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ACTIVATE SELF
01-17-2018, 01:46 PM
.........

brokenhal0
01-17-2018, 06:06 PM
yo like your a good writer ...but like your safe, you dont express your soul its just like painting with no ''Pain'' in the Ting

ACTIVATE SELF
01-17-2018, 06:26 PM
Thank you for the read, feed and observation. I will work on providing more depth.

Inno
01-17-2018, 10:28 PM
ill give this a proper feed tomorrow

ACTIVATE SELF
01-17-2018, 10:55 PM
That I would appreciate, my dude. Good lookin out.

ACTIVATE SELF
01-18-2018, 01:26 PM
My bad

Elemental P
01-24-2018, 03:34 PM
It started a bit slower at first but you definitely picked it up once you start reading it. Nice topical piece I used to do topical tournies a lot. Solid flow and some ok multis. But nice imagery and approach to this. Stay grinding