Alvin Karpis vs For Battling - FB WINS

[Orc]

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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[Alvin Karpis]

how many

[For Battling]

Realistically 10 but we can match 1st

[For Battling]

Ext

[Alvin Karpis]

Ext for 10?? lol

have it, I got 12 ready

[Alvin Karpis]

Lol I can’t imagine the hoes you pull, bet ya last ex was somethin dirty
I should be handing out For XLs and I don’t mean my fuckin jersey
That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude
We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do
That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite
Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life
& you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off
No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash
The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit
I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick
Your NBL run consisted of retards bangin toys that send slugs
From now on For season’s more like a super 8 w/ bed bugs....

[For Battling]

For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec
Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet
I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around
Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound
Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak
So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be
Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools
Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule
Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me
Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease
ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit
Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss!

[Krucial Th1rt3en]

alvin karpis

Lol I can’t imagine the hoes you pull, bet ya last ex was somethin dirty
I should be handing out For XLs and I don’t mean my fuckin jersey

---not really feeling this---

That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude
We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do
That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite
Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life

---this could be better---

& you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off
No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash

---LOL---

The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit
I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick

---lol, not really feelin this though, exept for as a joke---

Your NBL run consisted of retards bangin toys that send slugs
From now on For season’s more like a super 8 w/ bed bugs....

---i have no clue what this guy is talking about, some in-house bars im not catching
seems like all personals too, exept the wyclef bar---

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for battling

For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec
Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet

---this shit fire, my kinda style---

I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around
Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound

---FIREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT this boy crazy---

Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak
So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be

---dope---

Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools
Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule

---lmao this shit made me laugh---

Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me
Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease

---i dont really get this one---

ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit
Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss!

---this shit is fire bro---

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v/FOR BATTLING, this boy pen is fireeeeeeee
alvins shit seems like all personals, even if i did know of the personals
he is doing, he isnt punching enuff for my liking, i f w bars like FB is doing
his pen is really the shit i like. but i see he's talking bout FB's lip lol

[BROKE LESNAR]

Lol I can’t imagine the hoes you pull, bet ya last ex was somethin dirty
I should be handing out For XLs and I don’t mean my fuckin jersey

☆

That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude
We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do

☆☆☆☆☆

That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite
Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life

☆

& you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off
No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash

☆☆☆☆☆

The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit
I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick

☆

Your NBL run consisted of retards bangin toys that send slugs
From now on For season’s more like a super 8 w/ bed bugs....

☆☆☆☆☆




For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec
Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet

☆

I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around
Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound

☆☆☆☆☆

Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak
So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be

☆☆☆☆☆

Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools
Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule

☆☆☆☆☆

Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me
Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease

☆☆☆☆☆

ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit
Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss!

☆☆☆☆☆

Zelph took this convincingly. But the gun bar shit is getting repetitive. I was lenient on his verse this time but in the future he has to switch it up because shits getting tired.

v-Zelph

[Schadenfreude]

Lol I can’t imagine the hoes you pull, bet ya last ex was somethin dirty
I should be handing out For XLs and I don’t mean my fuckin jersey
Decent
That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude
We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do
I hate initial plays, but this hit hard..lol
That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite
Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life
Just OK
& you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off
No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash
Redundant
The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit
I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick
Overdosed on lip jokes
Your NBL run consisted of retards bangin toys that send slugs
From now on For season’s more like a super 8 w/ bed bugs....
Idk weird wording imo


For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec
Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet
Good opener
I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around
Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound
That's an old concept
Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak
So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be
Nice
Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools
Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule
Naaaw
Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me
Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease
DOPE
ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit
Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss!
Lol..I like this

Overall ZELPH aka FOR BATTLING took this comfortably. Idk wtf Al was on w/ all those lips jokes on top of each other.

[WRATH]

Lol I can’t imagine the hoes you pull, bet ya last ex was somethin dirty
I should be handing out For XLs and I don’t mean my fuckin jersey

Handing out what?

That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude
We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do

Nice

That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite
Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life

Loool

& you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off
No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash

Lol okay

The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit
I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick

Lol

Your NBL run consisted of retards bangin toys that send slugs
From now on For season’s more like a super 8 w/ bed bugs....

Solid



For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec
Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet

Nice

I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s aroundfat wife
Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound

Nice

Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak
So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be

Cool

Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools
Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule

Okay

Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me
Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease

Loool

ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit
Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss!

Light


V karp

This was dope.

[Flow]

Zelph took this with a consistant verse, pretty much ever bar hit and hit well. Multiple use of gun bars may have gone against him but then AK brought too many lip jokes an they have gotten old now. AK had 3 decent bars but alot of it was light jabs an it makes me wonder if he underestimated his opponant a bit.

Anyway Zelph got this

[Barcotic]

cleft lol
winter classic
4 seasons

vs

drug mule

iunno how its been a blowout for fb, he had a lot of 'like' bars n bad multis for concepts that needed more. IMO
v/karpis

[Pinot Grij]

Alvin

That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite
Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life
lmaoaoao.

oaoaoaoaoaoa.

& you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off
No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash

great set up -- simple rhyming adds to a comical punch. dope.

The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit
I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick

Rhyming was dope, but I think the 'winter classic' holding it together lessened the impact.

vs.

For Battling

For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec
Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet

I'm getting sick of "arms" bars -- every battle got "arms" bars these days. Like how many scenarios can we dream up where ordinary folks are holding their arms out and we can relate it to a life-threatening GUN situation. Anyways, cool set-up tho.

I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around
Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound

Operation is dope.

Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak
So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be

Shell is ok.

Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools
Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule

I'm feeling the same way about ROUNDS as I do about ARMS. Like, how many round things have we talked about in general. It's a very common shape for everyday items.

I thought with Karp's slow start that FB could really capitalize, but I just don't respond to some of the wordplay, although the construction around it was tight. For me, Karpis had some of the funnier/hard lines that stuck out when all was said and done.

Vote -- Alvin Karpis

[Kill Spree]

That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude
We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do
& you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off
No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash
LMAO

Vs

For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec
Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet
Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak
So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be
Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me
Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease
ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit
Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss!


Mann...Zelph took this easy. Karp over did the lip joints. Zelph in his prime right now i think since i'm 4-0 Vs him I've never seen him write well. THought this was pretty one sided tho. V/FB

[Profit]

Lol I can’t imagine the hoes you pull, bet ya last ex was somethin dirty
I should be handing out For XLs and I don’t mean my fuckin jersey

Ok


That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude
We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do

Cool

That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite
Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life

Fire!

& you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off
No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash

Lmao dope!

The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit
I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick

Ok

Your NBL run consisted of retards bangin toys that send slugs
From now on For season’s more like a super 8 w/ bed bugs....

Dope!



or yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec
Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet

Fire!

I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around
Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound

Ehh, seen this concept used a few times

Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak
So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be

Nice

Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools
Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule

Ok

Had a short run as a legend, now ur straight trash to me
Bro...that sick spell only lasted about 3 months like a Bags disease

Nice

ur mad cuz ur girl dipped. She finally realized u weren’t worth shit
Now there’s a Nina on ur dirt lips.. ready to make sparks fly like a first kiss!

Cool..



Dope battle, props gents.. AK had a verse w/no misses n couple couple light jabs while For had one miss but other than that dropped some good shit. This is tuff man I feel it's rather even regardless of the miss cos for still had some heavy shit but the consistency of AK was solid n even added some humor in there. Ion know i feel AK barely edges this in what I feel was botw. Good job guys.. vote AK

[Ronin]

That FBI line made Cronus ghost but no pitty though for dude
We watched C left, and it’s still haunting us in every video you do
That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite
Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life
& you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off
No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash
The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit
I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick
Your NBL run consisted of retards bangin toys that send slugs
From now on For season’s more like a super 8 w/ bed bugs....

Vs

Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak
So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be


V. Ak. Most of zelphs verse read like a url wannabe

[Enbombz]

That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite
Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life
& you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off
No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash

vs

For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec
Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet
I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around
Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound
Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak
So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be


I got zelph here. Karp you had an okay verse i liked the bars i quoted but i wasn't feeling that c left shit. You ran with the lip thing and it paid off at times but only so much you can do with angle. Its got comedy value but it runs out. Zelph prob the best verse ive seen from you tbh. The gun shit again like with karp with your lip gets a little repetitive but everything worked. Gotta say i enjoyed it more so like yeh vote zelph

[bleak]

This seems to be all according to voters' taste

For me, the lip jokes wore thin. While they were executed well, by the 3rd one I was burnt out. Also, Z dropped heavy for this battle. I know I haven't read many verses from him but this is up there w/ the best. AK still did a good job w/ the ammo he loaded but should have thrown a curveball which would have won it.

Blast the 9 was nice, simple but effective. It's really close, on first read I wanted to lean AK. Probably the repetition of reading these battles wore me out on the lip shit. Good battle tho

Z

[Unfukwitable]

C left
Closer

Vs

Operation
Shell of what u used to be
First kiss


Felt one had better angles here... i thought something else was gonna happen here honestly... v/ For Battling

[For Battling]

For Battling Wins 8-5