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Orc
01-15-2018, 02:13 PM
Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

Kill Spree
01-15-2018, 04:46 PM
Going 12

Kill Spree
01-19-2018, 01:05 AM
1
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10
Or ext

Maximus
01-19-2018, 05:58 AM
hey sorry I didn't check in.. will drop 10 tomorrow if you're cool with it Killing Spree

Kill Spree
01-19-2018, 08:15 AM
hey sorry I didn't check in.. will drop 10 tomorrow if you're cool with it Killing Spree

Ya

Kill Spree
01-19-2018, 10:21 PM
Yo at max I have no time to write a verse. So the 1-10 is what you get

For Battling
01-19-2018, 10:25 PM
Yo at max I have no time to write a verse. So the 1-10 is what you get

Are you denying his ext after you already ok’ed it?
BROKE LESNAR I’m letting you handle this one

Kill Spree
01-19-2018, 10:56 PM
Are you denying his ext after you already ok’ed it?
BROKE LESNAR I’m letting you handle this one

Didn’t say that... I am telling him I won’t have any time to write so he can post something and get an easy win if he shows.


I just don’t want the no show boot

Maximus
01-20-2018, 12:46 AM
five mics??? your rating is low bro, so seek help in desperation
you're wack!.. on any competence scale, Killing is One Tenth like decimation
you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero
you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero
shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes
like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed
gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania
you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia
and yeah there's more shooting, you're gonna get fucked like twats in orgies
with glocks and forties, I'll leave this pussy plugged like suppositories Killing Spree

Schadenfreude
01-20-2018, 01:26 AM
KS would've loss anyway, garbage ass..


five mics??? your rating is low bro, so seek help in desperation
you're wack!.. on any competence scale, Killing is One Tenth like decimation
Wording ruined the concept
you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero
you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero
Light af
shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes
like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed
Too predictable
gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania
you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia
Played concept
and yeah there's more shooting, you're gonna get fucked like twats in orgies
with glocks and forties, I'll leave this pussy plugged like suppositories
I thought bitches put 'em in their asses? Just OK

Work on harsher, much more personal punches, avoid name plays & used more relatable or popular references.

For Battling
01-20-2018, 01:28 AM
Killing Spree you’ll be in for next week but you gotta actually drop bro


five mics??? your rating is low bro, so seek help in desperation
you're wack!.. on any competence scale, Killing is One Tenth like decimation
decent
you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero
you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero
this was cool
shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes
like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed
damn this was fire
gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania
you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia
lol light
and yeah there's more shooting, you're gonna get fucked like twats in orgies
with glocks and forties, I'll leave this pussy plugged like suppositories
ok mr multi. Good s&f style bar


Overall pretty good verse bro, wardrobe malfunction was flames.

King Karaoke
01-20-2018, 09:02 AM
Hi...


you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero
you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero
i like this. Thought it was creative.
shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes
like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed
This was nice too.
gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania
you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia
This was dope.

I dont recall any of Killing Spree's verses but this probably wouldve been a good battle. That closer wasnt good tho. I like your wording. I read your stuff all the time. I dont think you need harshness. I think you need consistency. Dont just throw any line out there to make the line limit.

Bye...

Pinot Grij
01-20-2018, 09:41 AM
Patient Zero got a slight smirk
Nobody could flip a 'strap' line and get a reaction these days
Euthanasia is amusing
And yea, I think someone else said it, but I think suppositories go in your butt, haha

Cool-ish verse. Opener was a little off.

Kill Spree
01-20-2018, 08:49 PM
five mics??? your rating is low bro, so seek help in desperation
you're wack!.. on any competence scale, Killing is One Tenth like decimation
this was light
you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero
you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero
this was cool
shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes
like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed
I Fuck with this
gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania
you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia
meh.. basic
and yeah there's more shooting, you're gonna get fucked like twats in orgies
with glocks and forties, I'll leave this pussy plugged like suppositories Killing Spree
Nah this was light

TBH I told you to save your bars I gave you the win. I should have just posted late cos this verse was light. and i gave U the Ext but oh well. props for showing