Kirk Clapplin vs Lenox - KIRK WINS

[Orc]

Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition


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Lenox Kirk Clapplin

[Basic M]

10-12...

[Lenox]

Prolly 10

[Basic M]

fuck the shit u've dropped before, this 12 gage will hit ya core
the way that beast'll shoot through ur chest, u'd think it was a baby Xenomorph
never seen u beat a vet, just a bunch rookies w/ hella flaws
its ironic asf u run w/ a crew u prey on, ur name should be jabber jaws
i've seen ur pic n ur not tough, threaten me n ill call ur bluff
funny u have a cross tat on ur cheek, cuz u'll need christ after i swell it tf up
u lost to fresh? I killed em, so where tf r ur skills son
pretty soon u'll be joining Habitat, except aint nobody living in this one
bullets'll fly at his face, especially when i ride on this fake,
metal slidin' from the window lettin' u down easy, thats a fire escape

[Lenox]

Pennin lines to scrubs for easy W’s. That shit blasphemous.
It’s apparent Kirk’s Basic, no name or site can hide the fact this dudes wack as shit.
I slay clowns when I pack gats with straps attached.
Kick in ya windows, raid ur paddock & spray rounds - thats a Vegas flashback.
Ya bars come off as generic faggot, this bitch is really soft.
The shotty'll leave ya dunkirk, floating face up firing shells till every pigments gone.
got to rb finals beatin newbs, there’s no room for boast.
my knuckles sharp. leave black spots on ya face till u lookin like Rorschach ghost.
I'm known for smashing vag, no secret I clearly beat it,
Only story hostel about him - "He's a nightmare to sleep with."

[Hawk]

u lost to fresh? I killed em, so where tf r ur skills son
pretty soon u'll be joining Habitat, except aint nobody living in this on

Probably the only bar I liked from Kirk and it was still kind of awkward.

Your rhymes and concepts were really basic, I didn't think anything was very creative.

As for Lenox


I'm known for smashing vag, no secret I clearly beat it,
Only story hostel about him - "He's a nightmare to sleep with."

This was pretty cool, and was almost a triple entendre. Could be read as hostile/hostel(hotel)/hoes tell but unfortunately the hostel one doesn't really make sense. You'd never say "only story hotel about him". Getting hoes tell from hostel/hostile is definitely a stretch, but still cool no less.

Same with Kirk, the rest of your bars were basic and lackluster. Nothin all that creative.


Of the bar I liked from each I liked Lenox's a little more because of the wordplay.


Vote - Lenox

[Habitat]

fuck the shit u've dropped before, this 12 gage will hit ya core
the way that beast'll shoot through ur chest, u'd think it was a baby Xenomorph
this was ok nothing crazy tho
never seen u beat a vet, just a bunch rookies w/ hella flaws
its ironic asf u run w/ a crew u prey on, ur name should be jabber jaws
not a fan
i've seen ur pic n ur not tough, threaten me n ill call ur bluff
funny u have a cross tat on ur cheek, cuz u'll need christ after i swell it tf up
thought this was lackluster. had potential but was very soft as is
u lost to fresh? I killed em, so where tf r ur skills son
pretty soon u'll be joining Habitat, except aint nobody living in this one
this was decent
bullets'll fly at his face, especially when i ride on this fake,
metal slidin' from the window lettin' u down easy, thats a fire escape
nahh

vs

Pennin lines to scrubs for easy W’s. That shit blasphemous.
It’s apparent Kirk’s Basic, no name or site can hide the fact this dudes wack as shit.
not a fan of this
I slay clowns when I pack gats with straps attached.
Kick in ya windows, raid ur paddock & spray rounds - thats a Vegas flashback.
Thats a ____ ____ im not a fan of these types of punches...
Ya bars come off as generic faggot, this bitch is really soft.
The shotty'll leave ya dunkirk, floating face up firing shells till every pigments gone.
this was decent could have been executed better to be more harsh but i still fuck with it
got to rb finals beatin newbs, there’s no room for boast.
my knuckles sharp. leave black spots on ya face till u lookin like Rorschach ghost.
not a fan
I'm known for smashing vag, no secret I clearly beat it,
Only story hostel about him - "He's a nightmare to sleep with."
decent

Close battle but i have Lenox edging this one out.

v/ Lenox

[Saint]

fuck the shit u've dropped before, this 12 gage will hit ya core
the way that beast'll shoot through ur chest, u'd think it was a baby Xenomorph

-had an idea like this. Its aight, kindve basic.

never seen u beat a vet, just a bunch rookies w/ hella flaws
its ironic asf u run w/ a crew u prey on, ur name should be jabber jaws

-nah

i've seen ur pic n ur not tough, threaten me n ill call ur bluff
funny u have a cross tat on ur cheek, cuz u'll need christ after i swell it tf up

Wording off.

u lost to fresh? I killed em, so where tf r ur skills son
pretty soon u'll be joining Habitat, except aint nobody living in this one

ok

bullets'll fly at his face, especially when i ride on this fake,
metal slidin' from the window lettin' u down easy, thats a fire escape

tried to make it connect...didnt work for me.


Pennin lines to scrubs for easy W’s. That shit blasphemous.
It’s apparent Kirk’s Basic, no name or site can hide the fact this dudes wack as shit.
-nah....basic m we know. Seen it.

I slay clowns when I pack gats with straps attached.
Kick in ya windows, raid ur paddock & spray rounds - thats a Vegas flashback.
-feels done....decent hit tho

Ya bars come off as generic faggot, this bitch is really soft.
The shotty'll leave ya dunkirk, floating face up firing shells till every pigments gone.
-had potential here. Dunkirk coo

got to rb finals beatin newbs, there’s no room for boast.
my knuckles sharp. leave black spots on ya face till u lookin like Rorschach ghost.
eh, whatever..
I'm known for smashing vag, no secret I clearly beat it,
Only story hostel about him - "He's a nightmare to sleep with."
-hostile, and didnt f w it as much


I've seen kirk come better. but this close
Both had exec issues
Have to edge it to Kirk on second read.

V kirk

[Aero]

KC - xeno was aight/ jabber jaws was blah/ Christ tat cool, personal / lost to fresh set up was hard, punch was basic but aided by sting in set up/ fire escape bar was hard

Cool verse, only line didn't like was Jabber...


Lenox - Kirk basic nah / Vegas flashback was ok / Dunkirk was cool movie reference / rosarch test is aiiiiiight / hostel and hoes tell are not pronounced close enough to get a pass.



Cool battle Kirk got this comfortably.


Mvgt Kirk

[WRATH]

fuck the shit u've dropped before, this 12 gage will hit ya core
the way that beast'll shoot through ur chest, u'd think it was a baby Xenomorph

Solid

never seen u beat a vet, just a bunch rookies w/ hella flaws
its ironic asf u run w/ a crew u prey on, ur name should be jabber jaws

Lol okay

i've seen ur pic n ur not tough, threaten me n ill call ur bluff
funny u have a cross tat on ur cheek, cuz u'll need christ after i swell it tf up

Okay

u lost to fresh? I killed em, so where tf r ur skills son
pretty soon u'll be joining Habitat, except aint nobody living in this one

Solid

bullets'll fly at his face, especially when i ride on this fake,
metal slidin' from the window lettin' u down easy, thats a fire escape

Nice



Pennin lines to scrubs for easy W’s. That shit blasphemous.
It’s apparent Kirk’s Basic, no name or site can hide the fact this dudes wack as shit.

Okay

I slay clowns when I pack gats with straps attached.
Kick in ya windows, raid ur paddock & spray rounds - thats a Vegas flashback.

Solid

Ya bars come off as generic faggot, this bitch is really soft.fat wife
The shotty'll leave ya dunkirk, floating face up firing shells till every pigments gone.

Eh

got to rb finals beatin newbs, there’s no room for boast.
my knuckles sharp. leave black spots on ya face till u lookin like Rorschach ghost.

Eh

I'm known for smashing vag, no secret I clearly beat it,
Only story hostel about him - "He's a nightmare to sleep with."

Eh


V kirk

[bleak]

I like the hostel shit from Len, I think this was closer than it looks cause Kirk had a lot of material to run w/ from recent chat shit. Len's wording was miles ahead and a much more comfortable read.

Kirk had some decent thoughts that weren't fully articulated which gives L the win. Cross tat could have had something.

Hostel

v.

Habitat?

W/e Lenox wins

[For Battling]

fuck the shit u've dropped before, this 12 gage will hit ya core
the way that beast'll shoot through ur chest, u'd think it was a baby Xenomorph
alright
never seen u beat a vet, just a bunch rookies w/ hella flaws
its ironic asf u run w/ a crew u prey on, ur name should be jabber jaws
nah corny
i've seen ur pic n ur not tough, threaten me n ill call ur bluff
funny u have a cross tat on ur cheek, cuz u'll need christ after i swell it tf up
second line worded poorly and hurt the possible outcome of this, went from nice potential to bad actuality
u lost to fresh? I killed em, so where tf r ur skills son
pretty soon u'll be joining Habitat, except aint nobody living in this one
barey decent, another one that had good potential with the concept but execution hurt it this time
bullets'll fly at his face, especially when i ride on this fake,
metal slidin' from the window lettin' u down easy, thats a fire escape
nice


Vs


Pennin lines to scrubs for easy W’s. That shit blasphemous.
It’s apparent Kirk’s Basic, no name or site can hide the fact this dudes wack as shit.
i thought this was slick and dope tbh
I slay clowns when I pack gats with straps attached.
Kick in ya windows, raid ur paddock & spray rounds - thats a Vegas flashback
decent
Ya bars come off as generic faggot, this bitch is really soft.
The shotty'll leave ya dunkirk, floating face up firing shells till every pigments gone.
dunkirk had maaaad potential but you finished it bad
got to rb finals beatin newbs, there’s no room for boast.
my knuckles sharp. leave black spots on ya face till u lookin like Rorschach ghost.
ok
I'm known for smashing vag, no secret I clearly beat it,
Only story hostel about him - "He's a nightmare to sleep with."
nah it’s hoss not hoes lol

Yo this is probably the closest battle so far this season. Kirk had xenomorph and fire escape. Lenox had Kirk basic and a couple decent bars. I think Kirk edged it but it can to either way tbh.

Vote Kirk

[Alvin Karpis]

Came down to one hitter quitters of the battle
Lenox had some decent lines but Kirk grabbed my attention
Fire escape hit
Overall Kirk got it

[Orc]

5-2 up

[Cool]

fuck the shit u've dropped before, this 12 gage will hit ya core
the way that beast'll shoot through ur chest, u'd think it was a baby Xenomorph

dope, played, lenox even used a bar like this, but it was played when he did it too, i just love the ref

never seen u beat a vet, just a bunch rookies w/ hella flaws
its ironic asf u run w/ a crew u prey on, ur name should be jabber jaws

nah

i've seen ur pic n ur not tough, threaten me n ill call ur bluff
funny u have a cross tat on ur cheek, cuz u'll need christ after i swell it tf up

choppy

u lost to fresh? I killed em, so where tf r ur skills son
pretty soon u'll be joining Habitat, except aint nobody living in this one

cool

bullets'll fly at his face, especially when i ride on this fake,
metal slidin' from the window lettin' u down easy, thats a fire escape

nah




Pennin lines to scrubs for easy W’s. That shit blasphemous.
It’s apparent Kirk’s Basic, no name or site can hide the fact this dudes wack as shit.

cool

I slay clowns when I pack gats with straps attached.
Kick in ya windows, raid ur paddock & spray rounds - thats a Vegas flashback.

nah

Ya bars come off as generic faggot, this bitch is really soft.
The shotty'll leave ya dunkirk, floating face up firing shells till every pigments gone.

dope

got to rb finals beatin newbs, there’s no room for boast.
my knuckles sharp. leave black spots on ya face till u lookin like Rorschach ghost.

cool

I'm known for smashing vag, no secret I clearly beat it,
Only story hostel about him - "He's a nightmare to sleep with."

nah

close battle

advantage goes to lenox

just a tad more consistent

basic wasn't bad

like i said

debatable

v-lenox

[Schadenfreude]

VOTE BASIC M both of you had some decent concepts, yet neither of you actually developed then executed the punches w/ the full potential of those concepts. I'm going w/ Basic cuz Lenox rhymes didn't match every bar or were one syllable rhymes.

[Destroyer]

Vote kirk
Lenox is faggot