Aero vs Tadgh - ANTI HERO WINS

[Orc]

Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

[Hawk]

Check, you can pick the bar limit I'm cool with whatever.

[Aero]

You're new so can't take personal angle. Let's do 10 buddy.

[Hawk]

Will post tonight but it'll be later.

[Hawk]

You need an ext? I don't do dq wins

[Aero]

You need an ext? I don't do dq wins


Not really do you?

[Hawk]

Nah I can be ready in no time

[Aero]

Ext I know you all wanted to see it right now but I'm heading to Cali. Once I'm settled I can give you what you need.

[Aero]

Bukkake time, we outside ya house

Van full of my niggas, you hear BEEEEP! Ya wifey is missin'
Just know she'll be drinking from the horn like a Viking's tradition
Your girl's like "I don't have a racist bone in my body!" Followed by laughter
I stuck my knuckles in her puss & said "think again cracker!"
This guy's toast, battles like this is the reason I'm ghost, fuck a rook
I'm battling an American with an Irish alias and nine post, what a puss
Ill employ the blam, guns at ya crib stop toying man
I don't want to hear your son heart beat ironic I wana destroyer fam
Don't talk heat in ya lines, we not believing those lies
You live and die by the gun? I left murder weapon at scene of the crime

[Hawk]

You went to chat for backup, tryna have your gals jump me
N my pals grumpy get the cals dumping hand in my waist, Al Bundy
Roll up to fags house, the rag doused smother till he’s comatose
Needle full’a morphine dab of chlorine shoot Aer in the vein like an overdose
Leave this guy’s spleen at a crime scene a dumpster ya might get tossed in
When the tape come out… not talking risk when say Aer on the side of caution
You boring thot, that slick talk get you criss-crossed wind up with a Maury plot
Nothing but a DNA tests, tryin’ to place my prints on the 40 glock
You’re corny, ock. I’m the big cheese… n I hate the smell of fake bitches
You the king of set-ups, rat? where I’m from we don’t celebrate snitches

[Hush]

Bukkake time, we outside ya house

Van full of my niggas, you hear BEEEEP! Ya wifey is missin'
Just know she'll be drinking from the horn like a Viking's tradition
.... terrible . You started your verse saying bakkake time.. ur a faggot
Your girl's like "I don't have a racist bone in my body!" Followed by laughter
I stuck my knuckles in her puss & said "think again cracker!"
......nah this is trash
This guy's toast, battles like this is the reason I'm ghost, fuck a rook
I'm battling an American with an Irish alias and nine post, what a puss
.....what?
Ill employ the blam, guns at ya crib stop toying man
I don't want to hear your son heart beat ironic I wana destroyer fam
.....no
Don't talk heat in ya lines, we not believing those lies
You live and die by the gun? I left murder weapon at scene of the crime
....worst verse ever



You went to chat for backup, tryna have your gals jump me
N my pals grumpy get the cals dumping hand in my waist, Al Bundy
....ok
Roll up to fags house, the rag doused smother till he’s comatose
Needle full’a morphine dab of chlorine shoot Aer in the vein like an overdose
...ok
Leave this guy’s spleen at a crime scene a dumpster ya might get tossed in
When the tape come out… not talking risk when say Aer on the side of caution
....hmmm impressive
You boring thot, that slick talk get you criss-crossed wind up with a Maury plot
Nothing but a DNA tests, tryin’ to place my prints on the 40 glock
....eh
You’re corny, ock. I’m the big cheese… n I hate the smell of fake bitches
You the king of set-ups, rat? where I’m from we don’t celebrate snitches
....ok




Aero died lol

Vote tad

[Aero]

Battle is void.

[Saint]

aeros best: drinking from horn, destroyer fam

tads best: err on the side of caution (lotb), in the vein


funny battle, aero didn't bring what he did last week. He had a heads up, no excuses. Both had throwaways. Difference was tad's misses weren't as bad/clearly airballs.

vote tadgh

[Basic M]

Van full of my niggas, you hear BEEEEP! Ya wifey is missin'
Just know she'll be drinking from the horn like a Viking's tradition
Your girl's like "I don't have a racist bone in my body!" Followed by laughter
I stuck my knuckles in her puss & said "think again cracker!"
This guy's toast, battles like this is the reason I'm ghost, fuck a rook
I'm battling an American with an Irish alias and nine post, what a puss
---OPENER WAS NICE, 2ND BAR WAS LOL, 3RD BAR I WASNT FEELING
Ill employ the blam, guns at ya crib stop toying man
I don't want to hear your son heart beat ironic I wana destroyer fam
Don't talk heat in ya lines, we not believing those lies
You live and die by the gun? I left murder weapon at scene of the crime
---THESE LAST TWO WERE OK, DESTROYER WAS PRETTY GOOD

VS

You went to chat for backup, tryna have your gals jump me
N my pals grumpy get the cals dumping hand in my waist, Al Bundy
Roll up to fags house, the rag doused smother till he’s comatose
Needle full’a morphine dab of chlorine shoot Aer in the vein like an overdose
Leave this guy’s spleen at a crime scene a dumpster ya might get tossed in
When the tape come out… not talking risk when say Aer on the side of caution
---THESE WERE NICE, THOUGHT THE OVERDOSE LINE WAS TOUGH
You boring thot, that slick talk get you criss-crossed wind up with a Maury plot
Nothing but a DNA tests, tryin’ to place my prints on the 40 glock
You’re corny, ock. I’m the big cheese… n I hate the smell of fake bitches
You the king of set-ups, rat? where I’m from we don’t celebrate snitches
---NOT A FAN OF THE 40 GLOCK LINE, LOL @ THE CLOSER

V/TADGH...HE HAD THE HARDER VERSE, HARSHER CONCEPTS

[For Battling]

nothing, comedy.

Vs

You went to chat for backup, tryna have your gals jump me
N my pals grumpy get the cals dumping hand in my waist, Al bundy
alright
Roll up to fags house, the rag doused smother till he’s comatose
Needle full’a morphine dab of chlorine shoot Aer in the vein like an overdose
kk
Leave this guy’s spleen at a crime scene a dumpster ya might get tossed in
When the tape come out… not talking risk when say Aer on the side of caution
cool
You boring thot, that slick talk get you criss-crossed wind up with a Maury plot
Nothing but a DNA tests, tryin’ to place my prints on the 40 glock
ehh dunno bout this one
You’re corny, ock. I’m the big cheese… n I hate the smell of fake bitches
You the king of set-ups, rat? where I’m from we don’t celebrate snitches
lollll nice


Vote TAGBH

[Cool]

Bukkake time, we outside ya house

Van full of my niggas, you hear BEEEEP! Ya wifey is missin'
Just know she'll be drinking from the horn like a Viking's tradition

dope

Your girl's like "I don't have a racist bone in my body!" Followed by laughter
I stuck my knuckles in her puss & said "think again cracker!"

nah

This guy's toast, battles like this is the reason I'm ghost, fuck a rook
I'm battling an American with an Irish alias and nine post, what a puss

nah

Ill employ the blam, guns at ya crib stop toying man
I don't want to hear your son heart beat ironic I wana destroyer fam

nah

Don't talk heat in ya lines, we not believing those lies
You live and die by the gun? I left murder weapon at scene of the crime

nah




You went to chat for backup, tryna have your gals jump me
N my pals grumpy get the cals dumping hand in my waist, Al Bundy

okay

Roll up to fags house, the rag doused smother till he’s comatose
Needle full’a morphine dab of chlorine shoot Aer in the vein like an overdose

nah

Leave this guy’s spleen at a crime scene a dumpster ya might get tossed in
When the tape come out… not talking risk when say Aer on the side of caution

nah

You boring thot, that slick talk get you criss-crossed wind up with a Maury plot
Nothing but a DNA tests, tryin’ to place my prints on the 40 glock

nah

You’re corny, ock. I’m the big cheese… n I hate the smell of fake bitches
You the king of set-ups, rat? where I’m from we don’t celebrate snitches

nah


sheesh

terrible battle

aero just doesn't have it anymore

this other guy

idk man

shit was worse than aero's

jesus christ

v-aero

[Barcotic]

i got aero's opener vs aer on the side of caution
ill be back

new name sucks Anti Hero

[ill nik-A]

This wasn’t good. I like biking tradition best

Vote Aero

[Destroyer]

Wtf was that aero verse
Tadgh was not terrible but aero could have beaten that if he didn’t throw up that laughable verse
As it is, I got Tadgh

V/brogues

[Plot]

Tadgh won here No need for me to break it down.
Aero came with a swaggy 'gonna fuck you wife' angle that wasnt as effective
as throwing punches. Tadgh had a few heaters with some novel nameplays.

[bleak]

This is gonna be quick in between wrapping shit but I've read this and the other battles many times.

Aero was not jokes but almost, there was some quality but the other verse was just more well constructed.

V/Tad

Marry Chrismas

[Gunplay]

Aero

Van full of my niggas, you hear BEEEEP! Ya wifey is missin'
Just know she'll be drinking from the horn like a Viking's tradition

- Weak bar. First line was relevant to the punchline but the punchline in itself was basic and not creative at all. It’s a basic comparison/simile and doesn’t have any depth to it.

Your girl's like "I don't have a racist bone in my body!" Followed by laughter
I stuck my knuckles in her puss & said "think again cracker!"

- hmm this was decent. The whole racist bone in the body/sticking my knuckles concept was kind of okay. Basic multies though. You could have done a bit more with this bar though.

This guy's toast, battles like this is the reason I'm ghost, fuck a rook
I'm battling an American with an Irish alias and nine post, what a puss

- first line was complete filler. Didn’t relate to the punchline at all and was just generic and vague. The punchline was trash tbh. No creativity, just a statement. Had no impact to be honest.

Ill employ the blam, guns at ya crib stop toying man
I don't want to hear your son heart beat ironic I wana destroyer fam

- “Employ the blam” read awkward as fuck. Again the first line was generic gun bar with nothing to do with the punchline. The second line was kind of meh. Nothing special.

Don't talk heat in ya lines, we not believing those lies
You live and die by the gun? I left murder weapon at scene of the crime

- the first line was a good build up but that was it. The second line wasn’t even a punchline as it talked more about yourself than your opponent.

Overall- this was a very basic and simple verse with little to no creativity. Punchlines were non existent and lacked depth conceptually. The best line was the racist bone in the body bar. If you had more bars like that, this would have been a decent verse. You need to dive more into creative thinking and utilize fresh concepts instead of straight forward statements that have no impact whatsoever.

__________


You went to chat for backup, tryna have your gals jump me
N my pals grumpy get the cals dumping hand in my waist, Al Bundy

- your first line wasn’t relevant to the punchline at all. You started on an angle that you didn’t finish. The punchline had a rather direct comparison (Cals dumping hand in my waist reads awkward as fuck too btw) than a double entendre which kind of killed the creativity here.

Roll up to fags house, the rag doused smother till he’s comatose
Needle full’a morphine dab of chlorine shoot Aer in the vein like an overdose

- the setup was a generic threat with nothing to it. Meh. The punch was predictable since his name is Aero. Very basic and not creative at all.

Leave this guy’s spleen at a crime scene a dumpster ya might get tossed in
When the tape come out… not talking risk when say Aer on the side of caution

- hahaha I fuck with this. Good shit. Predictable but you added a fresh twist to the Nameplay.

You boring thot, that slick talk get you criss-crossed wind up with a Maury plot
Nothing but a DNA tests, tryin’ to place my prints on the 40 glock

- calling him a boring thot is just filler. The Maury line was basic as fuck. The DNA test/prints on a glock shit was kind of decent. But it’s more on the lines of a braggadocio than a punchline for me.

You’re corny, ock. I’m the big cheese… n I hate the smell of fake bitches
You the king of set-ups, rat? where I’m from we don’t celebrate snitches

- first line was garbage except for the big cheese bit that tied With the rat part in the punchline even tho it was obscure. The punchline was weak and had no impact as it was basic. Setups/snitches was a vague tie up and had no impact.

Overall- this was a weak verse. I don’t know why this battle lacked so much creativity. With names like those id expect some creative punchlines galore but you had basic lines that were predictable and bland.

Punches- Tadgh
Multies- Tadgh
Metaphors- Aero
Wordplay- Tadgh
Creativity- none

MVGT - TADGH.

Weak battle.

[Aero]

Aero

Van full of my niggas, you hear BEEEEP! Ya wifey is missin'
Just know she'll be drinking from the horn like a Viking's tradition

- Weak bar. First line was relevant to the punchline but the punchline in itself was basic and not creative at all. It’s a basic comparison/simile and doesn’t have any depth to it.

Your girl's like "I don't have a racist bone in my body!" Followed by laughter
I stuck my knuckles in her puss & said "think again cracker!"

- hmm this was decent. The whole racist bone in the body/sticking my knuckles concept was kind of okay. Basic multies though. You could have done a bit more with this bar though.

This guy's toast, battles like this is the reason I'm ghost, fuck a rook
I'm battling an American with an Irish alias and nine post, what a puss

- first line was complete filler. Didn’t relate to the punchline at all and was just generic and vague. The punchline was trash tbh. No creativity, just a statement. Had no impact to be honest.

Ill employ the blam, guns at ya crib stop toying man
I don't want to hear your son heart beat ironic I wana destroyer fam

- “Employ the blam” read awkward as fuck. Again the first line was generic gun bar with nothing to do with the punchline. The second line was kind of meh. Nothing special.

Don't talk heat in ya lines, we not believing those lies
You live and die by the gun? I left murder weapon at scene of the crime

- the first line was a good build up but that was it. The second line wasn’t even a punchline as it talked more about yourself than your opponent.

Overall- this was a very basic and simple verse with little to no creativity. Punchlines were non existent and lacked depth conceptually. The best line was the racist bone in the body bar. If you had more bars like that, this would have been a decent verse. You need to dive more into creative thinking and utilize fresh concepts instead of straight forward statements that have no impact whatsoever.

__________


You went to chat for backup, tryna have your gals jump me
N my pals grumpy get the cals dumping hand in my waist, Al Bundy

- your first line wasn’t relevant to the punchline at all. You started on an angle that you didn’t finish. The punchline had a rather direct comparison (Cals dumping hand in my waist reads awkward as fuck too btw) than a double entendre which kind of killed the creativity here.

Roll up to fags house, the rag doused smother till he’s comatose
Needle full’a morphine dab of chlorine shoot Aer in the vein like an overdose

- the setup was a generic threat with nothing to it. Meh. The punch was predictable since his name is Aero. Very basic and not creative at all.

Leave this guy’s spleen at a crime scene a dumpster ya might get tossed in
When the tape come out… not talking risk when say Aer on the side of caution

- hahaha I fuck with this. Good shit. Predictable but you added a fresh twist to the Nameplay.

You boring thot, that slick talk get you criss-crossed wind up with a Maury plot
Nothing but a DNA tests, tryin’ to place my prints on the 40 glock

- calling him a boring thot is just filler. The Maury line was basic as fuck. The DNA test/prints on a glock shit was kind of decent. But it’s more on the lines of a braggadocio than a punchline for me.

You’re corny, ock. I’m the big cheese… n I hate the smell of fake bitches
You the king of set-ups, rat? where I’m from we don’t celebrate snitches

- first line was garbage except for the big cheese bit that tied With the rat part in the punchline even tho it was obscure. The punchline was weak and had no impact as it was basic. Setups/snitches was a vague tie up and had no impact.

Overall- this was a weak verse. I don’t know why this battle lacked so much creativity. With names like those id expect some creative punchlines galore but you had basic lines that were predictable and bland.

Punches- Tadgh
Multies- Tadgh
Metaphors- Aero
Wordplay- Tadgh
Creativity- none

MVGT - TADGH.

Weak battle.



Maaaaaaaan FffUUUUCK YOU

[Gunplay]

Maaaaaaaan FffUUUUCK YOU

Awe what’s the matter

[For Battling]

Maaaaaaaan FffUUUUCK YOU

He’s on that amen voting tip

[Gunplay]

He’s on that amen voting tip

Well I’ve never had a problem with Sicc’s votes so I guess that’s a compliment lol

[For Battling]

Well I’ve never had a problem with Sicc’s votes so I guess that’s a compliment lol

Why are you calling him that? Who are you really because I’m not buying this whole alias thing

[Gunplay]

Why are you calling him that? Who are you really because I’m not buying this whole alias thing

I’ve known him since the goldmic / bbe days. Really not that hard.