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Orc
12-10-2017, 07:12 AM
Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition


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Allen Knight Infiltration

Saint
12-12-2017, 06:53 PM
Me & your wife were in your kitchen:

Said ya sports bars booooring while inf d down her three hours
'He's so predictable!' as i slammed it on the counter like Geese Howard
We'll runoff w knights cash. my plan? use poison. die fast
Next time u see ur damselfly i spoiled her before u live out ones lifespan
Need a light man? b/c you bringin fire is more than a fantasy
If this a mismatch you're mr gassed....who's completely divorced from reality
And when it come to dirt tier jersey trash he's the standard
In ur region i rate u so low growth in-part takes logans healing factor
U livin backwards; poor spic grew up on the streets wild
I'll Wachovia.. then takeu2school over a bank account that's creds freestyle
Born loser. a mistake parents should've never really made
Cuz allll of Allele's were predetermined by those hereditary traits
Get a grade? Only AKA's = forced nameplays he'll use later
You'll Sharon Reed an ugly in-word&&I'd put that 'on aer' - no news anchor

Chamber
12-15-2017, 05:58 AM
Good job. I got depressed & quit liftin :(


smh,

bruh my team fulla wolves,

faggot i'll jump u w/ a pack of wolves that'll drop u colder
depressed bitch my Paxil stomp till the weight of life lifts off ur shoulders
got the ruger tucked to merk ya team, has a deadly beam
s'like my glasses fogged up, i'll lift my shirt an whip out everything
u hate on new niggas gettin dubs, they'd smash u punk
it got Intuition he'd win battles but deep down he know's hes wack as fuck
ur a stalker on that eminem song lvl, ur sucha disgrace
i'll give this Stanton of bullets to the grill for stepping up to the plate
im dope an ur wack as fuck, wavin a knife by this guys eye
i spit Firestick the blade in ur cornea till it's leakin all over like open wifi
got this faggot nervous, uzi'll explode in u twat
it'll enter ur skin like a Hypodermic, Chamber will leave u cold ina box
ready to cut & hide ya body, faggot u'll get chiseled quick
fuck fightin, i'll stab Infantile a floor over his corpse for being a little bitch

Choice Wordz
12-15-2017, 06:37 AM
Vote Infiltration, although a lot of his lines were kind of forced. Chamber could have had something ill with that chamber line but lacked execution.

Liked the Geese Howard bit

Captain Neckbeard
12-15-2017, 08:57 AM
Me & your wife were in your kitchen:

Said ya sports bars booooring while inf d down her three hours
'He's so predictable!' as i slammed it on the counter like Geese Howard

mad I googled this only to find out hes the stupid guy in ur avy and the punvch still don't make sense smfh

We'll runoff w knights cash. my plan? use poison. die fast
Next time u see ur damselfly i spoiled her before u live out ones lifespan

son said damsel like its 1873 smh

Need a light man? b/c you bringin fire is more than a fantasy
If this a mismatch you're mr gassed....who's completely divorced from reality

nope

And when it come to dirt tier jersey trash he's the standard
In ur region i rate u so low growth in-part takes logans healing factor

this shit is giving me a headache

U livin backwards; poor spic grew up on the streets wild
I'll Wachovia.. then takeu2school over a bank account that's creds freestyle

this is fire,,,finally

Born loser. a mistake parents should've never really made
Cuz allll of Allele's were predetermined by those hereditary traits

I don't need to google allele to get this punch...but the fact that its so obscure takes away from the impact of this

Get a grade? Only AKA's = forced nameplays he'll use later
You'll Sharon Reed an ugly in-word&&I'd put that 'on aer' - no news anchor

ur whole verse is forced wordplay and this bar follows a shitty nameplay ....smh.....too much going on in this bar....I was able to put it all together but jesus man I needed a decoder ring to get thru this entire verse...yuck.





smh,

bruh my team fulla wolves,

faggot i'll jump u w/ a pack of wolves that'll drop u colder
depressed bitch my Paxil stomp till the weight of life lifts off ur shoulders

lmaoo ak is literal satan...gone at of course he seen him say he was depressed and opens his verse with it (bar was good)

got the ruger tucked to merk ya team, has a deadly beam
s'like my glasses fogged up, i'll lift my shirt an whip out everything

this is wild

u hate on new niggas gettin dubs, they'd smash u punk
it got Intuition he'd win battles but deep down he know's hes wack as fuck

I don't love the partial nameflipping but this was so well worded...hard to disregard it

ur a stalker on that eminem song lvl, ur sucha disgrace
i'll give this Stanton of bullets to the grill for stepping up to the plate

nah not really

im dope an ur wack as fuck, wavin a knife by this guys eye
i spit Firestick the blade in ur cornea till it's leakin all over like open wifi

dope

got this faggot nervous, uzi'll explode in u twat
it'll enter ur skin like a Hypodermic, Chamber will leave u cold ina box

sheesh ak stylin on u now inf

ready to cut & hide ya body, faggot u'll get chiseled quick
fuck fightin, i'll stab Infantile a floor over his corpse for being a little bitch

not bad...bored of wordplays at this point but I mean it was still good




I got ak with a lopsided victory here.....honestly everything inf did wrong (muddling concepts, over complicating bars, obscure references, choppy wording, forced wordplays) ak happened to do right. was kindve like inf tried to do allen style and failed miserably.

v ak

Amen
12-15-2017, 05:16 PM
Me & your wife were in your kitchen:

Said ya sports bars booooring while inf d down her three hours
'He's so predictable!' as i slammed it on the counter like Geese Howard
Ehhhhh, not really feeling this one.
We'll runoff w knights cash. my plan? use poison. die fast
Next time u see ur damselfly i spoiled her before u live out ones lifespan
Had to read this a few times before it clocked but light.
Need a light man? b/c you bringin fire is more than a fantasy
If this a mismatch you're mr gassed....who's completely divorced from reality
Nah..
And when it come to dirt tier jersey trash he's the standard
In ur region i rate u so low growth in-part takes logans healing factor
Not sure what you are trying to say here? Got too much going on for me.
U livin backwards; poor spic grew up on the streets wild
I'll Wachovia.. then takeu2school over a bank account that's creds freestyle
I've always known it to be pronounced WAK, not watch. So this was a reach but the execution was mild too.
Born loser. a mistake parents should've never really made
Cuz allll of Allele's were predetermined by those hereditary traits
Nah...
Get a grade? Only AKA's = forced nameplays he'll use later
You'll Sharon Reed an ugly in-word&&I'd put that 'on aer' - no news anchor
Again, you have way to much shit going on here man... YOu are over complicating your material by doing this and making it hard to enjoy.

faggot i'll jump u w/ a pack of wolves that'll drop u colder
depressed bitch my Paxil stomp till the weight of life lifts off ur shoulders
Paxil/Pack'll - sort of a reach man... Like the concept and execution tho.
got the ruger tucked to merk ya team, has a deadly beam
s'like my glasses fogged up, i'll lift my shirt an whip out everything
Simple concept but executed effectively.
u hate on new niggas gettin dubs, they'd smash u punk
it got Intuition he'd win battles but deep down he know's hes wack as fuck
In to wishin, lol nice... I fuck w/ it.
ur a stalker on that eminem song lvl, ur sucha disgrace
i'll give this Stanton of bullets to the grill for stepping up to the plate
Can't give credit for this one now, lol... At least Paxil kind of made sense. Give this stan A ton of...
im dope an ur wack as fuck, wavin a knife by this guys eye
i spit Firestick the blade in ur cornea till it's leakin all over like open wifi
Ehhhhhh sort of like the bar above it.. But this one slightly better.
got this faggot nervous, uzi'll explode in u twat
it'll enter ur skin like a Hypodermic, Chamber will leave u cold ina box
Ok.
ready to cut & hide ya body, faggot u'll get chiseled quick
fuck fightin, i'll stab Infantile a floor over his corpse for being a little bitch
Lol wtf? you are one morbid mother fucker yo...

Damn, INF fell off. I used to enjoy his shit back when he 1st started battling here. I think he's tooo consumed by his creativity that he gets lost in the shit... Over complicating your concepts makes for a horrible read man. If a voter has to read a bar 8 times before it clocks and he moves on to the next - major turn off. Dumb it down, bro. Not sure of this new style you are trying to craft up but go back to your older style... Much better. Anyways, Allen had better/harsher executions on his verse. Some terrible wording/grammar on a couple of his bars but his executions and concepts were better.

v/Allen Knight

Schadenfreude
12-15-2017, 05:28 PM
Said ya sports bars booooring while inf d down her three hours
'He's so predictable!' as i slammed it on the counter like Geese Howard
Lol I like this
We'll runoff w knights cash. my plan? use poison. die fast
Next time u see ur damselfly i spoiled her before u live out ones lifespan
Decent, clever, but not that impactful
Need a light man? b/c you bringin fire is more than a fantasy
If this a mismatch you're mr gassed....who's completely divorced from reality
naw, shallow wp
And when it come to dirt tier jersey trash he's the standard
In ur region i rate u so low growth in-part takes logans healing factor
You changed the wording, it was better before
U livin backwards; poor spic grew up on the streets wild
I'll Wachovia.. then takeu2school over a bank account that's creds freestyle
Should have based the entire concept around Wachovia
Born loser. a mistake parents should've never really made
Cuz allll of Allele's were predetermined by those hereditary traits
This is nice
Get a grade? Only AKA's = forced nameplays he'll use later
You'll Sharon Reed an ugly in-word&&I'd put that 'on aer' - no news anchor
Nah, lazy wp
Usual I'm a supporter of your style due to yo cleverness & creativity, but the wording & wp were mostly lacking in this drop, Bro.



faggot i'll jump u w/ a pack of wolves that'll drop u colder
depressed bitch my Paxil stomp till the weight of life lifts off ur shoulders
Decent, a bit forced imo
got the ruger tucked to merk ya team, has a deadly beam
s'like my glasses fogged up, i'll lift my shirt an whip out everything
Lol dope
u hate on new niggas gettin dubs, they'd smash u punk
it got Intuition he'd win battles but deep down he know's hes wack as fuck
Cool nameplay
ur a stalker on that eminem song lvl, ur sucha disgrace
i'll give this Stanton of bullets to the grill for stepping up to the plate
Nah, Stanton/Stan tons, very lazy
im dope an ur wack as fuck, wavin a knife by this guys eye
i spit Firestick the blade in ur cornea till it's leakin all over like open wifi
Idk the wording's awkward to Me
got this faggot nervous, uzi'll explode in u twat
it'll enter ur skin like a Hypodermic, Chamber will leave u cold ina box
This is OK
ready to cut & hide ya body, faggot u'll get chiseled quick
fuck fightin, i'll stab Infantile a floor over his corpse for being a little bitch
Nah this one's weak
Just OK overall, nothing wack, but none of these punches had your usually level of impact.

VOTE ALLEN KNIGHT, tho either showed up as tough as I was expecting.

Cool
12-15-2017, 08:20 PM
Me & your wife were in your kitchen:

Said ya sports bars booooring while inf d down her three hours
'He's so predictable!' as i slammed it on the counter like Geese Howard

nah

We'll runoff w knights cash. my plan? use poison. die fast
Next time u see ur damselfly i spoiled her before u live out ones lifespan

dope

Need a light man? b/c you bringin fire is more than a fantasy
If this a mismatch you're mr gassed....who's completely divorced from reality

nah

And when it come to dirt tier jersey trash he's the standard
In ur region i rate u so low growth in-part takes logans healing factor

nah

U livin backwards; poor spic grew up on the streets wild
I'll Wachovia.. then takeu2school over a bank account that's creds freestyle

okay

Born loser. a mistake parents should've never really made
Cuz allll of Allele's were predetermined by those hereditary traits

nah

Get a grade? Only AKA's = forced nameplays he'll use later
You'll Sharon Reed an ugly in-word&&I'd put that 'on aer' - no news anchor

nah




smh,

bruh my team fulla wolves,

faggot i'll jump u w/ a pack of wolves that'll drop u colder
depressed bitch my Paxil stomp till the weight of life lifts off ur shoulders

dope

got the ruger tucked to merk ya team, has a deadly beam
s'like my glasses fogged up, i'll lift my shirt an whip out everything

nice

u hate on new niggas gettin dubs, they'd smash u punk
it got Intuition he'd win battles but deep down he know's hes wack as fuck

nice

ur a stalker on that eminem song lvl, ur sucha disgrace
i'll give this Stanton of bullets to the grill for stepping up to the plate

nah

im dope an ur wack as fuck, wavin a knife by this guys eye
i spit Firestick the blade in ur cornea till it's leakin all over like open wifi

nah

got this faggot nervous, uzi'll explode in u twat
it'll enter ur skin like a Hypodermic, Chamber will leave u cold ina box

nice

ready to cut & hide ya body, faggot u'll get chiseled quick
fuck fightin, i'll stab Infantile a floor over his corpse for being a little bitch

fire

ak wins

had a fire verse

only a cpl misses

inf was okay

needed better material

v-ak

ill nik-A
12-16-2017, 07:31 AM
I dunno what’s up with inf but your best attempt was a Wachovia Line I did when the Bank name change happened about 10 yrs ago

AK opener was ok but that wipe ur glasses was fire. Firestick was some better with the kodi mention by I forgot who.

AK wins comfortably

Cred
12-16-2017, 07:35 AM
Damesfly and that Wachovia Line was pretty hard


Vs

Whipout everything was good, I was fucking wit that intuition joint too, fire stick was solid

I enjoyed this battle tbh, both did there thing here but I’ve def seen some harder shit from inf. Good shit y’all

Vote - Allen

For Battling
12-16-2017, 08:13 AM
Me & your wife were in your kitchen:

Said ya sports bars booooring while inf d down her three hours
'He's so predictable!' as i slammed it on the counter like Geese Howard
nah sir
We'll runoff w knights cash. my plan? use poison. die fast
Next time u see ur damselfly i spoiled her before u live out ones lifespan
your setup was nice, finisher was decent. Overall decent bar
Need a light man? b/c you bringin fire is more than a fantasy
If this a mismatch you're mr gassed....who's completely divorced from reality
wasnt feelin this
And when it come to dirt tier jersey trash he's the standard
In ur region i rate u so low growth in-part takes logans healing factor
man what? LOL. For a second I thought you were referencing the movie Logan but I recently saw it and it doesn’t relate. If not that then I have no idea what you’re talking about here man
U livin backwards; poor spic grew up on the streets wild
I'll Wachovia.. then takeu2school over a bank account that's creds freestyle
i used a Wachovia concept ages ago, seen it done a few times too. Played
Born loser. a mistake parents should've never really made
Cuz allll of Allele's were predetermined by those hereditary traits
not bad
Get a grade? Only AKA's = forced nameplays he'll use later
You'll Sharon Reed an ugly in-word&&I'd put that 'on aer' - no news anchor
too forced to even give credit to this

Infiltration: Idk bra, I honestly think you reading all those archive battles from other sites kinda fucked you up. Cause how do you go from top 10 on the site last year, getting robbed by jilti in the nbl champ match, beating legends.....to this new inf. Maybe you’re just in a slump because of your current depression, who knows, but you need to remember what’s actually dope and what isn’t. I was expecting some algorithmically type shit but nope, I’m sure you’ll pick it up next week.


Vs



faggot i'll jump u w/ a pack of wolves that'll drop u colder
depressed bitch my Paxil stomp till the weight of life lifts off ur shoulders
ok Paxil...but ur packs will stomp? Doesn’t make sense to me that way idkaybe im missing something
got the ruger tucked to merk ya team, has a deadly beam
s'like my glasses fogged up, i'll lift my shirt an whip out everything
ha this is cool
u hate on new niggas gettin dubs, they'd smash u punk
it got Intuition he'd win battles but deep down he know's hes wack as fuck
if this isn’t already played on him I’d be surprised, not bad tho
ur a stalker on that eminem song lvl, ur sucha disgrace
i'll give this Stanton of bullets to the grill for stepping up to the plate
alright
im dope an ur wack as fuck, wavin a knife by this guys eye
i spit Firestick the blade in ur cornea till it's leakin all over like open wifi
DON DEMARCO
got this faggot nervous, uzi'll explode in u twat
it'll enter ur skin like a Hypodermic, Chamber will leave u cold ina box
cool
ready to cut & hide ya body, faggot u'll get chiseled quick
fuck fightin, i'll stab Infantile a floor over his corpse for being a little bitch
ok


Allen got a body here. Good job buddy!

Vote: Allen Knight

Alvin Karpis
12-16-2017, 09:54 AM
AK got this with Intuition and the closer, not a bad verse
In had the Sharon Reed line but the rest didn’t hit for me, wp was bit of a reach

AK wins with consistency

Lenox
12-16-2017, 03:24 PM
Infiltration: nothing was landing or came close to doing so. A couple bars didn’t really make sense

Vs

Allen knight: Paxil was fye, lol glasses was creative. Stanton was coo, WiFi was hard.

Overall: wasn’t really an interesting matchup. Pretty one sided


Vote: ak

Habitat
12-17-2017, 03:41 PM
Inf: whachovia, allele

AK: glasses fogged, open wifi, infantile

AK had the better verse

V/ ak

Saint
12-17-2017, 09:38 PM
AK won, orc can close it...lol

WRATH
12-17-2017, 11:30 PM
Me & your wife were in your kitchen:

Said ya sports bars booooring while inf d down her three hours
'He's so predictable!' as i slammed it on the counter like Geese Howard

Ha

We'll runoff w knights cash. my plan? use poison. die fast
Next time u see ur damselfly i spoiled her before u live out ones lifespan

Probably good

Need a light man? b/c you bringin fire is more than a fantasy
If this a mismatch you're mr gassed....who's completely divorced from reality

Eh I liked the idea

And when it come to dirt tier jersey trash he's the standard
In ur region i rate u so low growth in-part takes logans healing factor

Eh

U livin backwards; poor spic grew up on the streets wild
I'll Wachovia.. then takeu2school over a bank account that's creds freestyle

Cool idea execution isn't 100%

Born loser. a mistake parents should've never really made
Cuz allll of Allele's were predetermined by those hereditary traits

Nah

Get a grade? Only AKA's = forced nameplays he'll use later
You'll Sharon Reed an ugly in-word&&I'd put that 'on aer' - no news anchor

Forced


faggot i'll jump u w/ a pack of wolves that'll drop u colder
depressed bitch my Paxil stomp till the weight of life lifts off ur shoulders

Light

got the ruger tucked to merk ya team, has a deadly beam
s'like my glasses fogged up, i'll lift my shirt an whip out everything

Wipe out would have been better

u hate on new niggas gettin dubs, they'd smash u punk
it got Intuition he'd win battles but deep down he know's hes wack as fuck

Sick

ur a stalker on that eminem song lvl, ur sucha disgrace
i'll give this Stanton of bullets to the grill for stepping up to the plate

Nice

im dope an ur wack as fuck, wavin a knife by this guys eye
i spit Firestick the blade in ur cornea till it's leakin all over like open wifi

A lil off

got this faggot nervous, uzi'll explode in u twatfat wife
it'll enter ur skin like a Hypodermic, Chamber will leave u cold ina box

Solid

ready to cut & hide ya body, faggot u'll get chiseled quick
fuck fightin, i'll stab Infantile a floor over his corpse for being a little bitch

Good enough


V AK