Incredible vs Mr. J - Mr J WINS

[Orc]

Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

Incredible Mr. J

[Incredible]

I'm surprised your still in this boi the 3rd KO gon make him quit!
You never gonna ball or be a legend in this game even if your ass got a doctorate!!(Dr.J)
I kicked the Everyday Struggle years ago, while Mr still an average Joe!
Touched the Budden on ya bitch puss n her ass made a hole...then made the whore go Eat at Moes!!
He was quick to go searching when he heard Eminem uses grindr!
Ol Ken Keniff dick shinner, only text battles to show how much he sucks n it's a constant reminder!!
Your much better in the topical realm
Writing about trips to hell!
I'm above you like a father figure cause your more disappointing than Wilson w/ Ed Helm!!
Your best win was when I no showed you in the AOWL and that's real!
They say the truth hurts, that's fine cause now you can see how them facts feel!!

[Mr. J]

Incredible...that name seems retarded from any perspective.
You were outraged & told your parents special is subjective
the holidays are rough on you when your relatives walk in.
youre sitting there in your chair dying inside like I JUST WANT TO LOG IN
I bet you have this vivid imagination about starting a text crew.
& when you finally pull it together you learn that no one accepts you.
you spent years putting words together about your lost prose.
all the concepts you digging up could never fill up your plot holes.
got ya fingers shivering over the keys like this must be life.
the only lines you laid out that hit hard were off your junkie knife.
come get ya jersey blown in half when I get violent
fuck calling this sucker a memory, call him the next Kobe Bryant

[For Battling]

Goneeeeee @ tag. Come get this rep whoever did it


I'm surprised your still in this boi the 3rd KO gon make him quit!
You never gonna ball or be a legend in this game even if your ass got a doctorate!!(Dr.J)
doctorate....I’m unsure if you’re trying to force in a wp (doctor j) which clearly isn’t how doctorate is pronounced, either way the concept doesn’t work and NEVER put anything in parenthesis in your verse trying to explain what you want to say
I kicked the Everyday Struggle years ago, while Mr still an average Joe!
Touched the Budden on ya bitch puss n her ass made a hole...then made the whore go Eat at Moes!!
the first and second line have no correlation with each other, also eat at moe’s is the most random thing you could ever say, like you’re just reaching for random rhymes at that point
He was quick to go searching when he heard Eminem uses grindr!
Ol Ken Keniff dick shinner, only text battles to show how much he sucks n it's a constant reminder!!
is the Eminem reference even true? If not then this was just poor, if so then why didn’t you do more with that? The second line was just wack tbh man
Your much better in the topical realm
Writing about trips to hell!
I'm above you like a father figure cause your more disappointing than Wilson w/ Ed Helm!!
again with the first and second line not having anything to do with each other. See now if you had stuck to the concept in the first line (topical realm) and used that as the punch in your closer then maybe it could have worked in a way
Your best win was when I no showed you in the AOWL and that's real!
They say the truth hurts, that's fine cause now you can see how them facts feel!!
truth hurts - facts feel was probably the best thing about this verse bro. But in this day in age you’re gonna need to be more witty and clever with your punches if you wanna get wins

Vs


Incredible...that name seems retarded from any perspective.
You were outraged & told your parents special is subjective
nah
the holidays are rough on you when your relatives walk in.
youre sitting there in your chair dying inside like I JUST WANT TO LOG IN
this was corny but funny lol
I bet you have this vivid imagination about starting a text crew.
& when you finally pull it together you learn that no one accepts you.
ehh
you spent years putting words together about your lost prose.
all the concepts you digging up could never fill up your plot holes.
dope
got ya fingers shivering over the keys like this must be life.
the only lines you laid out that hit hard were off your junkie knife.
ok
come get ya jersey blown in half when I get violent
fuck calling this sucker a memory, call him the next Kobe Bryant
ehh

Was wondering why this battle had no votes and now I see why. Mr j won but this wasn’t a good battle.

Vote J

[Cool]

I'm surprised your still in this boi the 3rd KO gon make him quit!
You never gonna ball or be a legend in this game even if your ass got a doctorate!!(Dr.J)

nah

I kicked the Everyday Struggle years ago, while Mr still an average Joe!
Touched the Budden on ya bitch puss n her ass made a hole...then made the whore go Eat at Moes!!

nah

He was quick to go searching when he heard Eminem uses grindr!
Ol Ken Keniff dick shinner, only text battles to show how much he sucks n it's a constant reminder!!

nah

Your much better in the topical realm
Writing about trips to hell!
I'm above you like a father figure cause your more disappointing than Wilson w/ Ed Helm!!

nah

Your best win was when I no showed you in the AOWL and that's real!
They say the truth hurts, that's fine cause now you can see how them facts feel!!

nah




Incredible...that name seems retarded from any perspective.
You were outraged & told your parents special is subjective

nah

the holidays are rough on you when your relatives walk in.
youre sitting there in your chair dying inside like I JUST WANT TO LOG IN

nah

I bet you have this vivid imagination about starting a text crew.
& when you finally pull it together you learn that no one accepts you.

nah

you spent years putting words together about your lost prose.
all the concepts you digging up could never fill up your plot holes.

nah

got ya fingers shivering over the keys like this must be life.
the only lines you laid out that hit hard were off your junkie knife.

nah

come get ya jersey blown in half when I get violent
fuck calling this sucker a memory, call him the next Kobe Bryant

nah

this battle was trash

u guys need to better urselves

get familiar

learn from ur peers

no disrespect

i don't know who wins tbh

i'll go with mr j

v-mr j

[Orc]

2-0 up

[Schadenfreude]

VOTE MR. J the only bar I liked was "plot holes" nothing once is notable. Keep elevating fellas.

[ill nik-A]

Mr J had th better attempt. Plot holes almost hit but needed more

Mr j wins

[Destroyer]

Mr J got this
Incredible needs to read some bars and work on them punches a bit more
This wasn’t the best battle, but J is improving

V/J

[Saint]

V- Mr J. Neither side was quotable but he had a better approach.