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Orc
12-10-2017, 07:14 AM
Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition


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Alvin Karpis WRATH

Alvin Karpis
12-11-2017, 09:09 PM
inn

WRATH
12-12-2017, 04:19 PM
16

Alvin Karpis
12-13-2017, 09:23 PM
fuckin 16 lol

Time to back it up, I bet you’ll snitch if I whip yo ass enough
This kid is a fake, get rid of the H...you’re a Wrat to us
All these dadcees w/ child proof shit, you a pedo so just stop
Only child proof you know is saved to a hidden folder on your desktop
Some of the best taught me this shit, I was patient and cutthroat
You just wanted to skip ahead, double dutch and jump rope
Ya flow is lame, every nameplay you’ll use is known and played
Your shit is light and you’ll break ya arm tryin to throw some shade
Last week you got clowned, now this is a replay...
You weren’t just a choke artist, Spree fucked you up worse than PJ
All my lines hit direct with disrespect, my shits hot
The closest you’ll come to seeing any bitch in Kar is Vics thot
For xmas I even copped an ugly sweater just to laugh and flex
You’re ugly sweater is 275lbs, morbidly obese, and wreaks after sex
I got 20/20 vision, no fear in him its clear I win
Your 2020 vision is prayin you make a name for yourself on here by then

WRATH
12-14-2017, 01:06 AM
Idgaf about this shit
This aint the justice league so i approach this in an Avenger type manner
i swing that hammer like Thor.. u better get some act right Banner
U got a blockhead like Hawkeye, shit square like a Magnavox
If u Loki Odin I got the Iron Man and that shit could trigger the Ragnarok
Dont u even speak rodent.. and put your head down when i enter the room
If i even hear Alvin Simon Theodore of your rotting corpse will be all anyone remembers of you
You can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya
But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra
Got a old sawed off with new age bullets for this lil stan
I hit you with this lil pump you gon be lil peep, thats dead from a lil xan
Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya
I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator
U not a playa, trying to dance W/me well this glock can train ya
Let off the banger, when these shots hit your body start dancin like ayyy....... Macarena
Even when guns are drawn im trading stocks IRA funds and bonds
How are you on? Only times you bitcoin is after shining shoes dude U the underdog

Barcotic
12-14-2017, 05:48 AM
yo
karp had

wrat to us
child proof
skip ahead
ugly sweater lmao lotb
2020 vision

damn ikno I was rusty too but where was this shit last week? straight verse, pretty consistent. bitch in kar was coo but self hype so I didnt quote

wrath had

bandits
which was pretty good but not much of a diss so it was on par w/ bitch in kar from alvin
steel beam was dece

rest was either forced wp or corny ideas, wrath ur definitely improving tho, keep at it. the perfect blueprint kinda verse to study/elevate off of is ironically ur opponent's here
v/Alvin Karpis

props to both

Habitat
12-14-2017, 07:50 AM
Time to back it up, I bet you’ll snitch if I whip yo ass enough
This kid is a fake, get rid of the H...you’re a Wrat to us
-I like this
All these dadcees w/ child proof shit, you a pedo so just stop
Only child proof you know is saved to a hidden folder on your desktop
-thought this was light
Some of the best taught me this shit, I was patient and cutthroat
You just wanted to skip ahead, double dutch and jump rope
-cool
Ya flow is lame, every nameplay you’ll use is known and played
Your shit is light and you’ll break ya arm tryin to throw some shade
-lol this was good coulda had something more to indicate he's weak or something in the first line but i still thought this was nice
Last week you got clowned, now this is a replay...
You weren’t just a choke artist, Spree fucked you up worse than PJ
-not feelin this
All my lines hit direct with disrespect, my shits hot
The closest you’ll come to seeing any bitch in Kar is Vics thot
-not a huge fan of this
For xmas I even copped an ugly sweater just to laugh and flex
You’re ugly sweater is 275lbs, morbidly obese, and wreaks after sex
-lmao nice
I got 20/20 vision, no fear in him its clear I win
Your 2020 vision is prayin you make a name for yourself on here by then
-nice..

vs

Idgaf about this shit
This aint the justice league so i approach this in an Avenger type manner
i swing that hammer like Thor.. u better get some act right Banner
-not feleing this one
U got a blockhead like Hawkeye, shit square like a Magnavox
If u Loki Odin I got the Iron Man and that shit could trigger the Ragnarok
-not a fan of this either
Dont u even speak rodent.. and put your head down when i enter the room
If i even hear Alvin Simon Theodore of your rotting corpse will be all anyone remembers of you
-this is a reach. I assume u were going for "alvin sigh, man the odor"
You can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya
But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra
-thought this was nice
Got a old sawed off with new age bullets for this lil stan
I hit you with this lil pump you gon be lil peep, thats dead from a lil xan
-not diggin this
Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya
I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator
-this was aight
U not a playa, trying to dance W/me well this glock can train ya
Let off the banger, when these shots hit your body start dancin like ayyy....... Macarena
-i ties in with dance in the first line but other than that nothing witty about this. can't give this one too you... wording was nice tho
Even when guns are drawn im trading stocks IRA funds and bonds
How are you on? Only times you bitcoin is after shining shoes dude U the underdog
-not feelin it

Alvin had a really nice verse with only a couple misses. Wrath had a decent verse too but just didn't do enough to take on Alvin here. Cool battle

v/ Alvin

Aero
12-14-2017, 09:21 AM
AK - child proof was cute, ugly sweater was aight, rest were ok. Ugly sweater I couldn't give props to bc I've done it. Didn't like the west line.

Wrath - haha @ Alvin Theodore line doesn't work but nice try, bandits line was tough, lot of references in this verse should tone that down, steel beam nice.


I enjoyed Wrath's verse more but his misses were worse. I have to go Alvin here with the better verse.

Mvgt AK

ill nik-A
12-14-2017, 06:22 PM
Karp had the better overall verse. Wrath surprised though. But that chipmunks shit was bad even if u did thee. Not good. Steel operator was good. Al had opener and the two last bars

I got Karp

Inno
12-14-2017, 11:57 PM
Wrath

Had some decent stuff the orchestra line was ok and so was
The lil xan line too thought it flowed well. Good vsrse bug you had more
Misses than hits bruh.

Karpis

I can’t you picking up speed already lol. First 4 lines where nice and crisp
That spree spree replay combo was just dope. Thot line ugly sweater
And the closer all nice.

Vote karpis

Saint
12-15-2017, 01:45 AM
Karpis was way more consistent, clean verse....opener was ok. skip was ok. sweater been done, 2020 vision feels done but cool to me....but yo that PJ line latrell sprewell? loool how old is that? Lol.


Wrath had steel beam which was coo, bandit ive seen done so it aint fresh to me but one of your better hits. Alvin Theodore stretched asf but showed creativity.

v- karpis

Amen
12-15-2017, 04:58 PM
fuckin 16 lol

Time to back it up, I bet you’ll snitch if I whip yo ass enough
This kid is a fake, get rid of the H...you’re a Wrat to us
Simple but dope.
All these dadcees w/ child proof shit, you a pedo so just stop
Only child proof you know is saved to a hidden folder on your desktop
Nah, wack.
Some of the best taught me this shit, I was patient and cutthroat
You just wanted to skip ahead, double dutch and jump rope
Again, simple but nice.
Ya flow is lame, every nameplay you’ll use is known and played
Your shit is light and you’ll break ya arm tryin to throw some shade
Wasn't feeling this.
Last week you got clowned, now this is a replay...
You weren’t just a choke artist, Spree fucked you up worse than PJ
Nah...
All my lines hit direct with disrespect, my shits hot
The closest you’ll come to seeing any bitch in Kar is Vics thot
Lol, ok.
For xmas I even copped an ugly sweater just to laugh and flex
You’re ugly sweater is 275lbs, morbidly obese, and wreaks after sex
Lol, bang.
I got 20/20 vision, no fear in him its clear I win
Your 2020 vision is prayin you make a name for yourself on here by then
Lol, good.

Idgaf about this shit
This aint the justice league so i approach this in an Avenger type manner
i swing that hammer like Thor.. u better get some act right Banner
What are you even saying here?
U got a blockhead like Hawkeye, shit square like a Magnavox
If u Loki Odin I got the Iron Man and that shit could trigger the Ragnarok
You must be a comic book nerd.
Dont u even speak rodent.. and put your head down when i enter the room
If i even hear Alvin Simon Theodore of your rotting corpse will be all anyone remembers of you
This has way to much going on in it. Tone it down a notch, bruh.
You can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya
But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra
Ok, so far this is your best bar but a miss. You could have worded this in a manner that insulted your opponent. As is, it's self hype with no direction.
Got a old sawed off with new age bullets for this lil stan
I hit you with this lil pump you gon be lil peep, thats dead from a lil xan
Nah, lol...
Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya
I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator
Nah, too simple of a simile bro...
U not a playa, trying to dance W/me well this glock can train ya
Let off the banger, when these shots hit your body start dancin like ayyy....... Macarena
This was corny.
Even when guns are drawn im trading stocks IRA funds and bonds
How are you on? Only times you bitcoin is after shining shoes dude U the underdog
Over worded and wack.

Karp took this with a more polished verse. Better executed punches. Wratch seems like he has the concept of text battling, just needs to focus an dial in on the mechanics. Work on developing concepts in a more effective/harsher manner.

v/Karp

Cool
12-15-2017, 08:24 PM
Idgaf about this shit
This aint the justice league so i approach this in an Avenger type manner
i swing that hammer like Thor.. u better get some act right Banner

nah

U got a blockhead like Hawkeye, shit square like a Magnavox
If u Loki Odin I got the Iron Man and that shit could trigger the Ragnarok

nah

Dont u even speak rodent.. and put your head down when i enter the room
If i even hear Alvin Simon Theodore of your rotting corpse will be all anyone remembers of you

nah

You can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya
But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra

nah

Got a old sawed off with new age bullets for this lil stan
I hit you with this lil pump you gon be lil peep, thats dead from a lil xan

nah

Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya
I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator

nah

U not a playa, trying to dance W/me well this glock can train ya
Let off the banger, when these shots hit your body start dancin like ayyy....... Macarena

nah

Even when guns are drawn im trading stocks IRA funds and bonds
How are you on? Only times you bitcoin is after shining shoes dude U the underdog

nah

karp wins

this was a no brainer

should of battled aero

stop with the easy comp bullshit

v-karp

Cool
12-15-2017, 08:25 PM
fuckin 16 lol

Time to back it up, I bet you’ll snitch if I whip yo ass enough
This kid is a fake, get rid of the H...you’re a Wrat to us

dope

All these dadcees w/ child proof shit, you a pedo so just stop
Only child proof you know is saved to a hidden folder on your desktop

nah

Some of the best taught me this shit, I was patient and cutthroat
You just wanted to skip ahead, double dutch and jump rope

cool

Ya flow is lame, every nameplay you’ll use is known and played
Your shit is light and you’ll break ya arm tryin to throw some shade

nah

Last week you got clowned, now this is a replay...
You weren’t just a choke artist, Spree fucked you up worse than PJ

okay

All my lines hit direct with disrespect, my shits hot
The closest you’ll come to seeing any bitch in Kar is Vics thot

nah

For xmas I even copped an ugly sweater just to laugh and flex
You’re ugly sweater is 275lbs, morbidly obese, and wreaks after sex

dope

I got 20/20 vision, no fear in him its clear I win
Your 2020 vision is prayin you make a name for yourself on here by then

nah




Idgaf about this shit
This aint the justice league so i approach this in an Avenger type manner
i swing that hammer like Thor.. u better get some act right Banner

nah

U got a blockhead like Hawkeye, shit square like a Magnavox
If u Loki Odin I got the Iron Man and that shit could trigger the Ragnarok

nah

Dont u even speak rodent.. and put your head down when i enter the room
If i even hear Alvin Simon Theodore of your rotting corpse will be all anyone remembers of you

nah

You can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya
But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra

nah

Got a old sawed off with new age bullets for this lil stan
I hit you with this lil pump you gon be lil peep, thats dead from a lil xan

nah

Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya
I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator

nah

U not a playa, trying to dance W/me well this glock can train ya
Let off the banger, when these shots hit your body start dancin like ayyy....... Macarena

nah

Even when guns are drawn im trading stocks IRA funds and bonds
How are you on? Only times you bitcoin is after shining shoes dude U the underdog

nah

karp wins

this was a no brainer

should of battled aero

stop with the easy comp bullshit

v-karp

WRATH
12-15-2017, 08:51 PM
Double posted cause you know you wrong

Chyeahhh!!!
12-15-2017, 10:34 PM
I dug Wraths vs, had a lot of dynamic and creativity.

Karp's attack for the most part was consistent and effective. A few misses

I got Karp with a more direct verse and less misses than wrath

Profit
12-15-2017, 11:09 PM
fuckin 16 lol

Time to back it up, I bet you’ll snitch if I whip yo ass enough
This kid is a fake, get rid of the H...you’re a Wrat to us

Nice

All these dadcees w/ child proof shit, you a pedo so just stop
Only child proof you know is saved to a hidden folder on your desktop

Nah

Some of the best taught me this shit, I was patient and cutthroat
You just wanted to skip ahead, double dutch and jump rope

Dope

Ya flow is lame, every nameplay you’ll use is known and played
Your shit is light and you’ll break ya arm tryin to throw some shade

Ok

Last week you got clowned, now this is a replay...
You weren’t just a choke artist, Spree fucked you up worse than PJ

Fire,

All my lines hit direct with disrespect, my shits hot
The closest you’ll come to seeing any bitch in Kar is Vics thot

Nice

For xmas I even copped an ugly sweater just to laugh and flex
You’re ugly sweater is 275lbs, morbidly obese, and wreaks after sex

Dope

I got 20/20 vision, no fear in him its clear I win
Your 2020 vision is prayin you make a name for yourself on here by then

Cool


Idgaf about this shit
This aint the justice league so i approach this in an Avenger type manner
i swing that hammer like Thor.. u better get some act right Banner

Ok

U got a blockhead like Hawkeye, shit square like a Magnavox
If u Loki Odin I got the Iron Man and that shit could trigger the Ragnarok

Nah

even speak rodent.. and put your head down when i enter the room
If i even hear Alvin Simon Theodore of your rotting corpse will be all anyone remembers of you

Forced

You can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya
But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra

Dope

Got a old sawed off with new age bullets for this lil stan
I hit you with this lil pump you gon be lil peep, thats dead from a lil xan

Nah

Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya
I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator

Nah

U not a playa, trying to dance W/me well this glock can train ya
Let off the banger, when these shots hit your body start dancin like ayyy....... Macarena

Nah

Even when guns are drawn im trading stocks IRA funds and bonds
How are you on? Only times you bitcoin is after shining shoes dude U the underdog

Coulda been good, light as is


Karp was solid af. Wrath had one dope bar n some cool concepts that would been cool if worded better.. karp got it
__________________

Allen Knight
12-15-2017, 11:40 PM
All these dadcees w/ child proof shit, you a pedo so just stop
Only child proof you know is saved to a hidden folder on your desktop
Some of the best taught me this shit, I was patient and cutthroat
You just wanted to skip ahead, double dutch and jump rope
Ya flow is lame, every nameplay you’ll use is known and played
Your shit is light and you’ll break ya arm tryin to throw some shade
Last week you got clowned, now this is a replay...
You weren’t just a choke artist, Spree fucked you up worse than PJ
For xmas I even copped an ugly sweater just to laugh and flex
You’re ugly sweater is 275lbs, morbidly obese, and wreaks after sex


Vs

you can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya
But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra
Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya
I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator


V/Karpis, this was a cool battle but ak went in here tbh...had some dope shit that ugly sweater line was fire.
wrath had acouple of dope lines steel beam was fire, props to both.