Profit vs Chyeahh!!! - PROFIT WINS

[Orc]

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Profit @Chyeahh!!!

[Profit]

Checking in. 10's good

[Profit]

Imma school this dummy, makin bad investments is why u is bummy
Listen, how u posta handle Profit.. when ur fuckin notorious fa losin, money
I'll abuse ya honey, turn a sweet girl into dudes payin to fuck her
I mean I'll have ya Broad Up in the streets like she was Raised In The Gutter
AR to ya dome, I want the few chips this bitch is saving
So when I bring the sticks out u better come w/the paper.. stupid officiating
Ur too pussy to square up, so I'll grab anything to ensure u die, b
See I ain't gotta be a supreme boxer to choke u to death w/ur tai chi
Imma boss hommie, n the way u lost last week means I ain't even tryin
Cos not only is facin me a bold challenge.. but dog u couldn't even beat defiant

[Chyeahhh!!!]

where yah manners? there's only room for 1 profit on the lime
yah 10's may be good but got AIDS and will die at the drop of a dime
I'd knock this dick head out if he ever stood beside me
when I get in this bag, the ambo's gonna put you in yours and then ZUYZ
nigga, I'm known to flip in the ring like Prince Naseem
or I can hit you from long range and put you in a scope like Jimmy Iovine
yah bitch fall asleep before you hit cuz you give her twat zzZzz
she say you discharge before you slide in and bust..fuckin cock tease
I'm the slickest, and yah lines is too wishy washy to test my nerve
fair warning, they'll find you N' your bitch in a ditch, respect the curve

[WRATH]

Imma school this dummy, makin bad investments is why u is bummy
Listen, how u posta handle Profit.. when ur fuckin notorious fa losin, money

Ehh okay

I'll abuse ya honey, turn a sweet girl into dudes payin to fuck her
I mean I'll have ya Broad Up in the streets like she was Raised In The Gutter

Nice

AR to ya dome, I want the few chips this bitch is saving
So when I bring the sticks out u better come w/the paper.. stupid officiating

Okay..

Ur too pussy to square up, so I'll grab anything to ensure u die, b
See I ain't gotta be a supreme boxer to choke u to death w/ur tai chi

Stretch

Imma boss hommie, n the way u lost last week means I ain't even tryin
Cos not only is facin me a bold challenge.. but dog u couldn't even beat defiant

Light


where yah manners? there's only room for 1 profit on the lime
yah 10's may be good but got AIDS and will die at the drop of a dime

Okay..

I'd knock this dick head out if he ever stood beside me
when I get in this bag, the ambo's gonna put you in yours and then ZUYZ

Probably good?

nigga, I'm known to flip in the ring like Prince Naseem
or I can hit you from long range and put you in a scope like Jimmy Iovine

Okay

yah bitch fall asleep before you hit cuz you give her twat zzZzz
she say you discharge before you slide in and bust..fuckin cock tease

Ehhhhh

I'm the slickest, and yah lines is too wishy washy to test my nerve
fair warning, they'll find you N' your bitch in a ditch, respect the curve

Nah



Broad up vs nothing

V profit

[Hawk]

Imma school this dummy, makin bad investments is why u is bummy
Listen, how u posta handle Profit.. when ur fuckin notorious fa losin, money

^^^ Seems like the obvious flip on your own name. I don't like to call things played unless I've personally seen them a lot, but this has to be played.

I'll abuse ya honey, turn a sweet girl into dudes payin to fuck her
I mean I'll have ya Broad Up in the streets like she was Raised In The Gutter

^^^ meh... nothing really clever here. You're going to pimp his girl... what else?

AR to ya dome, I want the few chips this bitch is saving
So when I bring the sticks out u better come w/the paper.. stupid officiating

^^^ Not bad.

Ur too pussy to square up, so I'll grab anything to ensure u die, b
See I ain't gotta be a supreme boxer to choke u to death w/ur tai chi

^^^ This could have actually been super dope. But boxing/tai chi don't really fit. I know Supreme is a brand, so maybe that's where the punch is coming from and it's over my head. But imo if you said something about martial arts instead of boxing this would have been fire. Still a good punch regardless.

Imma boss hommie, n the way u lost last week means I ain't even tryin
Cos not only is facin me a bold challenge.. but dog u couldn't even beat defiant

^^^ I get the attempt here. And it wasn't bad. But the execution was a little sloppy.




Seems like a pretty quick written. I wasn't a big fan of a lot of your verse other than the tai chi bar, which was dope.

where yah manners? there's only room for 1 profit on the lime
yah 10's may be good but got AIDS and will die at the drop of a dime

^^^ Wording made this lose impact imo.

I'd knock this dick head out if he ever stood beside me
when I get in this bag, the ambo's gonna put you in yours and then ZUYZ

^^^ Must be over my head. I don't get this.

nigga, I'm known to flip in the ring like Prince Naseem
or I can hit you from long range and put you in a scope like Jimmy Iovine

^^^ Meh in a scope/interscope done to death.

yah bitch fall asleep before you hit cuz you give her twat zzZzz
she say you discharge before you slide in and bust..fuckin cock tease

^^^ Pause. Not but for real I don't even know what happened here. Did you throw a sleeping onomatopoeia in there just for a rhyme? Not a fan.

I'm the slickest, and yah lines is too wishy washy to test my nerve
fair warning, they'll find you N' your bitch in a ditch, respect the curve

^^^ Nah



I'm not sure if you're from another country or something, and I'm just not familiar enough to catch your punches, but tbh this verse was kind of hard to get through. Need more impact in your punches, and it helps if they make sense.



Vote - Profit. His verse was rushed but it was still a pretty clear victory here.

[Lenox]

Profit: tie chi was okay, the rest wasn’t very good

Ca

Chey: jimmy iovine. Rest was terrible

Overall: extremely shit battle. I thought it was still pretty close. Both misses were bad but profit had the better misses. Easily

Vote: profit

[Basic M]

Imma school this dummy, makin bad investments is why u is bummy
Listen, how u posta handle Profit.. when ur fuckin notorious fa losin, money
I'll abuse ya honey, turn a sweet girl into dudes payin to fuck her
I mean I'll have ya Broad Up in the streets like she was Raised In The Gutter
AR to ya dome, I want the few chips this bitch is saving
So when I bring the sticks out u better come w/the paper.. stupid officiating
---WASNT DIGGIN THE OPENER OR THAT GUTTER BAR, NOTHIN MUCH GOIN' ON, STUPID OFFICIATING WAS COOL
Ur too pussy to square up, so I'll grab anything to ensure u die, b
See I ain't gotta be a supreme boxer to choke u to death w/ur tai chi
Imma boss hommie, n the way u lost last week means I ain't even tryin
Cos not only is facin me a bold challenge.. but dog u couldn't even beat defiant
---TAI CHI WAS NICE, CLOSER WAS BLAH

Vs

where yah manners? there's only room for 1 profit on the lime
yah 10's may be good but got AIDS and will die at the drop of a dime
I'd knock this dick head out if he ever stood beside me
when I get in this bag, the ambo's gonna put you in yours and then ZUYZ
nigga, I'm known to flip in the ring like Prince Naseem
or I can hit you from long range and put you in a scope like Jimmy Iovin
---DISLIKE OPENER, ZUYZ? NOT FOLLOWIN', JIMMY LOVIN WAS A BETTER ATTEMPT, LIGHT AT BEST
yah bitch fall asleep before you hit cuz you give her twat zzZzz
she say you discharge before you slide in and bust..fuckin cock tease
I'm the slickest, and yah lines is too wishy washy to test my nerve
fair warning, they'll find you N' your bitch in a ditch, respect the curve
---IDK MAN, NOT DIGGIN THE CONCEPTS OR EXECUTION ON THESE LAST 2

V/PROFIT...BETTER HITS AND ATTEMPTS

[For Battling]

Imma school this dummy, makin bad investments is why u is bummy
Listen, how u posta handle Profit.. when ur fuckin notorious fa losin, money
nice
I'll abuse ya honey, turn a sweet girl into dudes payin to fuck her
I mean I'll have ya Broad Up in the streets like she was Raised In The Gutter
ok
AR to ya dome, I want the few chips this bitch is saving
So when I bring the sticks out u better come w/the paper.. stupid officiating
nah
Ur too pussy to square up, so I'll grab anything to ensure u die, b
See I ain't gotta be a supreme boxer to choke u to death w/ur tai chi
this was cool
Imma boss hommie, n the way u lost last week means I ain't even tryin
Cos not only is facin me a bold challenge.. but dog u couldn't even beat defiant
nah

Vs


where yah manners? there's only room for 1 profit on the lime
yah 10's may be good but got AIDS and will die at the drop of a dime
wasnt feelinthis
I'd knock this dick head out if he ever stood beside me
when I get in this bag, the ambo's gonna put you in yours and then ZUYZ
meh this was weird
nigga, I'm known to flip in the ring like Prince Naseem
or I can hit you from long range and put you in a scope like Jimmy Iovine
alright
yah bitch fall asleep before you hit cuz you give her twat zzZzz
she say you discharge before you slide in and bust..fuckin cock tease
wording and execution killed any potential for this
I'm the slickest, and yah lines is too wishy washy to test my nerve
fair warning, they'll find you N' your bitch in a ditch, respect the curve
no

Don’t know what Chyeahh been on lately, but profit had some good lines and he takes this pretty cleanly.

Vote Profit