Letterman (2-2) vs Unfukwitable (1-1) - Unfukwitable WINS

[Cred]

NBL Season 10
Week 7

Due SUNDAY 1/8/17

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

[Letterman]

How many?

[Unfukwitable]

14

[Unfukwitable]

14 sent to Cred

[Letterman]

Need ext til tomorrow

[Unfukwitable]

Cmon maan

[Letterman]

He's a player w/ fat bitches. Well ill beat his ass then get em a plate
So your basil leave when two fists have you planted in a vegetable state
Dude aint tough. Shells'll leave u cracked for actin hard boiled
You a beast? Well this 9 rock monsters, when I sit it on top of ya roof like gargoyles
You're not a fighter. Stop the lies, you'd quickly duck a brawl
Mandible shit gotta stop before I snap & end up breaking your fuckin jaw
Afraid to write a quick verse. Prewrites & stays prepared when it comes to flows
Cuz when it comes down to the kiwi can tell that this fruit is greener than one of those
If I get mad then "off with his head". U can't spar with a boss
Cuz homie it's a fact that the snapple leave your cap twisted off
And the evenings your girl is gone, she's being a whore that night
She's the type to bang bros, that bitch has had more hits than that porno site
Aero killed you without a verse. U were scared, u know that kid is better
So idk why he'd try to Stan against me, cuz he already died before getting Letter

[Cred]

Unfuks verse




My combos are from another dimension, uppercuts & jabs'll bubble this gimps chin,
yo "Lett, off the hook".. u'll wish u got a slap on the wrist... to shove a syringe in!
U in love w/ the coco til u OD and snortin white is ya fall;
Ur use to Yay highs, we just waitin to scribble RIP next to where u put ya height on the wall.
Gunbars wasn't apart of the plan til u battled & said "I spark w/ the can"
Now it's beach romance; these sticks will put your heart in the sand <3

I'd rather keep this toy tucked/
& give Ed d long(Eddie Long), cuz that'll have this boy fucked

that's what he said.. ^ wait... how can we believe Letts straight?
he must've grew up on Carmen Miranda cos this fruit-baskets a head case.
U stole Tic Tacs style, write a letter saying thank you, bitch;
I'm HIGHLY UPSET... copying another nigga doesn't make you Tic.
hearin he's out here catchin L's will never seems to shock me;
He can't Hangman.. put Letters on the line, Every time & you'll never see a body.
u still got ammo saved up from ya ducks, I hope ya edits is nice;
u been sittin on half a round, now u'll see Handicap signs for the rest of ya life.

[Hush]

He's a player w/ fat bitches. Well ill beat his ass then get em a plate
So your basil leave when two fists have you planted in a vegetable state
--uh yea it's creative so cool
Dude aint tough. Shells'll leave u cracked for actin hard boiled
You a beast? Well this 9 rock monsters, when I sit it on top of ya roof like gargoyles
--same as above . Creative but not really impactful disses
You're not a fighter. Stop the lies, you'd quickly duck a brawl
Mandible shit gotta stop before I snap & end up breaking your fuckin jaw
--ok this is way better lol dug it
Afraid to write a quick verse. Prewrites & stays prepared when it comes to flows
Cuz when it comes down to the kiwi can tell that this fruit is greener than one of those
--why so many food references lol u fat ?.. this was wack and played tho
If I get mad then "off with his head". U can't spar with a boss
Cuz homie it's a fact that the snapple leave your cap twisted off
--huh more food lines.
And the evenings your girl is gone, she's being a whore that night
She's the type to bang bros, that bitch has had more hits than that porno site
--no
Aero killed you without a verse. U were scared, u know that kid is better
So idk why he'd try to Stan against me, cuz he already died before getting Letter
--kinda cool


Unfuks verse




My combos are from another dimension, uppercuts & jabs'll bubble this gimps chin,
yo "Lett, off the hook".. u'll wish u got a slap on the wrist... to shove a syringe in!
--wording is bad here
U in love w/ the coco til u OD and snortin white is ya fall;
Ur use to Yay highs, we just waitin to scribble RIP next to where u put ya height on the wall.
--ok
Gunbars wasn't apart of the plan til u battled & said "I spark w/ the can"
Now it's beach romance; these sticks will put your heart in the sand <3
--fire. Super fucking dope



that's what he said.. ^ wait... how can we believe Letts straight?
he must've grew up on Carmen Miranda cos this fruit-baskets a head case.
--fire
U stole Tic Tacs style, write a letter saying thank you, bitch;
I'm HIGHLY UPSET... copying another nigga doesn't make you Tic.
--huh?
hearin he's out here catchin L's will never seems to shock me;
He can't Hangman.. put Letters on the line, Every time & you'll never see a body.
--nah
u still got ammo saved up from ya ducks, I hope ya edits is nice;
u been sittin on half a round, now u'll see Handicap signs for the rest of ya life.
--nice



Unfuk got it

[Suthaveli]

He's a player w/ fat bitches. Well ill beat his ass then get em a plate
So your basil leave when two fists have you planted in a vegetable state
You're not a fighter. Stop the lies, you'd quickly duck a brawl
Mandible shit gotta stop before I snap & end up breaking your fuckin jaw
Aero killed you without a verse. U were scared, u know that kid is better
So idk why he'd try to Stan against me, cuz he already died before getting Letter

Vs


Gunbars wasn't apart of the plan til u battled & said "I spark w/ the can"
Now it's beach romance; these sticks will put your heart in the sand <3
that's what he said.. ^ wait... how can we believe Letts straight?
he must've grew up on Carmen Miranda cos this fruit-baskets a head case.
u still got ammo saved up from ya ducks, I hope ya edits is nice;
u been sittin on half a round, now u'll see Handicap signs for the rest of ya life.

Gd read. You guys were even on bars, unfuckwit were stronger tho impact wise. Unquoted bars letterman had 2 played & one what was mehish while unfuck had 2 bad wordings & a bar which confused me.

Mvgt Unfukwitable due to the strength in his quoted ones. Especially the sticks heart sand & the fruit basket.
Gd read guys.

[Razah]

He's a player w/ fat bitches. Well ill beat his ass then get em a plate
So your basil leave when two fists have you planted in a vegetable state

Dude aint tough. Shells'll leave u cracked for actin hard boiled
You a beast? Well this 9 rock monsters, when I sit it on top of ya roof like gargoyles

I liked those.



u still got ammo saved up from ya ducks, I hope ya edits is nice;
u been sittin on half a round, now u'll see Handicap signs for the rest of ya life.

That was dope to me. The only line I kinda liked was the Tic personal but, I dunno, didn't really hit too hard for me.

cool battle, liked Letterman's verse a little bit more though.

vLetterman

[Ghost1]

He's a player w/ fat bitches. Well ill beat his ass then get em a plate
So your basil leave when two fists have you planted in a vegetable state

this was ok, seen basil before a ton when Beyond used to battle here but yours was flipped nice/

Dude aint tough. Shells'll leave u cracked for actin hard boiled
You a beast? Well this 9 rock monsters, when I sit it on top of ya roof like gargoyles

set up is a played punch...for no reason, rock monsters is a little awkward...I mean who tf talk like that....still tho it wasn't bad

You're not a fighter. Stop the lies, you'd quickly duck a brawl
Mandible shit gotta stop before I snap & end up breaking your fuckin jaw

this is cool, wordplay works

Afraid to write a quick verse. Prewrites & stays prepared when it comes to flows
Cuz when it comes down to the kiwi can tell that this fruit is greener than one of those

kiwi played an im getting tired of wordplays at this point from u, switch it up

If I get mad then "off with his head". U can't spar with a boss
Cuz homie it's a fact that the snapple leave your cap twisted off

another word play, its played, an cap twisted flips are played....this your worst bar yet....slowly getting worse and worse

And the evenings your girl is gone, she's being a whore that night
She's the type to bang bros, that bitch has had more hits than that porno site

shew...played

Aero killed you without a verse. U were scared, u know that kid is better
So idk why he'd try to Stan against me, cuz he already died before getting Letter

wording was off, self name flip was eh




[QUOTE=Cred;614511]Unfuks verse




My combos are from another dimension, uppercuts & jabs'll bubble this gimps chin,
yo "Lett, off the hook".. u'll wish u got a slap on the wrist... to shove a syringe in!

like this...wording a bit drawn out but digging the creativity

U in love w/ the coco til u OD and snortin white is ya fall;
Ur use to Yay highs, we just waitin to scribble RIP next to where u put ya height on the wall.

fire

Gunbars wasn't apart of the plan til u battled & said "I spark w/ the can"
Now it's beach romance; these sticks will put your heart in the sand <3

wooooooo



that's what he said.. ^ wait... how can we believe Letts straight?
he must've grew up on Carmen Miranda cos this fruit-baskets a head case.

lol fruit basket head case is wild good

U stole Tic Tacs style, write a letter saying thank you, bitch;
I'm HIGHLY UPSET... copying another nigga doesn't make you Tic.

not really digging this

hearin he's out here catchin L's will never seems to shock me;
He can't Hangman.. put Letters on the line, Every time & you'll never see a body.

ok flip, seen plenty hangman bars tho

u still got ammo saved up from ya ducks, I hope ya edits is nice;
u been sittin on half a round, now u'll see Handicap signs for the rest of ya life.

eh @mftastick did this better last season



had unfuk convincingly, letterman started off pretty dece but burnt out on wordplays and also midway started dropping played shit that I wasn't feelin.

v-un

[Zaddy]

That heart in the sand line was bonkers g


Let had a pretty solid verse but unfuk just can't too consistent here with nice shit

Vote unfuk