For Battling vs Innovator - FB WINS

[Orc]

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For Battling Innovator

[For Battling]

Just 8

[Inno]

Yo

[For Battling]

Innovator

One call & the whole squad pull up. Stop testing my shooters
You’ll see the whole building surrounded by choppers, that’s Wednesday’s at Hooters
I’ll blast u & ur baby. Trust me I’m a rude thug
The Nina’s cute n she’s crazy.. she’ll leave hearts in the air like cartoon love
It’s Xmas at Inno’s House. His kids’ hearts filled with joy & with glee!
“Santa?” No jit, it’s Z! Then their faces lit up as soon as I opened up the toys by the tree
Took your girl to Paris, even told my bros they could join
Had da hoe screamin “ahh, wee wee!” as I showed her the Eiffel Tower w/ my boy
I’ll be on ur balcony posted, prone position on the top floor
Then I let them automatics open up as soon as u get close like garage doors
Ur girls a hustla. She nvr let’s me get the whole thing wen I thump
Said she’d only let me hit that Premium Spotify paid about 10 bucks a month

[Inno]

Fuck this clown we don’t understand you you need more attitude
Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you.
Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint
Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip.
And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez
So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries
I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow
So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe
Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms
And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds

[Larkin]

For Battling.

Had no idea what Hooters was so googled it and got lost in the web for 2 hours.
Cartoon love was nice, killing his kids was nice, not feeling the eiffel tower line, I like the garage line thought it would be played but its new to me, wasn't feelin the closer

Innovator

First line was really poor, no payoff and very wordy. Shadow line was nice but wasn't too hard hitting, I liked it though. Grocery line didn't have anything to it really, and using geez to complete a multi was poor. Rubber grip was ok. Finisher was meh. You seemed to re-use the words lips and seeds alot, like it became noticeable.

I got For B taking this with a better verse and hard punches, Inno I think your style isn't really setup to hit hard. Its nice in places but I wasn't feeling anything hit hard.

[Choice Wordz]

Got For Battling in this one. Apart from the last four, overall better punches and thorough/clever concepts, where Innovator seemed rushed which resulted in forced lines.

[Aero]

FB - hearts in the air was cool delivery lacked a bit though, lol'ed at toys by the tree that's silly but good, automatics was good..

Inno - groceries was cool, pulled the rubber grip niiiiice wish I thought of it


Entertaining battle I like both styles. I've got FB here slight edge.


FB explain chopper bar to me later

[Saint]

Innovator

One call & the whole squad pull up. Stop testing my shooters
You’ll see the whole building surrounded by choppers, that’s Wednesday’s at Hooters

Guess you mean chopper bikes, not sure or its a local thing....but i see where you're going w it ; wording is rushed, but ok line.

I’ll blast u & ur baby. Trust me I’m a rude thug
The Nina’s cute n she’s crazy.. she’ll leave hearts in the air like cartoon love

People were fuccin w this line but on closer inspection I see its kind of easy but cool ides, would hit harder w a more streamlined setup.

It’s Xmas at Inno’s House. His kids’ hearts filled with joy & with glee!
“Santa?” No jit, it’s Z! Then their faces lit up as soon as I opened up the toys by the tree

Cool. Only minor quib is why r u opening their toys?lol I liked the unique angle here, execution a bit sloppy.

Took your girl to Paris, even told my bros they could join
Had da hoe screamin “ahh, wee wee!” as I showed her the Eiffel Tower w/ my boy

Eh. Eiffel tower - cant give it to u as flipped.

I’ll be on ur balcony posted, prone position on the top floor
Then I let them automatics open up as soon as u get close like garage doors

Ok....this decent hit here.

Ur girls a hustla. She nvr let’s me get the whole thing wen I thump
Said she’d only let me hit that Premium Spotify paid about 10 bucks a month

Spotify i seen done....Nice try though but toi familiar to me.


Fuck this clown we don’t understand you you need more attitude
Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you.
Statements. But keen observation.

Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint
Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip.

Coo imagery, clunky setup

And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez
So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries

Nah

I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow
So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe

Its cute. Havent seen it.

Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms
And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds

Too wordy here.


Inno- improved from last week, hope u take thé crit & keep on

V- FB

[sral]

LOL I think he meant he was opening up the toys/guns by the tree.. not actual gifts bruh? Infiltration

[Captain Neckbeard]

Innovator

One call & the whole squad pull up. Stop testing my shooters
You’ll see the whole building surrounded by choppers, that’s Wednesday’s at Hooters

like motorcycles>? is hooters a big biker hangout by ur way? loll STFU

I’ll blast u & ur baby. Trust me I’m a rude thug
The Nina’s cute n she’s crazy.. she’ll leave hearts in the air like cartoon love

tried to rip off vics bar about his girl in the car...ur version wack

It’s Xmas at Inno’s House. His kids’ hearts filled with joy & with glee!
“Santa?” No jit, it’s Z! Then their faces lit up as soon as I opened up the toys by the tree

LMFAO I like this

Took your girl to Paris, even told my bros they could join
Had da hoe screamin “ahh, wee wee!” as I showed her the Eiffel Tower w/ my boy

I want to give u credit for this but ah wee wee ruined it for me

I’ll be on ur balcony posted, prone position on the top floor
Then I let them automatics open up as soon as u get close like garage doors

meh

Ur girls a hustla. She nvr let’s me get the whole thing wen I thump
Said she’d only let me hit that Premium Spotify paid about 10 bucks a month

lol dope




Fuck this clown we don’t understand you you need more attitude
Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you.

light

Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint
Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip.

ayyyyyyyyy lmao

And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez
So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries

set up played and punchline light

I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow
So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe

this ok

Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms
And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds

lmfaooo



for battling was all around stronger here but I always enjoy a good punchline about zelphs mangled lip

v fb

[Amen]

For the record, I'm going to read For Battlings verse in For Battlings way of reading.

Innovator

One call & the whole squad pull up. Stop testing my shooters
You’ll see the whole building surrounded by choppers, that’s Wednesday’s at Hooters
Another chopper bar this week, so cool. I hate "THAT" bars tho... This was wack regardless.
I’ll blast u & ur baby. Trust me I’m a rude thug
The Nina’s cute n she’s crazy.. she’ll leave hearts in the air like cartoon love
Ok. Slightly wordy but ok.
It’s Xmas at Inno’s House. His kids’ hearts filled with joy & with glee!
“Santa?” No jit, it’s Z! Then their faces lit up as soon as I opened up the toys by the tree
Wordy but ok again...
Took your girl to Paris, even told my bros they could join
Had da hoe screamin “ahh, wee wee!” as I showed her the Eiffel Tower w/ my boy
Join/boy rhyme? That LIP got your vocab all fucked up, bruh...
I’ll be on ur balcony posted, prone position on the top floor
Then I let them automatics open up as soon as u get close like garage doors
Prone position lol... Lay call of duty much? FAGGOT... Concept was simple and basic... Similes have to be creative & dope and this was not.
Ur girls a hustla. She nvr let’s me get the whole thing wen I thump
Said she’d only let me hit that Premium Spotify paid about 10 bucks a month
Oh look, a SPOT IF I word play again lol... Nah homie, this concept was played the day spotify when viral.

Fuck this clown we don’t understand you you need more attitude
Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you.
Had you put more thought/wit in to this it could of landed nicely.
Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint
Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip.
Mehhhhhhh - don't like it.
And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez
So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries
Nah...
I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow
So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe
2 Bars back to back about his girl kills any impact this could've had IF it was dope. Just redundant bro... Try and mix it up a bit.
Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms
And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds
Nah...

Inno improving by the week, I see. Just need to use some of his creative talents he uses when writing man poems and formulate insults instead of writing about mother nature, ocean views and inner depression lol. Nah but seriously, add some creativity to your verse Inno with some witty harsh insults and you'll be straight. Zelph still wack but he edged this one out. He had 2 close to decent bars.

v/FOR Battuhlen.

[Profit]

One call & the whole squad pull up. Stop testing my shooters
You’ll see the whole building surrounded by choppers, that’s Wednesday’s at Hooters

Didn't like this

I’ll blast u & ur baby. Trust me I’m a rude thug
The Nina’s cute n she’s crazy.. she’ll leave hearts in the air like cartoon love

Dope

It’s Xmas at Inno’s House. His kids’ hearts filled with joy & with glee!
“Santa?” No jit, it’s Z! Then their faces lit up as soon as I opened up the toys by the tree

Niiice!

Took your girl to Paris, even told my bros they could join
Had da hoe screamin “ahh, wee wee!” as I showed her the Eiffel Tower w/ my boy

Nah

I’ll be on ur balcony posted, prone position on the top floor
Then I let them automatics open up as soon as u get close like garage doors

Dope!

Ur girls a hustla. She nvr let’s me get the whole thing wen I thump
Said she’d only let me hit that Premium Spotify paid about 10 bucks a month

Ok


Fuck this clown we don’t understand you you need more attitude
Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you.

Nah,

Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint
Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip.

Lol,

And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez
So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries

Set up nice punch weak

I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow
So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe

Cool

Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms
And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds

Nah

For landed a couple mire here plus I he had the better ones so I got for battling taking this..

[Allen Knight]

One call & the whole squad pull up. Stop testing my shooters
You’ll see the whole building surrounded by choppers, that’s Wednesday’s at Hooters
^^ok good opener
I’ll blast u & ur baby. Trust me I’m a rude thug
The Nina’s cute n she’s crazy.. she’ll leave hearts in the air like cartoon love
^^^nice
It’s Xmas at Inno’s House. His kids’ hearts filled with joy & with glee!
“Santa?” No jit, it’s Z! Then their faces lit up as soon as I opened up the toys by the tree
^^nah came off corny as fuck lol
Took your girl to Paris, even told my bros they could join
Had da hoe screamin “ahh, wee wee!” as I showed her the Eiffel Tower w/ my boy
^^^nah super corny
I’ll be on ur balcony posted, prone position on the top floor
Then I let them automatics open up as soon as u get close like garage doors
^^^solid bar
Ur girls a hustla. She nvr let’s me get the whole thing wen I thump
Said she’d only let me hit that Premium Spotify paid about 10 bucks a month
^^^nah l ready use a Spotify line 3 yrs ago, this pretty played

Vs


Fuck this clown we don’t understand you you need more attitude
Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you.
^^^ehh bland tbh
Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint
Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip.
^^^Lmfao good
And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez
So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries
^^^nah
I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow
So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe
^^^decent
Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms
And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds
^^^nah


V/lip pratt, this was a cool lil battle, inno is gettin better i see him being
pretty good at the end of the season if he does more bars like the spark the fifth.
lip had solid verse acouple of good lines. props to both.

[Lenox]

Zelph: hooters lol

Vs

Innovator: not feelin anything here mane

Overall: shit battle

Vote: for battling

[Destroyer]

Jesus Christ I have to vote for zelph?
Fuck u inno for doing this to me
lippy got this one tho opener, nina, garage doors were decent
Inno had lip shadow which of course is lolz, think your execution killed the 2 lips line, it had potential, but disappointed cause I’m sure you’re capable of beating zelph

V/sippy cup