breach (2-0) vs Hush (0-0) - Hush WINS (void)

[Cred]

NBL Season 10
Week 7

Due SUNDAY 1/8/17

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

[Hush]

Aight

[Hush]

U can pretend u don't care abt txt but...



U here on a new alias every 3 months.. who the fuck r u lying too??
How u scared to be ya self in a txt battle when it's the shit that defines u
Ya whole crew fsggots .. so don't rap bout what ya nine do
U been repping a fruit set wayyyy before Soulja or Breezy turn piru
His whole styles ps game turned movie . Ironys just too real
U not a hitman... u jus pretend to be someone else to get the kill
that shooter talk unbelieveable from this stupid nigga
Fuck a drive by...I got a gun so big I gotta take a uber to the trigger
Been getting money. -act up it's a murder scene
Closest u came to green in the hood is the evil Kermit memes
The metal squirt like dental work. I'll clean ya tooth with lasers
I'm putting this bitch down it's euthanasia on this youth from Asia
U disgrace ya ancestors with the snake road you paved
Ain't gooks all abt honor ? Ya grandpa must be egg rolling in his grave
Bet ya whole team turn pussy once the blicky out
You a rat and ya dogs goofy nigga you Mickey Mouse
If I don't got a gun Ima get the sword
or run wit beasts that turn to the hands fast like a megazord
Pull that pistol if ya want my aim been fast
U get wet when ya arms wave it's a pool of blood for ya swim class
Dummy rounds the gun stupid . Hit u in the heart. I'm young Cupid
This the last straw an u gonna have to eat ya food for a month thru it
Tryna sneak by on a alias. Pussy, that's hardly fair
Resin ducking the fade so bad you can find him behind the barber chair

[breach]

yoo. r u done?!

will match saturday morning

[breach]

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Mahfucka,
#Huthhh dropping 24 lines?! yaaawn, fam
if we wanted to see u Spit so much we'd get ya to say Sausages on Cam
U 5'2 w/ what borders ona freak lisp. we yawnin off that street shit
I'ma tell my lil homie Raise the Bird n Fire... that's the Order of the Phoenix (#HarryPotterBars)
waiiiit. Uber driver = God of Netcees? Stop it, vets please
if u ''making money at the Dropoff''. Congrats, you done your job correctly...
I'm vicious too; you effeminate on Cam n' that shit is true
how the FUCK you got Body Language so gay it have a worse lisp than you?!
caught u doggn on Barc's sway?! ay that's wronggg, kid
so what if he Planted Seeds. maaan u're 32 Growing Weed outcha Mom's crib
my whole team Riff Raff; that'd fight 50 for more dough
but your whole team Riff Raff... that's some White Bitches with Cornrows
Allll slick w/ the talk Vic but you better backtrack shorty
Got the 4 5th; it's a Short Clip but trust we can Play it Again..that's a Snapchat Story
yr bitch is a savage bruh. whole squaa dip in n' damage her
we move in the kitchen & she Assume the Position like an Interim Manager
Frequent flyer program; that's heat from the waist..
Won't take a Trip, so these bullets gone Reykjavik without leaving the States
u an oddity, dude. gals keep pants on round H, gotta b true
been seeing No Love with the Belt wayyy before Cody took out Dominic Cruz
Damage you & if 5-0 roll up after I blam a few; standard move
we tell em 'nahhh I ain't ever see that Shotgun before'. that's Schadenfreude

.

[Zaddy]

Ya whole crew fsggots .. so don't rap bout what ya nine do
U been repping a fruit set wayyyy before Soulja or C. Breezy turn piru
ok
Before u talk street shit ya gotta be from the streets first
shots leave insides coming out this pussy the wrong way. That's a breach birth
this sht was fire
that shooter talk unbelieveable from u stupid niggas
Fuck a drive by...I got a gun so big I gotta take a uber to the trigger
corny
Alias are for cowards . U pretend online and play a role
only think about shooting from behind the screen like a pick n roll
nice
2017 resolutions the type of gay shit that u do
Fuck a new yr new you. On ya block can't find one person who knew u
nah this was dumb
Been getting money. -act up it's a murder scene
Closest u came to green in the hood is the evil Kermit memes
i think this could have been done better but not bad
this lames a clone . Big Draco spitting fire in ya face.. game of thrones
are you missing a Line? Potential here
Don't be the first homicide over internet battle fame
I get no points for putting this square down this ain't a scrabble game
too lazy to find which battle I heard this in
Bet ya whole team turn pussy once the blicky out
You a rat and ya dogs goofy nigga you Mickey Mouse
i liked this, good shit
If I don't got a gun Ima get the sword
or run wit beasts that turn to the hands fast like a megazord
decent
Pull that pistol if ya want my aim been fast
U get wet when ya arms wave it's a pool of blood for ya swim class
didnt like how u executed or worded this
Dummy rounds the gun stupid . Hit u in the heart. I'm young Cupid
This the last straw an u gonna have to eat ya food for a month thru it
alright
Pull ya card during the holiday like hallmark
My pistols optimis prime bar
didnt copy the bar right but I read it. Decent at best

Vs


#Huthhh dropping 24 lines?! yaaawn, fam
if we wanted to see u Spit so much we'd get ya to say Sausages on Cam
alright, bit corny but not bad
U 5'2 w/ what borders ona freak lisp. we yawnin off that street shit
I'ma tell my lil homie Raise the Bird n Fire... that's the Order of the Phoenix (#HarryPotterBars)
ima pretend you didn't put that shit in parenthesis here but this is a nice bar nonetheless
waiiiit. Uber driver = God of Netcees? Stop it, vets please
if u ''making money at the Dropoff''. Congrats, you done your job correctly...
had potential but ended bad
I'm vicious too; you effeminate on Cam n' that shit is true
how the FUCK you got Body Language so gay it have a worse lisp than you?!
nah
caught u doggn on Barc's sway?! ay that's wronggg, kid
so what if he Planted Seeds. maaan u're 32 Growing Weed outcha Mom's crib
concept old on him but this made me lol
my whole team Riff Raff; that'd fight 50 for more dough
but your whole team Riff Raff... that's some White Bitches with Cornrows
_b]mehhhh[/b]
Allll slick w/ the talk Vic but you better backtrack shorty
Got the 4 5th; it's a Short Clip but trust we can Play it Again..that's a Snapchat Story
didnt like how you did this
yr bitch is a savage bruh. whole squaa dip in n' damage her
we move in the kitchen & she Assume the Position like an Interim Manager
i guess
Frequent flyer program; that's heat from the waist..
Won't take a Trip, so these bullets gone Reykjavik without leaving the States
dont reach like dental floss bro. Cool attempt but this didnt land
u an oddity, dude. gals keep pants on round H, gotta b true
been seeing No Love with the Belt wayyy before Cody took out Dominic Cruz
ok
Damage you & if 5-0 roll up after I blam a few; standard move
we tell em 'nahhh I ain't ever see that Shotgun before'. that's Schadenfreude
i did it better. This was trash b


I got hush taking this comfortably. More quotes and better execution

Breach has concepts but i didn't feel the wording here

[R!canTheoryz]

Alias are for cowards . U pretend online and play a role
only think about shooting from behind the screen like a pick n roll

Breach birth


Vs

Snap chat story


Overall Vote - hush, for having the better execution. Solid verse overall not a bad,battle from either side

[E S A D]

hush:

U here on a new alias every 3 months.. who the fuck r u lying too??
How u scared to be ya self in a txt battle when it's the shit that defines u

Been getting money. -act up it's a murder scene
Closest u came to green in the hood is the evil Kermit memes

The metal squirt like dental work. I'll clean ya tooth with lasers
I'm putting this bitch down it's euthanasia on this youth from Asia

Breach:

waiiiit. Uber driver = God of Netcees? Stop it, vets please
if u ''making money at the Dropoff''. Congrats, you done your job correctly...

I'm vicious too; you effeminate on Cam n' that shit is true
how the FUCK you got Body Language so gay it have a worse lisp than you?!

yr bitch is a savage bruh. whole squaa dip in n' damage her
we move in the kitchen & she Assume the Position like an Interim Manager

great battle. tough call but i got Hush edging it out.

[Schadenfreude]

U here on a new alias every 3 months.. who the fuck r u lying too??
How u scared to be ya self in a txt battle when it's the shit that defines u
Decent, could've been more effective tho
Ya whole crew fsggots .. so don't rap bout what ya nine do
U been repping a fruit set wayyyy before Soulja or Breezy turn piru
Lol..cool
His whole styles ps game turned movie . Ironys just too real
U not a hitman... u jus pretend to be someone else to get the kill
Good
that shooter talk unbelieveable from this stupid nigga
Fuck a drive by...I got a gun so big I gotta take a uber to the trigger
Clever
Been getting money. -act up it's a murder scene
Closest u came to green in the hood is the evil Kermit memes
This is hard..lol
The metal squirt like dental work. I'll clean ya tooth with lasers
I'm putting this bitch down it's euthanasia on this youth from Asia
No, played asf
U disgrace ya ancestors with the snake road you paved
Ain't gooks all abt honor ? Ya grandpa must be egg rolling in his grave
Lol..funny, still don't like this tho
Bet ya whole team turn pussy once the blicky out
You a rat and ya dogs goofy nigga you Mickey Mouse
Dope
If I don't got a gun Ima get the sword
or run wit beasts that turn to the hands fast like a megazord
Pretty good
Pull that pistol if ya want my aim been fast
U get wet when ya arms wave it's a pool of blood for ya swim class
Weak
Dummy rounds the gun stupid . Hit u in the heart. I'm young Cupid
This the last straw an u gonna have to eat ya food for a month thru it
OK, but nothing crazy
Tryna sneak by on a alias. Pussy, that's hardly fair
Resin ducking the fade so bad you can find him behind the barber chair
Lol..nice closer

VERSUS


Mahfucka,
#Huthhh dropping 24 lines?! yaaawn, fam
if we wanted to see u Spit so much we'd get ya to say Sausages on Cam
Played personal
U 5'2 w/ what borders ona freak lisp. we yawnin off that street shit
I'ma tell my lil homie Raise the Bird n Fire... that's the Order of the Phoenix
DOPE
waiiiit. Uber driver = God of Netcees? Stop it, vets please
if u ''making money at the Dropoff''. Congrats, you done your job correctly...
Lol..nice
I'm vicious too; you effeminate on Cam n' that shit is true
how the FUCK you got Body Language so gay it have a worse lisp than you?!
Yea, this nasty
caught u doggn on Barc's sway?! ay that's wronggg, kid
so what if he Planted Seeds. maaan u're 32 Growing Weed outcha Mom's crib
Another played personal
my whole team Riff Raff; that'd fight 50 for more dough
but your whole team Riff Raff... that's some White Bitches with Cornrows
Lol..good
Allll slick w/ the talk Vic but you better backtrack shorty
Got the 4 5th; it's a Short Clip but trust we can Play it Again..that's a Snapchat Story
Decent
yr bitch is a savage bruh. whole squaa dip in n' damage her
we move in the kitchen & she Assume the Position like an Interim Manager
Cool bitch bar
Frequent flyer program; that's heat from the waist..
Won't take a Trip, so these bullets gone Reykjavik without leaving the States
OKish, nothing crazy
u an oddity, dude. gals keep pants on round H, gotta b true
been seeing No Love with the Belt wayyy before Cody took out Dominic Cruz
Pretty good
Damage you & if 5-0 roll up after I blam a few; standard move
we tell em 'nahhh I ain't ever see that Shotgun before'. that's Schadenfreude
Lol..good closer, even tho u didn't rhyme my name correctly

HUSH..close asf, Vic gets the edge because of his slightly better use of personals, Breach didn't put enough of a fresh twist to the same ole ammo.

[Blanco Bishop]

Vic's uber bar was nuts.
Definitely felt his verse felt fresher.
Breach was cool but the punctuation was annoying.
Mickey mouse opener ps n megazord won it for me.

I liked lisp plant seeds n manager for breach.

V hush

[Suthaveli]

U can pretend u don't care abt txt but...



U here on a new alias every 3 months.. who the fuck r u lying too??
How u scared to be ya self in a txt battle when it's the shit that defines u
To* & this was ok.

Ya whole crew fsggots .. so don't rap bout what ya nine do
U been repping a fruit set wayyyy before Soulja or Breezy turn piru
That's a no for me dawg

His whole styles ps game turned movie . Ironys just too real
U not a hitman... u jus pretend to be someone else to get the kill
Coo personal

that shooter talk unbelieveable from this stupid nigga
Fuck a drive by...I got a gun so big I gotta take a uber to the trigger
When i read this the other day, i thought it wasn't gd. Must say, it grew on me tremendously. Coo

Been getting money. -act up it's a murder scene
Closest u came to green in the hood is the evil Kermit memes
Ah relatable trendy punches. Nice

The metal squirt like dental work. I'll clean ya tooth with lasers
I'm putting this bitch down it's euthanasia on this youth from Asia
Didn't do it for me. I saw what you did there tho.

U disgrace ya ancestors with the snake road you paved
Ain't gooks all abt honor ? Ya grandpa must be egg rolling in his grave
I laughed. It did it's job.

Bet ya whole team turn pussy once the blicky out
You a rat and ya dogs goofy nigga you Mickey Mouse
Coo. Lazy, but it gets the job done, imo. Matter of perspective

If I don't got a gun Ima get the sword
or run wit beasts that turn to the hands fast like a megazord
Just did something similar. Yours was cool

Pull that pistol if ya want my aim been fast
U get wet when ya arms wave it's a pool of blood for ya swim class
Tweakin needed on this, but it was creative.


Dummy rounds the gun stupid . Hit u in the heart. I'm young Cupid
This the last straw an u gonna have to eat ya food for a month thru it
I like

Tryna sneak by on a alias. Pussy, that's hardly fair
Resin ducking the fade so bad you can find him behind the barber chair
No




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Mahfucka,
#Huthhh dropping 24 lines?! yaaawn, fam
if we wanted to see u Spit so much we'd get ya to say Sausages on Cam
This was ok

U 5'2 w/ what borders ona freak lisp. we yawnin off that street shit
I'ma tell my lil homie Raise the Bird n Fire... that's the Order of the Phoenix (#HarryPotterBars)
I def wanted to like it but something was off.

waiiiit. Uber driver = God of Netcees? Stop it, vets please
if u ''making money at the Dropoff''. Congrats, you done your job correctly...
No

I'm vicious too; you effeminate on Cam n' that shit is true
how the FUCK you got Body Language so gay it have a worse lisp than you?!
Lol. This was ok


caught u doggn on Barc's sway?! ay that's wronggg, kid
so what if he Planted Seeds. maaan u're 32 Growing Weed outcha Mom's crib
Ok

my whole team Riff Raff; that'd fight 50 for more dough
but your whole team Riff Raff... that's some White Bitches with Cornrows
Nah bruh


Allll slick w/ the talk Vic but you better backtrack shorty
Got the 4 5th; it's a Short Clip but trust we can Play it Again..that's a Snapchat Story
Cool.

yr bitch is a savage bruh. whole squaa dip in n' damage her
we move in the kitchen & she Assume the Position like an Interim Manager
Coo swag


Frequent flyer program; that's heat from the waist..
Won't take a Trip, so these bullets gone Reykjavik without leaving the States
Nice


u an oddity, dude. gals keep pants on round H, gotta b true
been seeing No Love with the Belt wayyy before Cody took out Dominic Cruz
No

Damage you & if 5-0 roll up after I blam a few; standard move
we tell em 'nahhh I ain't ever see that Shotgun before'. that's Schadenfreude
Sh ad en froy du. This was meh-ish rhyme aside.


I thought breach was gonna come in here & murder tbh. But a lot of stuff just didn't work cor me wording wise. Almost didn't vote on this, but since hush voted on mine i said might as well. Hush had simple wordin alot, but it def got the job done. Wish he kept the draco bar.
Ok read guys, was expecting more tbh, but it was like 24 bars

Mvgt - Hush