View Full Version : Profit vs For Battling - FB Wins
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For Battling
01-07-2018, 12:15 PM
Just 10-16
Profit
01-08-2018, 02:23 PM
Check. I'm busy as hell this week so I'll drop 10 on Wednesday
Sent 10 to Orc
For Battling
01-11-2018, 09:50 PM
You were raised by the coin, said it runs thru ya heritage
yet last week u couldn’t come up on old money like u lost ur inheritance
This fag is a problem. if there’s a such thing as gay guns den I’ve got em’
first it’ll blow the top.. then go limp wrist n’ bang ur boy at the bottom
So what’s he gon say? “Ur bars are flame...ing, that means ur totally gay!”
Stop w/ them weak jabs. u wouldn’t evn b considered a slugger if it weren’t for Dre.
Used to be cool, now ur fucked. U’d even help me out when I’m stuck
now this is payback.. watch as I lose Profit after I give em’ a buck!
on ur block & im cruisin..yes wit the protection, evn asked ur goons for directions
First I’ll peel off in front of ya house, then I’ll pop the hood like vehicle inspections
I’ll turn ur son into a monster. He said toys were boring till I gave him a gun
“I’m so done w/ this cunt”.. now he Ripsticks in the road when his mothers out front
Here’s how I settle the score, I’ll end up w/ my dick in ur whore
throw that bitch on the floor. I’ve got the key to her throat & that’s just the teaser.. Insidious 4
U & ur girl love to offend me. Jus knw I keep it tucked if u wna come test me
cuz one stick’ll put that witch n’ her lil bOo in the sky.. that’s Casper & Wendy
Profit
01-13-2018, 10:46 AM
Fuck where I start w/this twat, just know his heart gonna stop
Since he ain't learned how to agree to terms.. s'only right I put this mark in a box
Last week I lost to a name alone,u lost from boring us w/shitty raps
See I ain't win the popularity contest, u ain't win cos ur notorious fa spittin trash
I've applied little effort, he writes is ass off n hardly is felt
GOD he needs help, cos Forgives all he gots n drops sorry as hell
U ain't a G pussy, cos when sum1 calls u out uda made a point to step
S'like ur shopping fa quality hearing aides.. the way ur bitch ass avoiding dehf
U front hard fa rep but no1 believes this punk sparks a tech
Ur gat talkin just adds losses, u seen what happened tryna to gun Bar to death
If u on the block it's a court, cos where this bitch be? -> good burbs
So next time u say ull pull up, we know its practicin ya 15 footer
N please don't say u get mad hoes, just look in the mirror then buck ya scalp
Even if UR girl looks at u then rubs her pussy, just means she'd rather fuck herself
Appreciate the predictions, but seein u s'like gettin my eyes hit w/mase
S'why ghost1's blacking out gig.. were tips how to do vids hiding ur face
WRATH
01-13-2018, 04:51 PM
You were raised by the coin, said it runs thru ya heritage
yet last week u couldn’t come up on old money like u lost ur inheritance
Eh
This fag is a problem. if there’s a such thing as gay guns den I’ve got em’
first it’ll blow the top.. then go limp wrist n’ bang ur boy at the bottom
Ultra gay
So what’s he gon say? “Ur bars are flame...ing, that means ur totally gay!”
Stop w/ them weak jabs. u wouldn’t evn b considered a slugger if it weren’t for Dre.
Trash
Used to be cool, now ur fucked. U’d even help me out when I’m stuck
now this is payback.. watch as I lose Profit after I give em’ a buck!
Solid
on ur block & im cruisin..yes wit the protection, evn asked ur goons for directions
First I’ll peel off in front of ya house, then I’ll pop the hood like vehicle inspections
Nah
I’ll turn ur son into a monster. He said toys were boring till I gave him a gun
“I’m so done w/ this cunt”.. now he Ripsticks in the road when his mothers out front
Dumb
Here’s how I settle the score, I’ll end up w/ my dick in ur whore
throw that bitch on the floor. I’ve got the key to her throat & that’s just the teaser.. Insidious 4
Okay
U & ur girl love to offend me. Jus knw I keep it tucked if u wna come test me
cuz one stick’ll put that witch n’ her lil bOo in the sky.. that’s Casper & Wendy
Solid
Fuck where I start w/this twat, just know his heart gonna stop
Since he ain't learned how to agree to terms.. s'only right I put this mark in a boxfat wife
Eh
Last week I lost to a name alone,u lost from boring us w/shitty rapsfat wife
See I ain't win the popularity contest, u ain't win cos ur notorious fa spittin trashfat wife
Don't rhyme
I've applied little effort, he writes is ass off n hardly is feltfat wife
GOD he needs help, cos Forgives all he gots n drops sorry as hellfat wife
Don't rhyme
U ain't a G pussy, cos when sum1 calls u out uda made a point to stepfat wife
S'like ur shopping fa quality hearing aides.. the way ur bitch ass avoiding dehffat wife
Pretty wordy for such a light impact
U front hard fa rep but no1 believes this punk sparks a techfat wife
Ur gat talkin just adds losses, u seen what happened tryna to gun Bar to deathfat wife
Lmaooo
If u on the block it's a court, cos where this bitch be? -> good burbs
So next time u say ull pull up, we know its practicin ya 15 footerfat wife
Dumb
N please don't say u get mad hoes, just look in the mirror then buck ya scalp
Even if UR girl looks at u then rubs her pussy, just means she'd rather fuck herselffat wife
Lmaooooo
Appreciate the predictions, but seein u s'like gettin my eyes hit w/mase
S'why ghost1's blacking out gig.. were tips how to do vids hiding ur face
Ok
This ain't getting votes cause we didn't want to vote against you Z.
V profit
classickERBL
01-13-2018, 05:05 PM
for battling - inheritance bar dope ! pause the gay bars , profit give a buck was dope , pop the hood was light , didnt see insidious 4 cant relate
profit -some personal bars that i dont get cuz im knew here , the rest was ehhh
FB is nicer ,
v-for battling
Basic M
01-13-2018, 05:06 PM
For Battling dropped way below what he did vs Barcotic. Very underwhelming. The execution/wording in this battle wasnt clicking. The concepts were pretty eh too. Buck & insidious 4 were ya best. Profit was pretty consistent. Nothing crazy but he was pretty witty throughout.
Winner/Profit
bleak
01-14-2018, 01:13 PM
Am I the only one who thought Casper&Wendy was flames? The "that's" style took away from it but I can see thru that. Probably could have been worded better but I'm digging the concept. Just watched the I4 trailer and that bar is pretty nice. I didn't like Ripsticks but that's just opinion. I don't like how like any word can be used to describe guns, although sticks is a common one. Only when it's directly involved in the WP. It was technically sound.
Profit: first read. I like your style. Your wording could have been better but i could say that about 90% of the verses every week. Nothing really stood out to me. That being said, I can't really pick a bar that I hated. Everyone seems to vote consistency. Which was present, but FB also didn't have a huge disparity in +/- bars.
I think Casper&Wendy edge it for me, I loved those movies as a kid lmao
V FB
Fbs first few bars all missed on wasnt feeling that gay line at all. Last few were ok specifically closer an give em a buck lines were solid. Profit was the reverse of this with his first half being solid then not sure what happened. 2 bars didnt even rhyme an if you aint going to rhyme then it has to fire. Hard battle to decide on a winner because for me this was neck and neck. Ill go FB because i preferred his solid bars over profits but i feel people should of enjoyed profits mark in the box line more then they did.
V FB
BROKE LESNAR
01-15-2018, 10:05 AM
You were raised by the coin, said it runs thru ya heritage
yet last week u couldn’t come up on old money like u lost ur inheritance
☆☆☆☆☆
This fag is a problem. if there’s a such thing as gay guns den I’ve got em’
first it’ll blow the top.. then go limp wrist n’ bang ur boy at the bottom
☆ lmao wtf
So what’s he gon say? “Ur bars are flame...ing, that means ur totally gay!”
Stop w/ them weak jabs. u wouldn’t evn b considered a slugger if it weren’t for Dre.
☆
Used to be cool, now ur fucked. U’d even help me out when I’m stuck
now this is payback.. watch as I lose Profit after I give em’ a buck!
☆☆☆
on ur block & im cruisin..yes wit the protection, evn asked ur goons for directions
First I’ll peel off in front of ya house, then I’ll pop the hood like vehicle inspections
☆
I’ll turn ur son into a monster. He said toys were boring till I gave him a gun
“I’m so done w/ this cunt”.. now he Ripsticks in the road when his mothers out front
☆
Here’s how I settle the score, I’ll end up w/ my dick in ur whore
throw that bitch on the floor. I’ve got the key to her throat & that’s just the teaser.. Insidious 4
☆☆☆☆☆ fire lotb
U & ur girl love to offend me. Jus knw I keep it tucked if u wna come test me
cuz one stick’ll put that witch n’ her lil bOo in the sky.. that’s Casper & Wendy
☆☆☆☆☆ lmao
Fuck where I start w/this twat, just know his heart gonna stop
Since he ain't learned how to agree to terms.. s'only right I put this mark in a box
☆☆☆☆☆
Last week I lost to a name alone,u lost from boring us w/shitty raps
See I ain't win the popularity contest, u ain't win cos ur notorious fa spittin trash
☆
I've applied little effort, he writes is ass off n hardly is felt
GOD he needs help, cos Forgives all he gots n drops sorry as hell
☆☆☆
U ain't a G pussy, cos when sum1 calls u out uda made a point to step
S'like ur shopping fa quality hearing aides.. the way ur bitch ass avoiding dehf
☆☆☆☆☆
U front hard fa rep but no1 believes this punk sparks a tech
Ur gat talkin just adds losses, u seen what happened tryna to gun Bar to death
☆☆☆
If u on the block it's a court, cos where this bitch be? -> good burbs
So next time u say ull pull up, we know its practicin ya 15 footer
☆
N please don't say u get mad hoes, just look in the mirror then buck ya scalp
Even if UR girl looks at u then rubs her pussy, just means she'd rather fuck herself
☆
Appreciate the predictions, but seein u s'like gettin my eyes hit w/mase
S'why ghost1's blacking out gig.. were tips how to do vids hiding ur face
☆
I have Zelph winning this. He had some low moments but finished strong. Profit had some cool stuff but fell off towards the end.
v-Zelph
BROKE LESNAR
01-15-2018, 11:59 AM
Zelph wins 4-2
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