PDA

View Full Version : Flo Real vs Infiltration - inf wins


Orc
01-07-2018, 11:50 AM
Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

Saint
01-07-2018, 03:55 PM
10

Flow
01-09-2018, 11:42 AM
10 it is. G/L

Saint
01-10-2018, 09:10 PM
Sent 12. Writing aeros death.

Flow
01-11-2018, 08:15 PM
I got that mafia feel, industrial microwaves are a weapon for real
Wrap your face in celephane stabbed several times like your one of its meals
Youll find me in bars when its dark, i set the fuckin town alight while..
if infiltrates got bars on fire at knight, its only after he bit his creative style
Daydreamin hes a G with the stacks, hidin behind a screen with a frown
But bet your 'Crip to currency' bubble pops if the internet connection went down
Got you over the barrel beatin your ass to death with ya own vest
Bitch the rock salt on the wound aint to dissolve the slugs layin in your chest
Can see the nameflips b4 you say them, im the FBI for battling kid
The way i expose 'bars' one hit ill have you swaying quicker then he did
You used to be someone here, now your shook, a bitch with no lines of late
If you ever get a hold of bars again, i suspect its the prison showers as your viciously gang raped

Saint
01-11-2018, 08:31 PM
I've battled many lost souls who nevaa grasped the light.
Death's a process. I'm helpin Flo Chart his steps towards the afterlife./
Peeped you on site. That bullll u throw up's offf guy.
Infield you out & saw those lines were easyy to catch like a Pop Fly./
Nobody buys ur made-up stories, they need to quit.
Cuz everything Real Estate in his posts prove he's Trulia piece of shit./
U & ya mans have a new deal when yah'll try anal sexin.
Feel down? He'll put the D between FR to ease the Great Depression./
Moms the freakiest hoe that slore loooves piss in her vag.
My dogs house trained, do their Business Insider or get hit w/the mag./
KNOW I'm savage. Ur sign ins useless like that Ronin faggot.
Said u'd 'make it a Classic'... noww we'll need an explanation for that wack shit./

BROKE LESNAR
01-13-2018, 06:17 AM
I got that mafia feel, industrial microwaves are a weapon for real
Wrap your face in celephane stabbed several times like your one of its meals

☆☆☆

Youll find me in bars when its dark, i set the fuckin town alight while..
if infiltrates got bars on fire at knight, its only after he bit his creative style

☆☆☆

Daydreamin hes a G with the stacks, hidin behind a screen with a frown
But bet your 'Crip to currency' bubble pops if the internet connection went down



Got you over the barrel beatin your ass to death with ya own vest
Bitch the rock salt on the wound aint to dissolve the slugs layin in your chest



Can see the nameflips b4 you say them, im the FBI for battling kid
The way i expose 'bars' one hit ill have you swaying quicker then he did



You used to be someone here, now your shook, a bitch with no lines of late
If you ever get a hold of bars again, i suspect its the prison showers as your viciously gang raped





I've battled many lost souls who nevaa grasped the light.
Death's a process. I'm helpin Flo Chart his steps towards the afterlife./

☆☆☆☆☆

Peeped you on site. That bullll u throw up's offf guy.
Infield you out & saw those lines were easyy to catch like a Pop Fly./

☆☆☆

Nobody buys ur made-up stories, they need to quit.
Cuz everything Real Estate in his posts prove he's Trulia piece of shit./

☆☆☆☆☆

U & ya mans have a new deal when yah'll try anal sexin.
Feel down? He'll put the D between FR to ease the Great Depression./

☆☆☆☆☆

Moms the freakiest hoe that slore loooves piss in her vag.
My dogs house trained, do their Business Insider or get hit w/the mag./

☆☆☆

KNOW I'm savage. Ur sign ins useless like that Ronin faggot.
Said u'd 'make it a Classic'... noww we'll need an explanation for that wack shit./

☆☆☆☆☆


Total mismatch here. I do however recognize and will note that Flo Real has improved slightly since the last time I read his stuff 7 years ago. I think he'll be okay after a few more years of perfecting his style.

v-infiltration

Ender
01-13-2018, 07:33 AM
I got that mafia feel, industrial microwaves are a weapon for real
Wrap your face in celephane stabbed several times like your one of its meals
Simile bars need to be really clever for them to work for me, and this one was worded strangely. Wasn't feeling this
Youll find me in bars when its dark, i set the fuckin town alight while..
if infiltrates got bars on fire at knight, its only after he bit his creative style
Again, the wording is really strange here. Also, bars about people stealing other people's style or punches are too common to have much impact without great wording or some recent drama
Daydreamin hes a G with the stacks, hidin behind a screen with a frown
But bet your 'Crip to currency' bubble pops if the internet connection went down
There was a good concept here but poor execution
Got you over the barrel beatin your ass to death with ya own vest
Bitch the rock salt on the wound aint to dissolve the slugs layin in your chest
Interesting concept, execution was off
Can see the nameflips b4 you say them, im the FBI for battling kid
The way i expose 'bars' one hit ill have you swaying quicker then he did
The wording was off and made the punch weak
You used to be someone here, now your shook, a bitch with no lines of late
If you ever get a hold of bars again, i suspect its the prison showers as your viciously gang raped
Not feeling this

I've battled many lost souls who nevaa grasped the light.
Death's a process. I'm helpin Flo Chart his steps towards the afterlife./
Nice
Peeped you on site. That bullll u throw up's offf guy.
Infield you out & saw those lines were easyy to catch like a Pop Fly./
Didn't seem particularly harsh
Nobody buys ur made-up stories, they need to quit.
Cuz everything Real Estate in his posts prove he's Trulia piece of shit./
Nice wordplay here
U & ya mans have a new deal when yah'll try anal sexin.
Feel down? He'll put the D between FR to ease the Great Depression./
Solid wordplay again
Moms the freakiest hoe that slore loooves piss in her vag.
My dogs house trained, do their Business Insider or get hit w/the mag./
Wasn't feeling this. The wordplay was good but the concept seemed weak
KNOW I'm savage. Ur sign ins useless like that Ronin faggot.
Said u'd 'make it a Classic'... noww we'll need an explanation for that wack shit./
Passable

Infiltration had good wording and wordplay throughout and some decent concepts. Flo Real had some good concepts as well but his wording destroyed his punches and made them all fairly weak.

Vote - Infiltration

Habitat
01-13-2018, 09:30 AM
I got that mafia feel, industrial microwaves are a weapon for real
Wrap your face in celephane stabbed several times like your one of its meals
ehh not feelin this
Youll find me in bars when its dark, i set the fuckin town alight while..
if infiltrates got bars on fire at knight, its only after he bit his creative style
light
Daydreamin hes a G with the stacks, hidin behind a screen with a frown
But bet your 'Crip to currency' bubble pops if the internet connection went down
not feeling this
Got you over the barrel beatin your ass to death with ya own vest
Bitch the rock salt on the wound aint to dissolve the slugs layin in your chest
had potential, execution was off
Can see the nameflips b4 you say them, im the FBI for battling kid
The way i expose 'bars' one hit ill have you swaying quicker then he did
ok
You used to be someone here, now your shook, a bitch with no lines of late
If you ever get a hold of bars again, i suspect its the prison showers as your viciously gang raped
no

vs

I've battled many lost souls who nevaa grasped the light.
Death's a process. I'm helpin Flo Chart his steps towards the afterlife./
diggin it
Peeped you on site. That bullll u throw up's offf guy.
Infield you out & saw those lines were easyy to catch like a Pop Fly./
light
Nobody buys ur made-up stories, they need to quit.
Cuz everything Real Estate in his posts prove he's Trulia piece of shit./
dope
U & ya mans have a new deal when yah'll try anal sexin.
Feel down? He'll put the D between FR to ease the Great Depression./
cool
Moms the freakiest hoe that slore loooves piss in her vag.
My dogs house trained, do their Business Insider or get hit w/the mag./
coulda been worded differently ok as is
KNOW I'm savage. Ur sign ins useless like that Ronin faggot.
Said u'd 'make it a Classic'... noww we'll need an explanation for that wack shit./
didnt like this

pretty one sided here

v/infiltration

For Battling
01-13-2018, 01:55 PM
I got that mafia feel, industrial microwaves are a weapon for real
Wrap your face in celephane stabbed several times like your one of its meals
not bad
Youll find me in bars when its dark, i set the fuckin town alight while..
if infiltrates got bars on fire at knight, its only after he bit his creative style
ok
Daydreamin hes a G with the stacks, hidin behind a screen with a frown
But bet your 'Crip to currency' bubble pops if the internet connection went down
everything about this bar had potential but wording and execution messed it up
Got you over the barrel beatin your ass to death with ya own vest
Bitch the rock salt on the wound aint to dissolve the slugs layin in your chest
alright
Can see the nameflips b4 you say them, im the FBI for battling kid
The way i expose 'bars' one hit ill have you swaying quicker then he did
alright cool
You used to be someone here, now your shook, a bitch with no lines of late
If you ever get a hold of bars again, i suspect its the prison showers as your viciously gang raped
nah this is a complete miss

Not a bad verse at all tbh, I think everyone was downplaying a lot of your lines here judging by the votes but I dug a good amount of your stuff. Big improvement from stuff I’ve read from you in the past. Good job.

vs



I've battled many lost souls who nevaa grasped the light.
Death's a process. I'm helpin Flo Chart his steps towards the afterlife./
this was good
Peeped you on site. That bullll u throw up's offf guy.
Infield you out & saw those lines were easyy to catch like a Pop Fly./
ok
Nobody buys ur made-up stories, they need to quit.
Cuz everything Real Estate in his posts prove he's Trulia piece of shit./
this was cool, I have that app too lol
U & ya mans have a new deal when yah'll try anal sexin.
Feel down? He'll put the D between FR to ease the Great Depression./
decent at best for me
Moms the freakiest hoe that slore loooves piss in her vag.
My dogs house trained, do their Business Insider or get hit w/the mag./
alright cool
KNOW I'm savage. Ur sign ins useless like that Ronin faggot.
Said u'd 'make it a Classic'... noww we'll need an explanation for that wack shit./
nah

Good verse inf, another improvement. Not sure why you chose to add slashes after each bar but it doesn’t matter. You only had 1 clear miss. Flo has about 3.


Vote Infiltration

bleak
01-13-2018, 02:00 PM
Inf's closer only thing I wasn't fking w/ in his verse. FDR was fire imo

Flo has the idea. Drip to currency could have been flames but it was awkward af and took away from the point.

Haven't read Inf battles in a while but this was really good. Pretty much everything connected besides the closer. Flo couldn't have beat this with his best I don't think. Although I haven't really seen his best

V Inf

WRATH
01-13-2018, 02:01 PM
Inf got it.
.
Flo idk ur grown u probably want to figure it out yourself.

classickERBL
01-13-2018, 04:44 PM
flo was all filler cant even quote a bar
inf real estate , and dogs trained bars were dope
v- inf

Basic M
01-13-2018, 07:13 PM
Flo had a bunch of threats. Nothing clever. The sway bar waz cool. Inf went in this week. Solid showing, very consistent. Closer was the only bar i didnt rock with.

Winner/Infiltration