Letterman vs dehf vs Lotto Smirk - letterman wins

[Orc]

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Lotto Smirk Letterman dehf

[Orc]

Letterman:

Semi autos.. u emotional bitches gon see those ring
Cuz I’m quick to post n fire techs just to flame emo g’s
Dehf stay out the way cuz this shit for Lotto gets mean
But if you Budden hating, then I’ll have to rebuttal with an Em-16
I’ve had countless wars here. More wins than scars against me
History repeats itself.. cuz I’ve already battled an awful lot on NC
Lot if guns enter the brawl then im ending it all
When the five clapping over your mouth, it’s not an Indian call
I’m bored of this craft, it’s too easy to smoke a dork n a fag
Cuz when it comes to my wrath, I spit nasty like Orc in the mag
We can throw hands but keep in mind, the gun aint hard to find
I’ll fight dirty.. & bring the sub into play last minute like it’s garbage time
When Orc set this up, I was the last addition here probably
He wanted to see smirk at dehf, now it’ll be the reaction to viewing their bodies

[Orc]

Dehf verse:

I heard your girls are whores, sending me naked pictures while I'm a stallion in response...
But after one view? That 'nude'll (noodle) damage your rep' quicker than Gordon Ramsey at Italian restaurants!
So stop the press! When it come to sets? Watch his people spark the bastards...
Coz 'Lotto wouldnt come with a fresh clip' in a sequel with Marshall Mathers!
Letterman? Its obvious I'm better than so why pair me with this corny dufus?
Orc set the match and already 'the racist (race is) over' but it aint a remix with Joyner Lucas!
See I'm a champ! And these bums mad that their fam like me...
Originality? Well... I dont need to "loan any personells (person L's)' to know this is a ... Scam Likely!
I'm your leader, an Anti-Hero villain without the most sharp cape...
Its ironic how that hobbit 'stamped all over Letter' without a post marked date!
Your keys get ethered, ur wife agree and hopes that i dead dude next...
Coz when 'IKEA line' that bitch stay wet while shopping for new bedroom sets!
I seen y'all verses, know why ya nervous! Blatantly 'suck at gunplays' but aint talking that guy as a failed fighter...
Coz when the 'Hawk's come out, it keeps the steel (steal) in ya mouth' exposing u bitches as nail biters!

[BROKE LESNAR]

Letterman:

Semi autos.. u emotional bitches gon see those ring
Cuz I’m quick to post n fire techs just to flame emo g’s

☆☆☆☆☆

Dehf stay out the way cuz this shit for Lotto gets mean
But if you Budden hating, then I’ll have to rebuttal with an Em-16

☆☆☆☆☆

I’ve had countless wars here. More wins than scars against me
History repeats itself.. cuz I’ve already battled an awful lot on NC

☆

Lot if guns enter the brawl then im ending it all
When the five clapping over your mouth, it’s not an Indian call

☆☆☆☆☆

I’m bored of this craft, it’s too easy to smoke a dork n a fag
Cuz when it comes to my wrath, I spit nasty like Orc in the mag

☆

We can throw hands but keep in mind, the gun aint hard to find
I’ll fight dirty.. & bring the sub into play last minute like it’s garbage time

☆☆☆☆☆

When Orc set this up, I was the last addition here probably
He wanted to see smirk at dehf, now it’ll be the reaction to viewing their bodies

☆




Dehf verse:

I heard your girls are whores, sending me naked pictures while I'm a stallion in response...
But after one view? That 'nude'll (noodle) damage your rep' quicker than Gordon Ramsey at Italian restaurants!

☆ horrible wp

So stop the press! When it come to sets? Watch his people spark the bastards...
Coz 'Lotto wouldnt come with a fresh clip' in a sequel with Marshall Mathers!

☆

Letterman? Its obvious I'm better than so why pair me with this corny dufus?
Orc set the match and already 'the racist (race is) over' but it aint a remix with Joyner Lucas!

☆ another bad wp

See I'm a champ! And these bums mad that their fam like me...
Originality? Well... I dont need to "loan any personells (person L's)' to know this is a ... Scam Likely!

☆ played wp

I'm your leader, an Anti-Hero villain without the most sharp cape...
Its ironic how that hobbit 'stamped all over Letter' without a post marked date!

☆ hated the setup with everying in my soul, any np letter related is played

Your keys get ethered, ur wife agree and hopes that i dead dude next...
Coz when 'IKEA line' that bitch stay wet while shopping for new bedroom sets!

☆ played wp

I seen y'all verses, know why ya nervous! Blatantly 'suck at gunplays' but aint talking that guy as a failed fighter...
Coz when the 'Hawk's come out, it keeps the steel (steal) in ya mouth' exposing u bitches as nail biters!

-☆ u get the negative star, i can't believe you dropped a steel pun jesus christ


Well no surprise here, Letterman wins convincingly. Dehf's verse was tart semen.

v-Letterman

[Ender]

Letterman:

Semi autos.. u emotional bitches gon see those ring
Cuz I’m quick to post n fire techs just to flame emo g’s
Doesn't rhyme, so doesn't work for me, which is a shame because I liked the concept
Dehf stay out the way cuz this shit for Lotto gets mean
But if you Budden hating, then I’ll have to rebuttal with an Em-16
Solid
I’ve had countless wars here. More wins than scars against me
History repeats itself.. cuz I’ve already battled an awful lot on NC
Nice again
Lot if guns enter the brawl then im ending it all
When the five clapping over your mouth, it’s not an Indian call
Alrightish
I’m bored of this craft, it’s too easy to smoke a dork n a fag
Cuz when it comes to my wrath, I spit nasty like Orc in the mag
Nah, wasn't feeling this
We can throw hands but keep in mind, the gun aint hard to find
I’ll fight dirty.. & bring the sub into play last minute like it’s garbage time
OK
When Orc set this up, I was the last addition here probably
He wanted to see smirk at dehf, now it’ll be the reaction to viewing their bodies
Ehh, alright

Dehf verse:

I heard your girls are whores, sending me naked pictures while I'm a stallion in response...
But after one view? That 'nude'll (noodle) damage your rep' quicker than Gordon Ramsey at Italian restaurants!
No, your lines are too long, and don't explain the concept in brackets
So stop the press! When it come to sets? Watch his people spark the bastards...
Coz 'Lotto wouldnt come with a fresh clip' in a sequel with Marshall Mathers!
I liked the concept here, but poor execution
Letterman? Its obvious I'm better than so why pair me with this corny dufus?
Orc set the match and already 'the racist (race is) over' but it aint a remix with Joyner Lucas!
No, there's a concept here somewhere, but needs a lot of work
See I'm a champ! And these bums mad that their fam like me...
Originality? Well... I dont need to "loan any personells (person L's)' to know this is a ... Scam Likely!
This was a stretch to try and make the wordplay work and the concept was weak
I'm your leader, an Anti-Hero villain without the most sharp cape...
Its ironic how that hobbit 'stamped all over Letter' without a post marked date!
No
Your keys get ethered, ur wife agree and hopes that i dead dude next...
Coz when 'IKEA line' that bitch stay wet while shopping for new bedroom sets!
The wording here needs to be sharpened, but your best line so far
I seen y'all verses, know why ya nervous! Blatantly 'suck at gunplays' but aint talking that guy as a failed fighter...
Coz when the 'Hawk's come out, it keeps the steel (steal) in ya mouth' exposing u bitches as nail biters!
This was ridiculously long. Seriously, lines can't be this long. Didn't like it regardless

This was pretty one-sided. Letterman was pretty good, I liked the wordplay. Dehf, your lines are way too long, you need to cut them down. And don't explain your lines. Not with brackets and not with quotation marks. If the voter can't understand the punch without you holding their hand, work on the punch some more or scrap it.

Vote - Letterman

[Saint]

Letterman won.
Dehf you have a decent enough approach but the wordplay is not good.

Lett- i fucked with that indian battlecry line.
emojis & garbage were cool

vote letterman

[WRATH]

Letterman:

Semi autos.. u emotional bitches gon see those ring
Cuz I’m quick to post n fire techs just to flame emo g’s
Dehf stay out the way cuz this shit for Lotto gets mean
But if you Budden hating, then I’ll have to rebuttal with an Em-16

Okay

I’ve had countless wars here. More wins than scars against me
History repeats itself.. cuz I’ve already battled an awful lot on NC
Lot if guns enter the brawl then im ending it all
When the five clapping over your mouth, it’s not an Indian call

Nice

I’m bored of this craft, it’s too easy to smoke a dork n a fag
Cuz when it comes to my wrath, I spit nasty like Orc in the mag

Yeet

We can throw hands but keep in mind, the gun aint hard to find
I’ll fight dirty.. & bring the sub into play last minute like it’s garbage time

Heh

When Orc set this up, I was the last addition here probably
He wanted to see smirk at dehf, now it’ll be the reaction to viewing their bodies

Okay
Mmm



I heard your girls are whores, sending me naked pictures while I'm a stallion in response...
But after one view? That 'nude'll (noodle) damage your rep' quicker than Gordon Ramsey at Italian restaurants!

Okay

So stop the press! When it come to sets? Watch his people spark the bastards...
Coz 'Lotto wouldnt come with a fresh clip' in a sequel with Marshall Mathers!

Nah

Letterman? Its obvious I'm better than so why pair me with this corny dufus?
Orc set the match and already 'the racist (race is) over' but it aint a remix with Joyner Lucas!

Eh

See I'm a champ! And these bums mad that their fam like me...
Originality? Well... I dont need to "loan any personells (person L's)' to know this is a ... Scam Likely!

Solid

I'm your leader, an Anti-Hero villain without the most sharp cape...
Its ironic how that hobbit 'stamped all over Letter' without a post marked date!

These are weird connections you're making

Your keys get ethered, ur wife agree and hopes that i dead dude next...
Coz when 'IKEA line' that bitch stay wet while shopping for new bedroom sets!

Okay

I seen y'all verses, know why ya nervous! Blatantly 'suck at gunplays' but aint talking that guy as a failed fighter...
Coz when the 'Hawk's come out, it keeps the steel (steal) in ya mouth' exposing u bitches as nail biters!

Nah way too much going on


Letterman had a lot of filler but overall better

Dehf you gotta shake that noodle (nude'll) explanations i promise you we'll get it.

V letternan

[bleak]

Tart semen I'm dead lmao

Anyways yah it wasn't good. Lett you had the garbage time shit but probably didn't need it. Lotto a bitch for not showing. Dehf I know you've read this a million times so you need to stop the expo shit. That being said, i saw a verse today that had like 50 expos so there's that.

V Letterman

[Profit]

Letterman:

Semi autos.. u emotional bitches gon see those ring
Cuz I’m quick to post n fire techs just to flame emo g’s

Ok

Dehf stay out the way cuz this shit for Lotto gets mean
But if you Budden hating, then I’ll have to rebuttal with an Em-16

Ok

I’ve had countless wars here. More wins than scars against me
History repeats itself.. cuz I’ve already battled an awful lot on NC

Eh

Lot if guns enter the brawl then im ending it all
When the five clapping over your mouth, it’s not an Indian call

Fire

I’m bored of this craft, it’s too easy to smoke a dork n a fag
Cuz when it comes to my wrath, I spit nasty like Orc in the mag

Ok

We can throw hands but keep in mind, the gun aint hard to find
I’ll fight dirty.. & bring the sub into play last minute like it’s garbage time

Dope

When Orc set this up, I was the last addition here probably
He wanted to see smirk at dehf, now it’ll be the reaction to viewing their bodies

Ehh



I heard your girls are whores, sending me naked pictures while I'm a stallion in response...
But after one view? That 'nude'll (noodle) damage your rep' quicker than Gordon Ramsey at Italian restaurants!

Ehh weak wp

So stop the press! When it come to sets? Watch his people spark the bastards...
Coz 'Lotto wouldnt come with a fresh clip' in a sequel with Marshall Mathers!

Ehhh ok

Letterman? Its obvious I'm better than so why pair me with this corny dufus?
Orc set the match and already 'the racist (race is) over' but it aint a remix with Joyner Lucas!

Played

See I'm a champ! And these bums mad that their fam like me...
Originality? Well... I dont need to "loan any personells (person L's)' to know this is a ... Scam Likely!

Played


I'm your leader, an Anti-Hero villain without the most sharp cape...
Its ironic how that hobbit 'stamped all over Letter' without a post marked date!

Ok


Your keys get ethered, ur wife agree and hopes that i dead dude next...
Coz when 'IKEA line' that bitch stay wet while shopping for new bedroom sets!

Played

I seen y'all verses, know why ya nervous! Blatantly 'suck at gunplays' but aint talking that guy as a failed fighter...
Coz when the 'Hawk's come out, it keeps the steel (steal) in ya mouth' exposing u bitches as nail biters!

Weak wp

Overall letter was more consistent here. Dehf had lotta old plays that hurt him.. just stray away from the obvious.. letter got this
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