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Schadenfreude Victor.
Schadenfreude
12-10-2017, 12:04 PM
16.
Victor.
12-10-2017, 05:47 PM
Nah I be busy
12
Victor.
12-12-2017, 01:43 AM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye
Schadenfreude
12-13-2017, 02:49 AM
Check it out lil guy..
Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.
..BODY.
Habitat
12-13-2017, 04:31 PM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
- Alright I dig it
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
-not feelin this
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
-this needed something more pretty statementish as is
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
-really not a fan of this
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
-what
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
-second time u used this concept. this was a little better then the other, jab for this
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
-fruede is pronounce froy da so this doesn't work
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye
-extra line in here.. not feelin it
vs
Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
-lol nice
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
-alright i can dig it
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
-not feelin this
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.
-ehhh not really feelin this one eithr
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
-im getting the wordplay but this must be some urban dictionary type definitions you're using that im just not getting. pummel the cakes? give her some in the wraith? not feelin this
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
-not a fan of these comparison bars.. "something something.. thats a (fill in the blank)"
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
-last i checked ppl can only die once. diaper pull up isn't workin for me
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.
-not a fan
I've got Schade here. He had a cpl nice bars but fell off after the first 2. I thought victor was gonna be a lot better after his first punch but he fell off after that.
v- Schade
Saint
12-13-2017, 04:55 PM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
I had a like this last season w the light up xmas house, its light but ok.
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
straight. not dope not wack
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
didnt care for it
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
played a bit
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
lol i feel u posted the vid to use this line....fire
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
bland personal
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
Nah, doesnt work out.
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye
Weak closer...
Check it out lil guy..
Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
Not bad...looked it up.
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
Cool, justice of piece nvr seen.
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
Nah lol..
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.
feels used move out etc..
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
Didnt feel it.....but cool wp.
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
familiar concept, eh its ok..
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
Diaper....nah
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.
lazy wording here, eh
..BODY.
I have schade here for having a cpl here...
vic had that tongue/heart line which was lotb imo..
v schaden
Victor.
12-13-2017, 06:18 PM
I wasn’t done my lines aren’t even even lol
Whatever
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
cool
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
nah
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
nah
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
nah
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
sweet
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
nah
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
nah
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye
wack and lmao @ 3 line bar
Check it out lil guy..
Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
dope
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
nah
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
nah
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.
nah
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
nah
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
nah
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
nah
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE
nah
..BODY.
not a good battle
i thought hush was sure to lose
schad proved me wrong with only 1 good bar
hush had 2
this battle was a total letdown
v-hush
Profit
12-14-2017, 07:20 AM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
I liked this
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
This was cool
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
Nah
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
Ok, light
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
I had to find out what this was about n luckily I did cos this was nice
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
This is dope
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
No
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
Nah
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m
Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
Dope
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
Nice
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
Nope
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.
Light
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
Ok
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
Cool
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
Nah
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.
Nah
Close, but I got victor squeaking by in this one.. thought shade needed 1 of his last 2 to win but missed on both..vote victor
Victor - lighting house up was lazy but bar saved by the set up, best in worst era so true cyanide was cool, air chopper delivery needed help but ok, freude in it aight.
Schadenfreude - shots at top ok, moving out was mean, summon wraith cool but you having a wraith is a bit extravagant, rest didn't hit.
I'll have to do point system here this is too close. Brb
Mvgt Victor.
Captain Neckbeard
12-15-2017, 02:26 PM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
lmao seasonal bahhzzz
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
eh this feels like something from the capped multi days
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
ok
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
deja vu concept is dope...wording wasn't my fav tho
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
extra crazy
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
light...connects a little for accuracy tho
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
eh
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye
lmao i thought this whole shit was dope but I think he was gonna edit it....I fuck with it tho lol
Check it out lil guy..
Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
lmfao this is cool
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
concept there wording off
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
seen this before and didn't love happy bday....its not bad tho
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.
light
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
ok
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
fire
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
nah
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.
lol I dig this
..BODY.
idk this is a weird one...I had vic w the lotb but had shad w less misses..........iunno I looked back over it a couple times an I think ill go with schad but its really a coin flip/
v schad
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
Fucks w/ this.
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
Don't like the simile here.
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
Lol, damn.
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
This like the 5th one I read this week... One of the better ones THIS WEEK but still played.
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
Bang.
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
Damn, lol...
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
Nah to basic and simple...
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
Nah...
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye
Check it out lil guy..
Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
Weak.
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
Don't like this. Flowed nicely, tho.
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
Ehh... This needed a more harsher execution.
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.
Flow nice but weak bar.
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
Soft.
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
This was ok.
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
No.
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.
Wack.
..BODY.
Stop saying this. LOL SMH...
Vic had a couple of bars I liked and a couple I did not as Shaden HOWEVER Shade misses were worse then Vics, IMO. Shade got nice flow with a decent simple scheme but his punches are underwhelmed. Not sure if he's sacrificing punches for flow but it seems that way when you read the bar. Not once did a concept outshine the flow. IDK, I think VIc edges this one out tho - just thought his punches that were good were slightly more effective.
v/Vic
For Battling
12-16-2017, 07:03 AM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
this is cool
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
ok
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
ehh
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
alright cool I have a high appreciation for chopper lines
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
this was fire. And nah this wasn’t the motivation for my bar this week
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
alright, it’s basic but it gets credit because it’s true
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
regardless of how his name is pronounced, this is played on him
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye
sucks you couldn’t edit in the 4th line here
Vs
Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
ha nice
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
mmm idk, had potential but wording hurt it
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
i like the concept but the execution was off, decent here
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is Trippin
ok not bad
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
shit like that shit like that. Dope.
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
alright
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
i get it but I don’t like it tbh
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.
nah
Close ass battle, both had a good number of ok lines but it’s gonna ball down to this. Victor had 3 hitters in his verse, and I got scad with 2. This could go either way tbh, and I probably would have had scad in this if some of the lines were executed better because the concepts were surely there.
Vote: Victor
Lenox
12-16-2017, 06:55 PM
Vic: house decorating was cool. Medi vac, league all alone was aig
Vs
Sch: Mom trippin, ouija board
Overall: hush had a couple heaters, kinda fell off towards da end tho. Coo battle
Vote: hush
Barcotic
12-17-2017, 08:48 PM
hush had
opener
vid reverence (even tho it was his own)
schad had
justice of the piece
happy bday
weak battle for how many lines yas went
going w/ quote pref
v/Hush
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