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YDK
08-04-2017, 08:13 PM
Crush a perc down
Snort a line up
I figure you figured that I was doin fine huh?
That I been working steady just trying ta
Get my money high enough to escape the prison that binds us.
No luck tho
I been spending penny's to put petrol in the truck bro.
You think habits that are this ingrained
Are gonna leave me now like I flipped my brain
To it's off position?
I'll cough this instant
An I'll bet you my mom's prescription
That I'll hack up 4 percs and 2 vikes on the wall in the kitchen!
I got lawless visions mixed with
Awful convictions
Fucked up beyond recognition fallin in the halls cuz I'm judging the wrong dimensions
In each step
I'm 1 deep breath away from hittin this peak
This death.
So peep this mess
I'm too deep to be depressed
So I keep one P to sleep and regress
I mean,
if I treat these keys like seeds at these depths
I'll never have weed to beat the weak breaths.
So fuck your opinion
I don't mean to be step
Daddy to a kid that needs me to be less.
I'm tryna be grateful but the peeps are gettin left
Behind for the moment while I prove that D's the best.

Geno
08-04-2017, 09:28 PM
Dope

YDK
08-25-2017, 09:45 PM
sraL

Chyeahhh!!!
08-25-2017, 11:46 PM
caught that fuckin flow with grace dog, which I can appreciate. Shit's nice. Introspective and mos def a good read.

sral
08-26-2017, 09:59 AM
lmao not sure why i was tagged but this was dope

i used to write with this 'free-flowing' format myself many moons ago

few spots where the flow could have been tightened up many and the line lengths shortened, but kudos

best ive read from you in a minute

2tripple0
09-10-2017, 04:26 AM
This was alright i guess.... wasnt bothered with the subjec5t matter though in all honesty