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View Full Version : Contenders Match: King Karaoke vs. WRATH - KARAOKE WINS


For Battling
01-22-2018, 02:43 PM
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King Karaoke WRATH

King Karaoke
01-23-2018, 03:17 PM
Hi...

12...

Bye...

WRATH
01-23-2018, 05:41 PM
Light

King Karaoke
01-24-2018, 10:12 AM
Hi...



I got nothing but dimes in my phone, they keep asking can we get it on
All your chicks are ugly on the other hand, you've hit more 3's than Lebron
You robbed Basic without a ski mask or bandanna
I'll let it spray yo & if any of your homies try to join the fray tho, they'll be like Santana
Pryde? Wrath? Barely winning yet you still love this shit
Makes sense u name yourself after deadly sins, you're a glutton for punishment
Your punches lack sting so they'll never be malicious
Your sorry excuse of a verse made the Phil and Genocide beef look vicious
I'm from the hood where there's shootouts and niggas that deal coke
Toonchi, Katie or spice u gotta be on either one since you've never had any real smoke
This is your first contender's match ever, it's truly sad
Cuz you've been here longer than me yet qualified for every newbie tourney we've had


Bye...

WRATH
01-24-2018, 11:43 AM
Netcees O.J., so what u got away with killing whites years ago
U Come up from behind those bars i'll be on Juice like Rich Piana 2Pac and 3 year olds
You catching rights and lefts, my body blows destroy a nigga thats bitch made
While his body blows because his fat ass had a dad bod since the 5th grade
Put ur head in the sink n drown it, u want smoke wit me i doubt it
If i pull up There'll be a hold up like I had to think about it
You let knucklehead do what? Man i'd of fucked dude up jack, Its simple
U let that Jew kill the father son AND the holy spirit trapped within you
Battle of biblical proportions. No one can impede this bout
If someone Judas outta this battle they called your boss and exposed your Netcees account
Ima Hitman, assassin, soon as i get the papes u finished
I heard u Contract killer.. diseases from a buncha aint shit bitches

Nick James
01-24-2018, 04:46 PM
karoake ur opener n closer was on point. The real smoke line was coo..

Overall decent verse.

Wrath that hold up/think about line had sum swag.. simple but hit. Wasnt rlly feelin the jew punches tho felt u culda did more wit the concept if thats the angle u was goin wit.. not bad overall tho.

I got karoake takin it by a punch or 2

V/ k

Schadenfreude
01-26-2018, 12:49 AM
I got nothing but dimes in my phone, they keep asking can we get it on
All your chicks are ugly on the other hand, you've hit more 3's than Lebron
I ain't really drawing w/ it
You robbed Basic without a ski mask or bandanna
I'll let it spray yo & if any of your homies try to join the fray tho, they'll be like Santana
Damn..lol, RIP
Pryde? Wrath? Barely winning yet you still love this shit
Makes sense u name yourself after deadly sins, you're a glutton for punishment
Good personal
Your punches lack sting so they'll never be malicious
Your sorry excuse of a verse made the Phil and Genocide beef look vicious
Lol decent
I'm from the hood where there's shootouts and niggas that deal coke
Toonchi, Katie or spice u gotta be on either one since you've never had any real smoke
Yea this cool
This is your first contender's match ever, it's truly sad
Cuz you've been here longer than me yet qualified for every newbie tourney we've had
Shit, nice closer


Netcees O.J., so what u got away with killing whites years ago
U Come up from behind those bars i'll be on Juice like Rich Piana 2Pac and 3 year olds
Naaaw
You catching rights and lefts, my body blows destroy a nigga thats bitch made
While his body blows because his fat ass had a dad bod since the 5th grade
I see the concept, but that wording's weird imo
Put ur head in the sink n drown it, u want smoke wit me i doubt it
If i pull up There'll be a hold up like I had to think about it
Lol..this is slick
You let knucklehead do what? Man i'd of fucked dude up jack, Its simple
U let that Jew kill the father son AND the holy spirit trapped within you
Jews killing Jesus is literally a 2000 y.o. concept
Battle of biblical proportions. No one can impede this bout
If someone Judas outta this battle they called your boss and exposed your Netcees account
Lol..I like this, even tho it's a played personal
Ima Hitman, assassin, soon as i get the papes u finished
I heard u Contract killer.. diseases from a buncha aint shit bitches
Simple, still decent

VOTE KARAOKE just too consistent & too harsh w/ the hits.

Habitat
01-26-2018, 08:29 AM
I got nothing but dimes in my phone, they keep asking can we get it on
All your chicks are ugly on the other hand, you've hit more 3's than Lebron
this is dope
You robbed Basic without a ski mask or bandanna
I'll let it spray yo & if any of your homies try to join the fray tho, they'll be like Santana
not diggin this one
Pryde? Wrath? Barely winning yet you still love this shit
Makes sense u name yourself after deadly sins, you're a glutton for punishment
lol aight
Your punches lack sting so they'll never be malicious
Your sorry excuse of a verse made the Phil and Genocide beef look vicious
light
I'm from the hood where there's shootouts and niggas that deal coke
Toonchi, Katie or spice u gotta be on either one since you've never had any real smoke
aight this is good
This is your first contender's match ever, it's truly sad
Cuz you've been here longer than me yet qualified for every newbie tourney we've had
statementish

vs

Netcees O.J., so what u got away with killing whites years ago
U Come up from behind those bars i'll be on Juice like Rich Piana 2Pac and 3 year olds
not feelin this...
You catching rights and lefts, my body blows destroy a nigga thats bitch made
While his body blows because his fat ass had a dad bod since the 5th grade
ok
Put ur head in the sink n drown it, u want smoke wit me i doubt it
If i pull up There'll be a hold up like I had to think about it
light
You let knucklehead do what? Man i'd of fucked dude up jack, Its simple
U let that Jew kill the father son AND the holy spirit trapped within you
not a fan
Battle of biblical proportions. No one can impede this bout
If someone Judas outta this battle they called your boss and exposed your Netcees account
im assuming his alias is judas? This was nice i thought
Ima Hitman, assassin, soon as i get the papes u finished
I heard u Contract killer.. diseases from a buncha aint shit bitches
ok.. coulda done more with this tho

King karaoke had the harder hitting punches here.

v/kk

For Battling
01-26-2018, 05:18 PM
I got nothing but dimes in my phone, they keep asking can we get it on
All your chicks are ugly on the other hand, you've hit more 3's than Lebron
definitey could have used someone other than lebron considering he’s been shit at the 3 lately. But aside from that this was pretty cool
You robbed Basic without a ski mask or bandanna
I'll let it spray yo & if any of your homies try to join the fray tho, they'll be like Santana
alright cool
Pryde? Wrath? Barely winning yet you still love this shit
Makes sense u name yourself after deadly sins, you're a glutton for punishment
good again
Your punches lack sting so they'll never be malicious
Your sorry excuse of a verse made the Phil and Genocide beef look vicious
decent at best
I'm from the hood where there's shootouts and niggas that deal coke
Toonchi, Katie or spice u gotta be on either one since you've never had any real smoke
NICE
This is your first contender's match ever, it's truly sad
Cuz you've been here longer than me yet qualified for every newbie tourney we've had
ok


Vs


Netcees O.J., so what u got away with killing whites years ago
U Come up from behind those bars i'll be on Juice like Rich Piana 2Pac and 3 year olds
lol corny man
You catching rights and lefts, my body blows destroy a nigga thats bitch made
While his body blows because his fat ass had a dad bod since the 5th grade
lmao this made me smirk
Put ur head in the sink n drown it, u want smoke wit me i doubt it
If i pull up There'll be a hold up like I had to think about it
alright not bad I liked it
You let knucklehead do what? Man i'd of fucked dude up jack, Its simple
U let that Jew kill the father son AND the holy spirit trapped within you
this was cool
Battle of biblical proportions. No one can impede this bout
If someone Judas outta this battle they called your boss and exposed your Netcees account
decent
Ima Hitman, assassin, soon as i get the papes u finished
I heard u Contract killer.. diseases from a buncha aint shit bitches
nah

This was a dope battle. Wrath getting a lot better each week, good shit. kK went almost flawless here, aside from a couple decent ones he didn’t have any misses. Wrath had 2 misses here, the opener & closer. Good shit but gotta go with king karaoke

Vote King Karaoke

Saint
01-27-2018, 02:13 PM
I've got Kar with a more consistent verse
real smoke, fray, closer was decent personal

Wrath- u had more misses.
Hold up, body blows seen similar
Judas- Wording a little off, but i mean nice try.
Cool battle

vote- kar

Suthaveli
01-27-2018, 04:52 PM
Karaoke.is.just.raw.
so simple but so effective w.personals & currents. imo, he has great manipulation of making things wrk for him on the board or even setting you up to use a punch against u in the future. sheeit, i caught one last season. the only bar i didn't rly bang w. was the phil & geno current event bar. everything else was above average to great.


Wrath verse wasn't bad. I actually kinda dug the winter verse tbh, it probably could've beat some others unfortunately u caught barc in a pissed off state after taking some time off from the other joint. this case, he drew someone like Karaoke & it wasn't working out. the dad bod line & the hold up line was actually gd. I need explanation on the Knucklehead line becuz ive seen this mention elsewhere but haven't done the research on it as of yet. aside from that, the 2 other bars lacked for me. but def great to see improvement in you.

mvgt- King Karaoke

Ender
01-28-2018, 06:31 AM
Hi...



I got nothing but dimes in my phone, they keep asking can we get it on
All your chicks are ugly on the other hand, you've hit more 3's than Lebron
@Aero made this exact joke in the Lebron aint making 3's thread, so I'm not feeling this
You robbed Basic without a ski mask or bandanna
I'll let it spray yo & if any of your homies try to join the fray tho, they'll be like Santana
I'm assuming this is a reference to Fredo Santana. Seems a bit simple to be honest
Pryde? Wrath? Barely winning yet you still love this shit
Makes sense u name yourself after deadly sins, you're a glutton for punishment
This was alright
Your punches lack sting so they'll never be malicious
Your sorry excuse of a verse made the Phil and Genocide beef look vicious
Meh, again, just seems like a simple reference
I'm from the hood where there's shootouts and niggas that deal coke
Toonchi, Katie or spice u gotta be on either one since you've never had any real smoke
This was alright
This is your first contender's match ever, it's truly sad
Cuz you've been here longer than me yet qualified for every newbie tourney we've had
This was nice and harsh


Bye...

Netcees O.J., so what u got away with killing whites years ago
U Come up from behind those bars i'll be on Juice like Rich Piana 2Pac and 3 year olds
I don't understand why you are calling him 'Netcees O.J.' If you had called him a Netcees OG I would have understood, but this just seems like a stretch to make the punchline work, so I'm not feeling this
You catching rights and lefts, my body blows destroy a nigga thats bitch made
While his body blows because his fat ass had a dad bod since the 5th grade
I liked this, thought it was well worded
Put ur head in the sink n drown it, u want smoke wit me i doubt it
If i pull up There'll be a hold up like I had to think about it
Again, this set-up seems like a real stretch to make the punchline work. The punchline was clever, but the set-up ruined it for me
You let knucklehead do what? Man i'd of fucked dude up jack, Its simple
U let that Jew kill the father son AND the holy spirit trapped within you
That's not a rhyme, so it's a no from me
Battle of biblical proportions. No one can impede this bout
If someone Judas outta this battle they called your boss and exposed your Netcees account
Same as with a few other lines, seems like a strecth, and also doesn't really feel like an actual diss towards your opponent
Ima Hitman, assassin, soon as i get the papes u finished
I heard u Contract killer.. diseases from a buncha aint shit bitches
The rhymes a bit iffy, but it's close enough that I'll roll with it. This was alright

Karaoke had three good punches, including his closer which was lotb for me, while Wrath had two.

Vote - King Karaoke