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Orc
12-27-2017, 06:08 AM
Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition


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Habitat Allen Knight

Allen Knight
12-27-2017, 09:44 AM
Check, goin 12.

Habitat
12-27-2017, 10:31 AM
check. 12 sounds good

Habitat
01-01-2018, 04:51 PM
I got 12 whenever you're ready Allen Knight

Habitat
01-03-2018, 03:15 PM
aka chamber

got deadly aim, bastard.. the left eye lookin heavy
see me put one in chamber.. after a quick slide from the semi
your entire life's a downhill battle. ur nothin great; a feckless bum
picture a Landslide Victory, when ur family suffocates to death in one
women are appalled by u, even ya wifey won't get into bed
the only way u cadaver be willing is if the bitch was literally dead
made in mexico, where folk sing about how ur ugly n' dumb
he'd mariachi.. but even that faggot won't stroll w/ this bum
seriously u'd be better off gay, u ain't even fit for lenny's mother
if we judged ho's purdah pussy u get, all them bitches'd be fully covered
Bag's off his rocker, me beating u ain't a shot in the dark
but if his next video undermines me it ends with a bullet stoppin his heart

Allen Knight
01-04-2018, 05:57 PM
ur 3-0 by luck ur still garbage u lip ringed faggot,

ur bottom of the barrel on boards, the facts clowin his ass
i kno ur not trash in Justice League everywhere u go u get beat down in a Flash
ur gettin embrassed here w/ ya played shit, my grind is mean
i'll feather & Tardis fag cuz every bar he drops feels like i hopped ina time machine
my dick killin ya wifys throat, she gaggin till i bust jiz
have her choking to death on the nut a Epipen couldn't help the slut live
i'll cut u up & douse u w/ fuel then burry ya, im murkin u fuck
all ya body Partisan a hole & a lighter'll support the gas burin u to dust
ur mom sees me & its right to her knees, before i smash her snatch
belt hangin over her head as she reaches to grab it like a Ladder Match
piercing ya face over emotions aint gonna help u fiend
faggot ur lip rings Gauges realize we kno theres a big hole in ur self esteem

Schadenfreude
01-04-2018, 06:55 PM
got deadly aim, bastard.. the left eye lookin heavy
see me put one in chamber.. after a quick slide from the semi
Played
your entire life's a downhill battle. ur nothin great; a feckless bum
picture a Landslide Victory, when ur family suffocates to death in one
Decent
women are appalled by u, even ya wifey won't get into bed
the only way u cadaver be willing is if the bitch was literally dead
Familiar wp, but I like the execution
made in mexico, where folk sing about how ur ugly n' dumb
he'd mariachi.. but even that faggot won't stroll w/ this bum
OK what's a 'chi & why would he marry one?
seriously u'd be better off gay, u ain't even fit for lenny's mother
if we judged ho's purdah pussy u get, all them bitches'd be fully covered
Decent
Bag's off his rocker, me beating u ain't a shot in the dark
but if his next video undermines me it ends with a bullet stoppin his heart
Weak closer


ur bottom of the barrel on boards, the facts clowin his ass
i kno ur not trash in Justice League everywhere u go u get beat down in a Flash
Decent
ur gettin embrassed here w/ ya played shit, my grind is mean
i'll feather & Tardis fag cuz every bar he drops feels like i hopped ina time machine
Lmao..clever asf
my dick killin ya wifys throat, she gaggin till i bust jiz
have her choking to death on the nut a Epipen couldn't help the slut live
Damn..s'mean!!
i'll cut u up & douse u w/ fuel then burry ya, im murkin u fuck
all ya body Partisan a hole & a lighter'll support the gas burin u to dust
Nope, forced
ur mom sees me & its right to her knees, before i smash her snatch
belt hangin over her head as she reaches to grab it like a Ladder Match
Lol decent
piercing ya face over emotions aint gonna help u fiend
faggot ur lip rings Gauges realize we kno theres a big hole in ur self esteem
Good personal jab, but I taught Lenox had the piercings? Idk I get RB niggas confused

OVERALL VOTE ALLEN KNIGHT, Fresh had some decent shit, but nothing crazy. While AK had 'tardis' & 'EpiPen' which were dope asf.

Profit
01-05-2018, 01:42 AM
got deadly aim, bastard.. the left eye lookin heavy
see me put one in chamber.. after a quick slide from the semi

Ok

your entire life's a downhill battle. ur nothin great; a feckless bum
picture a Landslide Victory, when ur family suffocates to death in one

Ok

women are appalled by u, even ya wifey won't get into bed
the only way u cadaver be willing is if the bitch was literally dead

Dope

made in mexico, where folk sing about how ur ugly n' dumb
he'd mariachi.. but even that faggot won't stroll w/ this bum

Forced

seriously u'd be better off gay, u ain't even fit for lenny's mother
if we judged ho's purdah pussy u get, all them bitches'd be fully covered

Cool

Bag's off his rocker, me beating u ain't a shot in the dark
but if his next video undermines me it ends with a bullet stoppin his heart

Nah



ur bottom of the barrel on boards, the facts clowin his ass
i kno ur not trash in Justice League everywhere u go u get beat down in a Flash

Dope!

ur gettin embrassed here w/ ya played shit, my grind is mean
i'll feather & Tardis fag cuz every bar he drops feels like i hopped ina time machine

Cool,

my dick killin ya wifys throat, she gaggin till i bust jiz
have her choking to death on the nut a Epipen couldn't help the slut live

Dope

i'll cut u up & douse u w/ fuel then burry ya, im murkin u fuck
all ya body Partisan a hole & a lighter'll support the gas burin u to dust

Ehh forced

ur mom sees me & its right to her knees, before i smash her snatch
belt hangin over her head as she reaches to grab it like a Ladder Match

I've seen similar

piercing ya face over emotions aint gonna help u fiend
faggot ur lip rings Gauges realize we kno theres a big hole in ur self esteem

Cool

Pretty even in lands but AK seemed way harsher n did more damage so I got him winning this
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BROKE LESNAR
01-05-2018, 03:57 AM
aka chamber

got deadly aim, bastard.. the left eye lookin heavy
see me put one in chamber.. after a quick slide from the semi

☆ played on allen

your entire life's a downhill battle. ur nothin great; a feckless bum
picture a Landslide Victory, when ur family suffocates to death in one

☆☆☆

women are appalled by u, even ya wifey won't get into bed
the only way u cadaver be willing is if the bitch was literally dead

☆☆☆☆☆

made in mexico, where folk sing about how ur ugly n' dumb
he'd mariachi.. but even that faggot won't stroll w/ this bum

☆☆☆☆☆ roflz lotb

seriously u'd be better off gay, u ain't even fit for lenny's mother
if we judged ho's purdah pussy u get, all them bitches'd be fully covered

☆☆☆☆☆

Bag's off his rocker, me beating u ain't a shot in the dark
but if his next video undermines me it ends with a bullet stoppin his heart

☆ was this a bar intended for bags? don't do that, keep the focus on allen, using bags to diss him is fine, but be sure to centralize the insult around allen






ur 3-0 by luck ur still garbage u lip ringed faggot,

ur bottom of the barrel on boards, the facts clowin his ass
i kno ur not trash in Justice League everywhere u go u get beat down in a Flash

☆☆☆☆☆

ur gettin embrassed here w/ ya played shit, my grind is mean
i'll feather & Tardis fag cuz every bar he drops feels like i hopped ina time machine

☆☆☆☆☆

my dick killin ya wifys throat, she gaggin till i bust jiz
have her choking to death on the nut a Epipen couldn't help the slut live

☆☆☆☆☆

i'll cut u up & douse u w/ fuel then burry ya, im murkin u fuck
all ya body Partisan a hole & a lighter'll support the gas burin u to dust

☆☆☆☆☆ seen partisan used before but i enjoyed this flip

ur mom sees me & its right to her knees, before i smash her snatch
belt hangin over her head as she reaches to grab it like a Ladder Match

☆☆☆☆☆

piercing ya face over emotions aint gonna help u fiend
faggot ur lip rings Gauges realize we kno theres a big hole in ur self esteem

☆☆☆☆☆

Well, Allen dropped a flawless verse. You really do remind me of plethora. You take risks with wordplays and they pay off because you deliver them harshly. Fresh gave it a great try but he just couldn't match AK bar for bar.

v-Allen Knight

For Battling
01-05-2018, 08:57 AM
got deadly aim, bastard.. the left eye lookin heavy
see me put one in chamber.. after a quick slide from the semi
all chamber flips are played on him
your entire life's a downhill battle. ur nothin great; a feckless bum
picture a Landslide Victory, when ur family suffocates to death in one
decent
women are appalled by u, even ya wifey won't get into bed
the only way u cadaver be willing is if the bitch was literally dead
bitch mine was better against plethora at RB
made in mexico, where folk sing about how ur ugly n' dumb
he'd mariachi.. but even that faggot won't stroll w/ this bum
lol’d cool
seriously u'd be better off gay, u ain't even fit for lenny's mother
if we judged ho's purdah pussy u get, all them bitches'd be fully covered
this was good
Bag's off his rocker, me beating u ain't a shot in the dark
but if his next video undermines me it ends with a bullet stoppin his heart
more of a shot at bag if anything

Vs


ur bottom of the barrel on boards, the facts clowin his ass
i kno ur not trash in Justice League everywhere u go u get beat down in a Flash
decent
ur gettin embrassed here w/ ya played shit, my grind is mean
i'll feather & Tardis fag cuz every bar he drops feels like i hopped ina time
machine
hmm ok
my dick killin ya wifys throat, she gaggin till i bust jiz
have her choking to death on the nut a Epipen couldn't help the slut live
lol nice
i'll cut u up & douse u w/ fuel then burry ya, im murkin u fuck
all ya body Partisan a hole & a lighter'll support the gas burin u to dust
alright
ur mom sees me & its right to her knees, before i smash her snatch
belt hangin over her head as she reaches to grab it like a Ladder Match
i liked this
piercing ya face over emotions aint gonna help u fiend
faggot ur lip rings Gauges realize we kno theres a big hole in ur self esteem
decent

Habitat had like 2 misses and Allen didn’t have any. I really think habitat could have beaten Allen here because I didn’t see anything outstanding from him that wasn’t unbeatable. It’s just the good consistency that made his verse whole. Habitat you’re doing really good so far this season keep it up.

Vote AK

Saint
01-06-2018, 01:45 PM
I have Allen Knight here. More consistent.
Tardis, epipen, ladder seems like u done it before.

Habitat-Eh, didnt like much of this verse tbh. cadaver was ok but Ive seen before not too recently, alot of wp here, landslide was decent, nothing crazy. Ho purdah best line..

Vote AK

bleak
01-06-2018, 03:38 PM
Pretty sure this is a KO alrdy but I need votes.

Allen posted some usual shit that got him over. Hab just needs to be more at the throat. It comes off a bit soft when it reads like:

"This is what's gonna happen, because this is what you did."
Or
"When you do this, this is what's gonna happen."

The landslide shit was the exception to this and hopefully you can see what I mean because it's hard to put into words. It just makes it sting less when you're walking the reader thru every bar.

Allen, this was good. I like wrestling bars but HATED the ladder match line. It just seems so old and played. And if not played then boring and uncreative. Besides that tho, good shit

AK