Schadenfreude vs For Battling -Schad wins

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Schadenfreude For Battling

[For Battling]

Just 10

[Schadenfreude]

Easy.

[For Battling]

Schadenfreude

I murder vets for fun, they gon need a coffin to cover up the stench
Callin Giant shots.. this McAdoo more than just put washed up niggas on the bench
U love retarded heffers. I know the truth there’s no need for pretendin
so get rid of the fetish, or u’ll see ur whole screen red like wen u try to send Silver a msg
I’ll be in front of ya house, beam aimin thru ya dang window
Wen I raise arms it triggers the fire, then the whole buildin’ bursts into flames.. that’s Kane’s intro
Get merked by plenty of jabs..or I’ll just unload some slugs on this fag
Then u’ll get 6 to the bottom when I open up.. it ain’t a video mag
Met ur fiancé. Won her heart over with laughter..I’ve nvr seen u madder
U’ll get ur woman took by a white dude w/ an ugly nose, that’s Wedding Crashers

[Schadenfreude]

Fore warning - all out when I’m housing shit, that’s foreclosing,
4-5th it’s for loading, u’ll go from For Battling to forgotten, that’s foreboding.
A sad sack stay getting exposed on the board, you mad wack..
everyday ya have a another slip in the Disc, developed a helluva bad back.
Don’t you have a kid? ‘Stead of try’na battle write, be a dad alright
I’d kidnap yo faggot tike, then aim the beam on ya World w/o a satellite.
Yo babymom a true whore, comes thru when she in the mood for..
cowgirl on my dick til her poon sore & u still let her swing back like saloon doors.
Have the biscuit scramble ya egg cuz u ignored the warning still
something hot pour & fill, yo personalized mug while u eat yo morning meal.

..body.

[Chyeahhh!!!]

For Battling's verse was pretty damn goodm good flow, punches and shit was there. Solid verse for sure. First 3 lines were fire

Schad's verse was on some suttle fuckin evil, only way I can describe it. Opener I dug heavy, closer I dug heavy, then the work spread throughout was gully. The flow and multi's gave your verse much more dynamic, not to mention a little more direct and personal.

vote- Schadendfreude

[Saint]

Schade got it. For Battling did fine w/ the opener kinda fell off halfway thru. Schade opener had s&f feel with cool w/p in it...different, satellite line I also liked. wording & flow helped u hit harder.

vote schade

[Aero]

FB - mcadoo line was cool & current// screen red I didn't like// Kane's intro reminds me of a Barcotic line so it was just ok// 6 to the bottom I don't fully get? Do you mean that shirt you were wearing?// chuckled @ won her heart over with laughter lol, Wedding Crashers reference could've been harder & a bit vague reference seeings how in movie Owen took her from the whitest guy ever.


Schad - foreboding was meh, didn't pull it off// slip in disc nah that's a bit played// aim the beam line had a dope delivery and cool concept, also a personal w son// saloon doors was made by the delivery to an otherwise forgettable concept// morning meal bar with the setup was hot


Close battle but I think Schad's delivery saved him here.

I've got Schad.

[Amen]

Schadenfreude

I murder vets for fun, they gon need a coffin to cover up the stench
Callin Giant shots.. this McAdoo more than just put washed up niggas on the bench
Cool concept but the execution was ass.
U love retarded heffers. I know the truth there’s no need for pretendin
so get rid of the fetish, or u’ll see ur whole screen red like wen u try to send Silver a msg
Wack.
I’ll be in front of ya house, beam aimin thru ya dang window
Wen I raise arms it triggers the fire, then the whole buildin’ bursts into flames.. that’s Kane’s intro
I hate these types of punch attempts. "THATS A (Insert PUN)"... Cringe shit...
Get merked by plenty of jabs..or I’ll just unload some slugs on this fag
Then u’ll get 6 to the bottom when I open up.. it ain’t a video mag
Light.
Met ur fiancé. Won her heart over with laughter..I’ve nvr seen u madder
U’ll get ur woman took by a white dude w/ an ugly nose, that’s Wedding Crashers
Ugh... Peep feed on your LAST "THATS" attempt. Same shit... This one was just wacker.

OVERALL; Have seen better from you... TOP TIER, eh? This is hardly MID BOTTOM TIER QUALITY, fam? Wassup? Nah but for real - I've seen better from you... IDK if you just rushed this because you were hyped and anxious to get your bars off or what - just didn't seem like you spent much time on this... Conceptually was weak and your executions were mild to wack... MacAdoo bar had potential but your execution was soft... I would have taken a different route with that concept.

Fore warning - all out when I’m housing shit, that’s foreclosing,
4-5th it’s for loading, u’ll go from For Battling to forgotten, that’s foreboding.
Stupid.
A sad sack stay getting exposed on the board, you mad wack..
everyday ya have a another slip in the Disc, developed a helluva bad back.
Played concept with a played angle/flip on the execution... Think you could have done better with this one, tho.
Don’t you have a kid? ‘Stead of try’na battle write, be a dad alright
I’d kidnap yo faggot tike, then aim the beam on ya World w/o a satellite.
This was light.
Yo babymom a true whore, comes thru when she in the mood for..
cowgirl on my dick til her poon sore & u still let her swing back like saloon doors.
This was ok, I guess.
Have the biscuit scramble ya egg cuz u ignored the warning still
something hot pour & fill, yo personalized mug while u eat yo morning meal.
Light...

..body.
Not really...

OVERALL; I have seen better from you... This was light and I'm sure you didn't spend much time on this... I like the SWAG & FLOW style and delivery you typically drop but for the most part you always throw a few bangers in there. This one didn't really have anything that stand out to....

v/Shade - barely... Both verses were light to me... Nothing impressive out of either - Shade's delivery is smooth and carried him here.

[Moe Jetts]

I liked mcadoo and wedding crashersnvs nothing.

Shadenfraude has good flow but the punches aren’t funny and didn’t hit for me.

Voting for the other dude.

[WRATH]

I murder vets for fun, they gon need a coffin to cover up the stench
Callin Giant shots.. this McAdoo more than just put washed up niggas on the bench
Okay
U love retarded heffers. I know the truth there’s no need for pretendin
so get rid of the fetish, or u’ll see ur whole screen red like wen u try to send Silver a msg
Lol okay
I’ll be in front of ya house, beam aimin thru ya dang windowfat wife
Wen I raise arms it triggers the fire, then the whole buildin’ bursts into flames.. that’s Kane’s intro
Lol cool
Get merked by plenty of jabs..or I’ll just unload some slugs on this fag
Then u’ll get 6 to the bottom when I open up.. it ain’t a video mag
Okay
Met ur fiancé. Won her heart over with laughter..I’ve nvr seen u madder
U’ll get ur woman took by a white dude w/ an ugly nose, that’s Wedding Crashers
Okay


Fore warning - all out when I’m housing shit, that’s foreclosing,
4-5th it’s for loading, u’ll go from For Battling to forgotten, that’s foreboding.
Slick
A sad sack stay getting exposed on the board, you mad wack..
everyday ya have a another slip in the Disc, developed a helluva bad back.
Lil off but cool
Don’t you have a kid? ‘Stead of try’na battle write, be a dad alright
I’d kidnap yo faggot tike, then aim the beam on ya World w/o a satellite.
Nah
Yo babymom a true whore, comes thru when she in the mood for..
cowgirl on my dick til her poon sore & u still let her swing back like saloon doors.
Okay
Have the biscuit scramble ya egg cuz u ignored the warning stillfat wife
something hot pour & fill, yo personalized mug while u eat yo morning meal.
Okay but nah

V FB

[Captain Neckbeard]

Schadenfreude

I murder vets for fun, they gon need a coffin to cover up the stench
Callin Giant shots.. this McAdoo more than just put washed up niggas on the bench

thought this was fire tbc

U love retarded heffers. I know the truth there’s no need for pretendin
so get rid of the fetish, or u’ll see ur whole screen red like wen u try to send Silver a msg

nah

I’ll be in front of ya house, beam aimin thru ya dang window
Wen I raise arms it triggers the fire, then the whole buildin’ bursts into flames.. that’s Kane’s intro

this is cool

Get merked by plenty of jabs..or I’ll just unload some slugs on this fag
Then u’ll get 6 to the bottom when I open up.. it ain’t a video mag

nope

Met ur fiancé. Won her heart over with laughter..I’ve nvr seen u madder
U’ll get ur woman took by a white dude w/ an ugly nose, that’s Wedding Crashers

really we pretending its your nose that's defining ur ugliness? smh...the nose....LMFAO cant make this shit up/





Fore warning - all out when I’m housing shit, that’s foreclosing,
4-5th it’s for loading, u’ll go from For Battling to forgotten, that’s foreboding.


how is that foreboding tho....foreclosing was ok

A sad sack stay getting exposed on the board, you mad wack..
everyday ya have a another slip in the Disc, developed a helluva bad back.

ok but nothing crazy

Don’t you have a kid? ‘Stead of try’na battle write, be a dad alright
I’d kidnap yo faggot tike, then aim the beam on ya World w/o a satellite.

this was fireeeeee

Yo babymom a true whore, comes thru when she in the mood for..
cowgirl on my dick til her poon sore & u still let her swing back like saloon doors.

lol ok ok I dig it

Have the biscuit scramble ya egg cuz u ignored the warning still
something hot pour & fill, yo personalized mug while u eat yo morning meal.

eh old concepts with new spin but wording was a little clunky for me

..body.

had McAdoo and kane vs saloon and satellite..... kindve a tough call honestly I could vote for FB but his misses were worse than schads so ill rock w schad for consistency since quotables were pretty even

v schad

[DMVsToneB]

Schadenfreude

I murder vets for fun, they gon need a coffin to cover up the stench
Callin Giant shots.. this McAdoo more than just put washed up niggas on the bench
dope
U love retarded heffers. I know the truth there’s no need for pretendin
so get rid of the fetish, or u’ll see ur whole screen red like wen u try to send Silver a msg
corny imo
I’ll be in front of ya house, beam aimin thru ya dang window
Wen I raise arms it triggers the fire, then the whole buildin’ bursts into flames.. that’s Kane’s intro
liked the concept but not the execution
Get merked by plenty of jabs..or I’ll just unload some slugs on this fag
Then u’ll get 6 to the bottom when I open up.. it ain’t a video mag
cool cool
Met ur fiancé. Won her heart over with laughter..I’ve nvr seen u madder
U’ll get ur woman took by a white dude w/ an ugly nose, that’s Wedding Crashers
Lol idk why I literally lol'd at this

Fore warning - all out when I’m housing shit, that’s foreclosing,
4-5th it’s for loading, u’ll go from For Battling to forgotten, that’s foreboding.
think you tried a little too hard here ..
A sad sack stay getting exposed on the board, you mad wack..
everyday ya have a another slip in the Disc, developed a helluva bad back.
eh, ok I guess
Don’t you have a kid? ‘Stead of try’na battle write, be a dad alright
I’d kidnap yo faggot tike, then aim the beam on ya World w/o a satellite.
I liked this
Yo babymom a true whore, comes thru when she in the mood for..
cowgirl on my dick til her poon sore & u still let her swing back like saloon doors.
eh, nah
Have the biscuit scramble ya egg cuz u ignored the warning still
something hot pour & fill, yo personalized mug while u eat yo morning meal.
not feelin
..body.

v/ FB

[Inno]

I got shad in this one. For battling opener was prolly the best line of the battle. Shit was on point. But like inf said FB lost steam from then on. Shad was all that dope either but his wordplay multis(that saloon line) showcased a bit polish in his verse. could go either tbh but I feel like shad did enough to take this. Maybe shad didn’t expect FB to bring that comp so he slacked a bit, but still took this. Nice battle

SHAD

[BROKE LESNAR]

Schadenfreude

I murder vets for fun, they gon need a coffin to cover up the stench
Callin Giant shots.. this McAdoo more than just put washed up niggas on the bench

dope

U love retarded heffers. I know the truth there’s no need for pretendin
so get rid of the fetish, or u’ll see ur whole screen red like wen u try to send Silver a msg

lmao

I’ll be in front of ya house, beam aimin thru ya dang window
Wen I raise arms it triggers the fire, then the whole buildin’ bursts into flames.. that’s Kane’s intro

seen different variations of this, nice flip

Get merked by plenty of jabs..or I’ll just unload some slugs on this fag
Then u’ll get 6 to the bottom when I open up.. it ain’t a video mag

nah

Met ur fiancé. Won her heart over with laughter..I’ve nvr seen u madder
U’ll get ur woman took by a white dude w/ an ugly nose, that’s Wedding Crashers

nah


Fore warning - all out when I’m housing shit, that’s foreclosing,
4-5th it’s for loading, u’ll go from For Battling to forgotten, that’s foreboding.

nah

A sad sack stay getting exposed on the board, you mad wack..
everyday ya have a another slip in the Disc, developed a helluva bad back.

nah

Don’t you have a kid? ‘Stead of try’na battle write, be a dad alright
I’d kidnap yo faggot tike, then aim the beam on ya World w/o a satellite.

nah

Yo babymom a true whore, comes thru when she in the mood for..
cowgirl on my dick til her poon sore & u still let her swing back like saloon doors.

cool

Have the biscuit scramble ya egg cuz u ignored the warning still
something hot pour & fill, yo personalized mug while u eat yo morning meal.

nah

..body.


For Battling won easily. Schad tries to hard with swag and flow and lost my interest in his punches.

v-For Battling