Lmaooo wassup fools

[Malachi]

Im back

[WRATH]

Young man

[Diode]

Ok

[Malachi]

Im surprised this still here

[uh-oh]

yooo

[wasim]

young stunna

[Witty]

Hi.

[Chill Phil]

Greetings

[Do Not Reply]

hello

[Geno]

Ayyee

[Malachi]

Im not here for long I just told myself I wasnt coming back till i recorded a song. And i wanted the people who really got me into the rap i like n listen to to hear it. If I remember correctly yall niggas might clown me for this one but its a love song but its fye

[Malachi]

https://soundcloud.com/profitmalachi/dear-lauryn

Idk if u can change it so its not a link

[wasim]

dope shit malachi, only critique i can give is perhaps give a little bit more emotion to it. it sounds a bit too laidback, but perhaps that's the way you wanted to go with. i fuck with it actually after the third listen lmao

[uh-oh]

thats dope man. better than most peoples first tracks

you could be more forceful though, but it'll come with more comfortability with recording. and the vocals could just be louder in general they were getting drowned out at times by the beat

but word man it was much better than i was expecting

[Malachi]

Thanks you two i def agree about my voice n being more forcedul n emotion. I think i just need to get more comfortable in the booth and ill sound much better