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Orc
12-18-2017, 03:49 PM
Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition


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Habitat E Tha Real

Habitat
12-18-2017, 04:04 PM
check

Habitat
12-19-2017, 11:47 AM
news lately is this dudes lady never gets fucked
Introduce media girl and she'll get full coverage.. from her neck up
u never get w/ ho's who're smokin', this jerk's a disgrace
and when the ratchet thots put out, he leaves w/ cigarette burns on his face
got a hunger for violence, don't doubt I'll end E while in public
Or bulimia full banana clip also gettin emptied into your stomach
ur so garbage tier its Shocking, fuck the predictions n hunches
there's no way E'll Land a zinger w/ them Watered down punches
ur lazy n u don't sink ur teeth into shit, ur an insult to rap w/ ur methods
so you won't put a Dentin my record even if ur biting the bulk of it from legends

10 E Tha Real

E Tha Real
12-20-2017, 08:12 AM
what are the chances of getting a battle with him next week? Or the week after

Horny for bye-weeks wins against netcees resident punching bag is sneaky
Asking to battle Lenox, proves Orc needs a competition committee and it's week 3
Tried to front you beat fuckboy every match & he linked up the actual facts
Drowning in his cesspool of lies... Is the only time you'll see a Natural habitat
Hungry for one played concept to hit, verses got that has-been textcee look
If you dropped one powerline, I'd author a best seller on solar energy book
I got more simple and easy quotes in under 5 minutes than Geico man
while you couldn't be in the Drivers seat, playing the role of Kylo Ren
Why go tit for tat? if he saw hairy nipple action this guy would implode
Only time I seen Fresh Produce, is when this Mexicans on the side of the road

Aero
12-20-2017, 11:11 AM
Hab - media coverage was cool, ratchet pull out was cool because of the set up, rest were nice concepts that could've been executed a tad better. Liked this verse though.

E the - Kylo Ren seems like it's dope but I don't get it, I know he was young Vader in Star Wars ... tit for tat set up was weird but produce punch was cool.


Hab wins here. Better punches and the misses were better. Cool battle.

Lenox
12-20-2017, 11:18 AM
Fresh: wasn’t feeling the first two, basically concept wise it was wack. Last 3 were good tho, zinger was especially fire tho, yeesh.

Vs

E: ren was decent. The rest was trash, the whole verse was literally about me and fresh’s beef yesterday. Lol

Overall: thought e had Kylo ren going for him but it coulda been better, fresh outpunched him in the last 3. With 3 straight hits

Vote: habjob

Hawk
12-20-2017, 02:58 PM
Like the other battle I read there wasn't anything that really gave the screwface here.

Habitat's zinger line was dope. It read a little awkward but still landed imo. And the media bar was cool. Rest of the verse was meh with wording being a problem throughout (like the bulimia into your stomach bar, since technically bulimia is getting food OUT of your stomach)

Not a bad verse by any means, just wasn't feeling it outside those two bars.

As for E

Wasn't really feeling the verse at the beginning. The natural habitat line had potential but was ruined by wording,

Was hyped when I read this "Hungry for one played concept to hit, verses got that has-been textcee look
If you dropped one powerline" and was looking forward to the haymaker and got real disappointed.

Kylo Ren bar was dope, and despite the racism the closer was well executed too.


These battles have been tough to judge so far, both very close with equal number of bars I liked.

E's setups always seemed a little forced or disconnected from the bunch, and Habitat's misses were a bit better than E's misses.

Vote - Habitat

WRATH
12-20-2017, 08:00 PM
news lately is this dudes lady never gets fucked
Introduce media girl and she'll get full coverage.. from her neck up

Solid

u never get w/ ho's who're smokin', this jerk's a disgrace
and when the ratchet thots put out, he leaves w/ cigarette burns on his face

Okay

got a hunger for violence, don't doubt I'll end E while in public
Or bulimia full banana clip also gettin emptied into your stomach

Off but I see where your going

ur so garbage tier its Shocking, fuck the predictions n hunches
there's no way E'll Land a zinger w/ them Watered down punches

Eh

ur lazy n u don't sink ur teeth into shit, ur an insult to rap w/ ur methods
so you won't put a Dentin my record even if ur biting the bulk of it from legends

Nah

10 E Tha Real


Horny for bye-weeks wins against netcees resident punching bag is sneakyfat wife
Asking to battle Lenox, proves Orc needs a competition committee and it's week 3

Eh

Tried to front you beat fuckboy every match & he linked up the actual facts
Drowning in his cesspool of lies... Is the only time you'll see a Natural habitatfat wife

Okay

Hungry for one played concept to hit, verses got that has-been textcee look
If you dropped one powerline, I'd author a best seller on solar energy book

Way off when it shouldn't have been

I got more simple and easy quotes in under 5 minutes than Geico man
while you couldn't be in the Drivers seat, playing the role of Kylo Renfat wife

Okay...

Why go tit for tat? if he saw hairy nipple action this guy would implodefat wife
Only time I seen Fresh Produce, is when this Mexicans on the side of the road

Okay



V habitat

Amen
12-21-2017, 08:49 AM
news lately is this dudes lady never gets fucked
Introduce media girl and she'll get full coverage.. from her neck up
This needed a harsher execution.
u never get w/ ho's who're smokin', this jerk's a disgrace
and when the ratchet thots put out, he leaves w/ cigarette burns on his face
Didn't like this one.
got a hunger for violence, don't doubt I'll end E while in public
Or bulimia full banana clip also gettin emptied into your stomach
Same as opening bar. I liked this one better, tbh. The execution was just soft.
ur so garbage tier its Shocking, fuck the predictions n hunches
there's no way E'll Land a zinger w/ them Watered down punches
My EEL WP/NP used on him was much better.
ur lazy n u don't sink ur teeth into shit, ur an insult to rap w/ ur methods
so you won't put a Dentin my record even if ur biting the bulk of it from legends
Dentin is an outdated WP.

10 E Tha Real

Horny for bye-weeks wins against netcees resident punching bag is sneaky
Asking to battle Lenox, proves Orc needs a competition committee and it's week 3
The fuck?
Tried to front you beat fuckboy every match & he linked up the actual facts
Drowning in his cesspool of lies... Is the only time you'll see a Natural habitat
This had potential.
Hungry for one played concept to hit, verses got that has-been textcee look
If you dropped one powerline, I'd author a best seller on solar energy book
Power line concept had potential.
I got more simple and easy quotes in under 5 minutes than Geico man
while you couldn't be in the Drivers seat, playing the role of Kylo Ren
Nah.
Why go tit for tat? if he saw hairy nipple action this guy would implode
Only time I seen Fresh Produce, is when this Mexicans on the side of the road
Mad played on him. You aren't active enough to know that tho so w/e.

v/fresh - He had the better verse.

Profit
12-21-2017, 11:54 PM
news lately is this dudes lady never gets fucked
Introduce media girl and she'll get full coverage.. from her neck up

Ha dope

u never get w/ ho's who're smokin', this jerk's a disgrace
and when the ratchet thots put out, he leaves w/ cigarette burns on his face

Nah

got a hunger for violence, don't doubt I'll end E while in public
Or bulimia full banana clip also gettin emptied into your stomach

sorda forced

ur so garbage tier its Shocking, fuck the predictions n hunches
there's no way E'll Land a zinger w/ them Watered down punches

Cool

ur lazy n u don't sink ur teeth into shit, ur an insult to rap w/ ur methods
so you won't put a Dentin my record even if ur biting the bulk of it from legends

Ok


Horny for bye-weeks wins against netcees resident punching bag is sneaky
Asking to battle Lenox, proves Orc needs a competition committee and it's week 3

Nah

Tried to front you beat fuckboy every match & he linked up the actual facts
Drowning in his cesspool of lies... Is the only time you'll see a Natural habitat

This coulda been nice,

Hungry for one played concept to hit, verses got that has-been textcee look
If you dropped one powerline, I'd author a best seller on solar energy book

Liked this


I got more simple and easy quotes in under 5 minutes than Geico man
while you couldn't be in the Drivers seat, playing the role of Kylo Ren

Ehh

Why go tit for tat? if he saw hairy nipple action this guy would implode
Only time I seen Fresh Produce, is when this Mexicans on the side of the road

I'm assuming he's fresh also? If so this cool


Close here, think habitat was a little bit more consistent.. enuff to edge this.. vote habitat

For Battling
12-23-2017, 07:50 AM
news lately is this dudes lady never gets fucked
Introduce media girl and she'll get full coverage.. from her neck up
alright
u never get w/ ho's who're smokin', this jerk's a disgrace
and when the ratchet thots put out, he leaves w/ cigarette burns on his face
no lol
got a hunger for violence, don't doubt I'll end E while in public
Or bulimia full banana clip also gettin emptied into your stomach
ouuu this was nice, Barcotic take notes
ur so garbage tier its Shocking, fuck the predictions n hunches
there's no way E'll Land a zinger w/ them Watered down punches
nah forced
ur lazy n u don't sink ur teeth into shit, ur an insult to rap w/ ur methods
so you won't put a Dentin my record even if ur biting the bulk of it from legends
whos dentin lol, decent I guess

Vs


Horny for bye-weeks wins against netcees resident punching bag is sneaky
Asking to battle Lenox, proves Orc needs a competition committee and it's week 3
nah
Tried to front you beat fuckboy every match & he linked up the actual facts
Drowning in his cesspool of lies... Is the only time you'll see a Natural habitat
wasnt feeling this
Hungry for one played concept to hit, verses got that has-been textcee look
If you dropped one powerline, I'd author a best seller on solar energy book
had potential but you finished it weird
I got more simple and easy quotes in under 5 minutes than Geico man
while you couldn't be in the Drivers seat, playing the role of Kylo REN
ok
Why go tit for tat? if he saw hairy nipple action this guy would implode
Only time I seen Fresh Produce, is when this Mexicans on the side of the road
lol this was cool


Closer than I expected, e the real coulda had it if he had like 1 more good bar, but habitat had better misses and his hits were fresher

Vote Habitit

Flow
12-23-2017, 01:06 PM
Opener vs the closer for me

Tbh really close an im going to edge it on a coin flip an say habitat but tbh felt both lacked execution on some creative concepts.

Cool
12-23-2017, 06:11 PM
news lately is this dudes lady never gets fucked
Introduce media girl and she'll get full coverage.. from her neck up

dope

u never get w/ ho's who're smokin', this jerk's a disgrace
and when the ratchet thots put out, he leaves w/ cigarette burns on his face

nah

got a hunger for violence, don't doubt I'll end E while in public
Or bulimia full banana clip also gettin emptied into your stomach

nice

ur so garbage tier its Shocking, fuck the predictions n hunches
there's no way E'll Land a zinger w/ them Watered down punches

nah

ur lazy n u don't sink ur teeth into shit, ur an insult to rap w/ ur methods
so you won't put a Dentin my record even if ur biting the bulk of it from legends

cool

10 E Tha Real




Horny for bye-weeks wins against netcees resident punching bag is sneaky
Asking to battle Lenox, proves Orc needs a competition committee and it's week 3

nah lmao wtf

Tried to front you beat fuckboy every match & he linked up the actual facts
Drowning in his cesspool of lies... Is the only time you'll see a Natural habitat

nah

Hungry for one played concept to hit, verses got that has-been textcee look
If you dropped one powerline, I'd author a best seller on solar energy book

nah

I got more simple and easy quotes in under 5 minutes than Geico man
while you couldn't be in the Drivers seat, playing the role of Kylo Ren

nah

Why go tit for tat? if he saw hairy nipple action this guy would implode
Only time I seen Fresh Produce, is when this Mexicans on the side of the road

nah

habitat wins

dude had reaches

but i let them slide

e the real was bad

not a good verse

v-habitat