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Orc
12-10-2017, 07:12 AM
Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition


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Defiant

Orc
12-14-2017, 04:24 PM
Chyeahhh!!! Defiant, due tonight

Defiant
12-14-2017, 04:31 PM
Ext?

Chyeahhh!!!
12-14-2017, 09:30 PM
Defiant walks in on me fucking his sister and his mom after returning from a D wave computer seminar

he opened the door and appeared beligerent, that's when the trouble hit
wasn't a quantum physics experiment but he observed me in double slits
I was gettin off while he spewed a fumbled sentence
Stared that asshole down..
then stared down his moms asshole till I got tunnel vision
test me, I go to the shelf, grab some shells and a weapon
it's a 12 gauge bitch!! and it'll be at your door like Hush's A/S/L preference
computer thuggin from yah chair acting eything but civil
the spectators heads'll spin when I blow yah head off and it lands on the swivel
yah faggotry easy to grasp, come out the closet, you down low hanging fruit
and you're a shitty mod, heard more complaints about you than a fuckin vaping group
you got 1 lonely ass accommp, stand by while I word it well
you, yah sister, and yah mom deserve to die and I hope you all burn in hell
I gave 2 fucks bout this battle, you can tell by the intro
I reached a new low raising the bar and left those bitches dignity in limbo

Defiant
12-16-2017, 05:50 AM
Conspiracy after conspiracy, hes a known bore
so many outdated views... how the fuck u aint got a bitch to go home for
Known for a bigger chin than john kerry...so I'm smashing through the door
Tellin u keep your chin up, just to stop ya whole head crashing off the floor
Win then lose....theres no consistency, names on no threat list
When your win/loss column resembles a finished game of Tetris
Last battle sent me to sleep, one thing of note the way through
The only thing 'incredible' there....was him having 6 lines every bar..... n having 1 less quotable than u
Battered u before, if this is the comeback il drop some true facts
that your revival is so much corny shit that it could rival eminem's new tracks
bars have so much work to do, it'dbe easy to break ya heart
If we wanted to fill the cracks in your work, we'd need a ton of filler, a miracle and your chin just to make a start
His audios sucked....it'd be luck if anyone paired with ya
reason hes reached a wider audience...... is cause fat chicks are the only thing he can fuck in his area

WRATH
12-16-2017, 07:50 AM
Defiant walks in on me fucking his sister and his mom after returning from a D wave computer seminar

he opened the door and appeared beligerent, that's when the trouble hit
wasn't a quantum physics experiment but he observed me in double slits

Okay..

I was gettin off while he spewed a fumbled sentence
Stared that asshole down..
then stared down his moms asshole till I got tunnel vision

Weak

test me, I go to the shelf, grab some shells and a weapon
it's a 12 gauge bitch!! and it'll be at your door like Hush's A/S/L preference

Nah

computer thuggin from yah chair acting eything but civil
the spectators heads'll spin when I blow yah head off and it lands on the swivel

Poorly worded

yah faggotry easy to grasp, come out the closet, you down low hanging fruit
and you're a shitty mod, heard more complaints about you than a fuckin vaping group

Lol

you got 1 lonely ass accommp, stand by while I word it well
you, yah sister, and yah mom deserve to die and I hope you all burn in hell

Eh

I gave 2 fucks bout this battle, you can tell by the intro
I reached a new low raising the bar and left those bitches dignity in limbo

Interesting idea poorly executed


Conspiracy after conspiracy, hes a known bore
got so many outdated views... how the fuck u aint got a bitch to go home for

Weak

Known for having a bigger chin than john kerry...so I'm smashing through the door
To tell u keep your chin up, just to stop ya whole head crashing off the floorfat wife

Worded funny

Win then a loss there's no consistency, your names on no threat list
When your win/loss column resembles a finished game of Tetrisfat wife

Okay

Ya last battle sent me to sleep, there was one thing of note the way through
The only thing 'incredible' about that....was him having 6 lines every bar..... n only having 1 less quotable than u

Forced and dumb

Battered u before, if this is your comeback il drop some true facts
that your revival is so much corny shit that it could rival eminem's new tracks

Poorly worded

Your bars have so much work to do, it'dbe easy to break ya heart
If we wanted to fill the cracks in your work, we'd need a ton of filler, a miracle and your chin just to make a start

What?

His audios sucked....it'd be luck if anyone paired with ya
Only reason hes reached a wider audience...... is cause obese chicks are the only thing he can fuck in his area

Okay



Weird battle

V chyeah

Inno
12-16-2017, 08:37 AM
Both came pretty even Tbh it go go either way.
I like Chyeahhs humor combined with his punches
He landed some tuff hits. Some bars stumbled a bit with
The wording so hurt him a bit. Feel like defiant had the same
Problem with his wording but lacked slightly in impact and
Humor so I got Chyeahh taking this by a slight margin

Chyeahh

For Battling
12-16-2017, 11:23 AM
he opened the door and appeared beligerent, that's when the trouble hit
wasn't a quantum physics experiment but he observed me in double slits
ok, wasn’t feeling the intro tbh
I was gettin off while he spewed a fumbled sentence
Stared that asshole down..
then stared down his moms asshole till I got tunnel vision
nah this was bad bro
test me, I go to the shelf, grab some shells and a weapon
it's a 12 gauge bitch!! and it'll be at your door like Hush's A/S/L preference
wasnt feelin this
computer thuggin from yah chair acting eything but civil
the spectators heads'll spin when I blow yah head off and it lands on the swivel
nah
yah faggotry easy to grasp, come out the closet, you down low hanging fruit
and you're a shitty mod, heard more complaints about you than a fuckin vaping group
decent
you got 1 lonely ass accommp, stand by while I word it well
you, yah sister, and yah mom deserve to die and I hope you all burn in hell
nah just basic
I gave 2 fucks bout this battle, you can tell by the intro
I reached a new low raising the bar and left those bitches dignity in limbo
nah man

chyeah: Not sure what happened here Man, your opener may have been your only somewhat good bar here. Last week you came nice and this week you seemed like you just dropped to drop. Expected better.

Vs


Conspiracy after conspiracy, hes a known bore
so many outdated views... how the fuck u aint got a bitch to go home for
this was killed by wording and 0 effectiveness
Known for a bigger chin than john kerry...so I'm smashing through the door
Tellin u keep your chin up, just to stop ya whole head crashing off the floor
bit played on him but not a bad flip
Win then lose....theres no consistency, names on no threat list
When your win/loss column resembles a finished game of Tetris
decent at best
Last battle sent me to sleep, one thing of note the way through
The only thing 'incredible' there....was him having 6 lines every bar..... n having 1 less quotable than u
nah
Battered u before, if this is the comeback il drop some true facts
that your revival is so much corny shit that it could rival eminem's new tracks
i hate “it could rival a” type lines but this wasn’t bad, alright
bars have so much work to do, it'dbe easy to break ya heart
If we wanted to fill the cracks in your work, we'd need a ton of filler, a miracle and your chin just to make a start
too stretched
His audios sucked....it'd be luck if anyone paired with ya
reason hes reached a wider audience...... is cause fat chicks are the only thing he can fuck in his area
lol’d, ok

This wasn’t the best of battles, I feel both parties came weaker than expected and I was a bit underwhelmed. No hitters here from either side unfortunately, but I have Defiant taking it slightly.

Vote: Defiant

Lenox
12-16-2017, 03:32 PM
Chey: vaping group lotb, and I guess the closer.

Vs

Defiant: closer was cool

Overall: weak battle

Vote: chey with the edge

Hush
12-16-2017, 05:40 PM
Defiant walks in on me fucking his sister and his mom after returning from a D wave computer seminar

he opened the door and appeared beligerent, that's when the trouble hit
wasn't a quantum physics experiment but he observed me in double slits
....wack
I was gettin off while he spewed a fumbled sentence
Stared that asshole down..
then stared down his moms asshole till I got tunnel vision
...no
test me, I go to the shelf, grab some shells and a weapon
it's a 12 gauge bitch!! and it'll be at your door like Hush's A/S/L preference
...nah
computer thuggin from yah chair acting eything but civil
the spectators heads'll spin when I blow yah head off and it lands on the swivel
...nah
yah faggotry easy to grasp, come out the closet, you down low hanging fruit
and you're a shitty mod, heard more complaints about you than a fuckin vaping group
...lol horrible
you got 1 lonely ass accommp, stand by while I word it well
you, yah sister, and yah mom deserve to die and I hope you all burn in hell
...terrible
I gave 2 fucks bout this battle, you can tell by the intro
I reached a new low raising the bar and left those bitches dignity in limbo
...almost



Conspiracy after conspiracy, hes a known bore
so many outdated views... how the fuck u aint got a bitch to go home for
...nah
Known for a bigger chin than john kerry...so I'm smashing through the door
Tellin u keep your chin up, just to stop ya whole head crashing off the floor
...ehh
Win then lose....theres no consistency, names on no threat list
When your win/loss column resembles a finished game of Tetris
..cool
Last battle sent me to sleep, one thing of note the way through
The only thing 'incredible' there....was him having 6 lines every bar..... n having 1 less quotable than u
...bad wording
Battered u before, if this is the comeback il drop some true facts
that your revival is so much corny shit that it could rival eminem's new tracks
...ok
bars have so much work to do, it'dbe easy to break ya heart
If we wanted to fill the cracks in your work, we'd need a ton of filler, a miracle and your chin just to make a start
..nah
His audios sucked....it'd be luck if anyone paired with ya
reason hes reached a wider audience...... is cause fat chicks are the only thing he can fuck in his area



Defiant

Allen Knight
12-17-2017, 03:44 PM
Vaping group

Vs

Tettris & eminem new track.

V/ def, this was a ok battle..chyeah had one cool bar but def verse was overall stronger an had 2 better quotes ya feel me. Props to both. Jua step ya game up next week.

Orc
12-18-2017, 01:25 PM
3-3 NEEDS VOTES ASAP

Habitat
12-18-2017, 01:36 PM
Chyea: Vaping group

vs

Def: chin up, fat chicks was ok

I got def by a cunt hair.

v/ Def

Aero
12-18-2017, 01:57 PM
Chr - double slits good, stared down mom's asshole til I got tunnel vision is the weirdest idea I've ever heard in a punchline lol. Thing I liked about this verse is that it wasn't formulaic in punchlines.

Def - chin up was a near hit the delivery was dry. Incredible line had potential but too wordy.. liked the wider audience bar


Che was entertaining but Defiant wins this


Mvgt Defiant

Saint
12-18-2017, 02:27 PM
Chyeah liked your opener and thé unorthodox style..
Some things come off too statementish..

Vote Défiant, had a few more landed punches