ill nik-A vs. Unfukwitable - ILL NIK-A WINS

[For Battling]

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ill nik-A Unfukwitable

[ill nik-A]

12
Welcome.

[Unfukwitable]

100

[ill nik-A]

Fuck the over saturated stuff u flow, fists are my weapons & I’m here to stun u hoes
I can easily use ur style on ya but my punches overpower u... that’s gun control
I’m the last of a dying breed but hard to kill plus u haters need me
Prey when u see the grip. That’s facin the eagle... now whose the endangered species
I welcomed ur girl to the mile high club & she’s loud without any care, shame... bold
But I gotta silencer to stop ur bitching... u’d swear ur murder was on Airplane mode
one week good gun bars the next he can’t hurt or diss dudes
u can’t develop a consistent formula while I’m still a problem... like u struggling with wording issues
U never champed this; ya skills can’t see us alone
My Vision is 2020.... cuz u waiting on the XFL for people with less talent to get a league of ya own

[Unfukwitable]

40 w/ no passport stamps? I blame his sleazy mom;
For the fact that his Idea of a Remote location is His greasy Palms.
Submission moves will Leave u with two sore limbs,
I'll Apply pressure til 'Knicks under armor' snap off and start a new Sports trend,
I'll even set ya funeral... picture this right from the get...
Orc next to ya Will.... I guess Ya futures BRIGHT ina sense...
&U speakin on ya Pill stash til this snob gets robbed,
Soon as u act out.. theres no scripts.. That's an Improv.
Fuck nik-name.... Its about Wit's respect Im more than double u with Intellect....
I positioned myself Steps before my Handle.. No wonder u think its a Triple Threat!
While This Cokeheads rollin up $1 bills to keep his head goin,
All those times u had a Buck Sniffin on the Line could reenact a 50cent moment.

[Habitat]

Fuck the over saturated stuff u flow, fists are my weapons & I’m here to stun u hoes
I can easily use ur style on ya but my punches overpower u... that’s gun control
nice
I’m the last of a dying breed but hard to kill plus u haters need me
Prey when u see the grip. That’s facin the eagle... now whose the endangered species
dope
I welcomed ur girl to the mile high club & she’s loud without any care, shame... bold
But I gotta silencer to stop ur bitching... u’d swear ur murder was on Airplane mode
ehh not diggin this one. airplane mode doesn't mean silent so i felt it didn't make much sense
one week good gun bars the next he can’t hurt or diss dudes
u can’t develop a consistent formula while I’m still a problem... like u struggling with wording issues
decent
U never champed this; ya skills can’t see us alone
My Vision is 2020.... cuz u waiting on the XFL for people with less talent to get a league of ya own
could have done something with this i didnt like it as is.

vs

40 w/ no passport stamps? I blame his sleazy mom;
For the fact that his Idea of a Remote location is His greasy Palms.
cool
Submission moves will Leave u with two sore limbs,
I'll Apply pressure til 'Knicks under armor' snap off and start a new Sports trend,
hows a submission move gonna snap off under armor tho.
I'll even set ya funeral... picture this right from the get...
Orc next to ya Will.... I guess Ya futures BRIGHT ina sense...
dope...
&U speakin on ya Pill stash til this snob gets robbed,
Soon as u act out.. theres no scripts.. That's an Improv.
not a fan
Fuck nik-name.... Its about Wit's respect Im more than double u with Intellect....
I positioned myself Steps before my Handle.. No wonder u think its a Triple Threat!
didn't like this
While This Cokeheads rollin up $1 bills to keep his head goin,
All those times u had a Buck Sniffin on the Line could reenact a 50cent moment.
ehh not a fan of tihs

After i got halfway through unfuks verse i thought he might have had it. But he fell off at the end. futures bright was dope and endangered species was dope too. but nik had the more consistent verse here.

v/nik

[For Battling]

Fuck the over saturated stuff u flow, fists are my weapons & I’m here to stun u hoes
I can easily use ur style on ya but my punches overpower u... that’s gun control
overall pretty cool but wording in second line little off
I’m the last of a dying breed but hard to kill plus u haters need me
Prey when u see the grip. That’s facin the eagle... now whose the endangered species
fire!
I welcomed ur girl to the mile high club & she’s loud without any care, shame... bold
But I gotta silencer to stop ur bitching... u’d swear ur murder was on Airplane mode
ok
one week good gun bars the next he can’t hurt or diss dudes
u can’t develop a consistent formula while I’m still a problem... like u struggling with wording issues
wasnt feeling this
U never champed this; ya skills can’t see us alone
My Vision is 2020.... cuz u waiting on the XFL for people with less talent to get a league of ya own
alright cool

Vs


40 w/ no passport stamps? I blame his sleazy mom;
For the fact that his Idea of a Remote location is His greasy Palms.
lol cool
Submission moves will Leave u with two sore limbs,
I'll Apply pressure til 'Knicks under armor' snap off and start a new Sports trend,
i see what you were going for but it didn’t hit
I'll even set ya funeral... picture this right from the get...
Orc next to ya Will.... I guess Ya futures BRIGHT ina sense...
fuck man I had a bright bar lined up for Orc. This is good
&U speakin on ya Pill stash til this snob gets robbed,
Soon as u act out.. theres no scripts.. That's an Improv.
ehh had potential but executed weak
Fuck nik-name.... Its about Wit's respect Im more than double u with Intellect....
I positioned myself Steps before my Handle.. No wonder u think its a Triple Threat!
too wordy here, good concept just not done well
While This Cokeheads rollin up $1 bills to keep his head goin,
All those times u had a Buck Sniffin on the Line could reenact a 50cent moment.
decent here


Nik had a consistent verse, just 1 miss. Unfuk just had bright and his opener. Nik was more polished here. Unfuk, you got bars bro but sometimes that simplistic style takes away from your impact. Maybe try switching it up sometimes. Usually it works out great for you but this week you came up a bit short.

Vote Nik

[Suthaveli]

ill nika gun control & endanger species were pretty dope. the personal was okish, points on it seeming to hv truth to it. airplane mode i didn't like. closer was meh. uve been doing this one thing that bothers me sometimes about your steez is it could read stretch at times. i believe ive read 4 verses from you & only one of them seem to come across as so, but it may have just been a bar or 2.


remote location was dope. bright line was ok. everything else lacked. U're way better than this. try not to think about it so much. stress out on being soo original & creative. let it flow, cuz it seems like its naturally in you bruh. keep grinding

mvgt- ill nik-A

[WRATH]

Bright and buck sniffing killed this dude man i swear i hate yall. That silencer line is lotb tho

V unfuk

[Alvin Karpis]

Cool battle
Nik started off nice and finished ok, consistent verse
Unfuk had some misses, but opener was nice lol same with buck sniffin
Close in my eyes and could see it going either way tbh
V I got Nik by a hair

[Swerve]

Fuck the over saturated stuff u flow, fists are my weapons & I’m here to stun u hoes
I can easily use ur style on ya but my punches overpower u... that’s gun control
I’m the last of a dying breed but hard to kill plus u haters need me
Prey when u see the grip. That’s facin the eagle... now whose the endangered species
I welcomed ur girl to the mile high club & she’s loud without any care, shame... bold
But I gotta silencer to stop ur bitching... u’d swear ur murder was on Airplane mode

vs.

40 w/ no passport stamps? I blame his sleazy mom;
For the fact that his Idea of a Remote location is His greasy Palms.
While This Cokeheads rollin up $1 bills to keep his head goin,
All those times u had a Buck Sniffin on the Line could reenact a 50cent moment.

Nik started strong, but weakened near the end. Unfuck opened and closed nice, but the middle needed work....almost like they were two different styles. I've got nik barely.

[Mr. J]

This was a pretty dope battle, both came some with some slick lines, I really enjoyed both openers tbh.

But I felt that Nik took this. I really thought that Airplane Mode line was nice & on the right track. May have worked better if the first bar played into it better. But still dope.

I thought unfuck had a few dope lines to start but those last few hurt him pretty bad. The dollar, 50 cents and all that felt like a stretch that could have been worked out better & wit's respect made me think of Witty and not the battler here.

[For Battling]

ill nik-A Wins 6-1