View Full Version : Orc vs Anti Hero - ORC WINS, HAWK BITES/RECYCLES
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Check you can pick the line limit, sir.
We can do 16 man considering its a full wk away
Trust me. The pen is subtle BUT the trigger is hair fine
Fuck kids rebuttals; maaan this the Teutul's... all my Choppers get Air Time/
Don't dropa verse. Even retorting is sad
Maaan you're just taking Shots in the Dark like Ghost1 recording the Mag/
Act like u ain't gay. Pftttt this bum is a simpleton,
When there's mooore Balls in Hawkeye than a WHOLE Summer at Wimbledon/
That expose shit was pathetic, can't believe u took the time
U've written more Gunplay lines this week than the careers of Cred & Hush combined/
.. U wake beside a Hog like 'why should I stay witchu?!'
Damn. U got a Fat Wife Problem that's got nothing to do with Copy & Paste issues/
H the Savagest Squad? Nah the barks bouta Hammer is talk
Cuz how ya 'whole team Road Warriors' if you've NEVER been an Animal, Hawk?!/
I couldn't smash ya girl. That's a curse I can't help with.
It's foul... she got Red Blotches all up the Back muchhh worse than that Zelph pic/
14.
Anyone with ya genes done, toss Gunplay the addy he got a green thumb
He’ll have Orc Kids deflowered, snap a pic, n leave his screen cummed
I’m mean son, type to knock ya nan out her favorite rocker
Don’t wanna see her Top roll? Best tell ur bae ta block ‘er
Somethin like 80 choppers, they say you GOAT, think they meant a lamb
Ya betta scram, I’ve been rappin’ circles around stars like a pentagram
If I said it, I meant it fam, I’m here to feast n I expect a blowout
Roll up to his hoe’s house, more shells on the floor than Texas Roadhouse
Grab techs n roll out, or run the fade… E Honda w/ the hands you can’t see me
Beat me? Punches bang til’ you get the picture like an old ass TV
No homo bro bro, but I came here to run through dicks like a catheter
Orc sliding down the wall like a bannister once I dump two clips from the passenger
No guns where this bums from, but desi hollows N I has to chill
When I’m done, dunno what’s real or not... find a semi auto by a graphic kill
Orc - had to look up Teutul's it's a white people show but the punch works it's cool:// shots in the dark was cool, a better setup would've helped// Hawkeye was lulz, dope... act like you ain't gay swag// gunplay DON DEMARCO Marco Marco... loved the current event personal and how you flipped it. Takes skill// fat wife was good would've been better if you used the E.go aspect of it.// animal hawk was cool// red blotches up the back? Lol what kind of skin disease is that? This was cool.
Overall this was a solid verse. Good to see you back.
Hawk - orchids name play cool, didn't like the screen cummmed part though// beta blocker cool, wanted more from the set up though// lol @ think they meant a lamb, circles around stars was dope// Texas road house Don demarco Marco Marco// bang til you get the picture is dope, Loaded Lux did a little better so didn't hit as hard but still good// no homo bar set up was ALL HOMO. You came here to run through dicks? So gay.. bar was cool but it's more swag & flow// auto by a graphic kill biographical? Love the creativity but no sting
Overall nice verse, good swag to your lines
Rationale: this was a really good battle. Both had fire lines but Orc was able to be more consistent.
Mvgt Orc
BROKE LESNAR
01-03-2018, 06:43 PM
Trust me. The pen is subtle BUT the trigger is hair fine
Fuck kids rebuttals; maaan this the Teutul's... all my Choppers get Air Time/
☆ indirect
Don't dropa verse. Even retorting is sad
Maaan you're just taking Shots in the Dark like Ghost1 recording the Mag/
☆☆☆ okay, kind of light
Act like u ain't gay. Pftttt this bum is a simpleton,
When there's mooore Balls in Hawkeye than a WHOLE Summer at Wimbledon/
☆☆☆☆☆ lmao
That expose shit was pathetic, can't believe u took the time
U've written more Gunplay lines this week than the careers of Cred & Hush combined/
☆☆☆☆☆ even though hush only adopted gunbars after the rmbva site battle
.. U wake beside a Hog like 'why should I stay witchu?!'
Damn. U got a Fat Wife Problem that's got nothing to do with Copy & Paste issues/
☆☆☆☆☆
H the Savagest Squad? Nah the barks bouta Hammer is talk
Cuz how ya 'whole team Road Warriors' if you've NEVER been an Animal, Hawk?!/
☆☆☆☆☆ fire
I couldn't smash ya girl. That's a curse I can't help with.
It's foul... she got Red Blotches all up the Back muchhh worse than that Zelph pic/
☆☆☆☆☆ nice
14.
Anyone with ya genes done, toss Gunplay the addy he got a green thumb
He’ll have Orc Kids deflowered, snap a pic, n leave his screen cummed
☆ orchids is played, stay away from the nameflips, very few are original at this point, and "leave his screen cummed" was wack
I’m mean son, type to knock ya nan out her favorite rocker
Don’t wanna see her Top roll? Best tell ur bae ta block ‘er
☆☆☆☆☆
Somethin like 80 choppers, they say you GOAT, think they meant a lamb
Ya betta scram, I’ve been rappin’ circles around stars like a pentagram
☆ indirect
If I said it, I meant it fam, I’m here to feast n I expect a blowout
Roll up to his hoe’s house, more shells on the floor than Texas Roadhouse
☆
Grab techs n roll out, or run the fade… E Honda w/ the hands you can’t see me
Beat me? Punches bang til’ you get the picture like an old ass TV
☆
No homo bro bro, but I came here to run through dicks like a catheter
Orc sliding down the wall like a bannister once I dump two clips from the passenger
☆
No guns where this bums from, but desi hollows N I has to chill
When I’m done, dunno what’s real or not... find a semi auto by a graphic kill
☆
Orc started off a bit iffy but rebounded with several dope bars. Hawk was really underwhelming here. He struggled to capitalize on what little momentum he did have and wasn't very competitive.
v-Orc
Saint
01-04-2018, 04:25 AM
Orc:
Trust me. The pen is subtle BUT the trigger is hair fine
Fuck kids rebuttals; maaan this the Teutul's... all my Choppers get Air Time/
not bad but s&f type line
Don't dropa verse. Even retorting is sad
Maaan you're just taking Shots in the Dark like Ghost1 recording the Mag/
Saw this coming. (this was cool this)
Act like u ain't gay. Pftttt this bum is a simpleton,
When there's mooore Balls in Hawkeye than a WHOLE Summer at Wimbledon/
(Looked this up...it was good.
That expose shit was pathetic, can't believe u took the time
U've written more Gunplay lines this week than the careers of Cred & Hush combined/
Ok.
.. U wake beside a Hog like 'why should I stay witchu?!'
Damn. U got a Fat Wife Problem that's got nothing to do with Copy & Paste issues/
Eh, Ok easy though.
H the Savagest Squad? Nah the barks bouta Hammer is talk
Cuz how ya 'whole team Road Warriors' if you've NEVER been an Animal, Hawk?!/
I liked this..
I couldn't smash ya girl. That's a curse I can't help with.
It's foul... she got Red Blotches all up the Back muchhh worse than that Zelph pic/
saw something like this coming seeing his pic....its easy, not bad.
Vs.
Anti:
Anyone with ya genes done, toss Gunplay the addy he got a green thumb
He’ll have Orc Kids deflowered, snap a pic, n leave his screen cummed
Ehh not that good of a flip... screen cummed yuck
I’m mean son, type to knock ya nan out her favorite rocker
Don’t wanna see her Top roll? Best tell ur bae ta block ‘er
Alright.
Somethin like 80 choppers, they say you GOAT, think they meant a lamb
Ya betta scram, I’ve been rappin’ circles around stars like a pentagram
Url'ish line, but considering who you're battling, its cool to me.
If I said it, I meant it fam, I’m here to feast n I expect a blowout
Roll up to his hoe’s house, more shells on the floor than Texas Roadhouse
Couldve sworn ive seen this before.
Grab techs n roll out, or run the fade… E Honda w/ the hands you can’t see me
Beat me? Punches bang til’ you get the picture like an old ass TV
Another familiar line, c'mon bro, its ok but lux said it i think?
No homo bro bro, but I came here to run through dicks like a catheter
Orc sliding down the wall like a bannister once I dump two clips from the passenger
Eh
No guns where this bums from, but desi hollows N I has to chill
When I’m done, dunno what’s real or not... find a semi auto by a graphic kill
Didnt like this - too chopped up like old longbar shit.
Went as expected. Orc just had the swag & confidence coming into this w/ harsher hits and also better execution. Antihero put some effort but didnt vary alot of his approach, indirect lines & some poor or playex wp... had a few decent hits.
vote-orc
classickERBL
01-04-2018, 01:05 PM
Orc almost every line from hawk is stolen
"knock your gramma out her favourite rocker/top roll , beta blocker " these lines are stolen from a guy TRIP6 from otbva , the battle is trip6 vs clarke
"texas roadhouse" line , same guy , trip6 vs hakunamatata
"e honda , bang till he get the picture - hakunamatatat (otbva)
"semi auto graphic kill : - trip 6
i got the links too !!
Orc almost every line from hawk is stolen
"knock your gramma out her favourite rocker/top roll , beta blocker " these lines are stolen from a guy TRIP6 from otbva , the battle is trip6 vs clarke
"texas roadhouse" line , same guy , trip6 vs hakunamatata
"e honda , bang till he get the picture - hakunamatatat (otbva)
"semi auto graphic kill : - trip 6
i got the links too !!
Hawk at least tell me you're trip6
classickERBL
01-04-2018, 02:15 PM
Hawk at least tell me you're trip6
LOL i hope he is
Clout
01-04-2018, 02:37 PM
Trust me. The pen is subtle BUT the trigger is hair fine
Fuck kids rebuttals; maaan this the Teutul's... all my Choppers get Air Time/
Ok, smooth flow and transition into a punch. Its too generic though.
Don't dropa verse. Even retorting is sad
Maaan you're just taking Shots in the Dark like Ghost1 recording the Mag/
I liked this one,
Act like u ain't gay. Pftttt this bum is a simpleton,
When there's mooore Balls in Hawkeye than a WHOLE Summer at Wimbledon/
Alright could've set this up a bit better.
That expose shit was pathetic, can't believe u took the time
U've written more Gunplay lines this week than the careers of Cred & Hush combined/
Dope
.. U wake beside a Hog like 'why should I stay witchu?!'
Damn. U got a Fat Wife Problem that's got nothing to do with Copy & Paste issues/
Nah
H the Savagest Squad? Nah the barks bouta Hammer is talk
Cuz how ya 'whole team Road Warriors' if you've NEVER been an Animal, Hawk?!/
Fire, always good to see a good wrestling flip.
I couldn't smash ya girl. That's a curse I can't help with.
It's foul... she got Red Blotches all up the Back muchhh worse than that Zelph pic/
Cool
14.
Anyone with ya genes done, toss Gunplay the addy he got a green thumb
He’ll have Orc Kids deflowered, snap a pic, n leave his screen cummed
Yeah orchard is a bit overdone on him. I dont like the actual punch either. Reads awkwardly for me.
I’m mean son, type to knock ya nan out her favorite rocker
Don’t wanna see her Top roll? Best tell ur bae ta block ‘er
I like this one, WP.
Somethin like 80 choppers, they say you GOAT, think they meant a lamb
Ya betta scram, I’ve been rappin’ circles around stars like a pentagram
Could've set this up better to relate to pentagram, its light.
If I said it, I meant it fam, I’m here to feast n I expect a blowout
Roll up to his hoe’s house, more shells on the floor than Texas Roadhouse
alright
Grab techs n roll out, or run the fade… E Honda w/ the hands you can’t see me
Beat me? Punches bang til’ you get the picture like an old ass TV
Nah
No homo bro bro, but I came here to run through dicks like a catheter
Orc sliding down the wall like a bannister once I dump two clips from the passenger
Eh
No guns where this bums from, but desi hollows N I has to chill
When I’m done, dunno what’s real or not... find a semi auto by a graphic kill
Eh
I got orc winning, seen better from both.
v/Orc
Schadenfreude
01-04-2018, 07:32 PM
Trust me. The pen is subtle BUT the trigger is hair fine
Fuck kids rebuttals; maaan this the Teutul's... all my Choppers get Air Time/
Really light
Don't dropa verse. Even retorting is sad
Maaan you're just taking Shots in the Dark like Ghost1 recording the Mag/
Dope
Act like u ain't gay. Pftttt this bum is a simpleton,
When there's mooore Balls in Hawkeye than a WHOLE Summer at Wimbledon/
Good
That expose shit was pathetic, can't believe u took the time
U've written more Gunplay lines this week than the careers of Cred & Hush combined/
Nice personal
.. U wake beside a Hog like 'why should I stay witchu?!'
Damn. U got a Fat Wife Problem that's got nothing to do with Copy & Paste issues/
Lol clever
H the Savagest Squad? Nah the barks bouta Hammer is talk
Cuz how ya 'whole team Road Warriors' if you've NEVER been an Animal, Hawk?!/
Pretty good
I couldn't smash ya girl. That's a curse I can't help with.
It's foul... she got Red Blotches all up the Back muchhh worse than that Zelph pic/
Decent closer
Anyone with ya genes done, toss Gunplay the addy he got a green thumb
He’ll have Orc Kids deflowered, snap a pic, n leave his screen cummed
Played
I’m mean son, type to knock ya nan out her favorite rocker
Don’t wanna see her Top roll? Best tell ur bae ta block ‘er
Decent
Somethin like 80 choppers, they say you GOAT, think they meant a lamb
Ya betta scram, I’ve been rappin’ circles around stars like a pentagram
This was nasty
If I said it, I meant it fam, I’m here to feast n I expect a blowout
Roll up to his hoe’s house, more shells on the floor than Texas Roadhouse
Good, nothing crazy
Grab techs n roll out, or run the fade… E Honda w/ the hands you can’t see me
Beat me? Punches bang til’ you get the picture like an old ass TV
Naw, nothing speacial
No homo bro bro, but I came here to run through dicks like a catheter
Orc sliding down the wall like a bannister once I dump two clips from the passenger
PAUSE on that set-up, punch was Ok
No guns where this bums from, but desi hollows N I has to chill
When I’m done, dunno what’s real or not... find a semi auto by a graphic kill
Decent closer
Overall whether Hawk bit or recycled, it wasn't enough, VOTE ORC.
For Battling
01-04-2018, 08:45 PM
Trust me. The pen is subtle BUT the trigger is hair fine
Fuck kids rebuttals; maaan this the Teutul's... all my Choppers get Air Time/
decent
Don't dropa verse. Even retorting is sad
Maaan you're just taking Shots in the Dark like Ghost1 recording the Mag/
lol good
Act like u ain't gay. Pftttt this bum is a simpleton,
When there's mooore Balls in Hawkeye than a WHOLE Summer at Wimbledon/
good again
That expose shit was pathetic, can't believe u took the time
U've written more Gunplay lines this week than the careers of Cred & Hush combined/
this was nice
.. U wake beside a Hog like 'why should I stay witchu?!'
Damn. U got a Fat Wife Problem that's got nothing to do with Copy & Paste issues/
cool flip on my bar about a year ago
H the Savagest Squad? Nah the barks bouta Hammer is talk
Cuz how ya 'whole team Road Warriors' if you've NEVER been an Animal, Hawk?!/
good shit
I couldn't smash ya girl. That's a curse I can't help with.
It's foul... she got Red Blotches all up the Back muchhh worse than that Zelph pic/
this was a no
Vs
Anyone with ya genes done, toss Gunplay the addy he got a green thumb
He’ll have Orc Kids deflowered, snap a pic, n leave his screen cummed
i liked this until screen cummed...
I’m mean son, type to knock ya nan out her favorite rocker
Don’t wanna see her Top roll? Best tell ur bae ta block ‘er
alright
Somethin like 80 choppers, they say you GOAT, think they meant a lamb
Ya betta scram, I’ve been rappin’ circles around stars like a pentagram
phew, FIYA!
If I said it, I meant it fam, I’m here to feast n I expect a blowout
Roll up to his hoe’s house, more shells on the floor than Texas Roadhouse
nice
Grab techs n roll out, or run the fade… E Honda w/ the hands you can’t see me
Beat me? Punches bang til’ you get the picture like an old ass TV
wording in the second line a bit screwy but a good line nonetheless
No homo bro bro, but I came here to run through dicks like a catheter
Orc sliding down the wall like a bannister once I dump two clips from the passenger
i didn’t like this
No guns where this bums from, but desi hollows N I has to chill
When I’m done, dunno what’s real or not... find a semi auto by a graphic kill
ehh decent
Idk about the whole biting fiasco going on, but aside from that I think this was a very close battle. Orc came nice af with only 1 miss, and hawk came nice too but with 2 misses. I can see it going either way tbh.
Vote Orc
I'm not him but I did ghost all those lines (and many more). No excuse though it was very lazy on my part. Apologies and I'll take my leave. Fire verse Orc!
I'm not him but I did ghost all those lines (and many more). No excuse though it was very lazy on my part. Apologies and I'll take my leave. Fire verse Orc!
I believe it.
Got tired of shaking rust while trying to adapt to what cats here enjoy and took the lazy route. Sign me out Orc
No disrespect intended
WRATH
01-04-2018, 10:33 PM
Aero close this thread
Can't believe you bit in a battle to beat me in 2018 wtf
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