VERSUS


so what ur 5-1 you'll die son, getting hit with hook after hook
ur safe hands won't defend you at all when my combinations open em up
I already did a better version of this concept
If ya dont listen to the lesson, the big scope'll hurt when it get ya
n have ur brain spread in sections all over the wall like a neurosurgical lecture
Lol..decent
he aint packing heat, catch him spaz out n jolt when i hit him
he can finally catch a gun charge when the taser leave him like an epilepsy victim
OKish
bet u never smoked bud cus ur a puff who'll get blast w/ the shotty
so u can get hot boxed after this match, when ya fam decide to cremate ya body
Good, clever
Have this lonely folk in the scope, bet he gets bullied in the safe ends
put him in his first inner circle,n pull the trigger fore he ever has the chance to make friends
Wording's just awkward
aint worthy of a champ shot, ur dumb n ya plain style is lame bro
how your punches gonna break the mould,my 3yr old has more creativity w/ playdoh
Played
Eagle at my side, aimed high, intent to make ya head hurt
you'll be wishing it was a mirage when i make ya lose ya mind to the desert
Pretty good
got a long bow for this hoe, dont need guns to blast geek
u can die by the aero since he should of fucking slaughtered you last week
Aight closer

SUTHAVELI..edges, both lacked hard-hitting punches, just had consistently decent punches. LS wasn't wack just simply boring, while Suth was more creative thru out.

[Saint]

I have Suthaveli. His verse overall was just worded better and felt less rushed than Lotto. Had a few standouts: Dr. Strange, opener was ok. Lotto had the inner circle and a decent brain/section flip, my only complaint was execution and word choice... you would of got my vote.

vote - suth

[Hush]

Lotto Smirk, check..


Admit it whore, I'm funny & that u're not better than the vet
My verses have u like, "a-kee-kee-kee" altho we knw u spent time on editin & prep
--I get it. Just don't like it
Last match I took it, extortion.This time it'll b done by flexin the heat..
Just ta hold up squares like u on the block. <--Bitch, welcome ta Sesame St.
--ok
I gets surgical w.this text shit & start speakin a psycho lang
As for ya verses:If ya throw up a set, I'ma murder it as if I were the rival gang
-ok
U don't wanna start this, truly.Sayin shit like,"Yo, I spark the toolie"
Keep playin online solider & I'll show ya just how flawless i am in Call of Duty
-ok
U're an insect ta me.I'll prove w. an example, just try & focus:
^ U bug me flyin blind w. a short lifespan- Muthafucka, u're a flyin locust!
--nah
Back down, ur scared of the tension or backslaps'll clear up ur senses
A wave from these hands'll manipulate ur structure.. Dr. Strange in the Mirror Dimension
--fire
Trust, my swing is wild.I draw 1st blood when time ta start a show
^ & i'll come from outta nowhere w.that signature move... that's a RKO
--cool
Fade his head like a fresh cut w. A haymaker ta ding his wig
It'll crack his side piece so good, it'll knock bitch up & we let him raise the kid
--nah u didn't even try to word this



so what ur 5-1 you'll die son, getting hit with hook after hook
ur safe hands won't defend you at all when my combinations open em up
--don't rhyme and kinda played
If ya dont listen to the lesson, the big scope'll hurt when it get ya
n have ur brain spread in sections all over the wall like a neurosurgical lecture
--fire
he aint packing heat, catch him spaz out n jolt when i hit him
he can finally catch a gun charge when the taser leave him like an epilepsy victim
--ok cool
bet u never smoked bud cus ur a puff who'll get blast w/ the shotty
so u can get hot boxed after this match, when ya fam decide to cremate ya body
--ok
Have this lonely folk in the scope, bet he gets bullied in the safe ends
put him in his first inner circle,n pull the trigger fore he ever has the chance to make friends
--that fire
aint worthy of a champ shot, ur dumb n ya plain style is lame bro
how your punches gonna break the mould,my 3yr old has more creativity w/ play doh
--eh
Eagle at my side, aimed high, intent to make ya head hurt
you'll be wishing it was a mirage when i make ya lose ya mind to the desert
--fire
got a long bow for this hoe, dont need guns to blast geek
u can die by the aero since he should of fucking slaughtered you last week
--eh



Damn this is hella close
One of the sicker battles this week


Suth had some lazy ass wording but creativity was high. Lotto keep improving and had some real nice shit also but did struggle with wording as well




I gotta go against the grain here
I think lotto edged it


Both was hot tho
Good as battle


V lotto

[Ghost1]

Lotto Smirk, check..


Admit it whore, I'm funny & that u're not better than the vet
My verses have u like, "a-kee-kee-kee" altho we knw u spent time on editin & prep

lost me bruh. I want to be cool and know kee kee kee....legit even googled the shit....nothing.

Last match I took it, extortion.This time it'll b done by flexin the heat..
Just ta hold up squares like u on the block. <--Bitch, welcome ta Sesame St.

squares/block etc been done w brady bunch and Hollywood squares etc

I gets surgical w.this text shit & start speakin a psycho lang
As for ya verses:If ya throw up a set, I'ma murder it as if I were the rival gang

set/gang played

U don't wanna start this, truly.Sayin shit like,"Yo, I spark the toolie"
Keep playin online solider & I'll show ya just how flawless i am in Call of Duty

eh I guess....feel like im just hating on you at this point but its not intentional

U're an insect ta me.I'll prove w. an example, just try & focus:
^ U bug me flyin blind w. a short lifespan- Muthafucka, u're a flyin locust!

bunch of word association for insects/bug me flip....nah fucking nah....an u added flyin blind an short lifespan but didn't do nothing extra for me ...I know it mattered when you included it tho

Back down, ur scared of the tension or backslaps'll clear up ur senses
A wave from these hands'll manipulate ur structure.. Dr. Strange in the Mirror Diminsion

this is cool, nothing crazy tho

Trust, my swing is wild.I draw 1st blood when time ta start a show
^ & i'll come from outta nowhere w.that signature move... that's a RKO

simple, significance in your set up wasn't lost but I mean eh

Fade his head like a fresh cut w. A haymaker ta ding his wig
It'll crack his side piece so good, it'll knock bitch up & we let him raise the kid

lol I fuck w this







so what ur 5-1 you'll die son, getting hit with hook after hook
ur safe hands won't defend you at all when my combinations open em up

played and been done better, wording off

If ya dont listen to the lesson, the big scope'll hurt when it get ya
n have ur brain spread in sections all over the wall like a neurosurgical lecture

neurosurgical lecture.....fuck that's a mouthful....really distracts from the impact to me.....concept dated although this was a cool take on flipping it

he aint packing heat, catch him spaz out n jolt when i hit him
he can finally catch a gun charge when the taser leave him like an epilepsy victim

lmao like this

bet u never smoked bud cus ur a puff who'll get blast w/ the shotty
so u can get hot boxed after this match, when ya fam decide to cremate ya body

this an ok jab

Have this lonely folk in the scope, bet he gets bullied in the safe ends
put him in his first inner circle,n pull the trigger fore he ever has the chance to make friends

inner circle/scope fire

aint worthy of a champ shot, ur dumb n ya plain style is lame bro
how your punches gonna break the mould,my 3yr old has more creativity w/ playdoh

nah

Eagle at my side, aimed high, intent to make ya head hurt
you'll be wishing it was a mirage when i make ya lose ya mind to the desert

not sure how ive not seen this but uh I haven't....dope.

got a long bow for this hoe, dont need guns to blast geek
u can die by the aero since he should of fucking slaughtered you last week


played





got lotto w maybe 3 good hits that were fresh and landed clean, maybe 2 if im being generous for suth....wasn't feeling suth much this time out, ideas just felt old

v lotto

[Allen Knight]

Back down, ur scared of the tension or backslaps'll clear up ur senses
A wave from these hands'll manipulate ur structure.. Dr. Strange in the Mirror Diminsion
Trust, my swing is wild.I draw 1st blood when time ta start a show
^ & i'll come from outta nowhere w.that signature move... that's a RKO


Vs


If ya dont listen to the lesson, the big scope'll hurt when it get ya
n have ur brain spread in sections all over the wall like a neurosurgical lecture
he aint packing heat, catch him spaz out n jolt when i hit him
he can finally catch a gun charge when the taser leave him like an epilepsy victim
Have this lonely folk in the scope, bet he gets bullied in the safe ends
put him in his first inner circle,n pull the trigger fore he ever has the chance to make friends


V/lotto, this was a cool battle both had some bars i felt, but i thought lotto had the stronger verse,
the bars i quoted hit hard & were fire, suth dr strange bar was dope, but i got lotto here, props to both.

[Tic]

Lotto gets this. I just wasn't feeling much of Suth's verse this week. Lotto had the desert line which was really nice and could've been even better with crisper delivery. Neuro lecture was nice too and a few others were good.

Lotto

[Jayson Fresh]

Vote = Lotto.

It came down to style preference quite honestly. so I see why this close:

Im a suthaveli fan but i thought his verse this week was tough to follow.

example:

wave from these hands'll manipulate ur structure.. Dr. Strange in the Mirror Diminsion

I know that line got praised but to me that just sounded silly. manipulate someones structure? i dunno man. just too complex/weak association for it to land.

I'm a fan of subtle direct punches.

this was dope.

Fade his head like a fresh cut w. A haymaker ta ding his wig
It'll crack his side piece so good, it'll knock bitch up & we let him raise the kid


Lotto this week did a great job wording his lines. simple, effective.

o what ur 5-1 you'll die son, getting hit with hook after hook
ur safe hands won't defend you at all when my combinations open em up
If ya dont listen to the lesson, the big scope'll hurt when it get ya
n have ur brain spread in sections all over the wall like a neurosurgical lecture
he aint packing heat, catch him spaz out n jolt when i hit him
he can finally catch a gun charge when the taser leave him like an epilepsy victim

Overall I thought lotto was consistent throughout, no real duds to me. both r dope.
Suthaveli got a lot of swag though .. & i like he's thinking out of the box so I'll be looking for more from him.