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Orc
12-10-2017, 07:16 AM
Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition


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Aero Choice Wordz

Aero
12-10-2017, 09:14 AM
10

Choice Wordz
12-11-2017, 01:09 PM
Fine with that. It’s on

The mandatory 3 votes, is that for week 2 battles? Orc

Orc
12-12-2017, 11:04 AM
Yes

Choice Wordz
12-14-2017, 05:49 PM
Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain
Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey
On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre
This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off
I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language
Aero

Aero
12-14-2017, 10:32 PM
Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"
I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps
Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority
4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet
A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother

For Battling
12-14-2017, 11:32 PM
Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain
lol cute
Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey
but nah
On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre
right idea but wasn’t good
This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off
snother One where you had the right idea but wasn’t good
I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language
this was cool, props

Choice: Sup bro, this wasn’t bad at all for somebody who seemingly just began text. Tbh I think you have a lot of potential and I’d like to see you post a lot more & remain active in here. As far as verse quality overall, definitely could have gotten more creative and thrown harsher punches but you had the right idea. You’ll improve for next time I’m sure.



Vs



Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"
made me lol
I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps
lol’s all over the place aero!
Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority
alright
4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet
this was dope
A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother
lmao I knew you would

Aero I love your set ups, probably have the best set up swagger in the game right now. Good verse


Vote: Aero

Saint
12-14-2017, 11:43 PM
Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain
eh basic.

Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey
again, simple but eh its a start.

On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre
nah
This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off
nah. Been done.
I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language
more braggin than diss.
Flow & swag were coo
Aero

Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"
good flip on thé name, pretty dialed in.
I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps
gay but ok
Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority
more associative than connecting an are keys, atoll mot bad
4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet
cool, scratch this off my concept list
A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother
ok

Aero easily imo. Every line was put together better.

vote aero.

Inno
12-14-2017, 11:46 PM
I got Choices opener vs Aeros

Opener
Anarchies line
Transporting pets

Vote aero

Saitama
12-15-2017, 12:02 AM
Will vote

Profit
12-15-2017, 03:46 AM
Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain

Ok

Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey

Light

On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre

Nah

This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off

Nah,
I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language

Not much of a diss



Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"

Dope

I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps

Lol

Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority

Cool

4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet

Dope

A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother

Nice


I got aero here with a solid verse.. seemed choice was a little incomplete plus lacked insults.. vote aero

ill nik-A
12-15-2017, 06:17 AM
Choice wordz.... flowed well with the shortness but the concepts need better development

Aero, opener and pets were dope.. anarchy was really bad lmao

E Tha Real
12-15-2017, 11:16 AM
This was lopsided Choice needs to work on developing a direct punch with a set-up. He’s all over the place. Aero took this easily the biceps & pet line were heavy hitters; nice showing!

V-aero

Cred
12-15-2017, 12:37 PM
Keep wordz out ur mouth like sign language was cool. You’ve got the right idea fam, jus need to formulate those lines into harsher hitting ones. Fucking wit the style tho bro.

Vs


The only line I didn’t like was the anarchy one but even that was decent. Aero u seem to look in top form, I see u fam. Holes in the box and that closer we’re bonkers to keep it skreet.


Vote - Aero

Captain Neckbeard
12-15-2017, 01:46 PM
Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain

little style on this but played as fuck .

Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey

light

On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre

played

This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off

played since the movie from the 90s....the 90s dude

I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language

how u gonna drop a played name play on ur own name smh

Aero



Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"

lmfao gone

I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps

lmao why u write these gay lines tho this shit SUSS

Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority

fire...and mad funny lol

4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet

saw this coming midway thru....its ok I guess

A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother

lol of course ud write one of these


had aero in a clean body tbc wordz shit was all played shit minus the current event flip w kev spacey which I thought was only mediocre...aero was light years ahead from a wording and creativity perspective, overall just entirely more enjoyable to read.

v aero

Amen
12-15-2017, 05:03 PM
Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain
Nah.
Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey
Eh, light.
On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre
Nah...
This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off
Nah.
I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language
Dated concept.
Aero

Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"
Lol, ok.
I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps
Gay.
Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority
Light.
4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet
Bang.
A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother
Chigga... Come on bro.

AERO took this. Wordz needs to work on developing his concepts in to more effective/harsher punches.

v/Aero

Schadenfreude
12-15-2017, 05:57 PM
VOTE AERO Choice needs a lot of elevating & developing. Aero had his usual humor & cleverness, ran away w/ this win fairly easy.

Cool
12-15-2017, 08:11 PM
Money, I ain’t shy a buck, the barrels maim your narrow frame
Choice spice it up, I’m fly as what n’ Aero plain

nah

Your house of cards vs. A380... Wordz plenty crazy
You tryna Pres for some gay ish... like Kevin Spacey

nah

On top of your mindstate, crisp as Frito Lay
I’ll stay rocking your dome like Beats by Dre

nah

This dude way soft, round stitched up like baseballs
Hit with napalm n’ leave your face off in this face-off

nah

I’m outta this universe, you outta this planet, vanished
Now, keep Wordz out your mouth like sign language

nah
Aero




Give me a break, this is a waste, makes it tough to rhyme
I feel like Orc said I've got Choice Wordz for you & those were "fuck your time"

dope

I trust my nine, chain's untucked I'm fine, hell I don't mind threats
He did try pulling up on me while I was flexing - lifting himself on my biceps

nah

Your girl gave me & my guys a set of keys, there's no ignoring me
Anarchies working in your crib nigga we're taking away all your authority

nah

4 in his chest, at the funeral strapped while they're mourning his death
I'll put so many holes in his box you'd think they were transporting a pet

fire

A known blunder, for pay catch you in traffic, I keep the chrome brother
You crying while I'm shooting you in the car for money like Keaton Jones mother

nah

aero won easy

choice sucks

give aero a tougher opponent next time

v-aero