Profit vs Defiant - PROFIT WINS

[Orc]

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

[Profit]

Broke 8-0'd u, n imma leave u smellin pavement
Cos 1 punch'll rock this dogs face, no eagles celebration
U have no chance of winnin, n the league knows that this kids wack
So beatin me would take a Vikings miracle, unfortunately nobody Diggs that
See G's don't pick on the vulnerable, so this ain't a position I'm wanting to be
Just cos im fully loc I ain't a bully yo, I gets no pleasure from punkin a geek
I'm not comin w/heat, n no1 blames me cos yo ass isn't fire
Call it lack a desire, cos I only put in work against the passionate writers
Since 2013 N ur only competition is herbs, u outta listen than nerd
Stop gettin HURT n face the fact ur not built fa this league.. Robert Griffen III
See it's very clear that ur barely feared, bro
So Beating u s'called doin what I'm podado...<-- that ain't a Aries Spears joke

[For Battling]

Defiant you have until midnight pst

[Pinot Grij]

Opener is ok.
Diggs is cool.
Robert Griffin line is nice af.

I feel like you watch a lot of football. Fun little read.

[For Battling]

Broke 8-0'd u, n imma leave u smellin pavement
Cos 1 punch'll rock this dogs face, no eagles celebration
alright
U have no chance of winnin, n the league knows that this kids wack
So beatin me would take a Vikings miracle, unfortunately nobody Diggs that
this was cool
See G's don't pick on the vulnerable, so this ain't a position I'm wanting to be
Just cos im fully loc I ain't a bully yo, I gets no pleasure from punkin a geek
wasnt feelin this one
I'm not comin w/heat, n no1 blames me cos yo ass isn't fire
Call it lack a desire, cos I only put in work against the passionate writers
hmm this can work both ways
Since 2013 N ur only competition is herbs, u outta listen than nerd
Stop gettin HURT n face the fact ur not built fa this league.. Robert Griffen III
dope concept, wording could have been a little better but overall I liked this punch
See it's very clear that ur barely feared, bro
So Beating u s'called doin what I'm podado...<-- that ain't a Aries Spears joke
decent, don’t like how you executed this too much

You would have won if he had showed either way, but this was a cool little verse. Diggs and RG3 were both nice

[Orc]

Eagles celebration was nice, Diggs was a cool flip. The other football flip was okay too. Liked the swagger in the passionate line although it wasn't necessarily a heavy punch. Thought the verse was pretty consistent as a whole and you've got a nice writing style.