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Orc
12-10-2017, 07:13 AM
Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition


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Schadenfreude Victor.

Schadenfreude
12-10-2017, 12:04 PM
16.

Victor.
12-10-2017, 05:47 PM
Nah I be busy

12

Victor.
12-12-2017, 01:43 AM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye

Schadenfreude
12-13-2017, 02:49 AM
Check it out lil guy..

Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.

..BODY.

Habitat
12-13-2017, 04:31 PM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
- Alright I dig it
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
-not feelin this
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
-this needed something more pretty statementish as is
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
-really not a fan of this
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
-what
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
-second time u used this concept. this was a little better then the other, jab for this
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
-fruede is pronounce froy da so this doesn't work
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye
-extra line in here.. not feelin it

vs

Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
-lol nice
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
-alright i can dig it
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
-not feelin this
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.
-ehhh not really feelin this one eithr
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
-im getting the wordplay but this must be some urban dictionary type definitions you're using that im just not getting. pummel the cakes? give her some in the wraith? not feelin this
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
-not a fan of these comparison bars.. "something something.. thats a (fill in the blank)"
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
-last i checked ppl can only die once. diaper pull up isn't workin for me
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.
-not a fan

I've got Schade here. He had a cpl nice bars but fell off after the first 2. I thought victor was gonna be a lot better after his first punch but he fell off after that.

v- Schade

Saint
12-13-2017, 04:55 PM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
I had a like this last season w the light up xmas house, its light but ok.

U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
straight. not dope not wack

U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
didnt care for it

U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
played a bit

You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
lol i feel u posted the vid to use this line....fire

So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
bland personal

Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
Nah, doesnt work out.

Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye
Weak closer...

Check it out lil guy..

Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
Not bad...looked it up.

Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
Cool, justice of piece nvr seen.

Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
Nah lol..

Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.
feels used move out etc..

Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
Didnt feel it.....but cool wp.

Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
familiar concept, eh its ok..

I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
Diaper....nah

Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.

lazy wording here, eh

..BODY.

I have schade here for having a cpl here...
vic had that tongue/heart line which was lotb imo..

v schaden

Victor.
12-13-2017, 06:18 PM
I wasn’t done my lines aren’t even even lol

Whatever

Cool
12-13-2017, 06:41 PM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating

cool

U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest

nah

U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup

nah

U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac

nah

You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat

sweet

So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone

nah

Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it

nah

Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye

wack and lmao @ 3 line bar




Check it out lil guy..

Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.

dope

Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.

nah

Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.

nah

Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.

nah

Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.

nah

Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.

nah

I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.

nah

Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE

nah



..BODY.

not a good battle

i thought hush was sure to lose

schad proved me wrong with only 1 good bar

hush had 2

this battle was a total letdown

v-hush

Profit
12-14-2017, 07:20 AM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating

I liked this

U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest

This was cool

U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup

Nah

U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac

Ok, light

You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat

I had to find out what this was about n luckily I did cos this was nice

So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone

This is dope

Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it

No

Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side

Nah

I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m



Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.

Dope


Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.

Nice


Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.

Nope


Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.

Light


Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.

Ok

Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.

Cool

I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.

Nah
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.

Nah

Close, but I got victor squeaking by in this one.. thought shade needed 1 of his last 2 to win but missed on both..vote victor

Aero
12-14-2017, 09:32 AM
Victor - lighting house up was lazy but bar saved by the set up, best in worst era so true cyanide was cool, air chopper delivery needed help but ok, freude in it aight.


Schadenfreude - shots at top ok, moving out was mean, summon wraith cool but you having a wraith is a bit extravagant, rest didn't hit.


I'll have to do point system here this is too close. Brb


Mvgt Victor.

Captain Neckbeard
12-15-2017, 02:26 PM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating

lmao seasonal bahhzzz

U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest

eh this feels like something from the capped multi days

U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup

ok

U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac

deja vu concept is dope...wording wasn't my fav tho

You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat

extra crazy

So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone

light...connects a little for accuracy tho

Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it

eh

Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye

lmao i thought this whole shit was dope but I think he was gonna edit it....I fuck with it tho lol





Check it out lil guy..

Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.

lmfao this is cool

Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.

concept there wording off

Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.

seen this before and didn't love happy bday....its not bad tho

Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.

light

Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.

ok

Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.

fire

I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.

nah

Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.


lol I dig this

..BODY.

idk this is a weird one...I had vic w the lotb but had shad w less misses..........iunno I looked back over it a couple times an I think ill go with schad but its really a coin flip/

v schad

Amen
12-15-2017, 05:39 PM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
Fucks w/ this.
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
Don't like the simile here.
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
Lol, damn.
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
This like the 5th one I read this week... One of the better ones THIS WEEK but still played.
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
Bang.
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
Damn, lol...
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
Nah to basic and simple...
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
Nah...
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye

Check it out lil guy..

Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
Weak.
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
Don't like this. Flowed nicely, tho.
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
Ehh... This needed a more harsher execution.
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is trippin’.
Flow nice but weak bar.
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
Soft.
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
This was ok.
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
No.
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.
Wack.

..BODY.
Stop saying this. LOL SMH...

Vic had a couple of bars I liked and a couple I did not as Shaden HOWEVER Shade misses were worse then Vics, IMO. Shade got nice flow with a decent simple scheme but his punches are underwhelmed. Not sure if he's sacrificing punches for flow but it seems that way when you read the bar. Not once did a concept outshine the flow. IDK, I think VIc edges this one out tho - just thought his punches that were good were slightly more effective.

v/Vic

For Battling
12-16-2017, 07:03 AM
Guns singing like Carolers on ya doorstep.. shells decimating
I’m lighting up the whole outside of the house.. u can save time decorating
this is cool
U treat text battling like some kinda social test.. cock stroking vets
Shads a dickrider but he always blows himself first like a explosive vest
ok
U became the best in the worst era. The truth must be eating u up
Sure u got the juice now just know theres cyanide and bleach in the cup
ehh
U can get aired n lifted by the chopper..that’s a clip wit 20 shells attached
Deja vu , Then u get air lifted out by the chopper that’s a medi vac
alright cool I have a high appreciation for chopper lines
You’ll be just like my bitxh in the vid if I’m blasting the heat
Tongue out with ur heart all over ya face in the passenger seat
this was fire. And nah this wasn’t the motivation for my bar this week
So what u Champed the league I’m in a league of my own
U was the best when everyone good left, U was in the league all alone
alright, it’s basic but it gets credit because it’s true
Aliases in 2018 ? That’s pathetic as fuck. Ur all gimmick
It’s easy to see how fake u are when even ur name got fruede in it
regardless of how his name is pronounced, this is played on him
Monster in my pocket I call it pikachu when the sparks fly
Beam on the nine look like Darth Vader light saber .. I’ll show u the dark side
I’m super human when I’m taking aim.. nigga I’m Hawkeye
sucks you couldn’t edit in the 4th line here

Vs



Funny as fuck, u swear u thuggin’ it up & living it real
’TIL a G Pop up out the blue, like u at the vid bitch’s gender reveal.
ha nice
Church bells for u & that rat-faced thot u met to fuck
cuffin’ in the Jeep, I’ll be the Justice of the Piece after I wet it up.
mmm idk, had potential but wording hurt it
Tbh I admired yo skill, ‘fore u fell off in the worst way
but now my shots pointed at ya top like a party hat, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
i like the concept but the execution was off, decent here
Grow up & calm it midget, your G-Status nonexistent,
try’na prove ya clout, I’ll have u moving out like ya mom is Trippin
ok not bad
Yo girl ghosts & leads ya on, what an egregious whore
pummel the cakes, as I give her summon the Wraith w/o a Quija board.
shit like that shit like that. Dope.
Perpetuate cyber bullying w/ Me, go ‘head try it fam..
give yo bitch ass a round over that vicious cycle - venn diagram.
alright
I’d really whip yo ass & spin back to change ya mans,
lil bitch u’d piss yourself or die per pull-up, u better wear training pants.
i get it but I don’t like it tbh
Act your age, not ya height, fool don’t do sum’n dumb
cuz I own a gun, my .cal it clap like a Khaled track - ANOTHER ONE.
nah


Close ass battle, both had a good number of ok lines but it’s gonna ball down to this. Victor had 3 hitters in his verse, and I got scad with 2. This could go either way tbh, and I probably would have had scad in this if some of the lines were executed better because the concepts were surely there.

Vote: Victor

Lenox
12-16-2017, 06:55 PM
Vic: house decorating was cool. Medi vac, league all alone was aig

Vs

Sch: Mom trippin, ouija board

Overall: hush had a couple heaters, kinda fell off towards da end tho. Coo battle

Vote: hush

Barcotic
12-17-2017, 08:48 PM
hush had

opener
vid reverence (even tho it was his own)

schad had

justice of the piece
happy bday

weak battle for how many lines yas went
going w/ quote pref
v/Hush